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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5...

He had never met anybody with such a kind pure heart as geet, he was totally blown away by her words and actions. he stood there admiring her cute and innocent views about children!

After Geet had finished her lifelong views about children, Siddharth told her to take a seat - making Geet realise this was a proffesional occasion, not a family gathering. She sat there with a straight face waiting for him to talk and ask her the normal questions she would be asked during an interview. So, erm.. where shall we start? oh... ok, so could you tell me abit about yourself, i mean your past careers and such, err...Geet, yes, thank you. Geet thought for a second where to start. yes... emm.. Im geet handa, im 21 years old, im from Hushiyarpur. And... geet looked down nervously and said, well i havent ever had a job before. then she quickly added but i promise i will learn everything quickly, i wont screw it up.. i promise geet was certain that after siddharth would hear this, she would have no chance of the job. she half-heartedly offered him her file, ermm.. yeh hai mere qualifications, she looked up to see siddharth gladly take her file and as he looked through it his face showed no reactions, no "ow wow thats fantastic" face, or no "head nods", there was no emotions, geet took it as he wasnt impressed, so she looked back down again, preparing herself for the bad news - once again.
Well, geet, i have to say... these are great qualifications, but.. you've had no experience, no past jobs, so... he took a long pause which was increasing the tension for geet, i guess youll have to learn as you go and prove to me that you can do this without any scew-ups! hearing this geet snapped her head up to meet siddharths gleaming eyes ans saw a smile covering his face, she couldnt believe it! she got the job! oh sir! thank you sooo much! i promise u wont regret this!!! oh IM SOOO HAPPY!! tears were rolling down geets glowing face, she was over the moon! wiping the tears quickly, geet stretched out her hand to meet siddharths and shook it massively, congratulations geet, i hope you will be able to show me how commited you are to this job... and before he could finish his sentence geet interrupted, oh sir i will not do anything to let you down! i will do my best! releasing her fragile hand, siddharth said well then, i guess i will see you tomorow? geet nodded exitedly ok, 9.30am sharp u will be my assistant ok? i will tell you what to do ok sir and leave you details, just incase we need to contact you on the front desk and yeh loh, he took a slip from the desk and gave it to geet, yeh front desk peh dhedho, ok? ok sir. bye and thanks once again. no problem, see you tomorow. Geet walked out of the office, still with a massive smile glued to her face, she handed the slip and left her details with the woman at the front desk, who smiled at geet and congratulated her for the job. this just made her smile even bigger.
She ran out of the building, oh thank you Babaji!!!! thank yooo soo much!!!! she dialled avnis number as quick as possible, though she remembered that avni had gave her strict instructions to stay at home, geet couldnt control her happiness and called her. hello, geet! cahaa ho tum! maine ceha thaa stay at home! maam get home this instant... I got the job!!! she coulnt wait until the whole of avni's lecture was finished. what? i got the job, i got the job, i got the job, geet started dancing around and singing it oh geet!! im so happy for you!!! congratz!!! where is it at? kundan inmdustries, im siddharth kundans assistant!! oh geet!! welldone sweety!! arrr i would just hug u to death right now!!!! geet laughed. geet told her to meet her at the local cafe, where they would usually go, cafe humtum.
The cafe was a very special place for geet, as this was were she first met avni, and it was where they both decided to spend all their special moments of happiness, like now, geet getting her first job!
Avni was sat in their usual seats in the far corner, where there was loads of privacy, waiting for geet to arrive eagery, Wen she did see geet, she ran up to her quicky and hugged her sooo hard, that geet hat to pat her back slightly to give avni a hint to release her. The girls spent the whole afternoon ordering their special smoothies whilst geet gave her all the gossip about what happened, who she met and every single detail. Avni was just as excited as geet was, they shared all their joys and sorrows together, they were closer than real sisters. they had nobody else other than each other to share their little and huge happiness with. :')
hey guys, hope u liked it! x
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next time: geets first day in the office, will things be as great as she imagined or will it all go disasterous? how will maan singh khurana meet geet again? keep thinking and keep reading! XoXoX
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Part 6...

they had nobody else other than each other to share their little and huge happiness with.

