~Madhoshi maaneet thread # 2~ - Page 17

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shreya satish thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely.......awesome.....

Agar ye nafrath hai... pyar kaise hoga??😍

waiting for next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Hmmm, good update!
Maan is really too stubborn, and confusing.........

I loved Geet warning baby, that she will put on seat belt,
ha ha funny😆

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyy
m posting after a very looooong time
just love this ff
beautifully written
love how the baby talks too funny
love every bit of it
cont soon
love
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskan,

Congrats for Thread 2 on Madhoshi...yeh bhi itna hi chle as the PKE! 😉

These 2 r getting more closer..if that's possible! 😆

Baby, again rocks! Poor Geet, has to eat things which she don't like...hehe (that was in prv chps).

-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"baby~papa mano yah na mano boss to mama hi rahenghi" lmao it's so true😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
baby is so cute yaar maan n geet se jyada to baby me dimag hai i just love him cant wait for the next part!!!!
pls cont.soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 22

they met up with the pandit..geet gives the pooja thal & maan hands over the rings for pooja
pandit completes the pooja & gives the pooja thal & ring
pandit - all the best for ur mangni
maan & geet looked comfused
maan - nahi nahi..mangni mera chote bhai dev ki
pandit - oh to aap baadi bhu hain & blesses geet ..beta sindoor to lagaya hota..
gives the sindoor to maan ..& gives the thal back to geet
maan just puts the sindoor on..looking into her eyes ..baby~now offically my papa!!!👏
geet holds his hand..(little sindoor spills over her forehead & nose)
yeh kya kar rahen aap...? baby~dissappointed😒
maan snaps back..woo pandit ji ne bola to...
sindoor ki laali main kil sa utta uska chehra.. jasi taren aasma mein chamkethe hoon dehkta hi raha.. kuch samjh nahi paya...hamesha dono sare dasthoor thodathe aayee..aab yeh bhi!!!!uff unke madhoshi se jafa ki ulfat kya kahe muskan...jese ek dulhan apne sindoor se karti ho!!

geet - aap bhi na kya kya karthe raheto ho?
maan pulls her duppata on her head & says aachi lag rahi ho
uff sindoor ki laali pe uske sharmane ke laali...
masoomiyat ki intah hogayee ho jaise...
jise baat pe naraz hona hota hain..us pe to mano..unka dayan nahi
hota..aur choti choti batoo pe duniya sar pe utta lein!!!

maan lifts her & takes her to the car...
geet - meri juti
maan - laa raha hoon..
baby~uff papa se kitna kaam kathi hain
maan gets her jutti & come back to the car
she lifts her leg & finds it difficult to wear the jutti..
maan - chodho na..wear it latter on..
he pulls his hanky & wipes the sindoor from her nose
for some reason could'nt wipe it from her forehead...
himmat nahi jutta paya...uske haat pata nahi kyun ruk gayee
shayad use dulhan ki tarah dehk kush horaha tha..yah phir
koi paak se door unhe joode jaa rahi thi...

