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GUYS ITS MY FIRT FF SO PLZ YAAR MAINE NA BAHUT JALDI JALDI MAIN UPDATE KIYA HAIN SO THER R LOTS OF MISTAKE SO PLZ SPARE ME AND I WRITTEN IT INTO FB LANGUAGE MAIN LIKHA HAIN SO THER WILL BE LOTS OF MISTAKES ......SORRY FOR THAT

😊 A LOT LIKE LOVE😊

I READ SOMEWHER THAT 'I PROMISE TO LOVE YOU FOREVER AND EVERY SINGLE DAY OF FOREVER'''''''..YA BUT OUR SHAAN AND KHANAK DOES NOT BELONG TO THIS SAYING ATLEAST FOR IN THIS STORY'''''''

WELL U CAN SAY THY HAV THEIR OWN SAYING

I PROMISE TO HATE YOU AND MAKE U CRAZY FOREVER AND EVERY SINGLE DAY OF FOREVER.its about first love and hate also.........its hate love story❤️

PART 1

a normal day in Mumbai city''''..all the rush for office,kids going school,noise of cars ,all the honking was thr'''in all this noise and rush,two calm eyes wer stairing the road and people.some random guy was caught by police for driving fast and some school kids wer playing and laughing''''..those two eyes got this twinkle and bubbleness''''..with a huge smile on face.it was a girl standing in balcony'''''having a cup of coffee in her hand''''.she was slowely taking one sip of her coffee and watching people going near by road and smiling with herself'''''''.she always thought as it was her routine to stand there and watch people go by''''people r so selfcenterd and alone '''''''thy don't hav anyone to look after.so involved in themselves''''wonder if thy hav time to love someone'''..i am also alone but I knw one day he will come and will took away all my lonliness''''''where will he be right now?..........and big smile appeared on her face.

Someone opened the door and he called her'khanak"

Ya her name was khanak mattews''''..khanak was 19years old.she was living with her brother'''..khanaks parent died when she was 10.khanaks parents had love marriage ,her mother was gujrati and father was christen.but she was raised in christen culture.since then her brother took care of her.khanak is very talkative and bubbly girl with golden heart and million doller smile'''''she is very innocent but still smart'''''who belives in true love and like all girls she dreams abt her prince charming.

The man who opened the door was her brother jhon'''..jhon was 28years old.he was this serious type of guy and loves his sister unconditionly.he is bank manager'''.and still single cuz he worried abt khanak and her future and didn't find the girl who can accept her in his life.

Jhon-khanak tum abhi tak yahi khadi ho ?maine tum ko nasta karne ke liye kaha tha na.

Khanak-sorry bhaiya bhul gayi.

j-fir se apne khayalo main kho gayi kya?chalo jaldi karo muje tumko church drop karke waha se bank jana hain cmon.

k-ha bhai relax aap ko jana hain to jao .main Natasha ke saath chali jaungi aur waise bhi kal new collage ka first day hain aur muje shopping bhi karni hain.

j-thik hian meri gudiya jaisa tum kaho par nashta kar lena and tashu ko bhi karva dena.dieting kar kar k eek din gayeb ho jayegi muje aisa lagta hain.

k-kya bahi app bhi naa'''''..bechari ko size zero hona hain

aur aap tashu ke khilaf kuch mat bolna.she is my best frnd.accha ho gaya na new college main wo mere saath hain varna pata nahi mera kya hota

