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Posted: 14 years ago
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Authors Note:
Heeey Dear People!
How are you.
I am so sorry for such a delay.. its because i had 3 test to learn every day..and that is ALOT!
I am seriously hating school right now so much.. especially when i have a fight with my best friend..and i was totally not in the mood of writing..i had diffrent kind of problems..but after this day i have a whole week freee of school :D so I will upload as much as i can!
THank you so much ..i hope you are all understanding me and have a little more patient.!
Loveyouall ! xx
Please accept my excuse!
I wil update ASAP! Keep tuned! <3


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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohkay................ all da best fo ur test 😊
n after dat i want soo manyyyyyyyyyy updates😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yup..v will wait..do ur test well fighting with ur friend..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its okay dear😳and best of luck for your test👍🏼and than surely i want updating by you in TMK speed..............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heey Buddys
SO SO SORRY for the DELAY!
I made it a little more sizzling! haha. there are kisses and touches! you will love it.
Love,
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He took his school bag and took a little black velvet box.. he opened and took a pretty silver ring with one small diamond out of it'

This is a promising ring Pya.. it means that I am going to seal my promise with this ring..

He took her hand ..not daring to look at her..

" Pya, you are the girl.. the girl that is perfect to me.. The girl that I can't live without..the girl my eyes want to see, the girl my ears want to hear.. and the girl..that makes my heart beat so fast..

Pya Chaiswal.. Would you make me the happiest man on earth by accepting this ring and becoming my girlfriend.. "..

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Pya could not believe her eyes... she closed the distance between Abhay and her...slowly moving her lips dangerously close those lips... getting in temptation.. .. This was wrong she was thinking...but she could not stop...not anymore...not now he confessed that he wanted her as his girlfriend officially...

She slowly closes her eyes and pressed a soft... yet strong... kiss on his lips...for only 2 seconds she lingered and then she moved her face away getting some close... Abhay opened his eyes...and she saw those eyes again...the moment they had met...they had fall in love... she knows now...this is all destiny...it was meant to. "I think that was a yes... ".. Abhay said dreamingly...

Pya laughed... "Yes a big yes... I Love you so much..."... he smiled again...He took her hand and placed a soft kiss on each finger. And then took the ring from the box and placed it on her finger. .. Glistering in the sun the ring looked beautiful...she looked down...

Thank you Abhay... I love it... and I love you ' she pressed herself against him...feeling his arms hugging her back closely.

Feeling his arms around her... she felt so save...she came out of her thoughts when she felt some weird feelings inside her stomach while Abhay was moving his arms up and down... feeling him closing the distance between her ear and his lips.. " You make me so crazy' and that thing you gave me a few minutes ago' ".. Pya got that confused look on her eyes..Before she realized he was talking about the kiss.. She blushed.. You started a temptation..Before it could affect me you just left me all ready dying for your touch.. ".. That made her breath heavier..His hot breath was tickling her shoulder and neck while he was talking.. "And your eyes.. They are so dark' I could get lost.. And never find the way back.. ".. He places a soft kiss beneath her ear.. "And your blush..That red lovely colour on your cheeks..tells me how innocent you are' and that drives me crazy too.."..He placed another kiss beneath the first kiss.. "And god.. Your lips '

He placed another kiss.. Slowly moving his lips down..Kissing every inch he comes across..

Pya was now breathing heavy .. Closing her eyes feeling the pleasure of his lips on her skin.. This is going the wrong way.. But she could not move or say something.. She was frozen..

Abhay moved his lips slowly and gentle down .. Kissing all the way.. He loved her skin 'and the fragrance.. The smell of her..It was like pure drugs to him.. It was so sweet and delicious..He wanted her..So much.. The sensation of his lips against her skin was like ice and fire getting together playing a dangerous game..Neither scared.. He wanted more..Reaching at the straps of her tank top..He slowly pushed them down with his hand..Kissing every inch again on her shoulder..

Pya could not take it anymore..It was too much.. She slowly turned her head..

"Abhay.. ".. Abhay hummed something back..Shushing her' Pya just sat there silently.. Wanted nothing more than sitting there feeling Abhay's lips on her skin'every place he touched..He left it with a hot glow.. Nothing could make her move now..

His hands..Automatic snaked around her waist..Feeling her curves was something he wanted at the first day..Playing with the edge of her top..He was still kissing her..Slowly and gently he slides his hands under her tank..Feeling a little skin with his thumb'what was making Pya almost explode her heart ..Her heart was beating so fast..She could not deny..This was wrong..But why, did it feel so good..And her heart didn't let her move away or say something'it was like her heart was controlling her now instead of her mind..

He pushed her tank a little more up..And started o feel her soft skin with his thumb. Pya still eyes closed..Could not move.. He moved his whole hand gently on her belly..Moving his hands from left to right..