After a long chat about everything that went on - how geet nearly had a geart attack and how siddharth made his brother appologise - geet and avni headed home, as tomorow was yet to come, geets first day in the office!
She got up at 6.am to get everything sorted, from her clothes to what pens she needed. After 1 and a 1/2 hours, geet came out of her room dressed in a light blue salwar kameez with light silver emroidery. She was wearing her good old silver panjabi juti and carrying a red shoulder bag in which contained a notepad, pens, her phone, money and some other personal items. She walked into the living room to see a very anxious avni sitting on the sofa, waiting to see geet. Hey geet said in a slightly high pitch, Avni immediately looked around to inspect geet and her clothes. Wow geet u luk very pretty, though i think we do need a slight change of hairstyle today! saying this, avni fell into hysterics. Geet was not sure about wat avni was saying, so she slowly brought her hand up towards her head. OH NO! oh man how cud i forget! rrr!!! geet was getting quite frustrated now, she had competely fogotten about doing her hair, un-combed, un-touched hair. As she was about to stomp back into her room, avni called, Hey geet ruko come here sweetie ill do it. oh thankyou! i really dont have any energy at the moment, you know how much effort it takes to dress this good? hearing this, both girls started laughin hard.
By the time geet and avni got into the car it was 8.45 am. Geet was very exited and so was avni. Avni worked in a very popular salon and it was very easy for her as she was the boss so she was not in any money problems and loved to help geet whenever she needed, but as the type of person geet was, she didnt want to stay dependent on avni and avni respected this.
The was a lot of traffic in the area but geet was determined not to panic and controlled herself all the way. Whe she finally reached her destination, geet took a deep breath, avni wished her the very best and told her to call her if she needed anything and reminded her to call her when she finished. Geet stepped out of the car with a huge confident smile on her face and entered the building. She checked the time and it was 9.15am so she thought she would just wander around until somebody noticed her. She got the same stares and similar comments as she did the first time she came into Kundan Industries from the same girls. They were ofcourse wearing the little miniskirts with hair to an akwardly short length. But what did geet care, she knew she was not there to be in a beauty contest or her dressing sense to be critisised by others. Seating herself in one of the seats at reception, geet relaxed her mind.
Hi! your geet na? the new assistant? geet nodded, smiled and stood up. Ji, im geet. Im pinky and... pinkys eyes trailed of behind geet and shouted, Oh Veer sir! and signalled him to come over, and he did. Kya hai pinky? Sir yeh hai geet.. the new assistant? oh! hi geet, im veer, mai yaha ca accounts manager hoon... oh yes and i work at reception. I hope we can get to know u better! Pinky seemed like a very nice, innocent person and geet was very fond of that.
After their little chat about themselves, Veer sir told geet that she should not panic and siddharth sir wasn't one to ever come on time to office so she could just hang out with pinky for thie while. She agreed to this and geet got a quick inside tour of the building and some occupations.
the phone at reception began to ring. Pinky went to pick it up hello? Ji yeh kundan industries hi hai.. Oh Mr Khurana.. mmm yes sir, ok... Im so sorry sir, Sir abhi aae nhi, i will be sure to yes sir... ok sir i will fax you Sidharth sirs mobile yes sir, ok gud day sir. And she hung up the phone taking a big sigh of relief. As soon as geet heard the name "mr khurana" her ears clicked, she wondered what he had to do with this company and wondered more about if they would actually ever meet again.. after all, he was her hero.
Next time: Will geet and maan meet? how? how will geet first day at work end up... fantastic... or a disaster?
I will post soon luvuguys!
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Part 7...
As soon as geet heard the name "mr khurana" her ears clicked, she wondered what he had to do with this company and wondered more about if they would actually ever meet again.. after all, he was her hero.
After wondering around for another 1/2 hour, siddharth finally appeared. Unlike how geet had expected, nobody seemed to be that concerned that their boss was there, they just continued their little conversations and acted as if Siddharth was one of them, not their boss.
After 15 minutes, geet was called into siddharths room. Entering the room geet called, Yes sir? Without looking up, siddharth ordered her to bring him some tea. Geet, get me some tea. Ok sir, anything else? nope. be quick about it. JI. saying this, geet walked out of the office feeling a little down, but then she consoled herself by saying to herself, that to get to the top, you have to start at the bottom. 5 minutes later, geet came into siddharths office with a tray which containd a teapot, sugar cubes and a cup n saucer. Placing the tray on the little glass table, geet poured the tea. Sir, sugar? Oh yes, 2 cubes after preparing the tea, geet brought the cup to siddharth who, what it seemed like was busy texting! geet was very astonished with his behaviour, she did not at all expect him to be dilly-dallying around texting - but then again there could have been the point that siddharth was texting some very important poeple.
Many questions were pouring into geets mind as she carefully place the tea infront of her boss. Ah thanks. taking a little glance at geets, question-full face, siddharth said, geet aaj mere paas coi khaas caam nhi hai tumare lyi, sooo... hmm ic minute. geet watched him pick up the office phone and called for veer. he entered the room within 20 seconds. yes sir? veer why dont you take geet with you and explain to her the situation with our latest project ok? veer nodded and glancd at geet. Siddharth saw geet confused face and explained to her, Geet tomorow tum mere saath jaa rhi ho on site for our latest project and inorder to do this veer will explain to you everything you need to know ok? and this is a great way for you to learn about the financial and practical side of things, yes? geet nodded exitedly yes sir.
Veer leaded the way to his working area and showed geet all the documents concerning the latest project. He handed her a big black file which marked "Kundan & Khurana documents" geet looked at the file very carefully, and tried not to miss any details that veer was explaining to her. He told her that this project was a very important one because Maan singh Khurana was partners with their boss and Mr. Khurana is the most known, and among the richest people in business and if this deal is a hit then were flying!
Geet could tell that veer sir was very enthusiastic about his work and took a lot of pride in it too.
It was nearly 2.pm now and geet had learned almost everything about the latest deal and a few past projects too. Veer looked at his watch Geet, kuj kaan lyi mangvau? ab to mujhe vee bhook lagdhi hai. Ji sir just as soon as geet stopped talking, geet saw Pinky and said to veer sir, sir, pinky nu vi poochliye? uhno ne kaaliya ce nhi? Veer approved geets words and called pinky over. Oh sachi? Id love to eat with you guys! Pinkys very enthusiastic tone made geet smile and very happy.
After 15 minutes, the three of them were sat in veer sirs work place munching on sanwiches as veer continued explaining to geet the rest of the project. By 4.pm geet got siddharths permission to leave and be in the office for 9am as they would go to the site. geet dont forget okay? and remember to visit veer before we go so he can hand you any important files for the deal tomorow as Mr. Khurana vee vha hoega. Making little notes in her notepad, geet left the building and called avni to pick her up. She was waiting for tomorow to come as she was totally pshyced about being able to go on site - or maybe even to meet Mr Maan Singh Khurana again!
next time: geet and maan meet again, will geet be able to handle all the tasks she is given on site? or will she screw up? keep reading

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Part 8...