j-so to hain to ab main chalu(smiles0)
jhon went
khanak finished her break fast and was waiting for tashu to come...........khankh got bored.........so she thought she should call tashu...........khanak picked her phone......and as soon as she was going to call tashu door bell ranged
khanak ran to opened the door...........she opened the door with huge smile........a girl was standing front of her with puppy face.guys thats tashu khanaks best frnd.
k-fir se late..........tum bhi na time pe nahi aa sakti
tashu-sorry sorry dear muje aj bahut jada late ho gaya i am really sorry.
k-its ok tashu under aao
t-kahi muje jada der to nahi hui na(tashu looked everywer with curiosity)tum ko to pata hain na ek din tum se nahi milti to muje bilkul accha nahi lagta.
k-main acchi tarah se janti hu miss drama queen ke tum ko kisko mile bina accha nahi lagta.
t-blushing........kya bol rahi ho tum main kuch samji nahi
k-accha main janti hu tum roj mere bhai se milne ati ho.........uski ek jhalak pane ke liye roj yaha bhagi bhagi ati ho aur ha tum ko sacchi main late ho gaya hain kyon ke bhai kabke chale gaye hain😉
t-oh no chala gaya .........to fir main apna sorry wapas lati hu balki tumko muje sorry bolna cahiya
k-kyon
t-tune mere prince charming ko dekhne ka moka mujse chin liya
k-plzzzzzzzz ha tashu tu mere bhai ke piche kyon padi hain yaar wo to tuje ghas tak nahi dalte
t-tu nahi samje gi us ko pyaar kahte hain
k-pyar my foot.......tum jab bhi dekho bhai ko bhuke kuttain(hungry dog) ki tarah nihar ti rahti ho.whats wrong with u yaar wo tum se umar main bahut bade hain
t-to kya hua jaani pyaar main umar nahi dekhi jati pyar to ho jata hain.
come on wo hain he itna handsome.wo mardana haath,that sexy voice,and his body.........i can just say wow, koi bhi ladki uski diwani ho jaye.us ko bank manager kis ullu ke patha ne banaya use to cid ya fir fbi officer hona cahiye tha.....wo bahut......
k-bass ho gaya tashu main samaj gayi ki mera bhai kitna handsome hain o.k.......aur by the way is ko lust kehte hain love nahi
t-oh plz jaise ke tuje bada pata hain pyar kya hota hain ha
k-muje exactly nahi pata par main ne love stories main padha hain pyaar to bahti nadi ki tarah hota hain aur uska ahsaas...........
t-bas ho gaya........agar love pe ye tera bhasan khtam ho gaya ho to hum chale church main, mass suru bhi ho gaya hoga.........aur baad main hum ko shopping bhi to karni hain .........my favourite shopping......sigh
k-oh shopping i hate it..............muje nafrat hain shopping se
t-hain bagwan is ko thodi ladki bana dete to apka kya jata
k-miss drama queen tumhara drama khatam ho gaya ho to hum chale
t-nahi thoda baki hain ruko
both laughed
tashu and khankh dono church jate hain............par prayer ke bich main bhi khanak kal ke baarain main soch ti hain.pata nahi kal ka din kaisa hoga?par muje aisa lag raha hain ke kal kuch jarur khaas hoga
and she was right kal use wo milne wala tha jiska usne sallo se intajaar kiya tha.wo ek insaan jo uski puri life badal dene wala tha.................kal wo use se milne wali thi.............😳
p.s.-guys ye bilkul bhi accha nahi hain but i tried my level best.........so tell me should i write more
hi guys i am ready with part 2 but ther r lots of grammar mistake......and i am also not feeling well so i tried to kuch mistake ho to main sorry hu ji
part-2
it was a quit morning..........everything seems to be slowing down............................but not in someones home...........shoes wer flying ,cloths wer on the floor,book shelf was messy,coffee was cold.................thats not normally khanaks room looks..........but that day it was looking like if someone robbed the house
k- wher is my dress , dam! kaha gayi yahi toh rakhi thi..........oh how i hate this aur yeh mere shoes kyon nahi mil rahe............oh god may pagal ho rahi hu
khanak was desperatly trying to find her stuff for college but she couldnt...................it seems like shes abt to cry
someone knock the door..............khanak r u ready?...........jhon walked inside the room.........he saw what khanak did to the room................'what the...........? khanak ye sab kya hain........aur ye shoes bed per kyon hain.......aur tum abhi tak ready nahi hui........ye kya chal raha hain tumhari room ki halat dekho.......ye...
K-bhaiya wo main ................khanak started crying.............watching her crying jhon started laughing..........he hugged her but he couldnt stop laughing..........he swapt away her tears with his fingers
K-yeha main ro rahoi hoon aur aap has rahe hain ...........ek to college ka 1st day hain upper se muje apni chije nahi mail rahi hain aur apko hasi aa rahi hain
j-are hasena wali baat hi karogi toh hasi nahi ayegi kya?ruko main tumhari help karta hu......aur jitna jada mess karogi utni der se chije milengi...............
thy both started finding her stuff................knock knock .......need some help , avoice came from front door
it was tashu..........'hi guys kya chal raha hain?'
J-accha ho gaya tashu tu agayi tu hi eski thodi help kar da na
T-kya hua yeh baatane ki zarurat nahi hain kamre ka haal dekh kar main samaj gayi hu tuje apni chije nahi maqil rahi hogi............let me help u
J-tnx tashu tu bahut acchi hain...............then he smiled
k-tashu zara ye uttha ne main madat kar na.....tashu....tashu......(khanak looked tashu) ......she was stairing something and that something was her brother..............khanak gave a nod .........yeh fir suru ho gayi ............is ko to main na............tashu tera dyan kaha hain usko ghurna band kar meri help kar
T-ha thodi der ghur lene de na........us ne muje acchi bola i am on sevent heven
k-bas ha ab meri help kar warna main bhai ko bata dungi ki tu uski plate ka jhutta khati hain. bata du