Then He bowed his head and placed a soft but yet hot kisses on her belly' making her say his name'Abhay'Abhay closed his eyes.. He knew he had to stop..They have to go to school.. Gently he placed another gentle kiss .. Pushed her tank back..And moved his body over her so his face met her face..He placed another soft kiss beneath her ear.. I Love you.. It's all your fault.. You are too tempting.. He saw her blushing.. And placed his hands on her cheeks.. We need to go to school..

Like that they both had to run a little to be on time...but made it to the class finally.. In the Spanish class while Abhay was staring at Pya..And Pya was listening to the teacher.. "Te amo .. eres mi angel"..She heard Abhay tell her.. Pya smiled..." Te quiero ms ... t eres lo nico que importa ms "...He smiled at her lovingly...

"This is the secretary of Mrs Raichand, she asked if Pya Chaiswal and Misha Dobrial could come to the Mrs Raichand's office please. There is one more message for all students who wish participate for the talent show you can only submit your name till the last moment and that is tomorrow till 5 o clock. Thank you all. Have a nice day. "..

Pya looked at the speakers and looked back at Abhay..He smiled at her.. "You are new.. You will get your school card and your own locker, you have to meet the headmaster after all.. ".. Pya smiled.. But then got a little nervous.. She is your mom.. Looking more nervous now..Abhay laughed.. Pya so what..Go talk to her.. She won't eat you.. Pya smiled nervously..Took her back..Before leaving her chair..Abhay took her hand and smiled at her.. "Never forget how much I love you.. ".. She smiled..Feeling a little better. Left the classroom .and walked towards the office..

Meeting Misha there they both smiled and hugged each other.." Pya this school is great man.. I have missed you.. How was your class and did you made any friends..And oh yea .there is that weird gossip telling around.. Everybody talks about you and that boy that made you freak out in the hostel canteen..And what was his name again.. Abhay Raichand.. Pya smiled and blushed' that made Misha's eyes pop out' WHAT THE $%^$%^.. Pya'those gossips are true.. ? You mean you and that freak?

Pya told Misha everything.. Misha was shocked..But slowly got a big smile on her lips.. So you mean you find your prince on the white horse, your dream guy..Whatever you where always talking about bla bla ?.. Pya nodded.. In just one day? ' Pya nodded again..

Just when Misha was giving Pya a hug..She got called by the reception.. She kissed pya on the cheek.. " I am so happy for you .. ".. She said walking towards the door.. Pya sat down on the chair ..And was pleased how her life was right now.. How happy she was.. How she got her Love so fast..And how she feels alone about being apart from him.. Finally after waiting 15 minutes..Misha came back with some papers and stuff in her hand.. She hugged Pya.. "Don't be scared or something..She is like the coolest headmaster ever' she is very nice .. Go ahead she asked if I could call you. ".. She gave Pya a kiss and said goodbye and about meeting her at her room. Pya walked in the office and saw the woman looking down..

" Hello Mrs Raichand, I am Pya Chaiswal' ".. The woman looked up ..And smiled.. Pya was a little shocked.. It was the same woman from the plane.. "Pya.. Are you the girl from the plane? "..She asked.. Pya nodded.. "Well .that's a coincidence.. Please sit down..How are you doing so far.. Do you like the school and the people around you? ".. Pya smiled..She already felt comfortable with her.. " Thank you Mrs. Raichand.. I love everything here.. Everyone is nice and it's all like I thought it would be, very different but I love it. .. "''.

They both talked about her scholarship and how she got her school card.. A few papers with information about the rules and everything else'

" And this is your locker key, ask anyone some help if you got problems with it..".. Pya nodded.. "Thank you .. ".. The lady smiled at her.. " You look like a very nice and good behaved girl Pya.. If you need anything..Please come and visit.. I won't feel bothered at all .. And you need someone to guide you the whole school for the week...so you will get better at finding the classrooms.. Anyone in particular? .. Pya smiled.. Not really.. It's not necessary at all madam.. .. I think it I Pya.. This school is pretty big.. Well how about one of your classmates..Made any friends today? She asked still looking down..

"I have met Sneha and Abhay .. ".. she said.. just when she said Abhay's name.. Mrs Raichand looked up.. " you have met Abhay Raichand? . my son? ".. she smiled and nodded.. "yes madam he was very nice and helped me to find my classroom . ".. the woman in front of her looked surprised.. " I am glad I hear something positive about him..and glad he helped you. "' she smiled at her.. " well I will say to him about giving you some guise in the first week..don't worry. "

" Well this was it Pya, I am glad you have chosen this university.. I hope you will stay her and accomplish many goals! I wish you all the best dear. Please visit of you have any questions or you need any help.. that's where I am for. ".. she nodded and stood up.. took her stuff..

Thank you again Mrs Raichand.. have a nice day.. the woman nodded and smiled to her and she walked away. Closing the door behind her she sighed..and smiled.. it all went very good she looked at her watch when she saw that her Spanish less was almost over'she walked towards the canteen when someone bumped into her.. her papers fall on the ground before picking them up..someone stood on them with a pink high heel .. she looked up and saw two icy blue eyes looking at her.. she took the paper under her heels..