Making little notes in her notepad, geet left the building and called avni to pick her up. She was waiting for tomorow to come as she was totally pshyced about being able to go on site - or maybe even to meet Mr Maan Singh Khurana again!

The next morning geet was all ready (this time even remembering to do her hair!) and sitting outside the office waiting for siddharth to arrive. Taking out her mobile, geet looked at the time, it was 8.55am. There was still no sign of siddharth, so geet got up and decided to ask somebody whether they knew where he was, the answers were "no". Oh well, geet thought because she knew she wouldnt be the one getting blamed for delaying the trip. Walking across the hall was veer sir, in his hands were the files which geet needed. Handing the files over to her, veer sir looked at his watch, geet could tell he was quite worried. um sir, kyu na hum siddharth sir co phone care? puchlye woh kha hai? listening to geet carefully, veer told her to call him, as veer sir himself had to go out on behalf of siddharth sir for an important meeting. Ji, main abhi phone carti hoon. geet walked over to the reception desk to see pinky working on the computer, hi geet, pniky said without lifting her head to face geet, hi pinky, do you have siddharth sirs mobile number, i wanted to know where her was pinky nodded and told geet to wait one sec. and she did. pinky jotted down the phone number after getting it from the computer and handed geet the paper, you can use that phone if you want, pinky said pointing towards the phone sitting on pinkys desk.

She dialled the number and the phone rang. Hello? hello sir? aap kahaa hai? main yahaa aap ka intizaar kr rhi hoon oh geet! yes im on my way, bas thori see traffic hai, tum 2 minutes vich bahar car park vich wait caro ok? ji sir sabh kuch liya? files, plan etc? yes sir, veer sir ne sabh kuch dhediya, ok, be at the car park and i will pick you up straight away, saves time. ok bye ji bye sir.
After double checking she had everything she needed and ticking off her list on her notepade, geet made eher way towards the car park. Within 40seconds a silver mercedes pulled up next to her. Siddharth greeted her and told her to sit in the car. They drove off. The site was 1/2 hour long, geet sat looking in the files, not forgetting anything veer isr had told her about the project, whilst siddharth was busy with some phone calls. The 30 minutes passed very quickly and easily, geet wasnt feeling any pressure at all, infact she felt totally relaxed.
The car slowly came to a stop. Geet looked up from the file and saw that the had arrived. Siddharth and geet both gout out of the car and whilst siddharth got a comb out of his suit pocket and brushed his hair slightly, geet adjusted her dupatta. Follow me geet ok? and plz dont screw this up. making her mouth into an "O" shape, geet showed siddharth that she was offended I will Try not to sir, geet said in a slightly sarcastic tone, siddharth caught on quickly and appologised to her for being a little rude. Its ok geet repplied in a flat tone.
The weather was very, infact extremely warm. They both walked a little when they were stopped by a voice from infront, geet couldnt see who it was as first of all the sun was blinding her and secondy,siddharth was stood right infront of her. She could hear a few footsteps crunching onto the stoney ground and the voice said, Hi Mr. Kundan, im glad you could make it. geet was looking at som last minute notes in the files, Hello, mr. Khurana, the men were shaking hands, an oppurtunity like this, i wouldnt miss for the world! hmm.. have you came alone? Oh no, ive came with a new member of my company, geet looked up from the file, this is geet, my new assistant, moving slightly to aside, so geet could be seen, siddharth looked at geet, Geet looked at the men standing before her, one was - ofcourse, Maan Singh Khurana, and the other was somebody who looked like his assistant.
Hello, geet, maan said very proffesionally and clearly, extending his hand forward, to greet her, namaste geet said joining her hands sharply. a little gasp could be heard in the background possible becuase geet may have un-intentionally insulted Maan Singh Khurana. But she didnt know this.
Stepping back a little to stand next to siddharth, geet heard him mutter great going. she didn realise why siddharth said this, but looking up at maan sirs face, it didnt have any positive face on. Maan sir lead the way, talking to Siddharth sir, infront whilst geet and possibly maan sirs assistant. um.. namaste, main hoon Adi, maan sir ca assisatant, nice to meet you. geet smiled and said namaste, main geet. aapco shaid maan sir co janti nhi haina? ji aap aise kyu kehere ho? Adi laughed strangely and replied kyuke abtak koi nhi tha jisne maan sir ci baat nhi maani or in your case, maan sir ca haath reject kiya. geet looked slightly confused and asked why because he is like the most scariest person living, whilst the women all fall for him and his "fierce n daring personality"and would never miss the oppertunity to touch him, I see aap pe who "jaadoo" abhi peya nhi? Geet looked at adi shocked. ofcourse not! adi nodded in agreement.
By the time their conversation was finished, geet looked around to see that the four of them had entered a temporary tent which had a big table and some chairs inside, geet guessed this was where they would be doing the talking. Please take a seat, mr. Khurana said confidently as he sat down too. He sat on the long side of the desk, whilst geet stood at a side near siddharth and adi stood next to mr. khurana.
To be continued in part 9...
next time: geet has to go on a little business trip!! wwooo.. thats all im sayin :P
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Part 9...

