okay ppl, I have decided that I will attempt to write an a-k fanfic! plz bear wid me, and whatever happens, plz leave honest comments, I mean if sumthing is bad then TELL ME!! I want to improve n u guys have to help me:
so here is my first a-k fanfic, titled : meri nazar mein raho
'KRIPAAAA!!!!!!', yelled Gayatri Sharma, from her kitchen. Approx. 5 minutes later, a girl comes running into the sunny kitchen, while Gayatri turned around and started cutting vegetables on a nearby counter.
k; 'yes ma!, u called me??'
G; 'haan, are u ready for college? u remembered to take everything na? and yeah...( she turned around and saw kripa)..what is this kripa? why haven't u combed your hair, yet?? it's a complete mess!! as it is u will be late now!'
k: ' Mamaaa, not my fault. yeh sub appke ladle ki wajah se hai, kal ko who mera hair brush le gaya tha! so how could I brush my hair!?!'
G ( stops cutting the vegetables for a second); 'really, he did that?? he shouldn't have done that!'
k: 'rite ma, wait a sec, did u just agree wid me on him??'
G( now cutting vegetables again); 'haan, if he needed a hair brush, he could have come to me, n I could have got him a new one. he didn't need to use ur old one'
k; 'MAAAA, u r my ma not HIS!!!'
G': ' newayz, look in all of this I forgot to tell u what I called u for. I looked out the window a few mins. ago n his room's blinds were still closed'just go n see if he has woken up or not n if he has send him over here for breakfast.'
k; 'why bother mom? he will be here ne second now.'
' Who will be here ne second now?', called a young, masculine voice from behind. The hidden cheerfulness in his voice was reflected in his hazel eyes and his lips appeared to be ready to break into a full heart winning smile.
However, it was Gayatri who broke into a smile as she turned around and looked at the newcomer.
G; ' Arey, Pushkar beta, tum agaye'
k( after giving one glance to him); 'Think of the devil,n the devil arrives.'
P: 'haan, isiliye tum yehi rehti ho, kyuke tumhe koi bulata nahin hai na?? to ' arrive' kaha karogi ??'
k: 'pushkar, just shut up'
P ( very calmly); ' you shut up, aur newayz, mein yaha tumse nahin apni girl friend se milne aya hoon, so girl friend',' he goes over to the counter where Gayatri is still cutting vegetables, so now she is in the middle of where both of them are standing ' what's for breakfast today?'
k: ' agaye na line per' ( referring to the fact that he was there for the food)
P; 'kaunsi line per? dekho girl friend, ab tumhari beti, mujhe line bhi marne lagayee hai!!'
k (glaring at him) ; 'uuuuu'
P ( now coming forward a bit, as Gayatri had moved from the counter, n they were face to face ); 'yeah, mein kya??'
k: 'ik number ke idiot ho!'
P; ' aur tumhe patha hai ke tum kya ho?.tum na''
'Stop it now, both of u!,' Gayatri said she walked back to the counter , after filling a glass of water for the flour for making parathas.
P (looking at kripa): ' sure, jaane deta hoon, tum bhi kya yaad karogi, kis gr8 insaan se pala para hai.' While uttering the last oft repeated words, Pushkar waved his hand in a dismissal motion.. But at that exact second, his fingers in the air collided with the hard surface of a certain water filled glass, and now the contents of that glass flew in the air. Although, composed of many particles, it appeared that the majority of the molecules landed on another hard clear surface, making it unclear.
P; 'oooooooh hoooo hahahahahahaha', and he bursts out laughing, while staring at a soaked kripa.
k ( glaring at him through her soaked glasses); 'tumhe mein nahin choroungi!!'
And saying so, she runs after him and chases him out into the living room, where they collide with a girl walking in. They now use the girl as a pillar round which they run around, with kripa trying to hit him and he trying to dodge her.
g: 'yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho?'
P; 'harshini, dekho na, kripa finally pagal hogayee hai! mujhe marne per tooli hai (translation : she is bent on killing me!!)
k; ' nahin harshini, yeh dekho! kya kiya iss ne?? mujhe poora dobodiya!!!'
P; 'haan, to tumhe doob marna to bahut pehle chahiye tha!!!'
k ; PUSHKAR!!
H: 'stop it pushkar!!! chalo dono ruko ab', and then she grabs both of them to make them stop. harshini, for the first time, gets a good look at kripa, and says, 'Arey kripa! tum to poori gheeli hogayi ho!"
k; ' haan, n it's all his fault!!" Kripa was about to run after pushkar again, but harshini stops her n tells her to go n change, as they would now get really late. Kripa goes up, while harshini and pushkar make their way to the dining table. Here, Surya Sharma is seated, harshini on seeing him goes n touches his feet, while pushkar goes up and hugs him.
p; 'Good morning!'
S: ' Jeeti raho Harshini and good morning pushkar, where is kripa?', he asked as he looked around, ' isn't she ready yet??'
Before any of them could answer, Gayatri walks over to the dining table, with a tray of food in her hands, n says, ' yeah, she was ready, but both of them ( gives a glance to Pushkar ) got into a fight again.'
Surya looks sternly at Pushkar, while pushkar sheepishly smiles back n says quickly that he will go check on her, n runs out of the living room and up the stairs. Harshini, also follows him, saying that she has to make sure that they don't start fighting again.
S ( affectionately shaking his head ); 'sub ke sub bache hain'
G: '''''
S; tumhe kya lagta hai Gayatri?
G:'''''
S ( a little louder) Gayatri!'
G: jee
S: kahan koh gayee? I have been calling u'
G ( sits down weakly n in a sad tone ) ; no where. I was just wondering, how different life would be w/out their chattering, their fights'''''''..how lifeless this house will become after kripa leaves...'. At this thought, Gayatri Sharma's eyes as always gathered moisture. Surya noticed this n patted her hand. Gayatri took his hand in hers and clutching it tightly, continued, ' I know, that it had been long decided that she will go to London for her studies. I know she will be staying wid the Khannas- our very good friends, who will take care of her. But ( now her eyes start to well up again), I also know that the Khannas are her to be inlaws and she's going there to meet her to be husband, and well this might be the last moments i have wid her, cuz after this, when she returns, we will be making arrangements for her marriage to Angad.' Saying this, Gayatri shifted her gaze to a picture of Kripa hanging in the room. The picture was near a window, n thus the light entering the room, reflected from kripa's smiling face with an intensity that appeared to be felt by none in that room,or even in that house for that matter..............
The light seared through his closed eyes, forcing them open. He groggily looked around for the source of this light. All the blinds were closed, his door was locked, the floor was cluttered with male and female clothing, n beside him, lay a girl on her stomach, who's bare back revealed, written in lipstick- A N G A D
Hope u guys liked this first attempt!! plz leave honest comments!!! as positive or negative they will encourage me to cont. n improve!!! take care ppl,
nabz8888 aka nabz aka the local astrologer!!
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