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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Before i start, let me just say I LOVE THE FACT THAT HIS BLACK JEEP IS BACK! 😎

My mouth literally flew wide open when i saw Maan driving that black jeep! 🤣 It brought me back to the good old HP days...😍...AND BTW that was THE ONLY thing i liked abt Today's episode! 🤣

Goodness what is wrong with the show..? 😳 Where is it heading to..? Do i actually see a repeat of the previous tracks..? I mean Maan saving Geet..?? Their first encounter way back in HP..??

Terribly dissappointed with Today's episode man! Last Friday it was Diwali party at the Kurana Mansion n Today the track TOTALLY changed again to Maan trying to prove to Geet that she makes no difference in his life. Man what is this..?? 😕😕😕

Last week the track as follows :

Maan taking over Indian Paints

U need my help, PERIOD

I want to be CEO now

You will regret becoming a CEO

Woohoo lets have some Diwali party n Geet does Aarti

TODAY --- U make no difference to me

WOW..Just look at the consistency! So not just the characters lack consistency but even the storyline...

First let me ask ya'll, what happened to that silly challenge between Maan n Geet abt how Geet will be able to survive alone in Delhi without needing his help..? What happened to Maan wanting to show Geet that her position as CEO will make her regret being one..?

Can they at least finish one track FIRST before moving on to a new one..??

Editing was bad in Today's episode! What happened to the Dev n Meera scene..?? 😕 U mean to say they r still stuck in the rain n NEVER made it into the Mansion..??

Both Editing & Execution : 👎🏼

Good things --- Geet telling Maan that she does make a difference in his life..coz no matter how much he denies it....he eventually goes after Geet at the end of the day..Just like how he bought over Indian Paints to not just win the challenge...but more of being close to her..and also Today..how he called her to his farmhouse..

Maan's attitude at Farmhouse --- SUCKS BIG TIME! I mean what was for the need to treat Geet like that..? So now he wants to show that she means nothing to him..by mixing around with other girls..and humiliating her in public..?? I HATE it when they always have to publicly humiliate Geet...🤢....

New chick -- Man she is so annoyingggggggg! I've got nth more to say abt her actually..😆 Coudn't have Geet told her off n walk away..? What was the need to stand there n try to apologise n explain to that dim witted skimpy clad loser..?? She has the strength to push Maan..but she has no strength to push this lady when she held onto her..?? 😆😆😆 All am saying is that am sick of them embarrassing Geet in public....

Last question, how come Maan has friends..?? I thought he was always a loner...surprise to see so many girls or people at his party.......😆😆😆😆😆

Wanted to take things lightly with this starting post..but this show is making me CONfusssedddd..! I don't know what's going on already.......😆😆😆 so eventually my starting post became a venting post..Me need POSITIVITY TODAY..coz am slowing losing my grip on this show....THANK GOD for the black JEEP in Today's episode..i carried on watching..if not i would have just FF..............😆😆😆

Love love love the black JEEP !! 😃

Over to u guys now if there's anything to analyse that is with this crappy episode 🤣....

GC--- U need a haircut, lighter stubble n PLEASE get rid of that eyeliner cum medicine!! Or use it lightly..It's getting too dark..and scaring me away from the show! 😭 🤣...BUT fabulous acting, as always, by U n DD!! 👏👏👏

It's just that the script writers are just losing the plot, i feel...:(

Okay fine let me just say, the first 5 mins of the episode was not too bad with Maan saying that he hates Geet BUT in actual fact he really can't stay away from her....Him trying to deny that she means nothing to him..and then Geet giving it back to him by saying that "yes they have a relationship..even though he hates her..she affects him..and she makes a difference to him..." I saw the pain in Maan's eyes when Geet walked away.

So, like i said, Fab acting by GC n DD but later on, when it became sunshine MORNING, it was a disaster...😆😆😆

That's the nicest i can be with this episode 😆😆😆 n oh yes i love the BLACK JEEP!! 😃😆

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 14 years ago

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Opti

@Opti

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

Quick reaction copy pasted from the earlier thread:

So Geet's slap was really much ado about nothing. If at all she gave one, I must have been blind to not have seen it. Or is it her rebuttal that her presence or absence from his life makes a difference to him considered a slap? Well this pataka was really a no-starter.