T-pagal ho gayi hain kya ruk me teri help kar deti hu
jhon was ready to go to work, he was waiting tashu and khanak to come
J-oh yeh ladkiyan tayyar hone main kitna time lagati hain .......khanak come fast i am getting late.....
aaj college ka pehla din hain tumhari shaadi nahi hain come fast now
khanak and tashu came outside............jhon looked khanak ......and he smiled..........she was looking like a doll..........he started to rememberd the day.........khanaks fist day of school..........with two ponies and waterbottel in her hand ................aur ab dekho kitni badi ho gayi hain
she was wearing baby pink colour knee row dress................she was looking like a doll
k-bhaiya aap kaha kho gaye,batao na main kaisi lag rahi hu
j-bahut acchi meri gudiya ab chale
t-tum log chalo main bad main ati hu
k-kyon baad main kyon
t-muje thoda kam hain,tu gate pain ruk ja agar main 20minute ke under nahi ati to tu chali jana college main
k-nahi tashu tu muje aisa akela nahi chod sakti tuje to pata hain na muje nayi jagao se dar lagta hain
T-plz khanak plz i promos jaldi aa jaungi
k-thik hai n par nahi ai to main
j-wo aa jayegi ab tum dono chalo muje late ho raha hain
jhon dropped khanak front of college gate...................she seems to be nervous...........her hand wer shivering...................jhon opened the door of his car................'kya hua khanak'.............khanakh looked jhon.............pata nahi bhai bahut dar lag raha hain
j-is main darne ki kya baat hain it just a college..............aur agar itna dar lag raha hai to mom and dad ka naam lena sab thik ho jayega
k-pata nahi bhai itna dar muje kabhi nahi laga ...................aisa lag raha hain jaise kuch bada ho ne wala hain0...................but i guss u r right
j-now that like my good girl 0..................now go
jhon drove away his car from college ................left khanakh alone ther.......................khanak was waiting for tashu to come she...........waited and waited...............come on tashu kaha ho tum............itna late ho gaya hain.............oh!
khanak decided she wont wait for tashu anymore...................she enterd inside the college gate............it was very big and fancy college in mumbai............jk college...............khanaks previous college was a small college.................nothing hi-fi u knw........................she was feeling weired everybody was stairing her..........as she was new in..................khanak dekh tu bhul ja ki yaha koi tujko ghur raha hain ok.............just remember this college. tuje apna class room dhundna hain ok...........plz stop staairing
khanak was abt to enter in college main door.........................as someone said "stop"............khanakh heard the voice ..............she turned ....................she saw bunch of guys standing and laughing at her...................khanak decided to ignore them..............when she was about to turn .............she again heard " areee madam english samaj nahi ati to hindi main samjau............rukiye ji"khanak stopped...............................those boys came closer to her and made circle around her..........and thy all started walking around her in round circle0................thy all wer laughing at her
one boy said "kitni khubsurat ho madam...............aur lagta hai n college main nayi ho .................varna hamari baat tal ne ki himmat koi nahi karta is college main"
K-KYON MAIN KYON RUKU ,MUJE JANA HAIN SAMJE NA
the boy said itni bhi kya jaldi hain madam aap aise nahi jaa sakti...............new student ko under jane ke liye hamari boss ki permission leni padti hain aur uske liye ek test dena padta hain"
k-main koi test nahi dene wali samje, jakar keh do apne boss se ,yeh college hain aur yaha ane ke liye muje tumhare boss ki permission nhi chahiye.
all boys wer shocked to hear her answer, kamal hain iski itni himmat boss ko na bol rahi hain......................boss sun rahe ho aap apko is ne na bola.............kaho to sabak sikha du isko
...........STOP.........ruko ...........koi kuch nahi karega..............dekhu to kis ki itni himmat ki muje na bola
a voice came from behind a guy who was standing front of khanak................................khanak thought to herself ...........,'oh! yeh awaj' khanak never heard voice like that...........it was really different...........she smiled..........khanak tu smile kyon kaar rahi hain,stopped yaar..................ab yeh kaun hain jarur in ka boss hoga ................oh god kis musibat main fasa diya muje jesus
the voice came from............bike..................a boy was laying on bike ..............hat was covering his face...........he was wering red shoes...............he stood up.................and started walking toward khanak.................he threw away his hat...................khankh wanted to see him but she could only see his red shoes.............................khanak though to her self "kaun hain ye ladka jo red shoes pehnta hain.............i mean kaun red shoes pehnta hain kitna ajeeb hainz'"
as soon as the boy got up all girls going gaga over him....................everybody started clapping..............khanak was getting irrited by this...................the boy had this musculer body.............perfect for him ..............perfect shoulder................strong hands............which travelled around in his hair...........................and he turned around and gave wink to girls......................the boy stared to came toward khanak........................that was non other then..............SHANTANU KHANDELWAL..........