they drive to the tailor's place..they walk into the shop..
sales guy - sir ur sharvani is ready just give us few mins
maan - umm
he keeps glancing at geet who was running her hand through the sharvani's
she admired few of them & stopped at one particular shervani
maan - aapne raj ke liya shervani select kar rahi ho wispers in her ears
geet - nahi aap ke liya ...maan was taken a back
geet smiled..mujhe laaga yeh aap ko bhut suit kareghi..phenkhe dikha woo na please
maan - phir khabhi
geet - aabhi
maan turns away
geet takes the shervani & pulls him inside the changing room
she opens his buttons maan knew she will stop the moment she realizes wat she
is doing..he just waited for that moment...maan kept looking at her
she opened three buttons & pulled his shirt up & closed her eyes bitting her lips
maan smiled ..& moved closer she turned to run out...he locked the door & held it
as he removed the shirt geet could smell his scent in the closed changing room
with the swing of the shirt..the swril in the air just weekened her knees..she just
wanted to feel him..his bare chest ..his warm touch..she gasped..closed her eyes tighter
maan put his handaround her closing her in his embrace..she could feel the heat of his
bare skin through her dress.he took the shervani from her hand she did'nt let go first
maan came closer..she left it at once..& gave her his shirt..she held it closer
inhaling the muscline seductive perfume mixed with his percepetation..which she could
sense with her eyes closed..she almost kissed the shirt..maan turned her
maan - kaise laag rahoon? aache laag rahe ho..replied with her eyes closed
baby~papa is looking dashing!!!😳
maan - GEET (shouted at her)
geet opened her eyes at once & was dumbstuck looking at him
she moved closer..put her hand on his shoulder & set the sleeves..
she looked at him..he looked irresistable..she wondered how she was holding herself back
the v-neck just exposing the bare shaved chest & his firm jawline was really temting
she kissed him on his cheek & said aap shaadi kar loo
maan - kya?
geet - bhut aache laag rahe hoo..
maan - phir tum haan kar do ?
geet - ji..maan holds her from the waist & pulls her closer
maan - tum shaadi ke liya haan kardo
geet - very funny..yeh loo change kar loo (she turns around & gives the shirt)
maan tries to open the button of the shervani & it gets stuck...
maan - suno..yeh button nahi kul raha
she turns to looks at him & helps him to open it..she reluctantly moves closer
maan pulls her still closer by holding her from waist..she looks up to meet his eyes
her hands opens the buttons & slips in snaking his back. Maan bends down &
takes her lips into his & they get lost into their passionate kiss
geet closes her eyes & leans closer
takrane lage jab honth hoonthon se chingariya si Uth-Uth kar saare badan ko aag lagne lagi....liptane lage kucch iss kadar unke jism.. uske badan ki garmaish isske badan se aane lagi .....khamoshi se mud gayee..kuch na kha ha..
maan changed his shirt & they walked out
sales guy - sir aap ki shervani
maan paid & took the packet
geet looked flushed..maan put his hand around her & took her to the car
maan - suno
geet looked at him..she moved her hands to his face..
maan narrowed his eyebrows...she wiped the sindoor that came on to his face close
to his eyes while they were lost in their passion..ji woo sindoor ..
sahem se gayee thi...uska maasoom chehra..uspar
sharmana...uff uska sahemna..mano kehr dha raha tha

maan - ho gaya
geet - ji
maan - u really liked that shervani
geet - aap pe bhut aachi laag rahi thi
baby~papa pe to sab kuch aacha laagtha hain geet~aur kuch

maan - aab khanha jana hain?
geet - ji woo gifts leena hain
maan - aacha first we will have lunch
geet - umm!!

maan - wat do u want to have
geet - jo aap ki marzi baby~italian😛
maan - sushi..teasingly he says
geet - NAHI!!! baby~i don't mind😉
maan - challoo we will go to an italian resturant
baby~my papa is the best!!!
geet smiled


precap

lunch itself!!!!😆😆😳

NEXT PART 23
thanxs for all ur love & support...hope u like this part too...please do comment...please please
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

lol i always catch up with the update before u PM me 😛

this one was ...hmmm 👏👏👏
u nailed it at the right spot- rlly nice.
⭐️
sadaf
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update, quite different from the recent ones you updated!😊

Sindoor wala part was really nice!!!
Yay!!! Hindi lines back
They were either missing or were very less in the last few updates😳
Very beautifully written!!!😊
I read these lines 4-5 times, got lost in their madhoshi while reading them😳
Hats off to you for writing these amazing lines👏👏

Sherwani sequence was also good which soon turned into a passionate one😉😆
Loved the convo, where, Geet says aap shaadi karlo and Maan says phir tum haan kar do😊
Really liked Maan's reply😊

Sushi😆🤣
Hmmm, Italian lunch-Papa baby ki sun hi lete hai hamesha😆😉

And yes, baby's one liners are always a big hit!!! 😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍HHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA😍 dreamy
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Posted: 14 years ago
oy hoy!!!!
kya baat hai
but the sindoor thing
by god(omg i sound like nupur now) erm........yhhh i duno hw they gna explain it others.....n he jus put it sooo easily!!!!!!!!
ahhh cnt wait for more

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