A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33) - Page 2

hey this is fantastic mind blowing outta the world
plz write tht part plz 👏

OK WELL..LET MORE PEOPLE COMMENT..AND THANX TO ALL THOSE HU LIKED IT AND FOR THOSE WHO DINT LIKE IT,THANX FOR READING AND I HOPE U WILL LIKE IT SOMEDAY 😉

hey its too cool.awesom.i have no words to describe it.cont soon.

its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon with tia ranveers part.

i read both the parts together and i must say........your fic is totally rocking........ashi yuvi part was the best.....(i'm biased coz i'm an ashi yui fan) 👏

plzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeee 👏 👏 👏

OK HERE IS THE NEXT PART

RANVEER AND TIA ENTER THE SHED AND SEE ASHI AND UV STARING AT EACH OTHER
RANVEER-BANNA YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI
TIA-HAAN HAAN TIA KO BHI BATAO,WHATS GOIN ON?
YUVI-Uh dude..woh..uh tum aa gaye??
Ranveer-haan varna hum yaha kaise hote...aapka yeh nazaara dekhne
ASHI-Hey ranveer,kya keh rahe ho,woh uv aur main toh bastum dono ka wait kar rahe the
TIA-OH PUHLEASE...tia ko sab jaan na hai..now!
YUVI-Lets rehearse
RANVEER-Ek minute.Sid kaha hai??
SID(ENTERING)-HI Guys..kiska wait kar rahe ho?
YUVI-WOW!Jiska wait kar rahe hai wahi pooch raha hai ki kiska wait kar rahe ho!
ASHI-Sid dont worry hum tumhara nahi balki koi outer-space ke alien ka wait kar rahe hai!!!
THEY LAUGH AND REHEARSE

OK SO PLEASE COMMENT GUYS

its nice do continue soon fast asap pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

dude its rocking
mixture of both love story too good idea yaar pls continue 👏

THANX GUYS FOR ALL THE APPRECIATION...I'LL POST IT SOMETIME LATER TODAY I MEAN THE NEXT PART 😊

OK GUYS IM CONTINUING THE FIC..PLEASE COMMENT OK

After rehersal(IN ASHI'S ROOM)
VRINDA-Ashi,aaj rehearsal ke baad main tia se mili..usnr bataaya ki tum aur uv shed main...

ASHI-Duh uh maate,timbo toh puri out of brains hai...kuch nahi hua tha

VRINDA-Lekin maine toh kuch poocha hi nahi
SHY ENTERS THE ROOM
SHYLA-Hi guys
VRINDA-Hi shy kaha thi
SHYLA-Uv ke saath.use kuch kaam tha
ASHI-YUVI!! ....imean yuvi.kya kaam tha??
SHYLA AND VRINDA START LAUGHIN
ASHI-Hey bhagoo,ab in dono o kis laughing monster ne kaata,koi toh batao
VRINDA-Actually aashi jab tia ne mujhe bataaya toh mujhe laga ki main ab umhare saath koi prank khelu,isliye phir room main aake maine shyla ko saara plan bataaya,aur woh bahar gayi phir tum aayi.
SHYLA-And u know how it goes
THEY START SMILING
ASHI-U Guys nah...aur yeh timbit..use abhi dekh ke aati hoon

ASHI LEAVES HER ROOM AND ON HER WAY TO TIA'S ROOM SHE BANGS IN TO SOMEONE


WELL THATS IT FOR NOW PUH-LEASE POST AT LEAST 5-6 COMMENT OF APPROVAL(AND IF U DONT LIKE IT U CAN POST A DISSAPROVAL ALSO)I WONT MIND!! 😛