he pushed boys around to see the girl who said no to him............................but before he could see her.......he fell down.....................khanak saw him...................for her that was the funniest thing right now...........she started laughing.......................he fell dowm pretty badly....................everybody was quit but only khanak who was laughing......................he was angry at first that someone was laughing at him..............but when he heard the laughing.............he felt diffrently..................he never heard something like this before................the laughing was different...............from other.................he looked up................and all his anger was gone...........he saw a girl standing in pink dress....................laughing at him ..................her laugh was something...........he never saw such smile..................the girls hair wer flewing with the air.................she got this plain , dark hair................and her smile ..........he was mesmerized cuz of her smile...............he wanted to see her face.......becuz of sun light he couldnt see her face..............khanak was laughing like crazy.............she didnt even realised that everybody was looking at her and she is in college..............she couldnt control her laugh and she moved forward............................
then the boy saw her face .........................her big eyes ............with some kajal...............ther was twinkeled in her eyes ..............the bubbleness.........................oh......................he said..............for him he was looking at some fairy.............with pink dress , sweet smile, bubbly eyes.....................he was completely lost in to her.............................when he heard voice 'boss boss kya hua ap thik to hain an boss'
as soon as he heard the voice he came out of her spell.
he stood up...................khanak stopped laughing............but a smile was on her face.......................
S-tumhari itni himmat tum mujpar has rahi ho.................tum janti bhi ho main kaun hu
k- ha hain mujh main itni himmat ke main tum par hasu........................and i really dont want to knw who u r?
shantanu was shocked................cuz no one ever dare to give him such answer not even a boy and this girl
s-hey u ! tumhari itni himmat tum mujse aise baat karo..............main kaun hu pata main wo..........
k- tum kya ek hi dialog baar baar bol rahe ho main hu main hu.................is ke alawa tum ko kuch bolna ata hain.....................and she was immitating him
everybody was quit cuz no one in college dare to mess with shantanu and the girl was immitating him
her immitation gave a smile on his face......................but soon he realised wer he was
s-umhhhh................main shantanu khandalwal hu ok...................yaha sab mera kaha mante hain tum yaha meri marji ke bina kuch nahi kar sakti.......................yaha rehna hain to jaisa main kahunga waisa tum karogi samji................................aur main cahta hu ke tum hum sab ke liye dance karo..........come on suru ho jao
k-tumhara dimag to kharab nahi ho gaya main aisa kuch bhi nahi karungi samje na..............tum kya reality show ke judge ho jo main tumhare sam ne nachu.main yaha se jaa rahi hu
s-dance to tum ko karna hi padega....................kyon ke main ne kaha haIN COMEON
SOMEONE started the music.....................khanak wasnt dancing ..................shaan told her to dance but she refused and stared walking...................shantanu held her hand...............and pulled her towards him ...........and forcefully tried to dance.................khanak was getting irritated by his behaviour.....................she tried to push him away but couldnt succeed..........................shaan wasnt realising what he was doing...................................and a voice came.............................
khanak slaaped him front of whole college.................................for second he was stunned...................everybody was quit.......................everybody was shocked.............new girl slapped shantanu khandelwal...............................khanak was really angry ...........
k-yeh thapped tum ko hamesha yaad dilayega.................ke ek ladki ke sath kaise bartav karte hain samje........................and she walked away.......................
one boy said boss r u ok?how can she slapped u boss imean who the hell she think she is is ko to main
s-stop.................tum kuch nahi karoge jo bhi karunga main karunga...................is thapped ki kimat to tumko chukane padegi..........................just wait and watch.......................ab dekho main tumhare saath kya karta hu...............................
khanak and shantanu walked Away in opposite direction...........................................😆
p.s.+-guys pata hain thoda filmy ho gaya................par here u go............................abhi mera project submissin hain to baki ka part baad main update karugi der ho jayegi but sorry
part-3
khanak was furious.......................oh!.......wo itni gusse main thi ke abhi agar uske sam ne koi aa jata to wo usko ek hath punch laga deti.............
k- ' kya samjhta hain wo apne apko ha..............muje haath lagya........us ki himmat to dekho...........ye ladke apne aap ko kya samjte hain ha...........stupid,idiot ..............,ullu ka patha.
shant khanak shant...............cool........ok ..........sab thik hain...........bhul ja jo bhi hua..........tuje apni class dhundhani hain...........o.k.shanti.
khanak was going crazy,us ko apni class nahi mil rahi thi.......and overall us ki koi madat bhi nahi kar raha tha.................'kaisa ajeeb college hain yeh.......yaha ek class nahi mil rahi aur koi meri madat bhi nahi kar raha, stupid ,bunch of idiots...........oh i hate this college.....god'