" So finally it is time to meet miss charity ' you must have pretty much courage to even talk to Abhay.. MY BOYFRIEND.. and walked closer to her..with two blond girls looking almost like each other.. " I am Tyra Malhotra.. the girl who you want to be, the girl that every boy wants to have.. am I right girls.. ".. those two gave her a high five ..and she came closed..

" look at you..almost crying..your cheap clothes, your ugly and fake innocent face.. we all know your types.. trying to look like the girl next door..but inside getting all the boys.. "..

She pointed her finger close to Pya's face.. "don't you even dare to talk to him anymore.. he promised me that he won't cheat on me anymore..but well .. going with you I won't call cheating.. you are no competition for me.. well..I warn you..next time.. I will not warn..I will harm. ".. like that she walked away.. leaving a sad almost crying Pya behind.. Pya took a deep breath and walked towards the canteen.. she did not believe her words.. getting more stronger in her mind.. just when she walked in the canteen she saw that girl again..placing her hands on someone's chest..she turned her head a little and then saw who the guy was.. letting her bag fall down from the shock.. it was Abhay.. who was holding her wrist while she was pushing him towards the wall with her hands against his chest..

Feeling all broken and used she runned away as fast as she could.. and she didn't know for sure.. but she heard her name being called.. she went into a bathroom for girls and sat dawn in a toilet seat.. crying all over .. WHY .. how could she let someone like that in her heart.. it was too good to be true..he could not fall for her just in 1 day.. and she was nothing compared to Tyra..

Getting up slowly..she removed her tears and made some toilet paper wet with water and refreshed her face with it..taking deep breaths..she looked at her schedule.. over 5 minutes she had literature.

Walking slowly towards some building she heard her name..she looked around and saw Sneha waving at her.. "Pya.. ".. she called pya waved back.. and walked towards her..

" thank god I found you..where were you heading towards..come we have to be here.." Pya smiled at her " thank you Sneha.. they both walked in the classroom ..and sat down' the less started..

" Sneha.. "' she whispered.. Sneha turned around.." you need help? "..she asked pya smiled at her.. "tell me more about Tyra Malhotra and Abhay Raichand? Are those two? ".. she asked..

Sneha smiled at her.. " No not anymore.. "' that made Pya feel a little better.. but what was he doing then? She thought..

" they had a thing, she was the new girl..just like you..she was first very old fashioned..the first day on school she was wearing one of those dungarees and a t shirt..having sandals and black hair' and see her now..design, vintage and everything some princess also has.. she changed her hair in blond..well that's not the story anyway..they both were best friends..and when they fell in love, Tyra started to be more and more one of those girls you see her now..and two years ago they bore apart.. it was something about her cheating on him .. but that are gossips..and what was true and what not..only Tyra and Abhay know..".. Pya was totally surprised by this..she didn't know who to believe.. Sneha who was telling what she thought was the truth, Abhay who never told her anything..or Tyra ?

It was all complicating for her'thinking about that..the class ended and she had to walk to her hostel..she took her bag..said bye to Sneha and started to leave towards her hostel.. thinking about all what happened today.

END of Chapter 6

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Edited by Div_Ridz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
wooooooooo hooooooooooo loved abhay n pia's closeness alot hope they keep bonding and getting closer day by day wonderful update
Edited by Lifu18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei sahar,
tat was good..u gav wonderful abhiya moments..i was blushing while reading those..good yaar..so will pia confront abhay regarding T?did he c pia in canteen b4 she ran off.u wrote someone called her name but u didnt mention who it was so was tat abhay?waiting for ur next update..try to update during weekends if u hav hectic schedules with studies..v wud manage till then with difficulty..
luv,
ramani.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RB81

hei sahar,
tat was good..u gav wonderful abhiya moments..i was blushing while reading those..good yaar..so will pia confront abhay regarding T?did he c pia in canteen b4 she ran off.u wrote someone called her name but u didnt mention who it was so was tat abhay?waiting for ur next update..try to update during weekends if u hav hectic schedules with studies..v wud manage till then with difficulty..
luv,
ramani.


really! abhiya scenes were awesome😳 but what about that T?😕did abhay called her in the canteen and why was he so close to her?😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilove99


really! abhiya scenes were awesome😳 but what about that T?😕did abhay called her in the canteen and why was he so close to her?😲

He He! :D
Think of it as if T was the ex of Abhay..and when she runned away..someone called her name..and you will find out who that was.. :D
Just wait ..and you wil find out! I am glad you liked it though..
next chapter is going to be about Abhay and Pya gettin together again! Dont miss it :)
Love you guyz,
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Sahar
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awww !!!!!!!!nice part!
poor piya !!!!!!
tnkz for pm

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