Maaneet SS & OSS Collection Update Pg 9/10 07/07 - Page 6

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CHANDNI RAAT

Part 2:

anime sad girl looking at the moon




Wo nahi jaanti thi ki wo kya kar rahi hai, usse bas yahi laga ki wo is duniya me ab akeli ho gayi hai, kyunki uska pyar use chodkar chal gaya hai. Bas ab wo bhi yahan nahi reh sakti, use apne pya ke paas jaana hai. Usne ek baar zaroor socha ki uske parivaar ka kya hoga, par shayad apne aap ko khatam karke wo thik hi kar rahi hai, kyunki wo ye nahi chahti ki uske kaaran koi uske parivaar par ungli uthaye.

FLASHBACK

Ek ladki seedhiyon se bhaagkar neeche aati hai….

Simi: Rajji, dhyan se……ye kya kar rahi hai……aaram see utar naa

Rajji: Maa, main thik hun, aap bas aise hi gussa karti rehti ho…,

Simi: Ab tu hi bata rano, kya karun mai isss ladki ka, aaj iski sagai hai, aur ye dekh abhi bhi bacchon ki tarah…

Rano: Kya didi aap bhi, apne ghar jaayegi to sab sambhal legi

Rajji: Aap logon ko to naa, pata nahi kyun itni jaldi padi hai meri shaadi ki

(apni maa ko piche se gale lagaakar)

Simi: Dekh le, hame koi jaldi nahi hai, tu kahe to……

Rajji: Maine aisa to nahi kaha (hiding her face)

Rano: Haaye, meri bacchi kitna sharmaati hai…

Simi: Meri laado……(kissing her)

Rajji: Waise geet kahan hai? Abhi tak to usse aa jaana chahiye tha?

Rano: Darji gaye hain usko lene. Kahin baithi hogi rooth kar.

Rajji: Rooth kar? Kyun? Kya hua?

Simi: Kal wo darji ne usse daanth diya tha naa, isliye wo naaraz hai.

Rajji: Kal ki baat ko lekar abhi bhi roothi hui hai wo? Ye ladki bhi naa…uff…

Rano: Teri hi behen hai, aur waise bhi darji gaye hai naa usko lene, abhi aate hi honge wo dono.

Simi: Cha lab tub hi jaa, tyar ho jaa, wo log aate hi honge.

(Rajji starts to run from there, towards the stair)

Simi: Arre dhyan se, aur ab bahar mat nikalna, jab main lene aaon, tab hi naa, sun rahi hai naa

Rajji: haan maa, sab sun liya (disappears while saying this)

Simi: uff…ye ladki…

Rano: (while laughing) Chaliye didi, aur bhi kaam karne hain

Simi: Haan chal, nahi to darji phir aake puchne lag jaayenge – Simi puttar saara kaam ho gaya (in darji's tone)

Both the women enter other room while laughing

FLASHBACK ENDS

Ab faisle ki ghadi thi nahi ab usse bas apne faisle par amal karna tha. Wo gayi aur apne kamre ko andar se band kar diya taaki koi andar naa aa paaye. Usne apna dupatta liya, wahi dupatta jo usne diya tha…pehli baar. Jaate jaate bhi wo uski yaad apne paas rakhna chahti thi, usse alag kaise karti apne aap ko. Dupatte k eek sire ko pankhe pe baandha aur dusre ko phaansi ke phande ki tarah. Jaane se pehle bas ek khat likh diya apne parivaar ke liye. Ab bas sab khatam,, koi gila nahi, koi shikwa nahi, bas wo ab apne pyar ke paas jaa rahi hai. Usse kisika darr nahi. Bas usse wo ho dikh raha tha aur kuch nahi.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Awesome updates
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awesome part. beautiful.
loved the flashback,
loved the scene and conversation between rajjy, simi and rano.
but at end, scary part.
jaldi se next part post karo
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
awesome!!!
loved the fb!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome....
loved it completely

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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo...
OMG...what did u doing here?? NO no no...I do not support suicide for anything... its a coward's way out..😭😭😭 babaji is ladki ko kya ho gaya hai....😕
SO she is going to her love... very depressing update.....
kya yaar yeh teri kitaabe... tujhe kitna depress kar diya hai...*sob sob*😭😭
I am scared to ask u to continue.. pata nahi tu kya karne wali hai next update mei...😆😆
Add me to all ur lists of FFs and OS 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it.........awesome!!!

but scary end,hanger

ab jalsi sae update karo

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Posted: 14 years ago
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the shopping update was nice..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
CR part 2
the last few lines were so scary................cont soon dear...............

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