achanak khanak ke hato se books gir gayi............oh bass muje yahi cahiye tha thank u god thank u!. khanak nich jhuki aur apni books uthane lagi.........tabhi samne se koi aya aur us ki books uthane main madat karne laga.............khanak ne us ki taraf dekha nahi wo bass apne soch main gum thi...............khanak ne books utha liye aur wo mudi...............' ab kaha milagi muje ye class , pehle hi bahut der ho gayi hain.."

'waise yeh college itna bhi bura nahi hain jitna aap samjti hain,..........main aap ki kuch help karu'
khanak ne mud kar dekha.................a tall guy was standing front of her,he was smart,good looking u knw mills and bones type of guy with a smile on his face ....................and that was
non other then RAHUL
R- hi iam rahul, rahul khanna...................and u r?
khanak thought to her self now who is he,ab kya ye is college ka dusra boss hain.par is ne meri madat ki toh ye itna bhi bura nahi ho sakta................khanak apna naam bata de is ko, kha thodi jyega tuje ha!
r-kya hua maine kuch galat keh diya kya...............he smiled
k-ha............i mean nahi..........i mean no...........mera matlab ........main wo.............i am ..........i mean i am khanak nice to meet u.................(khanak yeh tu kya kar rahi hain ,thik se baat kar thik se, yeh koi............star thodi hain ok)
R-KHANAK nice name kaafi alag hain..................i like it
k-thank u.
r-agar main aap ko tum kahunga to chalega kya?
k-ha kyon nahi..........................(kitna polite hain,main ne aaj tak itna accha ladka nahi dekha,nahi to wo red shoes wala budhthal.........ladkiyon se kaise baat karte hain usko is se akar sikhna cahiyen)
R-tum ko class dhunde ne main madat cahiye kya?
k-ha, wo muje yaha ka kuch samaj nahi aa raha aur koi meri madat bhi nahi kar raha.
r-aur koi karega bhi nahi,tum ne is college ke star i mean boss ko jo thappad mara hain.
k-to sab ko pata chal gaya............par main ne jo kiya us par mujko koi pachtava nahi hain..............lekin ek baat hain sab meri madat nahi kar rahe to tum ko bhi to nahi karni cahiye.
rahul smiled..................ha par muje lagta hain tum ne jo bhi kiya accha kiya....................chalo koi to hain is college main jo shantanu khandelwal ko thapppad .........i mean takkar de sakta hain.
thy both laughed
r-tumhara class 2nd floor par hain room no 8,aur kisi bhi help ki jarurat hui to mujse mang lena cuz main yeha college and student representative club ka member hu aur ab to tumhara frnd bhi
k-friend..............wo kab ho gaye?
r-jab se tum ne shantanu khandelwal ko thappad mara tab se,i hate that guy,rich spoil brat.............aur muje lagta hain hum dono main yeh ek chije to commen hain.
k-so to hain
r-frends?
k-ok frends..............now bye#@
scene-2
mil gaya akhir class mil hi gaya......................thank u god thank u, are yeh kya ?lecture to suru ho gaya.................ab main kya karu?........oh god aaj kya apne decide kar liya hain ke aaj aap meri band baja ke hi chodoge................ab kya karu...........kuch nahi hoga aaj waise bhi first day hain,chill.
k-sir may i come in.......................khanak was really scared.................everybody was looking at her.............oh how i hate this stop looking at me!
s-u r 15 minute late miss....... and may i knw what is u r excuse?
k-sorry sir i couldnt find my class and wo...........
s-thik hain par agli bar aisa na hone paye,get in
k-thank u sir......................(mil gayi entry .............ho gya tera kam khanak ab sab thik hoga)
khanak was trying to find a place to sit but no one allowing her to sit besides them...................she was feeling like outsider.......................all boys wer chuckling and wer passing comment on her as she was indeed looking very beautiful............................
s-kya hua tum ko abhi tak jagah nahi mili .....................go sit ther on that second last bench.......go
khanak sat on second last bench..............................but the view she saw was horrifiying for her...........................u knw that view was our mr.shantanu khandelwal.
k-oh.............yeh ladka yeha meri class main ........................god ab kya hoga mera...........khanak ab to tu gayi kam se .................ab to yah tuje nahi chodega...................kyon ha .....kyon tu pange leti rahti hain kya ?............kya jarurat thi us ko thappad marne ki ab bhugat.................tu to gayi
but wait minut main is se kyon daru,? hoga yeh kisi bade baap ka beta to kya hua main bhi khanak hu khanak........................main is se nahi darungi....................is ne galat kiya yeh dare main kyon daru............ha ............bas main nahi darungi.
s-kuch kaha apne miss .................kya naam hain aap ka...............jara apna introduction to diji ye