All we got to see is a pregnant Geet on the verge of drowning till the knight in shining armour comes to save her yet again. Yaaaaawwwn.....

What's more, we will get a repeat of the discotheque scene too. That time Maan tried to make her jealous enough to prove that he makes a difference to her and she really loves him. This time he is doing it to prove she makes no difference to his life and he really hates her. Wahji. Wha. What novelty! Yaaawwwn... Yawwn....

There goes the dream of seeing Romeo romance Geet to make Maan jealous. Here he is not even an able bodyguard who could swim to save his CEO.

Do none of the men/women there know swimming? Why then do they have a pool party? Geet the serial is definitely losing its sheen.

As I see, the problem with this episode is that they made our heads and heart work in the first scene and then dished out stuff which presumes we don't have both.

My point is, show what you intend to do in an episode from the first minute and continue with it for the rest of the episode. (like you did last Thursday' and I enjoyed that episode despite it being utterly silly for it was silly from the word go. So I left my brain aside and enjoyed it). If you want to go the silly way, we'll leave our brain behind at least for that episode and laugh at your silly jokes. If you want us to think with our hearts and mind, then continue with that pace. Don't shift gears mid way and make us look like fools, for our active brains don't know how to shut down right in the middle of the episode!

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago

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Cute_Ash

@Cute_Ash

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

-Tht 1st scene had so much potential I luved it .DD nd Gc were awsum I was all excited tht wat unexpected twist will cup up next will it be a kiss or a chumma😆..they were taking it all out it was going well until u jus jumped to next morning...

-Do u knw how better it culd hav been if there were self-talks after tht but it itches u to show tht..It ITCHES u to show sensible stuff..

-thanku for taking adi's devdas luk out he was staring at pinky😳..

-Haha she knws him so well pakka unke tez dimaag emin kuch chal raha hai..nd she was gettin all romantic on da Fone nd ish so IRONIC how Miunda is advising geet to put personal life aside from prfessional LOOK WHO IS talking!😆

-THT Chamak Challo woman OK THEN..CHEARS was hilairous itself🤣...Typical isn;t it ok lemme try and say sumfin gud abt her:

-Her Dress-ermm luked lyk a nighty😕Tasha's was much better..

-Her Voice-I think it was dubbed tht is why it sounded horrible..but if it wasn't then😕

-Her moves-I think anyone can shake their a** much better..wat was tht and she is da party gal huh😕..I mishh PARI nowww...

-Tht chumma kum cheek air kiss🤣🤣🤣

- I never thot I wuld ever say this but stooping low to make sumone jealous is totally EKTAA..I thot the JEALOUSY phase was over..😕

-CVz u r bree baffed Giv up ur seat for Jyots Mata Plzzz...Do u knw wat is called Execution?

no then take sum help from google:

Execution: The act of executing something,carrying out to a completion..

Editing:To prepare for publication or presentation, as by correcting, revising, or adapting.

-So u really think all this is working I think ish u Mirchandani messing it up coz star one ppl lub to edit sensible stuff and put up non-executed one..Mirchandani if it is u me iz not gonna spare u..Do u knw how imp it is for every epsiode to be edited well..The episode jus seemed lyk uneven pieces of a puzzle placed together which jus dun make sense..W*F happened to Dev was he jus ditched at the bench or WHAT? u jus showed morning Ay ley what is da point?hav u lost ur minds or r u too full of urslef tht u guys can get us bak by changing the storyline everyday or showing a Nanga Maan we r not tht sad, or by giving us sum rubbish bad executed episode coz my face is lyk tht after da episode😕..

-Characters UFF they are being butchered off lyk u jus dun knw what they were meant to be..I knw da MSK has to be the one wid attitude all da tym I kwn u r trying to provie widout geet maan goes to the snobby Maan who doesn't knw wat he is doing or saying?

But by using those been there done tht scenes😕ORIGINALITY plzz I thot u guys were Original ...

Can u plz sort ursleves out I am sure ur TRPs hav decreased nd it will go to thepeak of 0.1 soon if u dun bother showing us sumfin sensible..Audience are gullable but there is a limit to tht too..we cannot tolerate this everyday..I am tired of giving it a chance..

Cuming bak to geet's character I thot she is at a point where watever happens even if it is MSK she will not bear her INSULT ok I think she will surley slap him 2morrow coz if sum insult he wil give to her but if Geet can eb da sherni for Khuranas and slap them every now nd then..

