Experimental PriDa Short FF - Part 4 (Page 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dis is an awesum ff mru..totally forgotten tho..c'mon pls update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mru.. when is the next update??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nw tht was a short bt an awesome update... U need to PM me seriously ! Coz i LOVE ur FF... ur kinda riting is intriguing... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks to all .. for still wanting to read this ... hehehe

-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mru_bee

Thanks to all .. for still wanting to read this ... hehehe

-- Mru



sooo u hinting ur gonna update😛


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 3: Hunk and the Beauty..


Chapter 4:Past returns ...


HE cant be a Saxena ...


Is all that Damini could think about... She couldn't pay attention to Prithvi's charming smile or his intense gaze...


HE can't be a Saxena ...


Is all she could think about later... she didn't remember the deal that Inder struck with Prithvi .. she didn't remember that she had nodded her approval to that...she didn't remember the way he escorted her to her car...


He saw her raging emotions ...He felt a knot in his gut... He wasn't celebrating though he just had his first victory...


Was it the way, her face lost all its vibrant color? or was it the way her hands shook a little while she nibbled at her food ? or was it the way, she bit her lower lip slightly?


He didn't know, all he knew was he didn't get to hear her or feel her... All he could feel was her guilt ..


He had escorted her home at Inder's behest, and yet she had remained in her trance ... He had hoped that she would ask him the most important question that was racing through her mind.. yet she didn't...


HE cant be a Saxena ...


is all she could think about ... as she walked away from his car, away from his outstretched arm .. away from HIM ...


She sank to the ground as soon she hit her familiar setting ... her bed-frame offering her the welcoming support ...


Her hands went around her knees, bringing them closer and she sat emotionless ...staring at the curtains blowing ...


It was windy that night too ...


She had been searching ... screaming out of her mind ... His body lay slumped over the sofa ...she had not missed her target ...


Trembling, she had moved forward and checked ... Yes.. she had killed him all right ... Her mom lay unconscious on the side..


Her Mom ... Damini stirred ... He had betrayed her ... Her Mom suffered because of him ... He was supposed to protect her and Yet, he CHOSE not to...


Damini's eyes were fierce .. She would always protect her family ... right or wrong, she had chosen her way ...


The door to her room, opened slightly and Damini didn't turn...


"Damini Beta ...", a soft voice spoke behind her ...


"He was a Saxena", is all Damini could say...


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-- Mru
Edited by Mru_bee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
update !!!!!!

mru !!!!!!
tnku sooo much !!!
:)))

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Whoaaa u updateddd :))))

will b bck wid my cmnts after reading .. thnqqq sooo mch for dis Mru...

okayy now my cmnts:

Mru...

a veryyy intriguing part.. sooo she tot "he" attacked her mom n so her shooting "him" was justified... but acrding to Pri.."he" is innocent .hmmm...loved how u hav described the way both of dem r tryng to control their thoughts n feelings... am loving dis yaar...

Mru.. u better update dis fast otherwise am gonna howl.. i mean it ... pleeezeee update sooon pleeeseee begging ya...
Edited by Nan08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hainkkk.. even before I could finish editing the part... two replies!!!! tsk tsk tsk ...😛


-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mru_bee

hainkkk.. even before I could finish editing the part... two replies!!!! tsk tsk tsk ...😛


-- Mru


hehehe we evn surprise ourselves wid our weirdness 😛😛

nd dis is after i said my gudnight to nandu !!
i am soo pathetic ...!!

okk point pe aate hain
real nyc update ..lyk hw ur building up d suspense ...curious bout damzie's side of d stoey ...why did she kill him ???

hoping fr sm answers soon
luv
khwahish 😊
Edited by khwaish.e.arsh - 14 years ago

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