Experimental PriDa Short FF - Part 4 (Page 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wowww Mru....

Two parts of new FF BACK TO BACK😲

thnqqqq🤗🥳

its a wonderful excellent start ...loved the brave damini.. cn totally visualize it.. n Pri wid gray shades wooowwwww ... this is gonna b one exiting story i feel.. waitng for the next part eagerly... thnks Mruuuu😃
Edited by Nan08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dayum...is this good or what..she shot his dad! Holyy...haha...so want to know what's next :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 work
w8ng fr more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for the late n wait 😳since its THE MRU's post need all


PART-1
very interesting part,pri at his best Revenge mode

PART-2
ahh loved the way u described Damzi👏
wait a mint damzi shot dudes dad ye kya twist hain she has it coming nw

its getting v interesting
nice updates


Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahemmmmm... needless to say, what an exciting start and you updated it so quick...Gr8 haan...

Mystery filled FF and with revenge in mind seems interesting concept. Well..umm. Damini killed Pri's father?? Is it really or something else is gonnna happen? Eager to know more and loved reading these amazing parts.
Your definitely coming with too many twists..😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next part up already...ur quick,Mru! really love to visualise the brave damini again
Damzi shot his father?? ....really or is it somehting else??
its getin way interesting...waitin for the next one..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2: The Hunt begins..



Chapter 3: Hunk and the Beauty ...



She was the one ... the murderer.. Damini Gujral...


Prithvi Saxena with his gun still aimed at her, knew it.. He wasn't going to waver.. He was trained for such situations ... 10 years in the army ... He gave orders and followed them...


Yet now, he stood .. attempting to block out the orders of his heart...


She stood defiantly as ever ... She was physically tired ... She would have crumbled to the rain soaked ground long time ago.. but ...


She was Damini Gujral... the fighter ... She will never give HIM the satisfaction of letting him know, how scared she was ... how she wanted the ordeal to be finished .. how she wished things had been different... but maybe, at least when she dies, HE would take her in his arms again...


Her eyes softened .. She observed him.. Despite the fact, that her life was going to end soon, she almost thanked God for bringing HIM into her life...


She could never forgot the Day she saw HIM ...


HE seemed like a Greek god.. or an Italian hunk .. the kinds, she has always heard her youngest sister, Roshni drool on... Damini was no fool.. She had no time for Love .. or even lust ...


But all that went for a toss that day she saw him walking towards her ... aviators, dark blue shirt, black trousers and an attitude to boot...


She couldn't tell beyond the dark aviators ... but she felt his eyes were only on her .. and that very thought gave her chills ...


She stood still as he approached ... taking off his aviators ... with a small tilt of the head, he opened the door for her, She walked in.. prying her eyes off him with difficulty...


It was a good thing she looked away ... for Prithvi Saxena gave a small understanding smirk...


Prithvi Saxena had his own eye candy... the queen in a dazzling red saree ..


He had seen her before.. yet this vision mesmerised him yet again ..


There was something though that was irritating .. mildly he wanted to say... Inder Malhotra..


Well.. Prithvi Saxena was just using him as a pawn.. He was the ticket to get closer to his prey... Prithvi's friend, Hasan had introduced Prithvi as his business associate to Inder ...


Prithvi had played his cards well... Inder was trapped...


Now he was close.. close to Her.. so close that he could smell her sweet perfume... see the expressive eyes.. touch her cheeks.. at least he could in his mind ...


She felt his eyes on her all the time... She didnt know why Inder forced her to attend this dinner .. But he insisted after all the tortures with the business deals in the past few months.. she needed some time off..


And worse still.. her Mom had also forced her to attend this .. She was exhausted mentally .., esp the harrowing experience she had, just over a month ago ... That had changed her completely ..


She never thought that she would ever be able to pull a trigger on a person... and yet she had done just that ... And she didn't miss her target ..


She knew the person deserved it, she ...she couldn't get the visual out of her mind , .. the face haunted her all the time ... But now for a few minutes, she was lost in another face ...


And then He introduced himself .. " Hello.. I am Prithvi Saxena" ... and Damini Gujral felt as if someone had punched her in her gut ...


HE cant be a Saxena ...



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Part4

-- Mru

Edited by Mru_bee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mru..

this FF is getting totally interesting by each part... sooo Pri is sure Damzie killed his father n Damzie thinks whoever tuk her shot deserved it hmmm...

btw am really loving at the speed at which ur updated thnks a lot...waiting now for the nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mruuuuu......

Read both d parts together 😳....!!!

Wat is dis.....Damini is a murdrer 😲....!!! Wat u hve in mind Gal.....!!! And Pri is using Inder to reach to her....!!! Dude hve full-fledged plan in his mind....!!! Man on mission 😛...!!! WOW its getting interesting with each update....!!! Great job 👍🏼....!!! continue soon...!!!

-Nitika

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mruuuuu... Thanks for updating so quickly again... I cant even imagine updating my own FF 3 times in 3 days.. 😆 Anyhow really good update... That bit about Damini wanting to die just so Pri would take her in his arms again touched the heart... and also that he was in her life.. Interesting flashback... Ah yes.. Greek God, italian hunk all rolled into Indeed.. Dont blame her the least for getting lost in that face.. 😛😆 And she did kill someone... This is getting murkier and murkier Mru.. What do you have in mind??

Just make sure its VERY PriDatastic and Ill read happily.. 😆

Maham

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