WHY NOT otherss... I dun want her to be sob in front of ppl all da time...

- The WHITE shirt and da BLACK jeep wat a combo of hawtness but no dhai kilo ka surma nd stubble messed it all up😡

--Munda Spare me the TORTUREE uff tht Surmaa is a big turn off to watch it..Plzz I am telling u no one will put nazar on u if u dun put it. Dahi Bada I knw ish u who does it but plz Give Gol Chat a breakk🥱and stubble ko bhi trim karoo plzz

-This Man's attitude can only be solved by tht slap go Geet I neva was against u slapping him and I neva will be wen an immature 24 year old is slapped by an 18 year old teenager then I call u a SHERNI..But plzz if u can show ur shernigiri in front of Maan dusro ko bhi swaad de do..SHUT them up u r no ABLA naari..

-Geet in Pool (I think I have seen this)Maan being

-Tht dance scene Maan is a cheapoo and WHITE is actually meant to be for Peace but everytime he is in white he bcums arrogant towards Geet rememba outhouse he was wearing the same shirt and today too WHITE is dangerous for him no wonder white is his fav colour...Ok Geet he is trying to make u jelaous catch Romeo and bring it on...

-WAIT there i a chance of kurri gettin drunk here she is angry she can do anything😆..Well CVz u hav forgotten she is pregnant coz u r hell bent on showing her runnin everywhere with physical and mental pressure..so I won't eb surprised if u show her drunk.. Tht Poor baby I feel it for her/him Mum shuld jus not give a damn abt da arrogant dad..

-Geet go dance wid Romeo as daadi had said once tht u r sumone who can handle him if he gives attitudeu can give double attitude dun walk out sobbing making him realise tht his trick worked..

-WATER always Binds them but I am NOT giving it a HOPE...actually I wasn't giving any hopes till the weekend then we got dis garam masaledaar news tht she will slap him so I did a huge mistake by hoping tht da episde wuld be a dhamaka..I HATE maself after tht so ash is still left with questions so if u keep doin this Pata nahi ki hoga GHSP ka..

PS: If u want sum chummas from me give me MAANISHA dance or put them together in the pool🤣🤣

Edited by Cute_Ash - 14 years ago

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 14 years ago

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INDEX

First Page - Analysis by Opti, Cute_Ash, liv2laugh, geet.a, shonuu, taqdir

Second Page - Analysis by beagleboy, Jyoti06, shadowstreet,ykannan,49erFan,mchopra,MarshP, Swan20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1531631/devils-den-black-jeep-is-back-yall-d?pn=2

Third Page - Analysis by Poli.Geek, starlite7, winona

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1531631/devils-den-black-jeep-is-back-yall-d?pn=3

Subsequent Pages : Mainly on the episode, the lack of consistency, Maan's behaviour, us being frustrated, talks abt the slap happening, Pokli gets a job! Happy for you! 🤗 n more talks on the show ......😆 U get the pict 😆

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Today I will throw diplomacy to the wind
My anger and frustration I will vent
They seem to have forgotten Geet is pregnant
The storyline is completely stagnant. 😡

They think why do the wheel I have to reinvent
Let us recycle some scenes
seems to be the thinking that is prevalent
I am amazed to hear that this nonsense
is on what you have time and energy spent

You think we are idiots this I do resent
Is the falling TRPs the problem you are trying to circumvent
Keep this on and nothing can prevent
Your show from shutting shop in an instant
Stop living in the past and move to the present
Is this much sufficient?
OR do you need a strong dose of electric current?

I am going to be calling a spade a spade
This series has become reterograde
My analysis today will be only facts
Tell them how badly this on them reflects

Maan's character they have destroyed
Who are these new CVs they have employed
The same scenes they are recycling
Why the heck are new ones they not creating

Why do we have to see a woman being humiliated
This leaves me very very frustrated
Maan needs therapy and needs it fast
Else his fan following in this den will not last

It has been a while since we heard
This show is the best this show rocks
Your show is going down the drain fast
High time you did something....pull up your socks

Detailed analysis coming later. 😃

OK now I have subjected myself to the torture of watching this a second time a deserve a gold medal for the same albeit I was painting my nails the second time and this made this a lot easier 🤣🤣🤣🤣
(paint fumes anyone 🤣🤣🤣)

Dear CVs and makers of Geet
Today's episode started off really well and I liked the continuity from friday's eppy something that was missing for a while. Maan's anger and pain were clearly highlighted in the first part of the episode. Geet's understanding of that pain and her own pain were evident. It is clear she understands his pain but he is no where near understanding hers. 😭. This interaction where she asks him why he comes behind her if he hates her so much was so well done. The fact that he will take any excuse to touch her was so endearing. Her challenging him that he feels something for her was also fabulous. But then things went downhill and they went downhill fast.

