OS: Animalistic Urge (Part 3 pg 13)

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Tej

@t3ej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Wow Wow Wow, absolutely fantastic. 👏 Thanks for a great romantic end to a lovely OS. ❤️😍

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

haye!!! ..... am all ☺️

loved it to the core ... .

thanks alot for the awesome OS

keep writing ... ur amazing @ it ... 👍🏼

love

Sana

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Kavita

@panchjun5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Hey Sharmishtha....Loved the final part....it was sweet, cute, passionate...all rolled into one....with some excellent dialogues....especially the one Maan says to the baby before starting with his seduction....😛😆....And making her open her eyes throughout the act....Ooohh....that was hot.....☺️.....

Truly madly deeply wish that something like this happens in the show.....😍.....U r too good Sharmishtha.....👏

Edited by panchjun5 - 14 years ago

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

deadly romantic n amazing update

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Gr8 update
Der SR was really hot---beautifully written
Luv da dialogues u wrote
Awwww Maan dressed her up as a bride cuz he wanted 2 du it da propa way
Thx 4 the PM
Awesome OS

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Nikky

@itsallabtGURTI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY MOMENT BETWEEN THEM.. THE WAYS MAAN TORTURED YET LOVED HER!!! AWESOME

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

wow itz beautiful.. luved the update... thanx a lot for the wonderful OS...

Edited by swetha10 - 14 years ago

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mchopra

@mchopra

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

wow tht was so well written..but by god how much u made us wait..phewwwwwwwww..

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

simply WOW.... good part good ending and good composition... composition in the sense that you wrapped it up well and didnt leave out the essence of Maaneet that they are in original... liked the way you wrote the 2nd last line.. so much affection and attention to each others dreams.. truly made a great part..liked it loved it and anticipating more from your creative mind and hands...keep it up and Great going!!!

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

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