Please take a seat, mr. Khurana said confidently as he sat down too. He sat on the long side of the desk, whilst geet stood at a side near siddharth and adi stood next to mr. khurana.

The meeting started off pretty well, Adi - nervously- spoke up about the further plans of the project and Mr Khurana added some key points too, whilst geet was making key notes onto her notebook. Mr Khurana and Siddharth disscussed other companies which they had to sign the deal with too. Ab hame saath varma company aur.. aur maan couldnt remember the other company name so geet finished his sentence unintentionally, still looking down at her notebook aur Arora companies sir. Everybody looked up at geet, adi had a worried look on his face, whilst siddharth smiled at her when she looked up to see their responses. She looked at Mr Khurana and he said, gud job geet, nice to know that you have bothered to research about this project. Geet smiled proudly and replied, thankyou sir, it is my job. Mr Khurana gave a slight nod and continued the discussion.

Siddharth asked geet to fill them in on what varma company and arora companies latest deals were as it was very important for them to know whether they were signing a deal with good, serious companies. Geet happily gave them the report on the two companies and informed them the latest deals that the companies did and their progress over the year. Siddharth was very pleased with all the information that geet had and said welldone geet, you have done a great job! geet smiled very happily whilst Mr Khurana replied, well, mr siddharth, as geet said, it is her job to do so. hearing this, geet pulled a very annoyed face at maan, which he saw and he glared back at her.

Geet and siddharth were to stay for the whole day at the site with Mr Khurana and adi. after the little briefing and deciding on whether to go ahead with the project with the other two companies, siddharth told geet to go and get himself and Mr Khurana some coffee and told her hwo much sugar they both wanted. Ji sir and geet walked towards the main road and luckily there was a cafe nearby - about 10 minutes away from the site - so geet quickly went over to order the drinks. in 2 minutes geet was walking back to the site with the coffees.

Meanwhile, at the site Mr Khurana had told adi to take siddharth around the full site to show and explain to him what they had decided so far as Mr Khurana needed to make some important phonecalls.

Geet reached the enrance of the site and she was carefully walking, trying not to trip over the stones and pebbles on the ground. Mr Khurana was not far from her, but geet did not see him. She kept on walking, but suddenly a great gush of wind came and blew her dupatta off her neck and flew away from her. Geet shouted oh!! mera dupatta! she tried running after but quickly realised that she had two cups full of coffee in her hands so she couldnt do much. Mr Khurana had not yet spotted geet either, when suddenly with the wind, a yellow dupatta came towards him and landed on his face. Mr Khurana carefully took hold of the duppata which smelt like roses and somehow reminded him of the first time he saw geet and took the dupatta off her face when she fell unconscious.

Geet had now seen Mr Khurana and shouted at him sir!! woh dupatta!! she places the coffees on a bench near her and ran towards Mr khurana. A few steps away from him, she tripped over a few stones, but before she could reach the ground, maan came towards heer and grabbed her hand and with the other hand, her placed his hand on her waist, to give her support. Geet looked up at him and remembered when he came to see her in the hospital and brought roses and chocolates for her, maan to was remembering this and he was looking into her beautiful hazel coloured eyes. Another gush of wind brought them back to reality.

Tum teek ho? maan asked quite meaningfully, geet who kept looking into his eyes, just nodded gradually. Maan carefully brought geet back up to the correct position and she stood there infront of him. thankyou sir its ok. geet again began to feel a little uncomfortable then she remembered her dupatta had blown away. mera dupatta? geet asked maan cutely, maan looked confused for a second, then looked down at his hand and he had the dupatta slightly wrapped around his hand, in the hurry to catch geet when she was falling. yeh loh.. maan handed over the dupatta to geet, who took it out of his hands carefully, reluctant not to touch him. geet, meri skin vich koi kaante nhi lage ce tumhe chobenge! oh sorry sir, i didnt meen... ok ok maan was about to turn around to walk away, but geet quickly called him woh sir! woh.. mujhe.. maan turned aound to face geet and told her to hurry up and say whatever it was. woh sir, mujhe aapko thank you cehna thaa lekin abhi tho tumne ceha hai geet... nhi sir.. woh uss din ce lyi, aap mujhe hospital lai ce gye see, us ke lyi. remembering that time, maan gave a faint smile and replied back to geet, its ok or geet.. mai bulgya, ab cesi ho tum? seeing that maan sir cared for her, geet smiled and told him that she was perfectly fine.

