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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update thanku
Please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: charmed ones

Hey..!! πŸ€— Muski Dear...!!πŸ˜‰ wat u up2????...!!! hehhehe πŸ˜†

u know ur Sugari is here...!! πŸ˜ƒ I had feeling 4 posted ur FF...!! u know Dil ka connection...!!!! hehehehe..!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Awesome VM...suites d situation...!! hehhehe😳😳😳😳
I have listen 100x...hehehe...!!! still cant get over wiv it...!!!heheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
wonderful n midblowing update...!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ohh I miss those hugges n kisses...!!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ heheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... ur Sugari besharam ho rahe hai...!! hahahahaha....🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
Muski...!!! 1 day u surely will kill me...!!! i laugh out a lot...!!! bathroom main...!!!! hahahaha 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 similar thing u did 4 Pyaar ka Ehsaas...!!!! that tym too i was out of control...!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 mum cme down...from sleep asking me wat happpen...!!!! hahahaha🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣.....uff those days...!!!! heheheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I have feeling Maan will be busy....very busy in office...!!!😊 Geet will miss Him..!! so do Baby...!!!πŸ˜‰
Luv Menhendi scene...!! so damn cool n sweet...!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳
so when is ur next update...!!!!😊
Ohh yeah...!! u taking tym 4 Pyaar ka Ehsaas...Im sensing big Dhmaaka...!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
u know u r TWIST QUEEN...!!!!
Luv ur
Sugari...!!! πŸ˜ƒ hehehehe.......

kiya hua Muski dony u like ma comment....!!!!πŸ˜• i ws dying 2 read ur response....!!!! bt u didnt...!!!😭😭😭
part 26 is fablous....!!!!πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
it was less baby punches... 😳 kya kero app ne adat dhal di hai....!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Madhoshi was professional 2day....!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
picx nahi tou avi sahi...per match bhut kerte hai....!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
kiya Geet ko darr na chae Maan se.....!!!!πŸ˜•
waiting 4 next shot wiv wraping!!!!!😳😳😳....ohh...i mean gift wrapin....!!!πŸ˜‰
Luv ur
Sugari...!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks di!!! πŸ€— New FF..gonna check that out 2 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
just occurred to me .( washing dishes always makes me think)....
......how come nobody in the office commented on Geet's mehendi !!
i can understand the ones on the feet and legs canbe hidden away but the ones on the hands.?

how about the mangani could be on a friday and Maan and Geet can leave for HP on Saturday.
this way we can have a nice looooooooong update .??!!!

thanx
gitz.

(generaly when the office is closed in the weekends, how would Maan and Geet contrive to meet )

Edited by ixray - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great updatessssss
really liked the pictures and little video thingy in middle.
nice job
loved ittttt

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Posted: 14 years ago
waaoo....maan going to HP???
time 4 some memories n moments of madhoshi,i suppose....
well,liked to see angry maan,n loved to see how he melted by geet's gestures....πŸ˜ƒ
missed baby again....
waiting 4 d nxt one.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE PLS CONT SOONNNNNNNNN
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi
update was awesome
beautiful
loved it
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 28

maan gave his laptop to geet & told her to check his mails &
filter them..she sat their very sincerely trying to sort the mails
kya karthi bechari..uski dil pe tho maan hi maan chaya rahtha..
kuch der mails check karthi..tho kuch der use niharthi...
bhut sambala khud ko...phir bhi ghadhi ghadhi koo jaathi maan
ke aadavoo pe..
. baby~mama yeh papa hain aap ke raj nahi
geet~hai hai..yeh mujhe kya hora hain baby..tera papa to mujhe
pagal kardenghe

maan looks at her asks her wat happened lifting his eye brows
she nodes her head & looks down..
it was nearing two...geet clears her throat
maan - umm
geet - ji ..woo daadi maa na 2 babje ghar boolaya tha
maan - umm!
geet - main javoo
maan - I am going home after finishing my work..I will take u with me
geet - ji (pata nahi inka kaam kaab khatam hoga..daadi maa to mujhe hi tand ghi)
maan - kuch kha tumne
geet - nahi
maan - good ..kaam khatam karo
geet - kaam kaise khatam karoon.. aap aise mera samne khade rahenghe to
mera dhyan mail main nahi rahtha
(she hit her head..looked down bitting her lips baby~😲)
maan - KYA???
geet - mera matlab hain..aap aise ruhke ruhke khade rahenghe to mujhe dar
lagtha hain