I still do not get Maan's partying. It was like we were watching two different serials like my friend Mru liked to say for another series - the blockbuster version which was what we got until a about 2 weeks ago and the bundelbaaz version which we are getting now. 🤣🤣

Your show has gone from commendable to debatable in such a short time and this is something I think you can be very proud of. No one else has achieved this in such a short time. 👏 👏 👏

Even is today's episode the dichotomy was so clear - the first part shot in the night was part of the blockbuster version but the second part at the farmhouse clearly belonged to the bundelbaaz version. 🤣🤣🤣

I would like to highlight some more characteristics of the bundelbaaz version of Geet for your convenience
1) Humiliation of the female lead by all sundry including the press, the man who purportedly loves her, the people who work in his office and now some random chick who comes to a party. I detest shows where women are humiliated. You are showing Geet humiliated at every turn. This is beyond pathetic at this point. It shows that you have no creativity left in you at all. That is why you have to resort to the time tested techniques.
2) The female lead suffers in silence while the male lead tortures her. The feminist in me cringes everytime I watch this. My mother who was a great fan of this show has already stopped watching. She tells me it is not worth her time anymore and I am inclined to agree with her especially with the way things are shaping up.
3) The male lead behaves like a brute and a boor and the female lead remains quiet and to make matters worse she forgives him 😡. He never has to face the consequences of his actions 😡.
4) You are destroying the character of Maan Singh Khurana. His characteristics were someone whom every girl wanted in her life. Now I would not touch the guy if you gave me a million bucks. You have turned him into a psycho sadist. Congratulations on murdering one of the best characters on Indian TV. 👏 👏 👏
5) Geet's character was being murdered to but has been granted a reprieve for the past 3 episodes.
6) Of all the other characters the less said the better. You have not bothered to develop any characters. You are hell bent of destroying the two characters you painstakingly built. I do not get your logic. You seem to be sacrificing everything on the altar of TRPs. You should be thinking long term instead of short term.
7) You seem to be forgetting that Geet is supposed to be pregnant. She is being subjected to undue stress and no one seems to care. She is falling into pools and climbing down rope ladders and no one cares. 😕

With Indian series the story usually goes downhill after 6 months. Usually the downhill process is slow but in your case it went downhill fast. It seems like you are on a runaway train with no idea how to stop it. 😔 I am not even sure what your ideas are anymore because your execution sucks for want of a better word.

The first part of the episode shows us there is hope but the latter part destroys that hope. Right there you see the inconsistencies in your presentation. Of the editing and the sound the less said the better. When you first started your story had a glossy feel that is now missing. I am missing the feel good element that was prevalent in your story. It has become dark and boring instead.

I am tired of seeing Maan ill-treat Geet. I want her to tell him to buzz off. I am tired of him saving her at every step. This track was supposed to help her forge a new identity. For that she has to completely dissociate from him. I want her to leave him and go away somewhere. I want her to move to another city and find a job there. I want her to realize that she is a mother and start living for her baby and attempt to forget Maan.
He wanted to not hear her voice and not see her. Well grant that wish and then see how he goes looking for her. Then when he finds her she should not be interested in him. I want Maan to try and woo her back. He confesses that he acted like an idiot and asks that she forgive him. But this a new Geet - much more serious girl whose sole focus now is the life of her baby. She tells him that she is going to live only for her baby's sake and that she will not worry about her own happiness anymore. She should be as unreachable as he is now. Maan trying to woo an uninterested Geet back should be a track that will give you TRPs so please do consider that.

Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey everyone!

for today's episode

LEsson learnt- Don't get hopes high..Anything can happen in the next minute!

Lesson to be given- EXecution execution execution!!

Lesson..err..that's it.😆

I LOVED the first 4 minutes of the episode..till Geet's self- talk

The Maan-Geet scene where he tries to tell her how much he hates her..