After their little conversation, maan told geet to come with him as he was too going to find adi and sidharth, she agreed. they both took about two steps forward wen a voice came from geet, oh!!! maan turned arounf to geet and asked her wat was wrong, ek minute sir. geet ran back towards the bench and maan shouted are geet! sambalce! she grabbed the two cups of coffee and brought them to maan. looking a little disappointed, geet said to him, woh sir... yeh.. apki coffee top bilcul vee garam nhi ab.. maan seeing geets sad face told looked into her beautiful hazel eyes and said, oh, coi baat nhi... um... ek minute.. maan looked around as if he was looking for somebody. His driver was standing towards the gate, so maan called his over. raju, yeh coffees loh, by saying that maan took the cups out of geets hands and gave them to the driver or um, do or coffees le car ao and .. um geet tum cya logee? geet loked up at him strangely, she was surprised that maan sir had very caringly asked for her choice. she smiled and replied, sir, nhi mujhe cuch nhi chahiye, thank you. maan gave a stern look at geet and said to her, geet, tumhe pataa hai ce doctor ne cha thaa ce kuch na kuch katee peeti roho, nhi to tum ferse dehydratd hojayogi or fer se behosh hojaugee. but sir, really... raju, saath me do teen bottles fresh mineral water le car aana ok? jee sir, saying this, raju headed towards the main gate. geet smiles slightly and thanked maan, he nodded as to accept her thank you. ab chalo geet, sidharth or adhi wait cardhe hunge, geet nodded and walked beside maan quietly.

next: news of a trip !
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Part 10...

Within a few minutes, geet and maan joined adi and siddharth who were busy seeing the plans and designs which geet had designed and some from khuranas company. oh! ayie mr khurana, we were just discussing the final layout, here please take a look, these are some of geets designs, hearing this geets eyes fluttered a little of proudness and maan noticed this. oh, lets see then shall we? maan stepped up to closely look at the designs. could you talk me through these ideas geet? jee sir yes, thats a great idea, meanwhile, would you mind mr khurana if i take adi with me and make a few important calls regarding the deal and the plans for goa? not at all mr siddharth go ahead. adhi and seiddharth left geet and maan to sit alone quitely. The silence was broken in a few seconds when raju walked in with a cup of coffee, some bottles of water and a glass cup. sir, yeh apki coffe or panee. he placed the coffe onto the table carefully and the rest and asked for anything else. maan said no and dissmissed him. so geet, please shuru hojao.. jee sir. pointing at each detail in the designs, geet explained everything with great details and maan kept looking at all her cute expressions that she made in order to help her explain clearly.

Geet suddenly started coughing very hard which snapped maan out of his little trance and he quickly poured geet some water in the glass cup. geet, yeh peeloh. saying this, maan softly placed the glass cup onto her rosy lips and got her to drink a little water. coughing a little, geet said, thank you sir, looking very concerned, maan asked her, tum teek ho na? geet looked up at maans worried face, and gave a reassuring smile and said, ji sir, voh... galle meh cuch aageya tha, iseliye, but im fine with still scrunched up eyebrows, maan nodded a little. geet went back to explaining the deateils and maan too tried to listen to her.

A few minutes later, siddharth and adi joined them again. siddharth had a huge grin on his face and asked maan if he could talk to him for a minute. maan agreed, so they stood in a corner and disscussed something of which geet was yet totally unaware of. Coming back, both maan and siddharth had little smiles formed on their faces. ok.. adi have you booked the tickets? geet had no idea about what was going on, so she looked at them all in an emotionless expression. ji sir, maine book carlye four first class tickets, woh 3 hours vich hamare paas pohonchunge, good work. yes its great! im very impressed, time citna hai flight ca? subha 10.30 ce sir. yes, or abhi coi fixed time hai nhi vaapas aane ca, so humne abhi return tickets nhi bok cite. but im estimating ce about 10 day maximum lagenge. im fine with that! geet was now trying to look busy and began folding up the plans. that was wen siddharths eyes caught geet. oh geet.. um, hum toh boolgye tumhe batane celiye, well hume calnoo goa jaana hai, to work more indeprth and seal the deal with the other two companies, so..before siddharth could finish his sentence geet interrupted sir,'humme' camatlab ? adi laughed at geets inocent question, geet, humme meaning hum sabh, mai, tum ,mr khurana and adi! it is vital for us to go, and now that i know that youll be able to manage perfectly in goa, i suppose this is a great oppertunity for you. ji sir, umm sir.. voh sabh plans or documents bhi chahiye na? haa geet, abh hamme iske baadh office me jaace sabh cuch tiyar carna parega hmm.. maan looked at his watch and pointed out that it was 2pm. abhi site pe or kuch caam to hai nhi so... maan glanced over at geet, who seemed quite tired and weak ans she was also holding her stomach, guessing that she was hungry, he said, abhi hum kuch kaa lete hai fer office me jaa car jo bhi chahiye woh lecar, main adi co bhejdoonga documents or files collect carke sabh apne paas raklega, this way cuch koega bee nhi or woh aap co apne apne ticket vee de sakdha hai. then you all can go and pack for tomorow. acha? everybody agreed and siddharth, adi and maan began making their way out, whilst geet was left to tidy up and collect all the documents.

