Experimental PriDa Short FF - Part 4 (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Read all d 3 parts in 1 go....interestin n different FF Mru...update ASAP...coz its definitely addictive..

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maham

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

I just remembered.. 😆 I am so lame... The name of the friend you used.. Hassan.. Got lost in that too.. Hayee another guy whom i find really classy next to Prithvi Saxena... Thanks for including my two hotties in one part Mru.. 😍😆

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Khwahish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

gr8 u[date mru ....cant w8 to read more ...update asap

--khwaish

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...San-Yo...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Exciting & interesting update and every part is creating more suspense.. Head-strong and never ready to give-up thats our Damini and loved her this way..

I'm still in doubt, is she really a killer??? and Pri playing cards, thats very wicked of him...

Update it soon with your next suspenseful part..

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Perspectives.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Mruuu suspense....suspense at every part i dunno whether i have yet got the story
just love ur style of writing....and Damini is she really the killer?? coz dat dosent sound right somehow...
enjoying this new angle of Pri Da...
waitin for the part...

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amiya121

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Mruuuu !!

Woww.......... what a Take on our PRIDA !! 👏👏

This is what one would call a WHAM !! BANG ! SLAM !! FF .............. This is Positively Rocking Stuff !! pal ............ As i said earlier , you have come back with your head Buzzing with some Super ideas ........... And are we Loving it or what ?? 😃😃

PRIDA more Raw , more Edgy and maybe with a slight shade of Grey !! Rightttt........

Excellent pace and Brilliant Writing my Friend ........... and you are keeping us on Tenterhooks with the plot ............ Keep the Updates coming Thick and Fast !! 😛😃

Errrr........ do i even need to say that am Totally Loving it !! 😊

Love

Amiya

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Khwahish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

mru !!!!!!!!!

kithe gaye tussi ??
sanu tuadi badi yaad aa rahi hai ....😭😭(pardon my pathetic punjabi !!)
update toh karo
arey kuch nahin toh ek baar JIIP pe hi aa jao yaar .bahut din hue tumahri ramblings nahin padhi humne

luv
khwahish😊