maan - concentrate on ur work..not on me
geet mumers...in se nazar hate to main kaam pe dyaan do na!!!baby~giggleπŸ˜†
kuch is tarah se khoiye rahthi kuch samjh nahi paathi..
na kudh ko, na aapne ehsaas ko samjh paathi, bus maan ko deehka karthi
samjh aatha tu bus maan ki baathe aur maan ka ehsaas..
maan ki woo khusboo jo use madhosh kar dethi..maan ki aankhee
jis mein woo kudh ko doba pathi..maan ka saath jis keliya bechain rahethi
kya hogaya tha usku ki maan ke bina ek pal bhi jina namumkin sa laagh raha tha aapne ise badthe huwa jasbathoo main uljh se jaathi...dar si jaathi

maan finished his work & looked at her...she was lost looking at him
uska yun dehkna maan ko bebas kardetha..kincha chala jatha uske pass
maan held her from her hand & lifted her..yeh kya hojatha hain tumko
palkhe jhapkathi aur use deehkathi rahthi..
maan - GEET
she snaps out..ji
maan - challen
geet - umm!! bend her down & walks out with him

she does'nt say anything just loves the feel of him being around her
his presence was making her so delighted & happy
she rested her head in the seat & kept admiring him
they reach khurana mansion
daadi - thanxs for coming geet
geet smiled
daadi - beta these are the fruits, sweets, flowers & gifts..inki gift packs banvana hain
nakul will help u..
geet - ji
maan walks pass them into devs room
daadi - maan aap khanha jaa rahe hain
maan - I was catching up with dev
daadi - latter, now help geet with gifts..she won't know kis kis ko kya dena hain
maan - why me
daadi gives a stirn look..maan rolls his eyes & walks with geet to the kitchen
maan gets a call & goes out to answere it
when he comes back...sees geet arranging the gift basket
nakul goes to attend to the door bell..geet does'nt notice him leaving
she tells nakul to pass the flower..nakul was not around..she extends her hand & stood
maan passes the flowers...geet then asks for fruits..maan passes it..
he kept looking at her..holding himself back from going closer to her
she completes the whole gift packs unware of maans restlessness maan standing write behind her..& helping her lost looking at her
maan ki madhoshi kuch is kardhar badne laaghi sud bud koya..uske pas jaane laagha..jasi ki jiya dhadak dhadak jayee!!!
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vo-e9y2gl0U&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

geet - nakul last wala gift dena
maan - passes the fruits (lost in her)
geet - yeh kya kar rahe hoo..nakul gift pass karoo..gift
maan - passes the flowers (walking still closer)
geet - nakul! & turns to see her self face to face with maan
geet fumbles..& falls backwards..maan holds her from waist and pulled her up
geet breathing faster & scared of losing herself into his arms..she looked down
Maan felt her whole body jolt in reaction as he deepened his grip around her waist
her skin shivering with anticipation as his free hand moved from the flowers to cup
the nape of her bare neck, every part of her body seemed to respond wantingly to the
warmth of his palm, her spine losing its wary stiffness as she melted further
into his embrace..he pulled back from her after a breathless moment or two,
his eyes still dark with desire as they held hers...

huye dono hi madhosh iss nafrat ki madhoshi mein,
saansoon ke raste woo ek dujhe ke nas nas mein samane lage

maan was finding it impossible to hold himself back from those eyes..which
just surrendered helplessly to his very touch...
uske kareeb rehna mano maan ke liya namumkin sa ho challa tha
madhoshi ka allam unhe babas sa kardetha...

precap
geet in saree...maan definitly..flat!!!!! but yeh kya geet flat???

VM CREDIT TO maanlover31
AVIS CREDIT TO meyis
thanxs for all ur replies & appriciation..simply love them all...
hope u like this update too..please please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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for the at choice of VM.. loved it a lot.. actually I watched the VM first.. so was able to get the feel of entire gift acking session.. loved it a lot...

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for the AVIS... great... geet's expression was awesome..

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for the wonderful, awesome FF dear.. loving each and every update....this FF has a flow of it's kind which will sooth our heart and mind...

waiting to see GEET in saree... Now I am waiting to see which VM, AVI and photo you will choose...

Love you sweetheart
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago

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