Write a Scene Contest - 27/10/2010-1/11/2010

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi All,

Let's have a contest.

I'll post 3-4 pictures here and you all have to write a scene or dialogue based on it. We all have watched numerous re-runs and know which episode these are from, but the scene you write shouldn't be from any particular episode. It has to be your own.

Last date for entries 30/10/2010. Cut off time is 5PM IST.

Marks to be given by 31/10/2010.

ALL members (participants and non-participants) are requested and are welcome to vote for their top 3 scenes and post them ON THIS THREAD.

PLEASE DO NOT PM THEM TO ME.

Results on 1/11/2010.

If it goes on well, we'll have one every week.

Here's the first set of pictures.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

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Posted: 15 years ago

Acp: In Fireworks walon ne humara naam Mitti mein Mila diya.

Daya : Ha sir, Inki wajah se ab bahar nikal na muskil ho gayi hai.

Fredrick : I am sick of doing serious roles. Now I will move to tomfoolery only. Guys be with me.

Vivek : Why not. I will love to pull your legs.

Tasha : I will give you company Vivek.

Abhijit : In Creatives ko koi aur kaam dhanda nahi hai kya. Mujhe Aashiq banane pe chale the. Sidha Serious guys se Ghumeria patient bana diya.

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ye Kya , mujhae lagtha hai Daya , ki humhare loyal audience es bar hum sae kuch zada hi naraz hai , paris trip ko lekar ., ye log nare tho nahin laga rahe ?

Daya:- Finally , sir chalo aap ko aabh patha chal gaya, inke dar sae mai ne ghar bhi nahin gaya ,.......

Freddy:- Vivek ye drink thoda aajeb taste kar raha hai , tum ne kuch gadh badh tho nahin kina mere drink ke saath ,

Vivek:- freedy sir, aap ye kya keh rehae hai , mai bhala aisa kyu karunga......shayad ye aapki wife ne beja hoga.....

Freddy:- wife ne , tho tik hi hoga,, mai phir sae taste karke check karunga

Tasha:- Vivek , freddy sir kitna darthe hai na, apni wife sae .......

Abhi:- pichli bar paris le ja kar , mazak bana diya, na jane is bar kya karne wale hai , bas tarika ko mere saath na chod de bus.........

PS:- btw any rules for building a scene ??

Edited by JayaV - 15 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

No major rules...just that they have to be original.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

Let me try :

ACP : Arre Sachin, tumhe chhutti pe bheja tha na...to fir itni jaldi wyapas kyun aa gaye?

Daya(thinking) : yeh fir aa gaya! Kuch der shaanti se jeene Bhi nahi deta!

Viivek : Sir, aap in kapdon mein Bureau mein kya kar rahe hain?
Freddy : Maine protest karne ka faisla liya hai Viivek. Jab tak mujhe promotion nahi diya jaata...tab tak main bureau mein hote hue bhi kaam pe nahi lagunga....
Tasha(whispers to Viivek) : Freddy sir bina kaam kiye nahi reh sakenge Viivek. Dekhna, abhi ACP sir ayenge aur inhe mana lenge. Bas yeh sab protest wotest kuch der ke lie hai...

Abhi : Kya yaar. Socha tha yeh HD se mukabla jamega... Lekin woh bhi ek joker nikla! Kab tak in ghisi piti bewakoof criminals ko pakdenge...! Humari koi izzat bachi hai ya nahi? Hainnn???

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Hardik Kansagara

@hrkansagara

Explorer

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Posted: 15 years ago

In Mine It Will Something Like.

A.C.P : Daya Inko Dekho HD Ko Pakad ne Ek Din Hum Paris Kya Gaye Ye To Ulta Bhadak Ke Hume Hi CID Se Humesha Ke Liye Bahar Karne Aa Gaye Lagta Hai.
Daya : Ha , Sir Lag To Mujhe Bhi Kuch Aisha Hi Raha Hai.

Vivek : Fredi sir Aap Kaha Se Aa Rahe Hai.
Fredi : Vivek Tujse Kitni Baar Kaha Hai Ki Jab Kuch Pata Na Ho To Kuch Bhi Mat Bola Kar. Main Aa nahi Jaa Raha Hoon Ek Aur Pack Lagane Taarika Ke Saath.
Tasha : Kyun Sir Koi Kaam Nahi Hai Kya.
Fredi: Tasha, Kajal Aur Sachin Ke Aajane Se Main Aur Sonali ji Ke Aane Se Tarika Free Hai Na !

