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chupchupsi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Who knew they would ever meet, there worlds seemed completely different. But once they did eveything changed... their deepest darkest secrets are revealed and their lives are changed for ever.

Walking down the dark streets of Delhi, geet looked anxiously behind her if there was any taxis or buses, but no, nothing. aaj coi taxi qu nhi aarhi? omg! 11pm vajge! geet shouted to herself, she knew she would be in serious trouble once she got home. Trying not to scare herself even more, geet tried focusing on something else, but it wasnt working. She was begining to feel quite weak as she had been to 5 interviews but there had not been a single approval , geet felt absolutely crap. She reminded herself of those times wen she used to live like a princess with her parents.

Geets parents died not long ago, leaving her to live like an orphan as her uncles and aunties had left her to die alone, deserted her. In the hope of a new life, home and a job geet came to delhi and stayed at a good friends house, but geet was adamant on getting a good career too as she was not a person who liked relying on others to take care of her (especially after her parents).

Her thoughts were disturbed by the sound of a vehice. Geet looked up in hope, a black mercedes was wooshing towards her. she was too slow to move completely out of the way, the car splashed muck all over her suit and face. She was fuming. She quickly took of her sandal and flinged it at the car. But it made no difference, it kept on going. Geets big eyes were getting filled with innocent tears, she had had enough, she had to walk all the way home - which was 1 hour away.

The silence was broken by the strong sound of her tummy grumbling, geet remembered that it had been 36hours and she had not ate anything, beause it was this day last month her parents had passed away, so geet had decided to fast in their name. The effect of no food or water was begining to rise. Geet was starting to feel very dizzy, her head felt as if it was on a continiuos rollercoaster and her entire body was feeling very weak. In the distance she could see a bright yellow light, geet was forcing her eyes to open , but she couldnt. she began to hear a horn but her feet felt stuck to the ground. She thought the car was not going to stop, but it did, merely a millimetre away from her trembling legs. She couldnt hold herself any longer... Geet collapsed.

Hey guys, please look out for the next post if u liked the begining of my story.. Deep Secrets.. i will try to post ASAP love u all tc xx CHUPCHUPSI <3😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys, i have now posted next part

Deep secrets-my story 2 comment n add me to for pm links xx

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Posted: 14 years ago

woooooww...Lovely..

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow nice one.. interesting.....continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

interesting start............reading the rest thnks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 2...

She thought the car was not going to stop, but it did, merely a millimetre away from her trembling legs. She couldnt hold herself any longer... Geet collapsed.

The car door opened instantly. Out of it came a tall, dark haired, man. He looked at the body on the ground and quickliy went over to see if geet was ok. He hovered his fingertips over her perfect lips and sighed in relief.. she was breathing. It was hard to tell whether geet had any injuries as for one she was covered in muck and secondly it was ver dark.. nearly 12. The man bent over geets body and lifted her effortlessly into his muscular arms and carefully places her into his car. He thought the only option he had was to take her to the hospital. so he did.

In nearly 5 mins geet was in the hospital being carried by the handsome male. As soon as he was seen, doctors came rushing over to him mr. khurana kya hoya? it was obvious hat this guy was well known and with his orders the doctors checked whether the girl was alright. I want a full check on her, if there is anything wrong with her, call me asap, otherwise i will be here tomorow to check on her. par yeh hain kaun? i dont know but please find out. ok sir, you know she is in safe hands, we will call you in the morning for an update. With that, the hero walked out of the hospital, leaving the doctors to see geet.

Geet didnt wake up until the morning, she felt relaxed, but worried as she had no idea to how and who brought her there. She felt her face, nope, there was no muck. sombody had changed her clothes too.. she was wearing a white patients outfit. Suddenly the double doors opened and in came two nurses. aap kesi hai maam? one nurse asked, as the other fluffed her pillow, geet replied in an uncertain voice, main yahaa cese?? cya huwa tha? the nurses explained that she was unconscious on the streets and mr khurana came and brought her to the hospital whos mr khurana? the nurses were astonished by geets question aap nhi jaanti mr khurana kaun hai? maam aap yaha delhi mein nei hai? delhi mein taa sab co pataa hai vo kaun hai. the other nurse began to speak, aap kitni lucky hain.. MAAN SINGH KHURANA saved you!! and she squeeled in exitement, caash mein meri kismat bi itnee achee hoti! i mean he is SOO HOT! the other nurse gave her a stern look as if to say shut it! but geet was still clueless, she wanted to thank the person who saved her life.

