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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 59


after she packed the bag, she noticed the diary
diary was really pretty old & unkept. she covered the diary & pinned it
together with the stapler & then slipped it in her bag she lifted her bag & came down
maan ran & took the bag from her - ek din ke liye ja rahi ho
itna bada bag pack karne ki kya zaroorat thi
geet murmered aap kya bharosa mujhe wahin chodh do
baby~phir galat👎🏼
maan settled the luggage in the car, geet took blessings from daadi
meera gave the gifts packs for geets family
geet - in sab ki kya zaroorat thi
daadi - riwaz hain beta
geet murmering pati-patni ek saath rahe, aise koi riwaz nahi hain kya?
she sits in the car & he helps her with the seat belt
murmers again... in sab ki chinta rehti hain bas!!, shaadi se pehle to
baat baat par pyar jatate the aur ab uff, mujhe shaadi hi karni nahi chahiye thi
na paas aane dete hain na door jaane dete hain, koi kare to kya kare

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YtI2MDg_Lww[/YOUTUBE]

geet~sab tere kaaran ho raha hain
baby~mama yeh theek nahi hain, aap baat baat pe mujhe beech mein le aate ho
main papa se shikayat kar doonga😈
geet~kar kar main bhi dekhti hoon kitna sunte hain tumhari baat
maan - kya hua
geet murmers inhe kya sach mein iski baat sunayi deti hain...
sirf meri baat nahi sunayi deti, ki sunkar bhi ansuni karte hain

they reach the bank & meet the manger
Manager - welcome Mr. & Mrs Khurana
they smile at him
Maan -
are the papers ready
manager - ji
they walk in to the manager's cabin & he gives her some papers to sign
she does'nt even look just signs where ever maan points
maan wispers -
dekh toh lo
geet looks confused
maan explains -
now all my accounts are joint accounts with you
geet murmers
hum to join hue nahi account join karne ka kya fayada
she looks least interested
he then takes her to the locker room & shows how to operate it & gives the pwd
manager offers some insurance & explains the benefit
geet mumers
yeh lo yahan saath jeena ke liye main mar rahi hoon aur yeh mujhe
upar pahunchane ki baat kar raha hain
after signing like 100 odd papers they finally step out
geet sits in the car & rests head on the head rest
maan -
if u want u can lie down on the back seat
geet murmers ab inhe mera aage baithne mein bhi problem hain she angrily gets off & goes behind.
babaji yeh din bhi dikhana reh gaya tha!!!
she keeps looking at him every now & then. he did'nt seem to notice
kuch bolte bhi nahi mujhse.
baby~main hoon na mujhse se baat kar lo😳
geet~tumse kya baat karna, tu toh inka chamcha hain
she gets fed up & pulls out the dairy
she decides to read from the begining
~happy new year dairy~
geet smiles..happy new year
~mera resolution...umm koch socha nai, we had so much fun to go back to college
after the winter break. pata hain ek ajeeb se baat hui, mera dupatta uttar gaya tha
main itna darr gaye thi..abbu ne bina duppatte ke dekha toh..aafat hi aani thi
pata nahi kaun tha, kahan se aaya aur mera sar duppata he dakh diya, maano jaise
koi khuda ki paak cheez ka sajda kar raha ho, I could'nt even see him, par unka
yun dupatta se mera sar dakhna galat nahi laga~
geet~galat kaise ho sakta hain, koi khuda ka nek banda hoga
baby~dozes off🥱
~isbaar toh delhi main bahut thand hain..uff really cold
u won't believe what happened. I was coming back from the college and forgot my shawl in the class. half way through I remembered & rushed back to the class
I saw him pehli bar. he had my shawl in his hand & he was admiring my shawl
can u believe my shawl in has hand, they way he was holding it, I felt tickled
geet smiled...
he looked at me & walked towards me
I was so scared, he kept looking at me & walked closer & closer
my heart was almost going to stop. I turned to leave from there, he pulled me back
holding my hand..woh pehla ehsaas,
geet ~ so dreamy na!!!
bahut khaas tha. he put the shawl around my head exactly the way that person put the dupatta ~geet ~ oh!! same guy!! umm interesting
~uske ankhon main ajeeb sa nasha tha, main kuch der to unhe dekhti reh gayi
maano woh waqt tham sa gaya tha~