Abhijit(Continue To Previous Seen) : Kya Yaar Ek Din Sir Ke Saath Paris Kya Gaya Fredi Ne Beech Main Taang Daal Ke Mere Surprise Ka To Katal Hi Kar Diya.

- Hardik Kansagra

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ye Freddy ko kya hoagaya hai Daya?? Mujhe tho lagtha hai ye apna ghar CID office, mein shift kardiya hai , patha karo ki eski biwi ne essae ghar se nahin nikal diya hai na ...

Daya:- to himself, lagtha nahin sir, mujhae tho paka yakin hai ki freddy ko ghar sae nikal diya gaya hai ...... ,.......

Vivek:- freddy sir, chliye chalke kuch kha legiye.....

Freddy:- Nahin vivek , mai kuch nahin khaunga, jab tak meri biwi mujhae wapas nahin lene athi , mai sirf pani pe survive karunga

Vivek:- Sir , par ye tho jucie jaisa lag raha hai .....

Freddy:- vivek mujhae sikhaneki koshish math karo , mera matlab tha ki mai jucie aur pani pe survive karunga

vivek:- sir, par aap ki wife nahin aayi tho

Tasha to vivek , phir tho sir tho gaye, lekin jab tak humhe full time entertainment tho millega

Freedy:- tum log meri wife ko nahin janthae , woh abhi aayegi mujhae lene, warna uske liye khana kaun banayega??

Abhi:- iski wife ne tho essae ghar le jane sae saaf saaf mana kardiya, aabh mujhae hi kuch karna padega, warna eski ye harkathe deekh kar, koi case lekar aayega bhi nahin

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sneh.

@sneh.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ab meri bari 😃

ACP : Ab yeh toh hadd ho gayi Daya, bi-weekly aur CID movie saath saath, FW ke mann mein akhir hai kya?

Daya : Jab fans bhadkenge tab inhe pata chalega Sir.........

Vivek: Freddy sir aap inn kapdon mein yahan kya kar rahe hain sir?

Freddy: Exercise aur dieting

Tasha: Kyun sir (laughing)

Freddy: yeah Vivek jab dekho tab uchal kud karke ACP sir ki wahwahi le jaata, aur ab toh movie bhi launh ho aane wali hain Issiliye dieting karke main bhi fit banunga Kya pata mujhe bhi Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir ki tarah kuch importsnt karne ko mil jaye!!!!!!!

Vivek: Juice peeke dieting kar rahe ho sir?

Freddy: yeah drink juice nai health drink hain samjha?

Vivek: Ji sir😆

Abhijeet : Freddy tumhe movie ki padi hain main toh soch soch ke pareshan ho gaya hoon ke abhi bi-weekly chal raha hain toh investigation ki band baji hui hain. Jab movie shuru hogi toh socho kya hoga? 😕

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somu_05

@somu_05

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

HD Special..!! :p

ACP : Yeh HD hai..? Yeh..? Oh my GOD

Daya : Dont tell me humey isey jhelna padegaa......

Vivek : arey sir yeh kya..? Aaj aap CID Officer wale kapdo mein Nahi.. Jogging tacks mein kya kar rahe hai sir..?

Freddy : Vivek .....Agar Climax episode mein Woh log Villian k peeche itna daudayenge.....Toh jogging ki practice to karni padegi naa.. ISILIYE main aaj se Daudne ki practice karoonga..!!

Tasha : sahi Kaha Sir... FW Zindabad (SarcAsm)

ABHIJEET : Yeh kyaa Villian ke naam pe MM ko HD dikhaya... Villian ka bhi koi standard hota hai..... Poore series ka tehes nehas kar diya...

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

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My turn !!

ACP :- Daya main ek baat soch raha hoon ki tum log uss waqt aag se kaise bach aaye ??
Daya :- Sir FW waalon ne humein jaadoogar banaya hai !! Bas 1 second pehle magic spell bola aur bach nikle !!!

Viivek :- Sir maine suna hai aap Sachin ke senior ke khilaaf protest karenge aaj !!
Freddy:-Main jogging karthe waqt usike baare mein soch raha tha aur yahaan chala aaya,ACP sir se baat karne,unse insaaf lekar rahoonga !!
Tasha :- Sir bechaare ACP sir kya kar sakthe hain ?? Woh toh khud Biweekly ke wajah se thak gaye hai !! Woh khud insaaf maang rahe hain !!!

Abhijeet :- Yeh log toh kuch badalne waale nahi hai !!! Lagtha hai mujhe hi kuch karke apne saare coats phaadna padega !!!