Before leaving, maan noticed that geet wasnt behind them, so he went back to see where she had got cought up. geet? geet didnt look behind or reply to maan, maan was begining to get a little annoyed to why geet was ignoring him. GEET? maan shouted this and geet immediately got a fright and gasped, accidently dropping all the sheets into the air. maan was getting furious now. geet! yeh kya hai? kya kiya tumne?! seeinf this tone of maans, geet got a litle more frightened voh sir... geet tried to explain to him but before she could do that, maan snapped at her again. ab kya? kya dhekrahi ho? yeh sabh tumara baap uthaega?! hearing this, tears formed into geet hurt eyes and she slowly bent down to retrieve all the papers. she did not once dare to look up at him, quietly she wiped away her tears and continued picking up the mess that she had created. maan held his forehead, and breathed heavily to try and calm down. Although geet tried to kep her inwanted tears compressed within her, they ovepowered her and she had no control over them, she kept on wiping them but they kept on appearing. Maan did not see this as he was facing the wall.

Meanwhilst siddharth was wondering why it was taking them so long, so he went back to find them. Geet had now almost picked up all the paper and placed them into the files. siddharth walks in. arey! aap lok yahee hai? cuch problem hai kya? siddharth looked at man who did not reply. but geet quickly forced her tears to stay inside and repplied quickly, ji sir, bas, yeh mujse girgye the.. geet tried placing a smile onto her face, but it wasnt the same. maan looked at her, and saw pain in them, his reaction had completely changed, he could tell that she had been crying and he obviously had said something to upset her. he felt ashamed. ab hogeya na? chalo, muje to bohot bhook lagee hai. siddharth was about to walk away, wen geet stopped him and quickly wiped an escaping tear before siddharth could notice, but maan did. voh sir, mai soch rhi thi ce main apko seedhe office me miloongee voh mujhe cuch caam yaadh ageya... lekin geet, kaana? um nhi sir mujhe ab bhook nhi. siddharth bought her story so easily and before anybody else could stop her, geet picked up her bag and left. maan felt so ashamed for shouting at geet for no reason, he also knew that she was hungry, and he had clearly lost her appetite after the hurrendous go maan had at her.

Geet walked out and as soon as she reached the main gates, geet couldnt hold in her pain any more, she always got very upset and emotional when anybody mentioned anyting about her parents, even if it wasnt aimed at them directly. Geet was missing the presence alot now and cried and cried. she did not notice adi standing next to maan sirs car, but he noticed her.

maan walked quietly alongside siddharth and he was feeling the urge to see geet. so he tld siddharth that he wasnt hungry, and told him to go eat though. after saying this he immediatly picked up his speed and walked over to his car where adi was standing, he notices that adi had a worried look on his face, kya huwa adi? voh sir.. voh geet hearing geets name, maans eyes lifted up kya huwa us co? khahaa hai voh? sir voh udhar se gyi, lekin.. sir voh caafee upset lagrhi thee. immediatley maan told adi that he had to go and told him to take care of siddharth. before adi could reply, maan got into the drivers seat and whizzed the car away.

next: does maan feel guilty?
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part 11...

after saying this he immediatly picked up his speed and walked over to his car where adi was standing, he notices that adi had a worried look on his face, kya huwa adi? voh sir.. voh geet hearing geets name, maans eyes lifted up kya huwa us co? khahaa hai voh? sir voh udhar se gyi, lekin.. sir voh caafee upset lagrhi thee. immediatley maan told adi that he had to go and told him to take care of siddharth. before adi could reply, maan got into the drivers seat and whizzed the car away.

Geet found a little place to sit where there was nobody around, just grass, leaves flowers, trees and benches, a bit like a public park. it wasnt far from the main road. she sat under a tree, leaning against the trunk and she quietly crie and let all her ters free. she held her legs together and sat there, sniffling and talking into the sky papa.. aap mujhe kyu chor ce chalegye! kyu? mujhe yaha bilkul nhi achaa lagraa, yeh dhuniya bohot buree hai. papa, apnee geet co apke paas auna hai papa! slowly her talking turned into shouts in hope for somebody up there ( in the sky) would hear her.

maan decided to stop the car beside the main road and thought that geet couldnt have gone further away than this, so he got out and decided to find her. he saw an old man walking on the footpath and asked his if he had seen a girl wearing a yellow suit around hear. He replied, voh vaha ek ladki gyi thee, 10/15 minutes pehela, bha dheklo beta. ji thank you, maan ran into the direction that the old man had pointed to. but there was no sign of geet.

Her cries were getting louder and louder, geet needed somebody to comfort her but again like always she was left alone, with nobody exept her shadow. papa! please papa! mujhe yaha kyu chordiya? kyu!!?? the tears in geets eyes were not even letting her stop, now her eyes looked red, full of pain and hurt, bu get didnt want this pain to go, the wanted her parents to know how much she needed them.

Maan was still looking for geet, he was just about to give in, but suddenly he heard a cry, not one but lots of cries. geet couldnt control herself any longer. she was screaming her heart out at the sky, shouting and pleading for her papa. geet! maan saw it was geet, and he sprinted over to her, he saw her state and was extremely worried, he knelt down to her side, whilst she was still shouting for her papa to come back. maan tried to keep his emotions intact and tried to talk to geet. geet! yeh kya huwa tume? geet? tum.. tum, oh geet? geet couldnt control herself and kept on crying her heart out and maan coulnt watch this. he couldnt bear to see her in this much pain. he felt totally responsible. papa.. kyu chordiya hume? KYUN?!!! after screaming as much and loudly as she could, geet gave in, but her tears didnt. geet? geet? maan shook her shoulder a few times and geet looked at his slowly, although her face was emotionless, maan could read her sore eyes. this was all because of him, because of what he said. maan had never felt so guilty and ashamed in his life.

maan cupped geets wet face with his hands gently and they both looked at each other in pain, geet didnt have the courage to hide herself and her feling from him, so she left her tears running. maan slowly wiped away the tears on her innocent face and said, geet im so sorry, mujhe maf cardo geet, tum.. itni tacleef me ho, itna dardh hai tumme... geet, they both leaned their head forward a little so their upper foreheads could rest on each others. maan kept on apologysing, but geet didnt have the energy anymore to say anything to him.

