Write a Scene Contest - 27/10/2010-1/11/2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

ACP:- Daya kya kami hai mujhme aakhir kyun mein 12 saal mein ACP se DCP nahin ban saka .
Daya:- Sir mujhe toh lagta hai FW wale agla DCP Gutur Gu team mein se laane wale hai

Vivek:- Sir aap apni sehat ka itna dhyan kyun rakh rahe hai ?
Freddy:- Vivek maine dekha hai aajkal CID officers ka six-pack hona bahut jaroori hai. Tum bhi lagbhag 4 pack ke barabar ho. Mujhe bhi fit hona hai tabhi
Tasha (to herself):- Ek fit officer ne pure bureau ka rang hi badal diya. Ab Case se jyada hum apne looks par dhyan denge.

Abhijeet (to himself):- hey ishwar bureau ko buri aatmaon se bachao !

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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Such Nice Scenes. How creative our fans are.😃

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

ACP - Daya kuch gadbad hai..??? abhi tak humara next episode ki promo kyu nahin dekha rahe hai sony per...??

Daya - Hain Sir... main bhi yeh sooch raha hu...?? isey pehle tho, wednesday ko hi promo dekhate they.. per ab kya hua hoga...?? Sir IF per bhi kuch nahin mila ... nayi promo ke bhare main

ACP - hain Daya yeh jane ke liye hi maine Abhijeet ko FW office beja

Freddy - Sir, maine subha se sony cahannel dekh raha hu... per kahi bhi beech main promo nahin dekha...

Vivek & Tasha - Sir , hum dono ne koogle search kiya ... per kuch nahin pata chal... IF per bhi nahin...

Abhijeet returns from FW office...

Abhi - Sir, pata chal gayya Promo ke barre main...

humara agla Promo nahin dekha rahey hai kyu ki... IF members ko promo dekhte hi Pata chal jata hai... episode main kya hone wala hai... Sir, IF members sirf promo dekh kar predict kar sakte hai... ki kaun humara agla episode ka story kaise hoga, use kaun direct karne wala hai, aur kaun screeplay ...

Episodes se pehle hi... thread ke 3 -4 pages bhar jate hai IF members ki discussions se

Sir isliye... next episode ki suspense rakhne ke liye hi promo ko delay ki jaraha hai....

Edited by twinklelovesCID - 14 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

ACP: Subah se TV dekh raha hoon promo nahin aaya.

Daya: Koi baat nahin sir, aap IF mein dekhiye. Prabha wahan upload karegi.

Vivek: Sir...aaj aap gym ke kapdon mein?

Freddie: Haan, maine promo dekha...kisi boxing match ka hai...isliye main poori tayaari karke aaya hoon. Lekin Abhijeet sir, aap tayyar nahi hue?

Abhijeet: Mujhe tayyari karne ki zaroorat nahin hai Freddie....main boxing scenes se gaayab hone wala hoon.

Edited by visrom - 14 years ago

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Debayon Dutta

@debayon

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

ACP: Arre kya baat hain Freddy aaj bade phurtile lag rahe ho.

Daya: Lagta hain kal iske wife ne isko kuch bola.

Vivek: Sir, aap nahane chale hain kya?

Freddy: Abe chup, ek toh ghar mein wife mere piche padti reht hain aur bureau main tu...

Vivek: Sir woh toh mein bas...kher sir, kya baat hain, aaj aapka mood thik sa nahi lag raha...?

Freddy: Kaise mood theek rahega...wife ne kaha ki mujhe har roz exercise karna chahiye. Kehti hain ki mein baut mota ho gaya hoon. Sir, woh mere liye aajkal gaajar ka halwa bhi nahi banati hain sir...*Tasha giggles, fortunately Freddy doesn't notice*

Abhijit: Kya yaar, Freddy, uss din se tumne kuchnahi sikha? Yaad nai paper mein kya likha tha: India mein har roz 1 lakh logon ko diabetes ho rahi hain??? Aur tum ho ki...kher chodo, tumko maut ke mooh mein ghusna hi hain toh mein kaun ho tumhe rokne wala..

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Debayon Dutta

@debayon

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Sorry, my scene is a bit different, it is not about FW and all...hope that's alright

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Debayon, it can be anything.....no need to be about FW.

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m_kal2011

@m_kal2011

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

I am now trying something in my weak Hindi.

ACP: Dekho Daya dekho, is Freddy ko dekho. Ab yeh din hi dekhna baki rahe gaya tha.

Daya: Mujhe bhi kuchh samajh nehi aah raha hain Sir, yeh Freddy kor keya raha hain?

Vivek: Freddy Sir, aap aise kapre pahenke bureau meh......

Freddy: Zamana badal geya , Vivek, zamana badal geya. Pehele dekh kaise kaise criminal hote the, khun korne keliye keye keya tarika dhurte the, aur ab dekh humko kaise criminal ke pichhe bhagna porta hain.........

Tasha: Par Sir iske saaath yeh dress ka keya sambandh?

Freddy: Yeh hi toh main tum dono ko samjhane ka koshis kar rahe hoon. Ab sab kuchh badal chuke hain. Yeh Daya Sir aur Abhijeet Sir koh hi dekho, kaise case ke beech main na jane kahan gayeb ho jata hain. Pahle aisa kabhi hua keya? Ab itna sab kuchh badal sekta hain toh mera dress kiyun nehi badal sekta?

Abhi: Ab yeh Freddy-koh kaun samjhaiga? (murmuring) Par galad kuchh nehi kaha, yeh FW aajkaal kuchh jada hi gadbad korne laga!

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

ACP: what you have done Abhijit? how dare you come here like this. just go home and bring it.
Daya : yes you have to, abhijit....or dont come here

fredy: look at me, i was on leave to day, just came here because of it, why you have done this abhijit sir.
vivek: sir, Abhijit sir forget it thats why.

Abhijit: sir....the thing is that beans is not available in market now. my crazy fans shagnika and bhavana have bought the complete bundle today. i didn't get a single piece.