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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

what about a coffee/tea..looks like u guys forgetting me at coffee time offlate😉😉😉

Hey Miski dear..!!🤗
I dont drink Coffe ...😆😆😆
next tym I want Hot Chocolate..!!!..😉
that 2 from Costa..!! umm...!!! hehehe..😆😆😆
usually...im l8 in reply ...bt today...i did..!!😉
I hope u update soon..!!😃😃😃
im feeling sleepy..>!!!🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the shaadi part... it was totally unexpected.... you always do something that we never expected.... but we still love it.... i hope geet gets happy soon....
YAY!!! im on time for the coffee ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Always theree!! hehe
Cant waitt..
WOW two TM update today!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
always there for coffee with u dear
waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaaaaar r you really updating ???/???


nowdays u forget me ... u update while i am fast asleeep...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan di u r so magical yaar... dint expect the marriage at all and that too so so soon !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Are u updatin m ready wit my tea!
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 74


I wanted every thing so magical in my life, pyar, shaadi.. but you have turned every thing
upside down kuch bhi magical nahi hain.. kuch bhi khas nahi I hate you ..i hate you...
maan - tum tho khas ho na
geet - mujhe nahi karni aisi shaadi, yeh koi shaadi nahi hoti
mujhe nahi rahna aapke saat
maan gets angry - GEET!!! you said you won't stay with me untill we are married
aabhi tumhe kya problem hain.

geet - main yeh shaadi ko nahi maanthi
he presses her harder - tum rahogi tho yanhi, shaadi ko mano yah na mano
he leaves her at once & straightens himself. yehlo spare key.
she snaps it & throws it away. your driver & car nechi hi hain
she turns her face away.
maan - need to rush now, meeting hain
and leaves to office. she tucks her face under the pillow & cries
shaad din bhi koi meeting main jata hain kya? murmuring to herself
after crying for a while she gets even more wild & irritated. she breaks every thing in the room, kitchen & living room takes his clothes & throws it all around the place. maan tries calling her, she kept her phone off. he knew she was pissed off he tried finishing his work at the earliest & came back home at around 7pm he opened the door to see the whole appartment in a mess. he first was wild at her looking at the condition of the house. he quietly removed his tie & waist coat & threw it on the couch. he cleaned up the rooms one by one. binned every thing. she had broken every small and big thing in the house. he closed his eyes & just calmed himself. then went into the bedroom to see it in even bigger mess. she had thrown his cloths all over. she closed her eyes tight & pulled the spread over her head hearing the click at the door. he picked up one by one & arranged it back. he took her suitcase & arranged her stuffs in the wardrobe. he cleared every thing & went to the wash room, changed & murmured wah aacha wedding day hain, pehle mar khavo, aab room clean karo pata nahi yah Maan Singh Khurana se kya kya karvayeghi
he freshens up & makes hot chocolate for her
he goes back into the room - geet yah peelo
geet - mujhe nahi peena
maan - tumne subha se kuch nahi khaya
geet - i hate you
maan - aacha hot chocolate pee ke hate kar lena
she slowly slips her hand from the spread & takes the drink the hot chocolate. he sighs in relief. she finishes her drink under the spread. maan slowly removes the spread from her to meet her gaze, her eyes were red & swollen, her hair was spread all over her face she looked in real mess
he took the mug from her hand & took her into his arms
abhi bhi naraz ho. she noded her head. he pushed her hair behind
and kissed her head. I don't like you. you cheated me. main yah shaadi bhi nahi manti
maan - mat maano bus.
geet - aap bhi nahi manoghe
maan - teehk hain
geet - aur kisi ko nahi batana hain
maan - ok
geet - but I still hate you
maan - aacha change karlo, subha se issi dress main ho
she takes her night dress & goes to the wash room. she freshens up & comes out in her pink satin short & spageti top without realizing what effect it can have on maan. she comes out wipping her face. maan was in the living room looking into his laptop. she walks pass him & drops herself next to him, he felt the thud down his spine. his eyes travel pass her ankel to her slender cuffs, passing her kneews untill her thighs. he didn't dare to look further up. he crosses his legs feeling really unconfartable & looks away into the laptop. his heart was rising higher & higher with her mere presence around him. her bare hands almost caresing his. he gasped feeling the heat arousing, was it the thought technically it was their wedding night today, or was geet in that dress which was having this effect on him he could think further he just moved

suddenly as if his patience had abruptly worn out. he kept the laptop aside. seizing her simultaneously & falling on the couch on her. she froze with his sudden touch. she felt aroused all around her. she trembled in his arms, her entire body quaking. before she could guess his intentions , his head dipped and his mouth, warm & hard touched the soft bare curve of her shoulder. the effect was madening she felt. her eyes drifted shut, suddenly she realized what they where doing, she put all her strength together to shut him. she was supposed to be angry not letting him make this a wedding night she thought, but she herself wanted it as much he did. but it was all not right, they were not married yet, but did that matter at this very moment, she couldn't decide, all she could do was hold him tight feeling his breathe fanning her curves as he moved to deepen his claim over the hollow of her throat making her n***** now look prominent under her silky material. his legs guided hers to move on to lie straight on the couch. his hands moved to slip her straps of the silky spageti top mummy she creamed catching her breath main muma ko batvongi aap..he looked at her furiously like he was provked more by her innocent scream KYA KHAVOGHI his mouth closed over hers with hard fierce possession. he pulled her more fully onto him mingling his legs with hers. she pulled away & ran to the other sofa & looked at him making a baby face - yah sab teehk nahi hain
he just burried his head on the couch really furstrated.
after few mins of silence she came & poked him with a index finger
maan - WHAT he snapped
geet - mujhe bhook laghi hain
maan snapped in furstration - mujhe kyun nahi khaa ke leti
geet innocently - shaadi ki din non-veg nahi khaten
he just wanted to wak her that moment he just controled himself & went to the kitchen
she followed - kya bana rahen ho?
maan - tumne kuch choda hain jo main banvoon.. look what you have done
sab kuch thod diya, plate taak nahi hain khane ka liyan
geet - woh main gussa main thi
maan - this is our house, how could you? there was definitly pain in his voice
she felt guilty - why did you leave me & go
maan looked at her in shock wondering what bothered her more the wedding or him leaving
geet - shaadi ke din koi office jata hain kya?
maan - lekin tum tho yah shaadi nahi manti na
geet - haa...aan nahi manti ..lekin main upset thi tho aapko mujhe manana chahiya
agar aap mujhe chodke javoge tho main aise hi karongi

precap
geet nice nice wify😳😲

-PREVIOUS PART 73 NEXT PART 75-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Maan is cleaning the room!!
wow! is love ne Maan ko kya se kya bana diya!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow yaar as usuel lovely update......

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