Experimental PriDa Short FF - Part 4 (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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As I wait for something miraculous to happen, my brain needs some shaitaniyat..

And my shaitaniyat brain can come up with only something dark. This is not the usual PriDa scene.. at least not in the pure sense.. their qualities will be the same, just more extreme than the PriDa we love..

My plan ( yea yea.. I make plans too 😛 ) is to make this a short FF.. a few short parts..

I write this more as an experiment..

Index:

Chapter1
Chapter2
Chapter3
Chapter4

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Chapter 1: End of a Revenge?

He had her where he wanted.

HE had been the hunter for so long and SHE the target.

Just a pull of a trigger would end his revenge.. the one that had consumed him since the day fate struck its first blow.

It was HER fault. He had a plan and he never let his emotions come in the way of that.

He used to be an emotional fool. His parents and his brothers together formed his entire life. All he wanted to see them happy. But it wasn't to be...

The blows came in one after other..

His father was killed.. His mom was almost as good as dead with her vegetative state... her younger brother, Sameer turned his revenge into a revenge against himself. He was barely surviving his severe addiction.. his youngest brother, the baby of the family was in severe depression, and refused to acknowledge the reality..

And here he was... Standing between fiction and reality...

Fiction of what SHE meant and Reality of what SHE did..

What was HE? He didn't know or rather didn't want to admit.

All He saw in front of him was She.. who stood in full defiance..

She had to feel fear.. He needed to see that in her eyes.. She needed to know what it felt to stare at death in her eyes...

All he could see, were determined eyes, Did they mock him? Were they calling him a coward?

There they stood, facing each other, she with her hands on her hips, having no regard for the bruises on her legs, barely able to stand.. but then sometimes courage shows an appearance in strange places..

A strange place it was.. facing her opponent, knowing fully well, HE held the stronger hand.

She was never one to cower... Never would She admit her weakness again.. She was her Mamma's daughter..

She was Damini Gujral... facing the one who would never see her cry again...

He was Prithvi Saxena.. who was waiting to pull the trigger...



Chapter2

-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Uhhhhhhhh... revenge filled much??? Pri holding a gun infront of Damini 😲😲😲 What do you have in mind Mruu?

Oh well he's not gonna pull the trigger.. THAT i know... and you better not prove me wrong... Interesting set of emotions inside Prithvi Saxena... Hmmmm now what did the Gujrals do? 😆 Or is that Bandar again.. bet its him...

Continue SOON.. 😆

And i see my wish getting fulfilled over having more of PriDa to read.. Thanks for this Mru 😃

Maham
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maham...

Uhhhhhhhh... revenge filled much??? Pri holding a gun infront of Damini 😲😲😲 What do you have in mind Mruu?

Oh well he's not gonna pull the trigger.. THAT i know... and you better not prove me wrong... Interesting set of emotions inside Prithvi Saxena... Hmmmm now what did the Gujrals do? 😆 Or is that Bandar again.. bet its him...

Continue SOON.. 😆

And i see my wish getting fulfilled over having more of PriDa to read.. Thanks for this Mru 😃

Maham




Errr... u mean he shldnt PULL the trigger??? whyyy notttttttt.. 🥺 😆

Dunt you be dancing so soon.. u never know how more lame this might turn out to be 😆

-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mru_bee




Errr... u mean he shldnt PULL the trigger??? whyyy notttttttt.. 🥺 😆

Dunt you be dancing so soon.. u never know how more lame this might turn out to be 😆

-- Mru



Excuse me?? WHY NOT? Because in order to write an SS the female protagonist has to STAY alive.. and Ill dance anyway.. its PriDa... and you know how completely pathetic i am when it comes to them.. BTW i updated the Pri Saxena post.. More inspiration for you 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oooooo this one me SO likes! Will wait to read the next part :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start......

prithvi is holding a gun😲

ohhh do continue soon....

its really interesting...


-mah

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mruu PriDa in revenge mood and Pri gonna puul it i am like this😲 or i guess like this😕 srsly wat have u got us in for?? really interested
Waitin for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mruuu....

Great start 👍🏼….!!! U builds up d suspense nicely…!!! Seems interesting….!!! Pri in revenge mode…..Damz full with her attitude….n confidence….!!! I can clearly see d fireworks….in future 😳….!!! Continue soon….!!!

-Nitika

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 1: End of a Revenge?


Chapter 2: The Hunt begins..


Bang Bang Bang.. The shots reverberated in the air...


The shots didn't miss their mark .. They never did .. He was impressed...


Sitting at the cafe behind the glass window, Prithvi Saxena sat quietly....


The petite frame of the shooter, her proud stance and her attitude, was all on display for the observer.


The observer was not a novice at tracking .. especially considering his speciality at search and rescue...whether it was the mountains or deserts or an urban jungle like Mumbai...


It hadn't been difficult for him to track her at this shooting range.. Her favourite hangout place..


He knew her face from the news sources, but he wasn't ready ( he would never admit this ever) as she turned around suddenly...


All this was a blur... All He could see was her face... He sat there, rooted to his seat .. the coffee cooling in front of him... He was lost...


His eyes traced her face lazily from her proud forehead to the sparkling eyes.. to the flushed cheekbones.. to the perky lips and to her proud chin...


Back to her soft hair framing her face.. playing on her soft cheeks..


The hunt was forgotten .. or maybe a new hunt was beginning!


She walked towards the door.. she stopped and turned back for a second .. Shaking her head slightly, she turned towards the shelf to load her gun again...


She turned back again.. staring long at the glass door.. a slight frown on her face..


She felt someone .. felt someone watching her .. the feeling sent slight shivers down her spine.. She steeled herself and loaded her gun and turned back to the target...


Today she was back again shooting ... something she thought she had lost forever especially after that night in ...


Yet her hands were steady again.. years of rigorous practice and a strong mind had always been her strength....


Bang Bang Bang.. the shots reverberated again... It broke his spell...


He sat there, drumming his fingers on the counter... eyes narrowed.. face inscrutable.. lips curving in a small smirk ..


Guess... this girl was like a proud mustang ... he smiled softly... " Bhaiyaaa, Girls are NOT horses", Sammer's often well meaning advice rang out in his ears... He never understood his younger brother's obsession with girls.. " But this girl was different, this was Damini Gujral" ..


Suddenly.. His face hardened .. " Bhaiyyaaa ,...Damini Gujral shot Papa..", Sameer's clear words came back to jolt him to reality....



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-- Mru


Chapter 3: Hunk and the Beauty ..



Edited by Mru_bee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲

You updated?? Somebody's being VERY benevolent.. Kisi ki nazar na lage.. 😛😆

Naiceeeee part Mru.... Pri lost in her face... can perfectly imagine him raking his eyes and examining her face lazily.. *gets lost in PriDa land* and Hmmmm Damzie felt that stare.. no surprises at all there i guess.. *smirks*

Hehhehe @ the mustang reference Soooo Pri.. and then another dialogue by Sameer... Damini shot Balraj?? 😲 Kia karai hai Mruuu? Something very very fishy going on.. Damini also got lost a bit at a particular shooting incident.. You got me intrigued alright...

Update soon.. 😃

Maham

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