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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 29

maan pulled his hand reluctantly away from her waist
daadi walked in..geet straightened her duppta & looked down in embaressment
maan - daadi I am going to devs room, gift ka kaam hogaya hain
daadi - ok...then looked at geet
geet still looking down & feeling odd about their close moment
daadi - geet wat r u wearing for the engagement
geet - ji woo pinky will be getting some change of dress for me
daadi - when is she expected
geet - ji I will call her
daadi - rehana do..come with me
daadi takes her to the room & pulls out a red saree & some jewellry for her
daadi - wear this
geet - nahi daadi, yeh teehk nahi hoga
baby~pehan loo mama aap ka hi hain😳
daadi - aap ko aacha nahi laagha
geet - nahi woo baath nahi hain
daadi tells nakul to show her a room to change
geet takes the saree & jewellry & follows
nakul takes her to Maan's room in the mansion

it was 6pm
daadi - maan u are not ready yet? & where is geet?
maan - woh to aap ke saath thi na
daadi - I told her to change..its been more than an hr since I told her to get ready
maan - pata nahi kya karthi rahethi hain
daadi - aap dono jaldi se ready ho kar aajvoo...
I need her to help me with pooja before the cermony & also for welcomeing Meera
maan looks for her around the house
he bumps into nakul
maan - nakul tumne geet ko deehka hain
nakul - ji woo aapke kamre main change kar rahi hain
maan goes to his room & knocks the door
maan - open the door geet
geet - I can't open the door
maan - kyun ?
geet - main ready nahi hoon
maan - tum jaldi karo mujhe bhi ready hona hain..meri dress andar hain
geet - lekin main ready nahi hosakthi
maan - GEET..aapne bechkani harketain band karo..we are getting late
geet unbolts the door & starts crying..standing behind the door
maan slowly pushes the door getting restless hearing her cry
he looks around & follows her cry & looks behind
geet stood wearing the red skirt & blouse cluctching her saree & crying
maan could'nt take his eyes off her..her exposing body was driving him
crazy..he walked closer closer untill their breath could be one
geet held on the saree closely looking down
maan wiped her tears his touch was burning her skin
maan - why are u crying now
geet - ji mujhe saree phena nahi aata
maan smiled & cupped her face - tumhe aata kya hain
geet - I have been trying this for an hr ..I am so tired
maan - aacha challo main phena detha hoon
baby~papa ka sab kuch aata hain👏

geet mumers inhe ladkha hoke saree phena aata hain
maan pulls the saree from her hand leaving her stand with blouse & skirt
his glance travells top to bottom alluring eyes.. his desire for her
was seen in his eyes..geet turned to face the door
& moved closer to the door..maan moved closer his breath fell on her nape
she cuddled up to the door she could feel his hand moving caresing her waist past
moving up side her arms & further up bolting the door..
she took in a long breath & froze in anticipation..his hand fell down
caressing her arms & bare waist. he opened the saree and moved his left hand with the
one end of the saree to her waist caressing around her waist tucked it in
close to the button belly in her skirt & rested his thumb tucked in.. on the waist line..
she pulled in her stomch with his touch and closed her face with her hand &
moved back to rest her head on his shoulder he moved the right hand with the rest
of the saree caressing around the back from right towards the button belly
closing her in his embrace...she shivered & left out a slight moan
he removed his left long fingers that rested on her waist line & made
the fleets & tucked it in with his right hand this time ..she squirmed under his touch
she turned into his embrace to face him hugging him passionately
she began to pant desperately as she hung on to his neck.
the weight-sustaining power of her knees having long surrendered to the greater
power of her desire to be entirely at his mercy maan tried to hold his hand back
& finally gave in to her their closeness..his hand snaked her back & reached the
dori of the blouse & pulled it open..he pulled down the sleeves on the right side
& bit her passionatly she maoned in pleasure..they broke apart & turned their
back to each other..stood panting..and slowly moved backward & their
back collieded..they furiously turned to each other
maan - tum mujhe itna bebas kyun kar dethi hoo
and kissed her violently pulling her left sleevs and pressing his teeth into her
shoulder..her hands held him capitive..tears rolling down her eyes in pain
he pulled back & closed his eyes ..she turned her back ..he pulled her saree & wraped it around
her geet pulled her sleeves that hung losely..maan moved his hand around her
closing in..he tied the dori & kissed the nape of her neck & gave a warm hug
craddles her head & kisses her forehead..panting holding their emotions
is kadhar koo gaya the aapne bekudhi main..ek pal ke liya mano waqt bhi thum gaya hoo phir bhi hosh nahi khoo pathe the...kuch baath thi joo khud ko rook lethe us madhoshi main bhi..ruhk jathe unke kadham..kaise yeh anjaana sa rishtha nibha rahe the!! inkhe rishthoo ki haadhe samjh pana namumkin sa ho challa tha
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BAWZ820iIOQ&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

precap
maan jealous 'J'

VM CREDIT GOES TO aangadkripaa & the credit of AVIS goes to meyis
thanxs a lot for all ur support & love..hope u like this update..please please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
have not read it yet ...just wanted to say " thank you for updating so quick."🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet yaar maan ko sarre pehnana bhi aata hain yeh maan toh bahut expert hai aur bechari geet mujhe kuch nahin aata😉😉 cute update keep it up .truely magical is also wonderful
Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey di...just read ur new update...omg this was so intense...loved it
Thanks🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

its really gud

i luved it
gr8 work dear
luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
MAAN JEALOUS?? OMG!! 😃 This just keeps getting better and better. Thanks di!! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part..Dadi gave same sari which Maan buy..I hope Geet tell him about preg.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another amazing update...........Hot Hot............... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
great. cant wait to read a jealous maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhh main bhi madhosh hogayi

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