Geet geet!! the doors flung open as avni ran inside oh god! thank goodness ur alright, i was soo worried you didnt come home last night u didnt pik up ur phone n the there was a phonecall for the hospital, u scared the hell outa me! tears were streaming down geets bestfriends' face, as avni practically jumped onto geet whilst hugging her, geet said oh im so sorry avni, i didnt mean to... but ur ok naa? yep avni im great! geet choked out the last line as avni was practically strangling her to death. One of the nurse had already called for the doctor and he was waiting for avni to step away so he could get a chance to speak. miss avni you can take her home now she is perfectly fine, but doo make sure she eats well and if there are any more problems please dont hesitate to call me or come over to the hospital. oh i will see to that geet will eat and drink very well! and dont worry doc, there wont be any problems like this again avni said givin geet a quick glance. the doctor and one nurse left, with avni as some medicine was needed to be prescribed and geet was helped by the other nurse to get changed.

As geet was walking towards the doors of the hospital whilst avni was talking to the doc, she looked back for a second and the doors infront of her opened, clumsy geet walked right infront of a person carrying a big bunch of roses and chocolates. The roses fell to the floor and geet, apologising to the person, bent over to retrieve the beautiful flowers. Looking up at the person, it was a tall, dark male, very handsome geet thought to herself. From behind she heard the doc shouting mr khurana! your here! there was no need for you to come, bekaar ci pareshani, voh teek hai, no doctor, it is my responsibility to see it she is ok, as i could have cause her some damage, cese hai vo? geet stood there as avni came up to join her, well why dont you ask her yourself? mr khuraa yeh hai geet. And geet he is the one who brought you here. Maan caught geets eyes and they werent willing to let go. Hi, thank you for helping me, well saving me yesterday, im really gratefull no it was my duty, how are you? i hope these doctors treated you well? yes! absolutely, thank you once again, handing here the flowers and chocolates maan said please yeh le lo, as i think it was partly my fault for driving in such a speed oh, em thanks your beautiful, no sorry, i meant THEY are yes! there beautiful! geet couldnt believe she just said that, she couldnt help bu blush in embarassment, even avni and the doc had a grin n their amused faces, but maan tried pretending as if he heard nothing. the ringing of a mobile broke the silence and maan said he had to leave quick, telling geet to take care again.

next: geet and maan meet much more dramatic! keep readin x

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Part 3...

she couldnt help but blush in embarassment, even avni and the doc had a grin n their amused faces, but maan tried pretending as if he heard nothing. the ringing of a mobile broke the silence and maan said he had to leave quick, telling geet to take care again.

Regretin she had said anythin to maan, geet had to put up with avni's devilish grins all day, geet knew exactly wot avni was thinking but she knew nothin like that would ever happen. Infact they wass 99% sure that she would never meet that man again.

The next morning, straight after avnis' clear orders to stay in bed all day, geet decided to get ready and quickly go for a few interviews as she knew whatever avni didnt know wouldnt harm her. As always, the streets of delhi were filled with millions of people, vehicles and the occational cows and buffalos. right, geet thought, first ill go to kundan industries hopefully i might get some luck there, its a big enough office for them to give me a place there. trying to think only positively geet grabbed a taxi and headed for the big building. Getting into the building, geet knew she was being watched, she could hear the occational mutter of office girls; yeh coan hai? dekho taa iske capre! i no soo last century! but these things did not effect geet, she felt that she wasn't that desperate to look for a job in merely her birthday suit!, just like these girls were; wearing the tiniest skirts (which cud be easily be mistaken for belts!) and shirts which made them lose any dignity which they had left. Trying to ignore the dissaproving eyes, geet went onto the front desk how may i help you maam? hi main yahaa secratary ce interview le ayi hoo. ok maam please take a seat, you will be called shortly. Geet sat down in the waiting area, she felt like she was back in school sitting outside the principles office. Half an hour had passed and yet there was no answer. But geet was not giving up, she waited. Maam, sorry for the wait, you may go in now. a sigh of relief came from geet, but there was still tension in her mind cmon i can do this she thought to herself, taking deep beaths and she stood infront of the bosses door labelling: Avinash Kundan.. reading this geet thought i think yeh boss achaa hoga naam to badhaa acha lagta hai ,oh geet! tu vee na! naam sun ce kese pataa lagega ce boss acha hai! gosh ur so stupid! Quickly stepping out of her own thoughts, geet knocked otho the hard, wooden door. Come in said a friendly sounding voice. Controlling her shaking hands, geet grabbed hold of the cold silver handle and carefully opened the door.