~aaj hum phir mile. kisi dupatte ke ya shawl ke bahane nahi, woh khud chal kar
aaye aur mujh se dosti karna chaha. main aise kaise dosti karti. main to unhe jaanti nahi thi
lekin kuch tha unme jo mujhe unhe mana karne se rokta~
geet~stupid yehi hota pyar mein..dekho main kahan aakar phas gayi

~hum roz milne lage, hamari dosti khas thi. na woh mujhe kuch mana kar paate
na main unhe. deewano ki tarah hum har pal har lamha saath rahte. kabhi picture
dekhte, kabhi lunch, kabhi bus yunhi chat pe sab se chupke chupate ghanto baat karte~
geet~chalo baat karte the, yeh to baat hi nahi karte...karte hain to umm!!...yah hmm!!
maan looked at her wondering why she was so silent for 3hrs now
he cleared his throat, she did'nt notice

~unki hassi ka main kya kahoon. humesha muskarte rehte, kabhi hassi mazaak toh kabhi khil-khilate, to kabhi mujhe dekh kar hi muskurate, woh wali unki shararati wali muskan
qayamat dhati thi, kya woh bhi mujhe chahte the???~
geet~hassi???? acha hain yeh to smile bhi nahi karte

~ab to maano unki aadat se pad gayi thi. ek din unka deedar nahi hota to aise lagta
ki sadiyan guzar gayeen ho, pata nahi unhe kaisa mehsoos hota hain. mujhe iskadar bechain kar ek din ke liye jaana zaroori to nahi tha. din tham sa gaya tha raat dhalti nahi thi
bas intzaar rehta kab woh lamha aaya jab unka deedar ho jaaye
unke intezaar mein khud ko rulaaye baithe hain
wo aayenge zaroor dil ko samjhaye baithe hain..~

she came to the page she read first
~aaj mano meri sari roza kabool hogayi ho!!!
yah khuda mujhe maaf karna...mujh se yeh kaisi khata ho gayi
unke chaand se mukde ke noor se tera chaand bhi phika lagne laga hain
aaj to unhe hi chaand samjh kar dil roza thode deta hain
Eid mubarak!!! kaha unke labon ne to poori kayanat jhoom uthi~

~khel khel main maine eidi maangi to unho ne apna dil hi thama diya mere daaman mein
kuch is kadar pyaar ka izhaar kiya main khud ko rok nahi payi. unke har labz pe
mera dil ka haal tha, kya kehti main..agar qayamat ka dar na hota to keh deti
khuda tum ho. unki hassi ki to main dewaani thi. itna khush maine unhe kabhi na dekha tha
mere bina kahe hi sab kuch samajh jate the~
geet~aur mere kehne par bhi kuch nahi samajthe

~Hawaon main mehsoos, hoti hai unki khushboo,
dil mein ek diya, jalta hai unke naam ka.
kya se kya ho gaye chahat main unki,
hum ko to maano khabar tak na hui~

precap
HP ...

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update yaar..but toooooooooooooooooo long time..
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Posted: 14 years ago

hii muskii

loved the update...
the baby geet convo is always a traet.............so sweet and cute...
a brilliant update....
enjoyed every moment..
keep writing......
plzz cont soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago


nice update honey...!!!!


i like the precap..... very interesting...... 😉

soumya

Edited by pickle6586 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i wonder whos diary it is? hmm
nice update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
di wait r u going to take this like PKE... i mean Sam as Maan's life at first... hmmm she left him.......AWESOME UPDATE DI
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part dear🤗, loved Geet & baby convo😍, so cute lovely diary dialogue😳 looking forward for the precap😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome update....really loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update i really like this part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey gr8 work muskan....

hmmm....i jst hope dat Geet accepts Maans past... n doesn't do nythng stupid...

keep writing n pls update soon yaar....dying to read ur posts...

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