ShaNak in Dhulwadi FF Part 14 Page 6

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Adi-Bhoot!!!

You updated yay!!!!

Ok I loved the update and poor Khanak...man u made your Shaan do the work🤣🤣🤣

so that means they will be talking this time...and i hope they are talking and not going to *ahem ahem*🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I can't wait for the next update...

PS: the reason of my besharmi is coz I am in my 12 midnight timing and such thoughts are frequents when I'm high on meds or just on midnight rendezvous 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

very nice yaaar..luvving it...continue soon...

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Fariba100

@Fariba100

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

vry nice aditeee ~~~~ beautiful updateeee !

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Dis is wat i want 2 c in d show as well bt dead sure it won't happen!!😔so i'll jst SIT BACK,RELAX ND ENJOY!!😊

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

telephone talks were really good with comments on their state of minds... the update is really very good.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Aditee loved the update! keep up the great work, Shantanu needs to take his responsiblity and give Khanak her life back again!👏

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

aditee yay u updated even tho im late lol, awesome yaar loved the fact that u made it realistic from both of their prides to that khanak wont be able to do this by herself that is without living apart from shaan for like ever which she obviously cant do lol, and i love the fact shaan realises that he's let khanak down and that he is somewhat irresponsible and wants to help he's wife out as he's already let her down. cant wait for the next part x

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

What the...............????!!!!

How did I miss this update???? HOW? HOW? HOW??/

loosing control over my life I tell you!!!!😭

Oye,,,update soon...you are an extremely gifted expressionist....when I read what you write,,, I can not only imagine it in my mind, feel it in my heart but also want it in front of me so bad !!!!

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Pragnyaa

@Pragnyaa

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Rite now I am so disappointed with the writing in the show itself is that ... i find your writing much more fitting to the show... i almost want them to take your entire script and apply it to the show!!! I MEAN it !!!