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Posted: 14 years ago
hey,update ssooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn😭waiting from whennnnnnnnnnnn
Edited by KavyaNaik123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski.. you won't believe.. i was trying to update this one for quite sometime.. but whenever I try to quote and write.. i would hung up at saree scene... ok so i gave up that idea... yaar earlier updates baby was the show stopper but this one it's the saree scene.. I had assumed that you will be selecting the red saree but never ever dreamt that Maan would be the one who will be doing it..

yaar whats happening to me...going to read that once again.....honey, I was listening to "dil tho hai bezubaan' song while reading the update..and the music really went along...

back to the udate now

sweety i should say, saree scene was awesome !!!! no one would have ever penned it like this.. and I never enjoyed any other scene like this.. AVIS were brilliant.. 3 cheers for Meyis.. girl,, nice work !!!!

yaar I really want to read the next part.. but don't want to move away from this ...

muski.. take rest and get well soon!!!!!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
muski

kaha ho ..........................heard you r not well take care of your self first and as usual ......missing u a lot........................... love all your ff
Edited by seema05 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 30

khoye hi rehte shayad humesha yun hi aapne bahoon mein..
nakul knocked the door..maan opened & geet sat on the bed checking her saree
nakul - daadi ne yeh sandals diye hain geet maam ke liya
maan took it from him & closed the door
maan made her wear the golden coloured pointed heels
geet hesitated..maan inisited in a stirn look..she slipped in her legs

maan took his dress & went into the wash room & changed
geet waited patiently sitting in the bed..
after some time she walked to the mirror & tripped
maan held her from the hand & made her stand
maan stirn voice - tum chup chap mera wait nahi kar sakthi thi?
baby~abhi main girta..uff!!
geet - mujhe yeh sab nahi pehanna
maan - kyun? itna pyaari laag rahi ho..pulled up her chin softly
geet - mujhe saree phen kar chal na nahi aata aur upar se aapne yah heels bhi
pehanna diye hain
& turned to face the mirror
maan - main hoon na
geet - aap kya kar sakte hoo?
maan - tumhe sambhal sakta hoon..hamesha ki tarah!!
geet - puri party main mera saath rahoge?
maan puts the earing moving the curls behind - umm!!
geet - pakka!!
maan opens her plat & leaves it open - pakka
geet turns to face him..checks his collar & closes the shervani's
neck button & kisses his nose..baby~papa is looking handsome👏
geet - aache lag rahe hoo!!

maan & geet walk in togather to the hall
geet was very conscious of the saree & walked close to maan clinging to him
daadi - beta tum sari main bhut pyari lagh rahi ho
geet - inhone pehnaaya hain (she bit her lips & maan blushed &
did'nt know how to react)
maan cleares his throat - iska matlab hain I told her how to wear
daadi smiled & tried not to embarras her grand son further
daadi gives the aarti thali to geet & tells her to wait for meera at the entrance
geet looked at maan..he nodded & followed her
she smiled at meera baby~wow meri chachi kitni pyari hain!!
she took the aarti & put the tikka on meera

engagement cermony starts & geet stands holding maans arms in a corner
baby~mujhe bhi deehkna hain
geet handed over the ring, pandit ji started the pooja
they exchanged the rings, geet looked restless & turned looking for maan
he stood in a corner, she slowly slipped close to him
dev & meera looked at each other & smiled
geet clinged on to maan..tighter..maan rested his hand on her grip
she slid her hand down his arms & entrangled his fingers & rested her head on his arms
maan smiled - kya hua
geet - I am so happy for them
maan - don't worry tumhara raj bhi tumhe aise he pyar karega
geet - aap kab se pyar ko maanne lage
maan - tum to maanti hona
geet smiles - when are they getting married
maan - 15 days or so
geet - wow..15days of licensed dating..she giggles
maan - wat ???
geet - pata hain I really love this time between engagement & wedding
maan - why?
geet - there is so much of romance & passion
maan - that should be their after wedding too right
geet - haan but this is different!!!.
maan - woo kaise?

