OS: Pyaare Se Pyaare Prt2 pg6 Jan18

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

That was too practical jazz..... Its very well written..... I m agree wid all ur logics but still i can't bear it...... I can't lie.

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Alisha

@luv angel

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

amazing and despite geet and maan not ending up together it was good....... love the story portrayed.....

*Alisha*

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hi Jaz, Came upon this story solely since you sent the update in the pm and I couldn't miss out the story knowing that you have written it now can I 😉. About the story absolute perfect and flawless but like pixie mentioned it would have been better if you showed that both Geet and Maan have disclosed their past love to their respective partners and Armaan and Meera have accepted Geet and Maan inspite of the past. Because I do believe in Life going on and especially second chances but I am absolute against lying. Some say it is not infidelity if you think of your ex as it is in brain but I disagree. You are not being truthful the moment you think of another person so emotional infidelity is certainly an issue here. But however had you shown that both Maan and Geet have disclosed their past to their spouses and both of the spouses Armaan and Meera being the people they are helped them forge a new life with them it would have been awesome and brilliant.

Had you shown that Geet and Maan store their memories safely away in their heart and wait for the new spring in life with their life partners and just like not all ugly ducklings stay ugly forever and some turn into swans, not all failed first loves have to be bitter. Overall a nice view and I am really happy after reading this OS. Take my views as constructive criticism and needless to say you indeed are a terrific writer.😃

Edited by psarada - 14 years ago

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

wowwwww this is called true luv
able 2 do anything for ur soulmate or luved one

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Tht was Actually Awesome...and the note u left is so damn like true!!

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johnangad

@johnangad

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

i actually liked the ending, despite maneet not being together. finally we see a story where people can fall in love again and actually be happy, and not just close themselves to love

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152265

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

I . . . Okay I will tell u a secret don't get mad . . .

I SKIPPED TO THE END.

It was to painful . . . . As a teenager fan crazy girl my stupid mind can't get past happy endings 😆 I'm soweee but . . . I had to see what happened and than I knew . . . (it hit me like a brick) THAT they didn't end up together.

But Meera and Armaan are not bad choices soooo . . . LOL 👍🏼

Neeways yes I understand as a parent of a child that love surpasses others . . . I get that.

Nice Jaz

I am so happy ur just chillin now HAWWWWWW (runs to read Home Coming)

Love

Liz

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Not something i wanted but the end was absolutely right i mean there cud be no other way to put this.....

they got the happiness they had wished for and thats good

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

@ psrada: i totally get what you are saying..and i completely agree...but in the story...i didnt hint one way or the other...they could totally know the truth...i just didnt mention it...ha ha...after all..it was only Maan and Geet's pov i showed...maybe i should do one from Meera and Armaan's pov...what say...he he

JAZ