khanak was really embaressed.................oh khanak fir gadbad ki tune.............
k- sir i am khanak mattews.............................she saw shantanu was staring her................that made her mor akward..........oh yeh kyon muje ghur raha hain?
shaan-khanak mattews ...............ha aisa lagta hain kisi ne gujrati thali main chiken paros diya ho.................everybody started laughing.
s-stop it stop it i said.....................mr.khandelwal keep u r opinion to u r self ..............and miss mattews u can sit now.
khanak was feeling very bad and hurt.....................for her its like her biggest night mare came true..............she always aloner,scare of people.........that thy will laugh on her.......that why she never took part in any competition becuz of this laughing and passing comment thing..............and cuz of mr.shantanu her biggest night mare came true.............................................tears came to her eyes but she controled her self.....................she was feeling like joker of class cuz even though the joke was over still everybody was turning and laughing on her.
she saw shantanu very furiously............................and shantanu turned and gave her wicked smile like he was saying aab tum ko muje se kaun bachayega types
k-agar muje yeh akele main mil gaya to main is ka murder kar dungi................oh i hate u.
lecture was over...............khanak was wondering whole time wer the heck tahu is?yeh ladki kasha hain?first lecture hi miss kar diya kamal hain......................while a girl came to her and said.........tum yaha nayi ho.?khanak thought to herself chalo koi to mujse yaha baat karna cahta hain.........................ha i am new here.
'par tum jada din is college main tik nahi paogi'..............................and she tapped khanaks back
k-kya...........kya matlab?...................but the girl went away without answering her ?.
kya bol kar gay yeh ladki pata nahi is college main sab ke dimag main kuch problem hasin kya pagal kahi ke.
after while khanak noticed everybody was giving her chiky smile and especially boys............................kya chal raha hain yaha,sab muje aise kyon ghur rahe hain,kya ho raha hain .................kya mere muh peh kuch laga hain.................oh god yeh itna ghur kyon rahe hain.
sum bunch of guys stopped her' are hum ko bhi cahiya, hum kobhi dedo na'
k-what ?what non sence..................khanak didnt get it what the boys wer saying
as she came to main coridoor everybody starterd laughing0......................yeh sab kya ho raha hain ,sub huss kyon rahe hain?...............................khanak saw tashu a ray of hope for her....................k-tashu accha ho gaya tu mil gayi..................yeh college sach main paglo se bhara pada hain,tu kaha thi ab tak main ne tuj ko kitna maiss kiya pata.aur dekh na ...............mere ate hi yeh log has kyon rahe hain.......................and khanak turned.......................and tashu saw what she probably never wanted to see
t-khanak..............wo tumhare back pain wo
k-kya mere back par kya.................khanak touched her back................she felt something ..............like paper.........she pulled the paper....................she saw paper............jis par likha tha'i am new here so i want to kiss, somebody................kiss me kiss me.
khanak was shocked to read that....................then she understand why everybody was laughing at her and the boys....................oh............no...................she started crying
T-khanak dekh ro mat..................bhul ja kisi ne tere saath bhdda majak kiya hain................dekh tu ro mat........................stopped guys stop laughing
after hearing this everybody started laugh even harder...................stop ............ok just stop.................varna ek , ek ki complaint kar dunga princi ko...........................a voice came from behind.
it was rahul....................jao yaha se kaha na go now................everbody left.
R-kya hua khanak tum ro kyon rahi ho?...............................khanak showed him the paper
itna bhadda majak kis ne kiya muje uska naam bolo main princi ko jake complaint karta hu....ruko
k-nahi tum kuch mat karo muje acchi tarah se pata hain yeh kis ne kiya hain aur main us se khud baat karungi
r-par khanak.......................tum yaha nayi ho aur yeh
khanak already started walking away from tashu and rahul..............................she was really angry and hurt
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shantanu was sitting on his bike ,laughing and giggling with his frnds....................and he saw khanak walking towards him but he decided to ignore her with a chicky smile.............