Very nice execution, I liked the camera angles. I liked the dialogues!

I loved the emoting!

I loved how Geet didn't believe what Maan said.

I loved how she questioned his 'breaking' of their bond.

I loved how she acknowledged that she HAS given him pain

I loved how His hurt and love came across..when he was speaking, when she was about to leave..and when she finally did .

Very nicely done scene👏

THEN- WHAT HAPPENED?

I could see the continuity between the dialogues

Geet said she knew it mattered to him

So he wanted to prove otherwise.

Fine- by throwing a party..inviting the lamest people ever.

But what was with the execution of the idea? Second half of the show was so different from the first- the transition?

Okay- WHAT happened to DEV? 😕

What happened to the party? no one questioned about Geet leaving..All was fine after that night? Dadi didn't ask? The character of Maan?

MAan Singh Khurana as a man doesn't need to do the running around does he?

Ignoring Geet when he called her?

The camera zooming into Arhana's dress, and Geet's face...??

Maan's gorilla walk after he JUMPS from the jeep( I was glad to see that back btw)

Why were people standing and watching- all of them when Geet was screaming for help?

At least the slap seems justified now.

This is what will seem okay- if well-executed- Maan going touchy feely with the girl or Girls on the dance floor and Geet going to slap him out of his respect( like she dragged him in 100th epi) and then leaving from there..going out into the rain where Romeo is there to console her..after a self-talk

Dubbing- Guys- Please do something about that.it was really bad.

we're closing loops here are we- It's not destiny but it's agents that are bringing them closer..well..more than they are right now- because- he does call her.

I loved Geet's character today. She was sensible..Maan in first 4 minutes was awesome

Maan then became a kid whose lollipop has been taken away from him and he doesn't want the chocolate offered..only the lollipop

I hated that woman Arhana..😡 And what she said to Geet

Perhaps she doesn't matter at all being a stranger- so Geet doesn't even deign to stoop to reply to her for that disgusting comment.

Oh how I want her to say sorry to Geet though

She did ask her to apologize😳So she's getting that authority

Anyway- Guys- I don't know if the repetitiveness is to prove a point that they have come full circle again..or back to square one..

BUT- that can be shown very nicely symbolically too..No need to Repaste scenes in a different surrounding right?😳

All in all- I will wait for Tomorrow to make a judgement😳

Adi-🤗what shirt!!

GC- 10/10 for portraying the longing and pain and love and anger in those first 4 minutes.

DD- 👏 11/10 today!! Flawless for me

Send that Arhana woman packing..she was ANNOYING

I loved the first four minutes- The pain and the hurt was brilliant. His subtle surprise at her clear and confident understanding of him was awesome!

Romeo oh Romeo- I loved you!😳

Love to all!

As an Aside-- here's a list of WHAT Devils would do if they were MSK

IF I WERE MAAN-

1. I would teach GITH how to Swim and steal passionate moments in water with her.

2. I would STOP Stalking her and get a life.

3. I would teach her to stand up to people like Arhana

4. I would Stop calling her GITH and learn to pronounce her name properly

5.teach her to deal with curtain properly so that no Mahiiiiii or ne other crap as BG

6.Stop her wearing jhumkas, it distracts Maan

7.I will let Geet go coz I am no good for her, for I cannot stand up for her when someone insults her as I just know how to dance away at some crassy party coz I am a 10 year old proving a point!!

8.If i were Maan i would.....ELOPE WITH DA BRIJ

9.I WOULD GET MY HEAD EXAMINED cos I really need it

10.I would have already gone through a decent conversation with geet. I wouldn't have stalked her to the bathroom and say I don't care.

11.Teach her to KISS since I am too lazy to make the first move!

12.I would clarify dat I got dev out for Dadi n dat if she wants I will leave ghar n khandaan for her...

13.I would decide what I want.. not be confused.

14.I would give myself sum rules to handle a pregnant woman instead of making her run around

15. I would get GIIT married to Romeo because he is better for than I

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shonuu

@shonuu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Twayaf ki lutti izzat bachana aur maan se "CON" ki ummeed lagana.....

Dono hi bekaar hain yaar.

