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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the PM ...Lovely update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'll accept it
with open arms
muchas gracias😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi91

i'll accept it

with open arms
muchas gracias😉

hahaaha lol .. that made me chuckle!!! aaah u just made my day! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
loved the update...
loved maan's concern for her
waiting for maaneet moments...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey i like ur story its good do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'm glad that i made ur
day sweety🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update! Yeah, why is Maan doing everything got her? Uska boss kahan hain? lol Geet almost sat on Maan, I bet he didn't mind it at all...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 14...

Waving goodbye geet opened the car door and without looking inside she placed herself inside. geet... AAH!! geet jumped back out of the car as she realised she was nearly sat ontop of maan!

With her cheeks.. no infact her whole face turning crimson red, geet apologised to maan oh! im.. im soo sorry .. sir! i really didnt see you.. sorry maan saw that geet was already in a very akward and embarrassing situation so withought further adue, he told geet to come inside the OTHER way geet get in the car, the OTHER way geet understood very well why he purposely empasised on the word"other" and keeping her head down in embarrassment, she walked to the other side of the car and quietly got inside without another word.

Maan was sitting in the car busy on his laptop, whilst geet sat their not daring to move her head.

It had now been 15 minutes in the car and geet was beginning to fall asleep but she was trying so hard not to as that waould just add to the embarrasment, so she thought she sould just ask maan sir.. um.. sir? without looking up from the laptop screen, maan replied hmm? voh.. aapce paas paani hai? geet waited for his reply, forcing her eyes to open. haan hai geet was waiting for him to offer her it, but nope, no such thing happened.. he continued working away on his laptop. "yeh caise insaan hai? paani vee nhi dheraha?! chado!" geet decided not to go begging for the water and decided to leave it at that and began staring outside the car window to keep herself awake.

Another 5 minutes had passed and the car was still silent.. the river driving away... maan sir working away.. and geet.. just sat there dying of boredom kya zindagi hai! the words slipped out of her mouth unintentionally. Immediately maan shot his face right up from the screen and asked geet kya kaha tumne? he had a confused look on his face. Geet just shook her head as if to say "it doesnt matter" and before maan could look away and go back to his work, geet let out a cute little yawn and covered her mouth politely, then she rubbed her eyes as if she was trying to rup all her sleepiness and tiredness away. Maan saw this and asked geet raat co soyi nhi? geet stopped rubbing her eyes and accidently another cutesa yawn escaped from her mouth. nhi sir voh office 11.15 nikli fer 12.00 vaje ghar pahunchi or fer itni packing carni thi capre.. papers documents.. alteast 2ghandhe laggye fer massaa soa payi.. again another yawn was welcomed. maan was listening to her very carefully ad then replied, kyu? tumne akele hi sabh documents or papers tiyar kiye? umm.. nhi sir, veer sir the na office mein uhno ne meri madhath carli thi, or fer avni helped me with the packing too maan was getting slightly curious now... so where was siddharth? geet didnt realise that maan was getting quite serious, jo voh.. siddharth sir to jab main office mein ayi thi voh odho chale gye. maan just gave a little nod, inside he was not liking how sidhharth had shown so much lack of responsibility and left all the work for geet to do. He was not impressed at all.

His thought bubble was shortly broken by geets yawns. He reached into the side panel of the car and handed geet a bottle of water. yeh loh geet. geet was quite suprised about why he was giving this to her now, when she had clearly asked for it nearly 1/2 hour ago! stubborn as she was, she rejected his offer - politely. no sir, im fine thanx maan too was a stubborn man so he said, ab lehlo, you'll feel a litte more fresh after it. if it was any other day and geet had enough sleep, she would have deffinatey neglected his offer again, but seen as though today was not a very great day for her, she took the bottle withought arguing.

Opening the bottle top slowly, careful not to spill and water, geet took a little splash of water into her hands and splashed it onto her face. Maan looked up to see her, and he thought to himself "yeh ladki to bilcul.. i dunno i have no words to describe her! maine to isko paani peene celiye dhiya tha, lekin yeh! god!" maan just shook his face ans stared at her now patting her face dry gently on her soft, petal skin.

Soon after they had reached the airport. The driver began unloading their suitcases and etc.. from the boot whilst geet stood there and maan stood talking to somebody on the phone.

Geet thought to go and help the driver to unload the baggage. main apki maddhat carleti hoon. hearing this from geet, the driver quickly said no and that he was fine. Maan noticed this kind gesture of geets and smiled secretly. After finishing the call and all the things were unloaded from the car, maan ordered the driver to leave. They both picked up their own luggage and began rolling it towards the entrance. Geet was struggling a little as she couldnt manage the the two suitcases, so maan offered her some help. geet tum mujhe voh suitcase dhedo, u cant manage no sir im fine. geet dhedho really... before geet could answer back, maan grabbed hold of the suitcase handle as well as geets hand accidently, which was also holding the luggage. After a few moments of staring at each other aggressively as both of them were adament on not letting go, geet finally gave up. Maan grinned in his little victory.

sorry guys it was a short update.. next time i promise full airport scene...
i hope you understand that siddharth is not a very bothered type of man... he only shows it as hes trying to work with a man as big as maan singh khurana, otherwise, he just leaves all his work to be done by geet and veer and other workers as hes actually not bothered about anything other than money... I hope it makes sense...
i wont be posting anymore tonight as its nearly midnight n i gotta go to college tomorow (exams) urrgh. i hope u all understand ! :) xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sid is irresponsible boss
just making show of
infront of MSK
maaneet scene so cute
simply adorable part
love it
thanks 4 pm
gracias 4 double update
sweety

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