s-so guys wo main kya keh raha tha .................wo
k-tum apne aap ko samj te kya ho? (and the famous1234 wala music starts)
s-guys tum ne kuch suna kya?kyon ki main ne toh nahi suna.
k-oh hello main tum se baat kar rahi hu samje na, tum kya samaj te ho khudko ha?
shantanu pointed his frnds to go away from him..................and thy left them alone
s-first of all main khud ko shantanu khandelwal samjta hu for ur kind information.....................aur ab kaun ek hi dialog bar bar bol raha hain ha.
k-main yeh faltu ki bakwas nahi karne ayi samje na..................yeh kya hain?
s-kya kya hain?oh yeh....................yeh to papar hain sheeeeeeeeee itna bhi nahi pata tumko..........aur college main padene ayi ho
k-ha ha ha..............very funny................apna yeh stupid joke jake apne stupid dosto ko sunana..........tum ko muje problem kya hain ha yeh sab kyon kiya.
s-oh tum ko pata chal gaya ke yeh main ne kiya hain, smart girl......
k-tum yeh sab kyon kar rahe ho ha,aisa ghatiya majak karte hue tum ko sharam nahi ayi ha
s-ayi ke nahi ayi..............hmmmmmmmm................let me think...........shantanu puted his finger on his jaw started acted like he was thinking...............khanak got irritated by this.................
ayi na bahut ayi par jaise hi tum ko dekha bhag gayi.
k-excuse me..............kya matlab
s-matlab to muje bhi nahi pata. tum ne kuch pucha us kuch ka jawab de raha hu..............
k-tum ne jo kiya thik nahi kiya samje na.........................khanak started crying and tear started pouring from her eyes......................shantanu saw that she was crying..........................
s-are yar yeh ro kyon rahi hain.......................yeh ladkiyaan kaha jagah dekhi nahi ki rone lagti hain oh............................dekho rona mat.................yeh rona dhona mere samne mat karna samji na dekho ................plz rona band karo yaar........plz..................
k-kaise budhthal ho tum ek ladki ko rone bhi nahi dete .................khanak started crying even more louder
s- are is ko koi chup karao......................while he was talking to himself he saw khanak closely..............even though tears wer in her eyes her eyes wer looking still beautiful............tears wer coming down from her eyes on her face......................he couldnt stop staring her face................dont knw how but he felt bad for making her cry..............his hand automatically reached to her face..................khanak felt that someone touched her...........................for her it was her first u knw special touch........................she felt differently.................she never felt like this befor his touch made her numb............for a second she was blank......................he looked in to her eyes ...............oh he said...............he could clearly see innocence in her eyes................and a smile appeared on his face......................he swapt away her tears with his big ,rough hand,he swapt away her tears with his thumb ...................his hands wer still on her face....
khanak felt very relaxed and nice ...................she couldnt recognised the feelings but she was feeling relieved....................she was also looking in to his eyes...................his brown chocolaty eyes.................thy both seems to be lost in each other.................nobody no what to do...........
suddenly khanak realised what she was doing.......................she controled herself...............shaan also took his hands off from her face.............thy both felt embaresd.............and started looking into different direction
k-( kya kar rahi hain khanak yeh tuje kya ho gaya tha,tune us ko apne apko chune kaise diya.aur tu uski akhon main kyon dekh rahi thi r u mad? tu yaha kya karne ayi thi aur yeh kya oh god)
s-yeh kya kar raha hain shaan beta.......................tu pagal to nahi ho gaya hain................u hate that girl ....................remembered us ne tujko sabke sam ne thapped mara tha...........yaad kar)
wo dekho main .......................wo...............shaan started staring her face......................
k-kya hua .................tum kuch keh rahe the ..........bolo na (bolo na.............khanak tera dimag kharab ho gaya hain is ladke ne tumhari itni insult ki aur tu usko it ni respect kyon de rahi hain........
s-are dude kuch bol us ko ghurna band kar ...............dude seriously u hate that girl......
k-deko agar tum ko kuch kehna nahi hain to mat kaho main jaa rahi hu..................aur muje satana band karo
s-wo main nahi kar sakta
k-kya matlab
s-muje abhi abhi realised hua ke muje tum ko satana accha lagta hain.....................so yeh to main nahi karunga............tum ko sataye bina mera din nahi jayega ab