.🤣

ok ok ok........ everyone chup bilkul chup....

i'll start with a random message for the swimmers:

I hate you........... your presence doesn't make any diff. to me...

teriiiiiiiii *beeeeeeeeep*

who was searching GITH with the help of deeeee_tective???

who was stalking her from behind the pillars and curtains since Novomber 1st (November)??

who did say..kal se mera ek hi maksad hoga... GITH Handa???

who wanted to demote her from the post of seeeeeeo to make her sectary again??

maan puttar you need badaam.....

takleef ke siwa tumne mujha diya kya ha??

my question...

did you ever try to get something???? learn something from your bro..... if you ever believed in doing it instead of hoo haa etc.... by now you would have two three little dusht danav playing around in khurana house... nikkamma kahin ka...🤣🤣🤣

and she was ready to give something other than pain.. (RTM) but you wasted the opportunity...
so dont dare blame her again...

Party:

that party thing was a pure non-sense .... if you want to prove your point... then you can prove it in your office as well.. just leave Indian paints and try to get a life in your damn KC.... bas she'll know that you dont bother about her....

and that female shakti kapoor??? hell .. she was toooooooo LS to describe.....🤣🤣🤣
i mean her dressing and her language/accent ..was a true mismatch... no wonder she was maan's friend..........🤣🤣🤣both used to share makeup to each other..🤣🤣

and maan baby thinks ..dancing with a half nude chick can prove that geet is no more important for him???🤣🤣

btw here is maan in the party..

Parwana (arhana) in the party

adi-pinky-tasha in the party:

GITH in the party:

shonuu, while watching the party:

ok now seriously...

cvs should know that their viewers are different from the kekta show's audience... we want logics instead of repetition of scenes... meaningless comedy.... a speedy entrance and exit of the cameos leaving zero impression.... saying something,,then forgetting in the next moment.. these all things are affecting the quality of the show.... which resulted into its TRP sink...from 51 to 88 position.... plss cvs pity on us and save your bread and butter...

in the end:

guys this farmhouse party.... a wet geet... jealousy and slap..... something really unexpected can happen... and may be a CON................🤣🤣🤣🤣..so keep your fingers crossed...

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taqdir

@taqdir

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Dear friends,

Hope you're alive and have stopped laughing. As we know some tears are out of extreme joy, similarly some laughs are out of extreme confusion. Anyways, I would only point out some aspects that need immediate attention:

1. Maan's voice double has to be changed; its severely pathetic.

2. Only in two episodes after maan got to know about geet's pregnancy, he was tender with her. After that he keeps on dragging, pulling and pushing her like anything. Its really rude.

3. Its sad that maan's high class clients (ms. Rashika rathod) and friends (ms. arhana) are all ill mannered and impolite. And a man is known by his companions they say.

4. We hope that the show would make good sense by the end of this week. There was a time when every episode made sense and now we wait for a whole week for it to make sense. I hope the period wont get any lengthier.

With all my loves and prayers……………

Edited by taqdir - 14 years ago

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 14 years ago

Geet Creative Team ...Firstly without any bashing today..I just want to highlight your faults here./...I want you people to know in which way u all r going wrong with the overall execution of the last few episodes...so plss try to rectify it based on these pointers...😊

The first scene of today was good and intense and had the perfect continuation from the friday's episode👍🏼..it was a serious confrontation happening between the two..Maan trying to prove her presense doesn't affect him and Geet trying to prove otherwise....till that point there was logic...😊
After that what happened was called silliness..there was no need of that silly pool party and repitation of old scenes🥱..thats where CVs went wrong again....👎🏼
Now biggest problem here is transition from one scene to another where CVs r fumbling..Today they should hv continued entire episode with diwali night..then Maneet conversation in that room..then what happened to Dev-Meera instead of this sudden pool fiasco...
I feel too many directors directing one episode is ruining the execution..I felt today first half and whole of last friday's episode was handled by Nissar but second half of today is directed by mayb Maan Singh🤔..no wonder there was no continuation or flow between first scene and the next morning scene...thats where problem is arising in consistency department....either let Maan singh direct whole episode or let Nissar handle it but why first part looks like Nissar directed and second part of same episode looks like some Lalluram has directed it😳..Let only a single director handle one single episode na😡.... CVs should hv shown whole of diwali night in one episode and then pool party in next one..why jumbled up two in one and kill its essense😕..problem lies in transition from one scene to another because of which execution goes for a toss...I mean after such a good serious scene in the beginning u expect some sort of continuation in the form of their self talks but instead we get to see next morning MSK driving a jeep...thats the main problem... 😳
CVs think by giving us old scenes they r satisfying the viewers..they did that with DMG and MJHT as well..but they need to understand that Geet does not fall in that category..its a serious story damn it😡..So get your acts right before its too late

