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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbb!!!...
touchy!...
maan applying mehndi on geet's hands and feet!...sooo cute!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

that was so awesome...really so loved it

do keep writing...waiting for next one 👏👏👏

hey maaneet scenes are so adorably cute...
and the baby is such a darling...me so loving ir
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 27

maan woke up & lied next to her resting his head on his elbow..admiring her..
her face, lips, hair that teased her & spreading across her face..he moved
them away to get a view of her..she cuddled up with his touch...she slipped
her hand around him.. aap muj se khabhi naraz nahi hona..she mumers in sleep
geet gets up suddenly meri mehendi & looks at it..she had a glow like a sparking light
geet - dehkiya na..kitna dark hain
maan - happy...!! aabhi to tumhara raj tumhe bhut pyar karegha
geet - umm!!!
maan - wash ur face ..I will drop u home

geet goes to the bathroom - suniya
maan - umm!!!
geet - suniya na
maan - kya huwa geet..he opens the door of the wash room
geet - main pani nahi choo sakthi
maan - kyun? current laghe kya?
geet - meri mehendi !!!
maan - but it is dry now...
geet - ur not supposed to touch water for atleast 12hrs
maan - mujhe pata hota to kabhi nahi lagatha
geet makes face & turns to the other side - maine nahi kha tha
maan - tum khabhi kuch khanha khathi hoo
helps her wash up & get ready
maan drops her home & she kisses him on his cheeks & says thanxs..
she sneaks inside & sleeps little longer since it was just 6am

9am at office maan was in a very fowl mode with the some issues
maan - adi how can we not handle such issues
adi - sssssir..those people don't want to sell their property
maan - why was this not known earlier
Sasha - but MK
maan - snaped back...I have not employed u people to give me excuses!!!
I want results no leam excuses

geet walks in looking at maan getting angry...she sneaks to her cabin
baby~aab kya kiya aap ne 😕 geet~maine kya kiya?
uski aahat to aapne dil main mehsoos karne lagatha..kuch pal uski aahat
mein kho sa gaya...use dartha dehk thoda sa sambal gaya

after some time maan calls geet & says don't give me any calls for next 1hr
geet - ji
geet makes coffee & sneaks into his cabin
maan - I said don't disturb me for next 1hr (gives a glare)
geet keeps the coffee, smiles & leaves
uski dabi dabi si woh muskurahat..uff!!!muskurahat mein to maan ki jaan busti thi..kuch dabi dabi si bath kha dethi..uff!! baatho main to maan kho sa jaatha

maan had a meeting with Ms Rasika Rathode at 11 am
she come in at 10.30am because of the fired up land issue
geet - maam u will have to wait maan sir is busy
rasika - do u have an idea whom are u talking to?
geet - maam I know u have an appointment at 11.00am
rasika - u small town girls have no sense of priority
just buzz off ..& inform Mr.Khurana

geet - sorry maam
rasika shouts at geet..
Sasha - sorry maam..please mind u words..she is just doing wat she is
been told..why don't we wait in the conference room...we shall start the discussion
MK will join us mean while

rasika - umm
sasha wipers to geet - Mk jab free hojayaen to boldena..I will be with her
in the conference room
geet - ji maam baby~papa ki friend is so sweet😳
maan looked really held up..it was at 10.50am..
geet went into his cabin..
maan - umm!!(stirn voice)
geet - Ms.Rathode is waiting
maan - umm!!

maan joins Ms.rahode & sasha
rasika - Mr.khurana do u even understand how much is in stake with this land issue
Maan was quite still working out on options
sasha - yes maam we understand
rasika - I have put in all my contacts to get this tender passed..
I have all the govt approval to start the dam construction. how can we delay it
I am answerable to the ministers
Maan - give me time till monday..
rasika - so Monday it is..otherwise we will lose this whole project
our credabilty in the market ..Khurana construction name will be ruined
rasika leaves..frustrated..

sasha - MK how could u say Monday
Maan - i will go to HP myself this weekend & sought it out

maan comes back to the cabin..calls munshiji to fix an appointment with land owners
geet comes with a plate of paratha & sits in front of him
maan still looked busy & annoyed..she was so scared to see him in that mode
kitna darthi thi woo..sahme sahme..dari dari..
lekin phir bhi uske as pas rahthi thi woo
kuch na kha thi..bus chup chap uske saamne bethjathi..
palki jukayee..dil thaame..kya sach main darthi thi woo!!!
she slowly pushed the plate towards him
maan - I am busy (stirn voice)
geet - phir mujhe kaun khilayegha
maan shot a glare at her...she got up at once & left from there
maan pulled her back..she looked down & scared as she fell into his embrace

he moved her curls ...us ki jhuki huwi nighahe mano har iltajha kah gayee ho
maan - aacha bethoo
he fed her & had the paratha
geet - waise bhi khali pet main..aur gussa aata hain
maan shot another stirn look..geet swalloed her words
lekin khud bhi jaantha tha..ki woo na khilaya to shayad geet khathi hi nahi
aise ajeeb si kashish thi usmain ki maan aapna gussa pal main pee latha..
varna to..khushiyon se naraz se thi maan ki zindagi
has lena dikhane ke liye logo ko bhi mano namumkin sa tha
dard ki kitab si thi Maan ki zindagi..aise bhi kya berookhi thi jo dil main
chupayee..ghum ko peetha tha!!!
geet - bhut kaam hain?
maan - umm!
geet - itna kaam kyun karthe hoo?
maan - aur kya karoon? tumhe deehk tha rahoon?
geet - nahi mera matlab tha woh nahi tha
maan - kya matlab tha? (snaps back)
geet - kuch nahi..aap kaam hi karoo..aap ko wohi suit kartha hain
maan smiles & starts working
geet gets up to leave...tum kanha jaa rahi ho...
geet - ji
maan - yanha bethi rahoo.. tumhe wohi suit kartha hain
uska massom sa chehra lagtha tha maan ko itna pyara
ki dil ke jazbat mano seemit rehan ho bus geet tak..
use aapne kareeb paa kar mano sukoon sa pata..


precap
gift wraping or ???

the AVIS credit goes to meyis
thanxs a lot for all ur comments...& supports...hope u love all the updates..
please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
*edit*
The land is likely gna be under Geet's name..hmm
and seriously?! u keep henna for 12 hours😛 i usually do it over-night.
⭐️
Sadaf
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really awesome...so loved it..
great read muskaan...ur amazing gurl
do keep writing...waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow...lovely update but short!...maan going to HP? leaving geet behind? lol..is the land in geet's or her family's name??...he will get to meet brij if maan goes to HP.....plz cont soon...

Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
di A1... ok wat is the precap indicating🤔😳😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
i've not been commenting for a while.................sorry😊

I really love this ff of urs................and the best part is a helpful sasha.....👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
nice update
cuteeeeee
can't wait for maan to go to HP and find that land is geet's
update soon
love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahah I soo liked the update today :-)
Do post more soon! Pretty please please please :-)

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