k-tum na dekho...............muj se dur raho............tum muje jante nahi samje na..........aur main wo
s-ya ya...............pata hain tum jhasi ki rani ho ..................aur main british
khanak smiled after hearing his comment.....................but control herself khanak kya kar rahi ahin stop smiling .................it ni funny baat nahi ki use ne samji
k-dekho mujse dur raho varna varna
s-varna kya?........bolo
k-ek aur thappad tumhare gal par jhad dungi.....................samje
s- dekho thappad wali baath to main khud nahi bhulunga aur na tum ko bhul ne dunga.....................main tumhare life hell bana dunga..................just wait and watch
k-main bhi dekhti hu tum yeh kaise karti ho............................
s-are kamal ki ladki ho tum, main tumko dara raha hu, aur tum hain ki darti hi nahi.......................ohhhh
k-aur darungi bhi nahi main khanak hu samje, khanak..............main tum se nahi darti u shantanu fantanu
s-kya.................basss ab jao yaha se samji na
k-kyon main kyon jao................main nahi jaungi tum jao .................main yahi khadi rahungi
s-main bhi nahi jaunga ................main kyon jaun ............yeh meri jagah hain tum jao.......samji
k-nahi main naqhi jaungi
s-main ne kaha na jao..................are jao na
khanak turned her face................khanak jao..................nahi..............khanak jao...............no.................i said jao ...............are jati kyon nahi..............jao ,jao
tum ne suna nahi usne kya kaha jao yaha se.
khanak turned to see the person ...................it was a tall girl walking towards.............both of them
the girl came closer to shantanu and kissed him on his chicks and thy both hugged.......................and she gave a cold look to khanak.
k-kaisi besharam ladki hain sabke samne hi is lallu ko kis kar rahi hain......................
s-yeh sam hain meri girl friend.......................and he gave her wicked smile...........like he desperatly want khanak to knw that she is his gf.....................
k-to main kya nachu.....................
sam-i dont mind agar tum nacho gi to..................tum wahi ladki ho na jis me mere shantanu ko slap kiya
k-ha main wahi hu abhi akbar main chapvadu kya?
sam-dekho tum
k-muje kuch nahi dekhna main janti hu tum bhi uski tarah dialog margi main tum ko dekh lungi and alll ....................dekho main isi college main rahne wali hu to jabhi tumhara mann kare tum muje dekh lena ha..................ok................bye ha.
khanak left........................and shantanu was shocked......................cuz as far as he knws sam she can bitch at times......................aur is ladki ne us ki bhi bolti band kar di.....................
sam-shantanu dekha na tumne..........is ladki ki itni himmat
s-ha kuch baat to hain ismain
sam-kya?
s-kuch nahi kya baat?kuch baat hain is main.....................i mean sheee kuch baat hi nahi is main seeee
sam-now that better
but shantanu was still thnking abt khanak ...................kya ladki hain yaar............sam ka muh band kar diya..................kuch to baat hain is main.............
khanak was still thinking abt shantanu......................khanak tu yaha pad ne ayi hain use budhthal ladke ka asar apne aap par mat hone de ok......................aaj jo hua bahut ajjeb tha..............tu je us se dur rehna hain samji.
but as u knw guys aisa to hone se raha to plz comment
precap-its precap of next ke next may be next ka,u r going to see sum toweliya by our dear shaan 😉
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ankita dear.... very nice....jaldi next part update karo.... kyonki usme woh milnr wala he jiske liye meri bhi intezaar hein
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tnx priya ill try to post as soon as possible
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hey its really good:) do write soon....
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gr8 first attempt!!....try to leave a little space btw lines for easy reading!!
u better update soon, ankita!!....
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ya dear i will do that but i written in word so thats why ther is so much mess..................next time it wont happened
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hey ankita..it's really nice..keep it up yaar...
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really good........waiting for them to meet.......continue soon....
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ILL UPDATE TOMORROW TILL EVENING
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Hey nice yaar !

I wanna know what happens next...!
Continue soon !
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