They just sat for about 1/2 hour listening to each others breathing and heartbeats. maan broke the silence by lifting his head and carefully brushing back geets loose strands of hair and not being able to look into her hazel eyes, he kept his head low and said, geet tum teek ho? im so sorry geet geet had now got most control over herself again and nodded, looking into his face, she saw that he felt responsible for her condition, so geet tried lifting herself up to stand up, but seemed as though her entire body felt numb, she nearly collapsed, but maan grabbed her by the waist and supported her in standing up. she gave him a weak little smile, with this maan looked directly at her, and caught some tears with his fingers that were threatening to drop. giving a little sniffle, geet came a little more closer to maan and hugged him tightly. maan wasnt at all surprised and hugged her back, giving her some support too. she buried her head into his chest and cried a little.

Still not knowing what exactly to say to her, maan just tightened his grip on her as if hetoo was in pain seeing geet so sad. To geet his grip comforted her even more. She began to ask him whilst she was still sniffeling a little, sab kyu chalejate hai... mujhe chor ke? her voice sonded hurt and weak, maans eyes closed shut to this question. shhh, geet he almost whispered this lightly to geet, trying to console her. Again there was a strange but comforting silence between them. Geet kept her eyes shut and cried quietly againt maans heart. Maan let her.

The silence was broken with a call on maans mobile. They both came back into reality and slowly seperated from their hug. Geet was feeling a little akward, so she kept her eyes tightly to the ground, maan looked at her for a few seconds and turned around to answer the call. As it was regarding office, maan talked for about 3 minutes then hung up. He turned back to find that geet was not there.

geet caha gyi? he thought to himself. He saw that her bag wasnt there either so went to look for her.

Geet felt very bad for breaking down infront of maan sir and was walking away as she didnt know how to face him let alone anyone at the moment. Her face felt wet and a little sticky from her tears and here eyes felt swollen. She found a fountain nearby and dropped her bag onto the grass to go ahead. She stood by the fountain and took her hands and cupped them together so she could take some water. She took the water and splashed it onto her face, makng her feel awake again as the water was cold. She did that repetitively, whilst a few tears were still appearing from the though of her parents absence. Geet kept her hands covering her face, letting the water droplets absorb into her. she stood for a moment in silence with her eyes shut.

She was brought back to life by somebodys hand being placed over her shoulder gently. geet, maan said this very softy and geet instantly knew it was him. She moved her body slowly to face him. There was an eyelock. Maan reached out from his trouser pocket and pulled out a handkerchief. he offered it to geet. geet took it out of his hands carefully and wiped the waer droplets from her flawless face. Maan just stared at her in admiration and sympathy thinking what have i done. how could i be so bad to such a kind and innocent hearted girl? many questions of guilt were filling maans mind. Geet handed back the handkerchief and said thank you very quielty. Maan took it and there was a slight second where their fingers touched and they both felt quite weird, but neither let go soon.

Geet asked maan what the time was and he replied that it was nearly 4. Geet gasped when she heard this and said, sir, mujhe ab jaana chahiye, siddharth sir mera office mein intizaar carenge. Geet walked over to get her bag and things and began walking towards the main roads. Geet still didnt feel completely recovered from what just happened and felt a little dizy so wiothout taking any risks, she took each step slowly and made her way. Maan stood there watching her, he too knew that she had not completely came out of the shock too so he thought of giving her a hand. Geet! maan shouted and geet slowy came to a halt. Before she could turn her face to look at maan, he had ran and already caught up with her and now was standing infront of her. Geet ao mai tumhe drop cardeta hoon.. vese bee cafee late ho tum thank you sir lekin.. before geet could finish wer sentence maan interupted an said geet ab chalo, mujhe pataa hai ce abhi bee tum cafee camzor ho, or je tum ab late hojaugee, fer der se ghar pohunchugee, fer packing mai dheri hojayegi or sawer co tum late ho jaugi. so chale? geet clearly didnt have the energy to argue with maan sir so she gave a slight sigh in agreement. Maan took her bags from he and carried them for her. He walked beside geet to his car. He opened the front door for her and let her slowly get in, then after shutting it, he too got into the drivers seat and they drove to her work.

next: where does maan take geet?
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Part 12...
Maan took her bags from he and carried them for her. He walked beside geet to his car. He opened the front door for her and let her slowly get in, then after shutting it, he too got into the drivers seat and they drove to her work.