Hello sir, geet said confidently. she couldnt see his face as his chair was swiveled towards the wall - this was just as she had seen in the movies, the boss would be seated exactly like that and once he would turn around and see the beautiful girl infront of him, he waould see nothing else but her. Forcing herself out of her thoughts once again, geet stood silently for his reply. Sit please and as he said this his chair turned to face her. Sitting infront of her was... Omg! she had never imagined that there would be a mere child by the looks of it of the age of 14 sitting infront of her! geet had no idea how to react... she was speechless for the first time. The face infront of her laughed childly at her and within a moment ran out of the room, leaving geet bewildered. what had just happened? was she still in her dreams?

hey guys hope u like the post.. give me ur opinions please n again sorry for the many spelling mistakes

i will update soon tc! <3

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Part 4...

The face infront of her laughed childly at her and within a moment ran out of the room, leaving geet bewildered. what had just happened? was she still in her dreams?

Still shocked, Geet sat still in the chair. She didnt know what to do or say. cya maine abhi ic bachaa dheka? geet your too much yaar, yaha ic bachaa kyu hoga? nhi i must have imagined it she said to her self, reassuringly. nhi app ne sahi dheka.. Getting a huge shock, geet suddenly jumped up. emm ...ermm.. i.. emm the words were just stuck in her mouth, geet wasnt able to say anything, how embarassing she thought. hello, im siddharth khundan... im so sorry about that, that was my little brother, he loves his pranks, seeing that geet was not at all amused, but was still in shock, siddharth came closer to her erm.. excuse me.. aap teek ho? there was still no reply from geet, she was still facing the wall. he could here her breathing a little akwardly, so he wen to face her.

oh! god! geet was hyperventalating! her eyes had suddenly gone all watery too. Not knowing wat to do in this type of situation, siddharth gently grabbed her by the arm and carefully shook her. Geet looked at him innocently with her big eyes, aap teek ho? geet could clearly see the tension over his face and tried controling hersel and nodded slightly. here.. beto he carefully placed her back onto the seat and quickly brought a glass of water from his desk. yeh peelo, obeying his orders, geet took the glass and drank it. whooo geet slowly took a deep breath in and out and stood up slowly are you ok now? siddharths face felt a little relieved to see geet breathing properly. yes.. woh actually, you scared me, see i saw this little boy sitting there on that chair, hen he suddenly walks out and i thought i was going crazy, then all of a sudden i hear another voice... woa woa, slow down, gosh ur a fast talker! again im really sorry, as i was saying, that was my little brother, he's always in here pulling silly jokes on all the staff all the time. In fact this joke went a little too far oh no sir.. its ok... no its not, one sec. geet watched at he walked over to the telephone on his desk and called for "shaan". As they waited for a few seconds, there was an akward silence in the room. There was a knock at the door siddharth told them to come in.

In came the same boy, he was still wearing the same mischeivious grin on his face, since get last saw him. shaan yhaa ao. the boy walked up to his brother an stood a few steps away from him. wot you did today was awful! you know, yeh kitna darr gye the?! sidharth was pointing at geet who was looking at the child feeling guilty about him having to be embarassed inront of her and having to get scolded.

Trying to release the child from his punishment, geet tried talking, erm.. sir please,coi baat nhi it ok really sidhharth gave geet a stern look and told shaan to apologies to her and promise not to do anything like this again. The boy came up to geet and very meaningfully said Im really sorry maam, i didnt mean to hurt your feeling or scare you in any way geet looked at his innocent face and immediately said, its fine and then looked at siddharth who was watching carefully, and whispered, and im sorry aap co daant pari. The boy smiled as if to accept her cute apology, whilts siddharth was merely astonished to wat kind of a girl geet was! but nevertheless, he was so impressed with her handling the situation and then apologising to his little brother! wow - wat a girl, he thought.

After shaan had left the room, siddharth came over to geet, and said to her in a surprised voice, wow, im really astonished, why did you apologies to him, when he deserved what i said to him? geet had no difficulty in answering his question, because sir, i feel reeely sorry for the poor little children when they get told off as i know that woh cuj jaanke nhi carde, no matter wat they have done, unke dhill to saaf hote hai, they dont mean to be hurtful to anybody. plus i think children are sooo ADORABLE!!

geet said the last word a little too loud. Although she kept on talking, siddharth had drifted away to his own world. He had never met anybody with such a kind pure heart as geet, he was totally blown away by her words and actions. he stood there admiring her cute and innocent views about children!

hey guys! hoped u enjoyed it x tell me wat u thought!

loveyas x

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