Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29) - Page 75

so first i would like to clear that I hav NOT been unconscious for a month! I did regain conciousness soon after..but thani found myself caught up in the middle of soooo many things! It was strange really,how these things happen once u make a commitment! It seems than that the whole world is trying to get in ur way!..and that's wat happened to me too *sigh*

So yeah after almost a month rite, M back and fully concious and excited! Yes cz i read the whole part again (phew!) and the precap too! And now m gonna read part 12 after this one! and speaking of part 12..I dint find any PM regarding that particular part Nj hmm bolo bolo why jee? Lolz u know I kinda feel I should hav taken up journalism rather than medicine..cz as it is m not doing anything HATKE as a Doc?mite as well give journalsm a try..."ALIA THE JOURNALIST"! Sounds awesome! isn't it? *takes on a faraway dreamy look..when suddenly her eyes land on a fuming Nj..who is wearing a big boot on her rite foot* why r u?. *Nj gives her a meaningful look and a huge grin and it dawns upon alia* OH! For that *Nj nods smiling in a dangerously sweet way* Um err..hehe... on second thots lets not drag this anymore, and get back to ur FF shall we *Nj nods approvingly..alia beams* you Got it boss!

So here's my take on ur part 11

Wow Nj?.its strange how u can make me fall in love with the same characters that had once upon a time.. been my fav.. bt lost their charms in the most recent times..yes m still bitter abt all that Nj..and will u believe me if I say that m not as bitter as I was before reading ur FF again?! trust me this part came as a fresh air forme,cooling my insides a bit and making me feel like a HUGE burden has been lifted off of me with it and thank u for this! If not for ur FF than I don't think I would hav EVER turned back and read anything regarding the characters.maybe that was also the reason,why I wasn't too eager to read any DMG FFs anymore =/ m glad u changed that for me! So now m back into DMG..well mostly ur FFs and theold happy days that is! Cheers for that =)

Back to the part..u know m quite loving this new complex characterization of atul! U hav made him so sophisticated and ofcourse THE SAVIOUR FOR ALL ROFL! and he and anj make a very sophisticated well matched pair.but gosh muskaan has such a bigmouth! She cant seem to keep secrets it seems. Lol and this scene was absolutely hilarious!!!

Abhimanyu mouthed another 'ah', increasingly amused. That, until he became aware of Anjali's new scowl, in effect to which he brought on a straight face. (typical)

"You look really nice Anjali!" It was positively ill timed. (oh boy! I cant believe HE said that??)

"WHAT?!"(typical rofl)

There was no one, except Abhimanyu, who hadn't seen this coming(u bet! But u havta admit,the guy has got guts,which even he isn't aware of rofl! saying THAT to anjali at a time like that was something close tp suiciding!!). True, it had worked with Ridhima once, but there were only so many times one could press their own luck '

"No ... I mean, really ... err ... the colors! ... They're so ... you!" (he still isnt aware of the situation now is he? lolz)

Atul thought he'd gag himself before becoming witness to the further proceeds of Modi's suicidal pursuit.(lolz exactly my thots!)

On the outside he brightened up a smile once more.

"Actually," he said, "I'm going to have to agree with Abhi'"

Muskaan, instantly intrigued, found her urge to laugh temporarily suspended, as she raised an eye at this intervention - so the bail-out pacifist was still in action? What a guy!

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That was ONE HELL OF N ill timing! I wished I was there to WITNESS this scene with my own eyes and than drop on the ground laughing like crazy!! M surprised muskaan suppressed herself that long till her antennas went up on atul's statement! Cz frankly if I was in her place ..i would hav been guffawing like DOLLY IN BIG BOSS does, and wudnt hav paid attention to anything else going on around me!

And after this scene?here comes the sad part =/ bt I dint mind it..infact the way it all went was relatable..it almost always happens that when u r in the middle of a serious musing..and when someone just barges in on u and brings u back to reality.or in some cases makes fun of ur expression or anything.most ppl get irked.result?a fight or a horrible misunderstanding.

But I felt really sorry for nikki..i mean she is linking up ridz and abhi and although she feels for him..she cant keep on feeling for him cz of her interpretation of abhi and ridz's relation! THIS IS CALLED ONE BIG MISUNDERSTANDING and I bet u r planning a lot of tears and fights for this one m I right there Nj? * looks at her reproachfully* ah well..u r the writer..bt I would request for a happy reunion among the friends afterwards... When and IF u plan to go that particular way =)

~Alia~

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