OS: Pyaare Se Pyaare Prt2 pg6 Jan18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: jnawaz
@ psrada: i totally get what you are saying..and i completely agree...but in the story...i didnt hint one way or the other...they could totally know the truth...i just didnt mention it...ha ha...after all..it was only Maan and Geet's pov i showed...maybe i should do one from Meera and Armaan's pov...what say...he he

JAZ

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I am sending you a PM...please do check!

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Kise se pyaar karo aur uski yaadon mein khud ko jeene do..shayad is se zayadaa dard aur kuch nahi de sakta...thst all i will say for this JAZ figure it out for urself..

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Okies now where do I bang my head Jaz....ahhhhhhhhhh why again...Nahin

Have some mercy on us poor reader

next one can we have something light hearted

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

We knw you write so well n so even this piece was beautifully written but just the fact that Maan n Geet are nt together was...devastating !! Though I do agree that there is life beyond heartbreaks !

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SaJan-SaJan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

superb yaar...

loved it...

thnx 4 d pm..

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

hey its nice really gt 2 knew sumthing much needed than a lot 4 this this means a lot................:)

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Amiiish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

It was painful reading, the separation was more painful, dont know about them but for me it was, cuz I cant even imagine them separate. This story was really hard to digest. Jaz seriously how do you write this?
But then I thought of it, maybe it is possible to move on, in situations like this, but still I never can imagine them separate.
Had it been other names, I would say awesome update dear;)

Edited by Amiiish - 14 years ago

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Bulbul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

something really different and something really wonderful👏..loved the OS!..a very different perspective of life but very realisitc one!..great work Jaz👍🏼

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hindu4lyf

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

I actually read this the day you updated but I couldn't get myself to comment. I'm sure Maan would make a great father and Geet loves her 3 year old a lot too but I really hate that feeling of having sacrificed that one thing that you loved so much for the sake of someone else's happiness. Of course the situation was such that not much could be done without hurting someone close to you but it hurt to see them separate like that.

This OS reminded me a bit of Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam and Dhadkan. Very well written but it was painful reading it. :( I always had this hope that somehow true love would prevail and they'll still end up together but that didn't happen. But yes, it's a harsh reality of life that many people have to deal with..not everyone is lucky enough where their first love happens to be the one they end up spending the rest of their life with.

We learn to move on in life..we have to move on in life regardless of whether we want to or not.