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divareena thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
like how maan is so caring about her.
loved the scene at the end, looking forward to the next update.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 73

she kissed him - mujhe bhook lagi hain
maan naughtily took her lips in mujhe bhi & kissed her .there tongues played along, like they longed for eachother. there heart ached to be one. his hands explored every part of her back
she pressed in closer exploring him. please shift to my place yanha aacha nahi hain.
she snapped in anger kaha na shaadi se pehle nahi.
maan - geet please I am not able concentrate on anything, raat-din sirf tumhare khayal
rahta hain. I feel horrible that you are staying here. you definitly deserve better place
she turns away - mujhe aur iske bare main baat nahi karni
maan raises his voice - tum humesha itna zid kyun karti ho?
geet - kahana shaadi se pehle nahi tho nahi
maan gets angry & walks away. he gets even more pissed off looking at the guys & girls hanging around not so decently dressed. he sits in his car & makes few calls he rubs his temple & realizes she was hungry. he closes his eyes to have lost his temper he hits his forehead with his closed fist feeling misserable that he is not able to take care of her well enough. he gets food for her. he goes inside the room to see she was already sleeping with trail of tear in her cheek. he kissed them feeling sorry khana tho kha liya hota. how could I be so careless towards her. he arranges her scattered stuffs. he leaves the food packet on the table next to her bed & turns off the light & leaves.
it was a week since they landed in london. maan didn't force her into anything they just got to know the place better. She hardly spend time in college. arjun was being mean to her. not letting anni also spend time with her. she just attended her lectuers & rushed back to the hostel. Maan hated her stay in the hostel but didn't want to fight over it.

next Monday maan walks in at 9.00am sharp to her room. she was in her pink satin night short & spageti top brushing her teeth she jumped up & blabbers with form in her mouth - aise koi ladkhi ke kamre main gussatha hain kya
he ignored her even though his eyes could not stop glancing at her sexy
slim legs - I will give you 10mins get ready and closes the bathroom door
he opens her suitcase & picks out a suit. passes it to her, wear this
geet - I can't wear a suit to college here
he packs all her stuffs. she comes out in the bath robe - I can't wear this
maan looking at her wet looks naughtily - tum khud pehen thi ho yah main pehnavoon
she looked at him, he seemed to be in a bit of hurry meaning those words. she twisted her lips & hit her foot on the floor & changed into the suit. she was still setting her duppatta he barged in the washroom & picked all her belongings, including her night dress, she felt embarrassed - yeh kya kar rahen ho he dragged her out of the room with her luggage & made her sit in the car
geet - dehko I am not staying with you before marriage yeh sab teehk nahi hain, aapk samjhe te kyun nahi, mama ne kitne trust ke saath mujhe yanh beja hain , I cannot break her trust like this he kept looking at the watch & the traffic outside
the car stopped outside some office like building
maan pulled her out & guided he to an office
geet - maan please aap kanha leja rahen ho mujhe? aap yanha rahete ho
lekin yeh tho koi office ki building lag rahi hain
he smiled at the man sitting in front & his clients who was waiting for them
she kept looking confused & trying to conveice him
geet - maan dehko na, aap meri baat nahi sunrahen
maan signed some papers & told her - sign karo
she looked at him - lekin aap meri baat tho suno
maan pointed at the papers with his eyes - sign karo geet phir baat karenge
she signed the papers murmuring - maan aap kuch bhi karlo main shaadi se pehle aapke saath nahi rahonghi
maan leaned close to her & softly whispered - shaadi ke baad tho rahoghi na
she didn't quiet understand what he meant. the man in front chair got up &
congratulated maan & geet extending his hand to maan. she looked at them with her jaw drop open realizing she just signed the wedding register meaning she is married
maan to the client - really thanxs for arranging every thing in such short notice
the registrar gave him a temperory slip & said will give you the orginals in couple of days
maan gave the slip to geet - aab ghar challo
she was dumb stuck - lekin mama & tears rolled down her eyes
maan got a call on his phone - ji aunty, hain bahut shock main hain, shayad thodi naraz bhi hain, aap hi baat kar li jiyen
maan gave the phone to geet & whispered mama ka phone hain
geet started to cry - mama inho ne mujhse zabradasti shaadi kari hain
sach main mujhe nahi pata tha, he cheated me
rano - geet .beta ..meri baat suno
geet still crying loudly..maan walks her out to the car
rano - main ne hi kaha tha
geet - kya?
rano - main ne hi kaha tha maan ko tumse register marriage karne ko
geet looked at maan who was sitting on the other side of the car
rano - I was really worried about you & so was he,
geet - lekin papa?
rano - woh baad ki baat hain na
geet - lekin aise kaise
rano - beta kabhi na kabhi to tum dono ne shaadi karni hain tho abhi kyun nahi
geet - lekin shaadi aise thodi hoti hain
rano - haan baba jab tum wapis aavoghi we will have a proper wedding
I was really worried about you staying alone in that hostel
geet - I still can't believe you both cheated me
rano smiled - BTW CONGRATS!!! now don't be naughty ok
geet - bye & cut the call
she threw his phone at him. I hate you I hate you I hate you
the car stopped in front of his appartment - challo
she turned away sliding away from the door he bend in & picked her. lifted her & dropped her on his firm shoulder. she kept struggling with her legs & hands. he pressed the lift button