Im the car they were both sitting quietly. Geet kept her eyes on the window, watching time go by, everything being left behind. Maan would frequently look at her. he knew that her mind was elsewhere. Before maan could interact with geet, her mobile began ringing. Geet didnt notice as she was still in her own world. geet, geet maan patted her on her arm gently and she came out of her daze and looked at maan who said tumhara phone geet didnt understand straight away until it started ringing again. oh geet said and quickly took it out of her bag and answered it. Maan could tell she was nervous. hello? ... umm ji sir, sir im so sorry, voh.. sir geets eyes were begining to fill up again and maan noticed this and wasnt going to tolerate it. Before geet could respond, maan stopped the car in an instance and snatched the phone of geet. maan sir? geet looked at him confused. Maan began talking into the phone in a very serious manner. hello? hello? yeh coan hai?! ji this is maan singh khurana mr siddharth. oh! mr khurana.. sorry mane aapko pehechana nhi, mr siddharth i would like to inform you that geet is with me at the moment as i asked her to go over some other plans. is that ok with you? umm.. ofcourse mr khurana! take all the time you need, dont worry main yahaa ca caam samaal rha hoon. thank you, i will have geet back to you in one hour. thats fine, bye. maan snapped the phone shut and turned to see geet staring at him very confused. Before she could say anything maan said geet main tumhe chor dunga office mein lekhin pehele ic bohot zaroori caam hai. lekin voh.. geet tum daro mat, agar ab siddharth cuch cahega to tum muje batadhena. maan was still angry about the way siddharth was shouting at geet over the phone and he couldnt take it that somebody would talk to her like this.. epecially after the day she's had.

Geet didnt bother questioning maan sir about where they were going except she just went back to staring out of the window.

A few minutes later maan stopped the car and told geet that we were there. Maan got out of the car then helped geet out too. She was so grateful to him for being there fore her, eventhough there were no less than strangers. Maan took her into a big restaurant and then geet started asking him. sir yeh kya hai? um yaha kyu hai? maan told her just to come with him. she had no choice but to obey him. After the waiter had seated them in a private area, maan told geet, geet, mujhe toh bohot bookh lagee hai, maine socha ce main cuch kaa letahoon, fer tumco chor dunga. ok? ji sir.

maan was hopin for geet to say, mujhe vee khana hai, but to his disapointment she was arranging to just sit there whilst maan ate!

He was worried for her, he didnt know why, but he wanted her to eat too because he cared for her health and keeping her hungry all day was not on his watch!

Geet was sat quietly opposite maan. In order to find out her likes and dislikes, maan asked geet so geet tumco kaisa khaana pasandh hai? geet looked at him and asked why he wanted to know. He replied, bas aise poochrahaa tha, nhi batona to mat batao. geet felt guilty for putting him down so she said sir Im sorry, mera yeh matlab nhi thaa, aapco jo poochna hai poochsakdhe ho. A grin formed on maans face and quickly disappeared too just before geet could see it. so.. tumhe english kaana pasandh hai? nhi sir, main to bas indian food hee kandi hoon. kyu? kyuce english kaana bilcul nhi mirchi hota hai or mere taste ca nhi hai. so kya kya pasandh hai? um... aloo ce parothe, paneer ci sabjee, dhaal makhni.. sabh kuch. ok.. The waiter had come to the table and asked maan for his order. geet didnt bother listening in to what maan was saying to the waiter. After the waiter had gone, geet asked to be excused from the table, sir, I main restroom mein jaake aati hoon. Ok. With this, geet stood up and left. Meanwhile man thought not to waist this time and to make some important calls regarding the business.

After splashing water onto her face continuosly, geet dried herself and went back to the table, to see maan sitting there on the phone. As she came up to the table, maan ended the phonecall and smiled at geet welcomingly and smiled back to be polite. She seated herself and just in time the waiter came to put down the dishes.

After the waiter had left, maan told geet geet khaana kaalo.. par sir, yeh toh aapkeliye hai. Maan looked astonished as there were 4 different dished layed out on the table and geet was saying it was all for him? geet tum mazaak car rhi ho? man bhalla itna sabh sirf mere kyu order karronga? Hearing this geets eyes sparkled with amusement, with a dazzling smile on her face she said sir abh mujhe cya pataa ce aap kitna khaate hunge.. vese bi, body barne celiye jitna zaroori hai utna to khaana parega na? maans mouth was just left hanging.. was miss geet trying to suggest to him that he was fat?! geet tum kehna kya chahti ho? ke main mota hoon?! geet burst into hysterics, she couldnt stop herself from laughing at him. Maan watched geet burst with laughter, joy and amusement. slowly his stern look melted away into a smile of admiration. He was lost in her. how her fragile petal-like lips were expressing her happiness, how her sweet laughter was all he could hear, how her beautiful hazel eyes brought a sense of mystery and adventure, how her glowing goddess-like skin brightened up the whole world for him... he could go on and on listing all the beauties about her, but it was all interrupted by geet beginning to cough a little because she had been laughing too hard.

Suddenly drifting away from his trance, maan quickly rushed over to geet and brought a glass of water to her lips. geet.. yeh loh, peeloh. Saying this, geet brought her hands to the glass too, making her soft fingers touch his masculine hands sending little currents of a totally different feeling (that he is yet to discover ;) ) which he tried to ignore for the time being

ill be postin soon ...xxx.
Edited by chupchupsi - 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

loved all d parts ...

continue soon ...

thnx 4 d pm ...
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thank you! im on the next part now :)

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