What CVs want to show is Good and Intelligent and unique...but they r not able to execute it well enough..reason why Viewers r getting damn confused ...Heres why

MSK's problem...whatever Geet says..I will oppose it... 😉

Geet said.."I don't need u"

MSK goes on to prove "She needs me" but he fails there😃

Geet said "my presense still affects u"

MSK goes on to prove "Her presence doesn't affect me" and so this pool party...if slap comes tomorrow becuase of his behaviour then he fails again😃

In short MSK just wants to prove Geet wrong at every go...why ?..because she proved him wrong by doing that public tamasha in office last friday where she refused to marry him..so he was proved wrong in front of his clients where he claimed that he will marry Geet..

So now his mission is to prove Geet wrong...but he is not able to do that..reason why he starts behaving in a childish manner

Thats the plan of CVs..which is good but they r not able to execute it through thier screenplay which is bad..simple...

Main intention of this separation track which is Good but why it went all wrong..

Ok we talk about the several promises and Parineeta theories that they both went through and so their love becomes divine...but tell me in real life how many girls will actually like to hv such relationships where we treat our partner like God and worship him and our partner gives us all the promises in the world but does not say even a single time that he loves her ? ??😆....just think about it and we will get our answers what exactly went wrong in Maaneet relationship😊

Geet all this while kept worshipping MSK like God..yes thats the problem..lets accept it😆...coming to MSK ...his feelings for Geet is very strong but because he kept saving her all the time ,he has developed a hero complex and keeps taking Geet for granted as if she is his most prized possession...so he doesn't feel the need of using this word "love" even once in their relationship...(I din't say cliched "ILU" but only the use of the word "love" or "pyaar" at least once in any of his sentence rather than using the word "need" all the time...)

Thats where the problem lies...all they need is to realise that they both love each other..yes "LOVE" is the word which needs to come out of their mouth now to clear all differences... I was not convinced myself till my hubby said that he wants to marry me because he loves me😆...I will not b convinced if my hubby kept talking about moons and glaxies and mornings and nights but not use the word Love like MSK 😆,...those look good in fairytales in which both Maaneet were living till now😆..finally they r coming to reality😃..

CVs wanted to show a transition of Maaneet's journey from their fairy tale world of moons and galaxies to reality of media and society pressure once Dev issue was out.....again idea is good👏 but its a complex one..so they r failing in execution....

Yes Thats the basic idea of the CVs when they did the separation track which is good again👍🏼...but as usual they went haywire with execution and transition or placement of scenes which is bad👎🏼😊

Issues regarding MSK's kiddish behaviour...is it all of a sudden ??

Answer is NO😆its not happening today..even in outhouse we hv seen that childish side of MSK when he drags Geet out of the house at night or doesn't let her sleep on his bed..remember😉...he does hv that immature childish side to his personality which often comes out in open when he is at his extreme...I think he never got that love from his family..he always wanted to b loved by someone but he was deprived of it...mayb Dadi was the only exception in his life..and so we r getting to see this immatured childish side of this guy🤔...my issue was not with MSK or Geet's behaviour..they r behaving as per the situation which I hv explained above..so its fully justified😊..my issue still remains with execution and transition of the scenes which is going down every episode reason why viewers r left confused and disappointed👎🏼...they should hv shown some self-talks of MSK to actually tell the viewers why he is behaving in that childish way...😊

With this I conclude my tonight's take...I dunno if CVs r going to read this...But if they do they will certainly realise where and why they r going wrong inspite of hving a good track and story concept in their hands...all they need is a tight screenplay,matured scenes,proper continuation and flow,and most important execution and narration😊..Lastly they need to strictly avoid showing repitative Maaneet scenes which we hv already witnessed because u cannot repeat the same magic again with a similar scene😊...

GC and DD were fantastic as usual in their acting department👏...Direction of first 8 mins scene was superb👏...but after that it was a circus🤢..

I hope you'll pull up your socks before its too late...keep faith in your fans and remember we love watching shows hving quality and logic and not simply shows filled with mindless comedy or hot scenes😊...

Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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So wht Geet din slap Maan, I was SLAPED badly😆

So where the epi started? right there where it ended on Friday. She came to him. He felt her. She was with medicine. both for his burnt hand & heart. She took the first step to talk with him.👏 She called her Maan. Now what was he thinking? same old thing offcourse. he cant live without her but he wont admit it. Natural from his side coz he is MSK. The more she is becoming strong the more he is becoming harsh on her. amazing point to notice that now all his anger is shown & revolved with Geet only. He cud have blame & shout at dadi coz she is the one who bring her to the party. But nopez. he is mad at Geet only. So there is some hope. he is becoming more dependant on her. Before he use to run over to dadi & complain. But now his love, anger, harsh words everything is with Geet. But he is denying it continueously. 😲 But its not him, the monster inside him doing this. yes he has an eyed monster inside him. geet knows it now. She understands him now. So she was soft. She blamed herself for hurting him. It was not her character. but she followed his word to let him understand he is wrong. One day he will understand it for sure. today geet directly took the blame on herself by saying I gave u only pain in our relation when u helped me always. He said they hav no relation as he hates her. But again she answered they have relation. No matter how much he denies they hold a relation. This the same relation gives him authority to grab her anytime he wants. He misbehave with her. He throw harsh word to her. He tells her to go away. But at the same time his eyes get moist with the facts she was saying & tears in her eyes. So the main point is they r still together.

MSK is habitutaed to get what he wants. either in soft way or hard way. In HP track when he had no feelings for her he handled her harshly. Though he was attracted towards her subconciously from that time. but that time he never admited that any woman can win over him. At Delhi, he started to melt. He became softer, tried to understand her from her POV. but at the end he use to get what he wants actually. He arranged the most romantic & comfortable date for her. What Geet expected? a traditional date but he did something unusual to make her impressed & make her confess. He always say in our relation u r the upper hand, u decide about our relation. Why he say so? coz he knew he is the upper hand always. he decides. He wants her in his life. He wants her to be safe from all griefe & misery. But in every sector he was upper hand. He went after her when she decided to leave Delhi coz he loves her & cant let her go. So he had to say sorry & bring her back. He wanted to find her culprit for her. All these things he did for her but it was actully what he wanted to do. He was used to see Geet in misery & he always came to save her. So today when geet is not taking his help he is angry. When he get to know that Geet understands him he is angry. He wants the old geet back. His ego was crushed by Geet but if she admit once that I need u then he wud agin melt. He confessed it too when they were in hospital for Geet's chekup. He said I m happy & calm till u r laughing & happy.

Now geet is neither happy nor laughing. So Maan is obiously not happy. geet loves him. She knows she hurt him but she cant sideline her self respect either. So a battle is going on. She is becoming stronger with his each harsh word & act. Her softness is with her but its covered by her strong persona. She is no longer afraid of his anger. She told it to him when he was sick. She can understand his mind & assume his next move. So she get prepared. This geet is kind of new one. Maan has to fall for this geet now. when he will fall for this strong Geet only then the reunion will happen. both have to work hard to ERAN each other. Both has to scrifice something to have each other.

thats the track of frst 5 mins of todays episode. Maan is trying again to prove her wrong. His frst mission was to make her realize that she needs him. He half failed on that mission. Geet made friend with the Bramhachari group in her office. So she has some control in office now. She made entry to Khurana house which indicates she win Dadi's heart too. So Maan did fail to teach her lesson & make her realize that she needs him. So now he is with some new mission. He wants her to realize that her presence has no influnce on him. But its wrong on the frst place. Generally if we reject someone & think that his/her presence is not important to us we skip any meeting with him/her. But here he is inviting her in his farmhouse. He is jealous of the gang she brought with her. He can recognise her voice & jhumkas. He was distracted with her curtain stucking scene. So she still has huge effect on her. He ignored & insulted her in front of that party girl but he did it by himself. I dont think he wont allow that girl to insult her. Also he had shown to save her from water. Also he will try to make her jealous. ppl do such things with the ppl they care. So she still has huge effect on him. This influence is increasing day by day with her every denial.

In today's episode only frst 5 mins was worthy to watch & discuss. rest of the epi was worse than a filler to me.🤢

Edited by shadowstreet - 14 years ago