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Posted: 19 years ago
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I'm starting a new Fan Fic here that everyone could write in. But I'll do the first episode.

EPISODE ONE

Characters-

Disha- a simple, pretty, inniciont girl. Goes to collage and hangs out with three best friends; Kumud, Rupali aka Rupa, and Kali. Hates the other boys' gang; Dk, Vedant, Ali, and Rocky. Is adopted by her mother; Uma, and father; Dev.

Dk- mean, hot, and sexy man. Plays around with other girls and makes fun of them. Changes girls like crazy! One for breafeast and another for lunch! Grew up without a father and mother can't walk. (Stays in a wheelchair)

That's the charecters and now, here's the story. And I'm not a great writer! Sorry if you don't like it.

It is a simple day at collage and Disha is walking down the hallway with her friends Kumud, Kali, and Rupali talking about the assignment they were just assigned by their teacher, Mr. Desai.

Disha- Arrrre Kumud, mujhe Mr. Desaina partner kay leya kis kay saath rukh deeya hain!Ek shataan kay saath, ha! Woh toh meri jaan lay lay ga.

Kumud- Ha voh to hain. Agurr mujhe Dk kay saath yeh assignment karna hota, to main to is collage ko he chor kar challe jhatee, ha!

Disha- Pata nahin kaisa main pura karoongi yeh assignment. Jaab main kuch research karkay paper print karongee, tab Dk us paper ko hee far kar phek dayga! Abb to shierff bhagwan hee mujko bucha sukhta hain!

Rupa- Arrrre, tum log chup karo aur meri partner kay badha main soucho! Kitna cute hain na! Uskay cheecks kabhi dekay hain? I always want to pull them!

Kali is tired and leaves without letting anyone notice.

Kumud- Ha, ha, tu to khush hoge he na! Akher tumay Rohnit jo mela hai! He's the sexiest boy ever na! Mujha pata hai kay tum dono kaam kuch nahin karna wahla isle yah, manay Mr. Desai saath ek meeting book kar le hain.

Rupa-Hey! Tume aisa kuch be nahi karogi warna mein, warna…….

Kumud- Warna? Warna kya kar loge? Mujhe mardo ge? Maro. Kill me! Mujhe marni ke badh tum be nahi buchna wali, ha!

Rupa- Mujhe wo sub nahi pata par tum aisa kuch nahi karogi. Main tumay aisa karna he nahi dongi!

Disha- Hello? Guys? Mein aabi zinda ho. Meri ek problem or aap log mere mudut karna ke baja aap log aap ni ek problem bana le hain. Main to gaye yaha sa. I'm gone!

Kumud(Ignoring Disha)- Main to Mr. Desai ka saath ja rayhe ho. Agur rukh sako to rukh lo! Bye!

Kumud walks away.

Later that night, Disha is thinking about Dk.

Disha- Ab yeh nahi musi vaat kaha sa agaye? Mujhe kuch samuj mein nahi araha hain. Yeh Dk to mujhe fail kar kar he chen sa betaga. Oh god! Main ab kya karo?

On the other hand, Dk is with his friends, drinking, as usual.

Rocky- Wah bhai, kya partner mili hain tuma! Tujhe pata hain ka to Disha ka saath kya kuch nahi kar sukhta hain?

Ali- Ha bhai! Mr. Desai ne yeh kaha ta ke aap log apna partner kay saath jis place par research karenga, you can go to that place with your partner and take photographs. Ayr tum be soch, tum or Disha! Akalama. All alone!

What will happen next? Will DK do something really unusual to Disha? Find out by our next writer, which I do not know who. Anyone could write. Just PM me before you do it so we don't have doubles! Bye! Write soon!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ummm... isnt this SAat Phere... And i think the 1 ur doing is TUmhari Disha??? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh I'm so sorry! I meant to post it on the Tumhari Disha Forum. Sorry. But if you guys like I'll do a Saath Phere one too.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that wud be nice if u made a saath phere one!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ya do a Saath phere one ur a great writter july i cant wait to read it 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks, ill think of a topic to write about soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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by the way, can u guys understand the hindi? im only ten so i dont know much
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Posted: 19 years ago
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by the way, can u guys understand the hindi? im only ten so i dont know much
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that wud be lovly if you posted one for Saat phere.

no worries. 😛 we can understand hindi😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: gk_09

that wud be lovly if you posted one for Saat phere.

no worries. 😛 we can understand hindi😉

thanks!

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