geet - chodo mujhe, main nahi rahoongi aapke saat, I hate you
lift opened to their floor. he held her back curves with one hand & took the keys out
with the other & kicked the door open. he dropped her in the couch in the living room
she picked the cushions & threw at him
he moved closer to her, she looked at him murmuring babaji yeh kya kar rahen hain
he bend down & held her hand which was picking the glass that was close to the couch
falling on her & pressing her further on the couch. naraz kyun ho rahi ho
geet - u cheated me, u didn't tell me we are getting married
maan softly caressed her face moving her strands behind, she almost melted into
his arms, he kissed her very softly on the forehead - kahta tho, tum kabhi nahi maanti
geet snaps back - kabhi nahi maanti
maan - aab tum mano yah nahi mano we are married
she turns him down in one jerk & sits over him - main yeh shaadi nahi manti
shaadi aise thodi hoti hain.
he pins her down in oner jerk & kisses her on her cheeks - jaanta hoon
she had tears in her eyes - phir yeh sab kya hain
he cups her face lovingly - it just for you. tum mera saat raho uske liya
I didn't want you to say there in that stupid place.
geet - i imagined everything so differently in life, aapne sab kuch ulat pulat kardiya I wanted every thing so magical in my life, pyar, shaadi.. but you have turned every thing upside down kuch bhi magical nahi hain.. kuch bhi khas nahi I hate you ..i hate you... 😭

precap
geet still angry

-NEXT PART 74-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG married??????? awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.....loved it...

wavo maan and rano so sweet and geet is not going to leave but i wish maan jaldi kuch kare ....hey pls update yaar........can't wait for coming parts😉😆

Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

2nd to comment 😛!!

Awesome update baji 🤗
Loved the Maaneet scene at the beginning baji, they really are missing each other a lot, and Maan is very determined to make her move to his apartment 😳, and he has succeeded as well....
😲 Married!?!?!? 🥳 yaaaay..
But sad for Geet, she had many dreams about marriage and Maan has broken those dreams, but she wasn't listening to him either so he had no option!!
😲Another jhatka Rano is part of this major plan!?...
Hope that Geet's dad and Maan's dadi are ok with this decision!!
Seems like Geet isn't going to forgive him quickly, hope she does soon..
xx
Edited by humz_786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
2nd res ok maybe not 2nd - but at least 3rd😉
hehehehehehehehe omg i have to say this - im on geet's side!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know exactly what she means................all her aashiyan and sapne of her BIG day have now gone choor choor😆
awwww poor kuri😭
but then i get where maan cuming from - lol i knew the marriage was cuming soon enuf - wat with geet batting on n on bout shaadi se pehle nai shaadi se pehle nai etc - lool!!!!!
but RANO helping them - oh my my😲hehehehehe
ohhhh now i really hope her papaji doesnt stand in the way - btw does daadi knw???
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
i rok thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update......and itwas a shock that they are married......it was amazingggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
great
finally maneet are married

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb.......... loved it..........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago


no darling.......u r the third one 😉

hey hi wassup babes and were is ur update???????
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG he just married her like that??COOL!!!!!!!!
I'm hyperventilating!!
So excited
Love u so much!!!
Thanks di

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