baby~confused😕
geet - engagement ke baad ..u still have to fear the parents ..chup chup
ki milna
..(baby~aap to pura samya papa se chup chup ki hi milthi hain
geet ingnores the baby )kuch parents se keh kar milna..aur kuch bina kahe milna
its so much fun u know..main to engagement ke ek saal ke baad hi shaadi
karoonghi
maan rolled his eyes - tum pagal ho
geet -main toh aisi hi hoon
maan - aise hi rehna..hate u
geet - hate u 2, 3, ...10
baby~lets try A B C next time!!😡
maan - tum itna chipko mat mujh se...tumhara raj dehkega toh
geet - mera raj yanha kanha hain..waise bhi why should he mind us
maan - nahi maan lo u like someone here then..like that guy..he points at dev's
friend Dr. rahul
geet - kaun..she looks curiously
maan - that guy in brown waist coat
geet - cute hain na..maan was taken aback
baby~chi-chi bilkul aacha nahi hain
maan - tumhe achha laga to baat chalvayoon in a irrated tone
geet - abhi nahi baad main..maan was felt better
maan - lekin abhi kyun nahi
rahul walks towards them maan tightens his grip on her fingers
rahul - hi bhaiya
maan - hi rahul
rahul looks at geet & looks at maan awaiting for an intro
maan - this is geet, she works with me
rahul - can I take ur geet for a dance please
maan looks away..geet looked at maan ..he freed her hand
geet mumers...main kaise dance kar sakti hoon woo bhi saree main heels ke saath!!
baby~mujhe nahi girana..papa plz..mama ko pakdo
geet walked few steps & tripped..rahul held her from the waist
maan looked at hand that rested on her waist & looked awaya
sine mein jalan aankhon mein tufaan saa kyun tha
maan se unki nasdeekyian mano bardasht nahi ho tha
phir dilko tadpne ki lagan kesa tha
this VM just watch maan's J...other parts like the office staff , mr chopra, etc etc not part of the
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjNBO-CzDcM&feature=related
[/YOUTUBE]

geet kept looking for maan as rahul tried to dance along the music
she kept tripping & stepping his leg..
rahul - u r not comfartable in this heels
geet gave a week smile
rahul - why don't u remove it
geet - ok ..she removes the heels & keeps it aside
rahul - I am a intern at sanjeevni hospital
waise I am from chandigarh
geet gets excited - tum bhi punjab se hoo
main HP se hoon
geet seemed comfartable now..maan kept looking at her
she laughed & their frequency seemed to be really in sink
uska yun hi has has ke baad karna mano maan ko aur bhi bechain kardetha
kuch deer taak bardash kartha..phir jab bardast nahi kar paya to
use wanha se leekar aagaya
..
geet - bye rahul I will call u
maan - bhut dosti hogayee tumhari in stirn voice
geet - pata hain he is from chandigarh..punjab da munda hain
maan - to shaadhi karoo ghi kya use?
geet - aap aise kyun bol rahe hoon
maan fumbles - nahi u asked me to be with u in the whole party & now tumhe
mujhe chod kar chalee gayee
maan gets angry & leaves from there..he went to the garden &
just pushed his hair behind..becoming restless he immdiately went back..looking for
Maan uthkeya chaley unki mehfil se, pichhey se usne pukara nahi.
fir khud he ruk gaye kadam, kyunki uske bin Maan ka guzara nahi.

geet stood there confused when few kids came & spoke to her

rahul comes from behind & says ..hi naam to suna hoga..rahul
geet laughs & chases him around the place
watch this vedio of rahul & geet!!!
she runs & bumps into maan..he holds really hard by her waist in anger
maan - I thought u were not comfartable walking in saree
geet - mujhe duhk raha hain..maan tightens his grip..mujhe bhi
koi root gaya mano , koi khafa ho gaya mano
na jane jindagi main unse konsa gunah ho gay mano
lakho sajde kiye honghe unho ne pane ke liye yeh saat mano
magar jis sajde me pana tha ek dosre ko mano
bas wo hi kaja ho gaya!!!


precap
dance!!!!!

thanxs thanxs a lot for replying & liking my FF...love u all...hope u like this update to...please please do comment...CREDIT OF THE VEDIOS goes to the uploader...god bless
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan if i cn, would hv kissd ur fingers, dil chhoo liya!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. mujhe pm nahi mila😭...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the whole part but these lines alot hats of di ur an excellent writer.. 👏 👏 👍🏼

Maan uthkeya chaley unki mehfil se, pichhey se usne pukara nahi.
fir khud he ruk gaye kadam, kyunki uske bin Maan ka guzara nahi.

sine mein jalan aankhon mein tufaan saa kyun tha
maan se unki nasdeekyian mano bardasth nahi ho tha
phir dilko tarpne ki lagan kesa tha

baby~mujhe nahi girana..papa plz..mama ko paktoo


uska yun hi has has ke baad karna mano maan ko aur bhi bechain kardetha
kuch deer taak bardash kartha..phir jab bardast nahi kar paya to
use wanha se leekar aagaya
..

koi root gaya mano , koi khafa ho gaya mano
na jane jindagi main unse konsa gunah ho gay mano
lakho sajde kiye honghe unho ne pane ke liye yeh saat mano
magar jis sajde me pana tha ek dosre ko mano
bas wo hi kaja ho gaya!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
dreamy... perfect wid vid 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

excellent rahul geet n maan. wonder wht abt muskan?

update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
aapki shayari ka jawab nahin😃

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