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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy,update sooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for the Dealy..........
Thats A Lovely Part Dear.....
Ye Maaneet bhi na ek doosre ko Hate U kehte hain aur aadhi raat ko ek doosre ki Ghar mein ghus jaathe hain.......Love it sooooooo much...........I Just Love their Madhoshi........Love U sooooooooooo much for creating such a wonderful FF
The Baby Talks are Lovely as Usual.....
baby~chillavo mat papa hain
baby~papa ko chuha bola🤣
baby~valid point👏
baby~mujhse bhi ladthi rahthi hain..
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baby~mujh se badi aafat!!???

baby~hits his head...
baby~bye papa miss u...😔
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 21

uske aane se phelee he fiza main uski mekh gulsi jaathi
maan ke ankee muskarthi...samjh gayee thi shayad ki uska dedar hone wala hain
he looked at the entrance caught a glimse of her & pretended not to notice..
geet - ji
maan - umm!!
geet - veerji aap se milna chathe hain
maan - umm!!
geet calls brij inside
brij - I wanted to thank u for taking care of her & giving her the job
geet stood behind brij clutching her duppata
maan caught a glimse of her hiding behind ...
maan noded to brij
brij - i am leaving back to HP today & have a request to u
maan - umm!!(geet wondered wat it was)
brij - told geet to wait outside
she made a face & left
brij - ji woo...geet is really childish does'nt realizse wat she doing or saying
does'nt even know wat will it all lead to..
maan smiled as if he knew that about her
brij - jaane anjaane mein aap hamesha uske saath rahen hain...
I just hope u keep a watch on her in my absence..if there is any thing
u could reach me on this number..
maan - why are u getting so worried for her..we all are here
brij - nahi ..she trusts people blindly & i am scared koi uske bole panka fayada na
utta le.. waise hi aapne bechkani harkatoo ke wajh se bhut problem mein hain ..
maan - don't worry I won't let anything happen to her..
brij - use to har pal koi sambalne wala chahiya
maan smiled

when brij comes out..geet pounces at him with questions
geet - aap ne maan sir kya khaa?
brij - tumhara khayal rakne ke liya aur tumhe kathroo se bechane ke liya
hits her head lovingly...
geet mumers..yel loo babaji!!..sabse bada kathra to woo kudh hain...
aab mujhe unse kun bachayega baby~giggles..
brij - unki baat sunna teehk hain
baby~starts laughing louder...geet~tu hasna band kar
brij leaves hugging her...
teehk hain - maan wipers into her ears & walks away..
geet bangs her foot on the floor & walks to her cabin

geet checks maans appointments schedule & arranges the meetings accordingly
maan walks in looking into the phone
maan - cancel all my appointments for today & tomorrow
geet murmers..cancel hi karne thi fix kyun karthe hain

maan - KYA? main tumhara boss ki tum meri
baby~papa mano yah na mano boss to mama hi rahenghi


maan - we will leave in 30mins
geet - mujhe aap ke saath khanhi nahi jana
maan - date pe nahi bula raha hoon...
geet - woo to aap apni nanghi pungi pariyon ko le jana
maan rolls his eyes
maan - tum mujhe to kuch nahi manthi..kamse kam daadi ke liya too..
geet - umm!!!

geet cancels his appointments & walks into his cabin
sasha was standing next to maan & showing him the changes in the chopra's project
maan gets up from his seat at once...sasha smiles .
sasha - ok MK I will gets the changes done & leaves
maan - blinds bund nahi hain
geet - aap to Boss ho aap ko blind band karne ki kya zarorat hain
maan - GEET!!!
geet - aap ko koi kuch kyun bolegha
maan - tum se to baat karna hi beckar hain
geet - phir karthe kyun ho?
maan - kya karo...tumse baat kiya bina rah bhi nahi sakta
geet innocently - kyun?
maan rolls his eyes..tum meri secertary ho na isliya
geet confused
maan - itna socho mat ...challoo
geet - umm!!!

when they sit in the car..get finds it difficulty with the seat belt
maan moves across & pulls it for her..almost caressing her cheeks..
she looks down controlling her urge to grab him & indulge into his seducing fragrance
maan looks at her restlessness & moves back..
geet - yeh kyun pehnethe hain
maan - safety ke liya?
geet - kaise safety?
maan realzises she was serious
maan - explains ..wearing a seat belt is most effective thing we can do to save our lives
in case of any accidents

geet - to seat belt pehnese chot nahi laghe ghi?
maan - nahi nahi....but we can reduce injuries ..
geet - how?
maan - usaually when the car is stopped suddenly..say because of break or accident
geet - umm
maan - u will be thrown into the dashboard or to the windshield..jis ke karan bhut chot
lagthi hain

geet - umm
maan - seat belt keeps you from flying through the windshield or hurdling toward
the dashboard when your car comes to an abrupt stop..
geet - lekin wat if it pulls u back..it may strangle u right
maan - nahi..if u wear it properly ..it won't
geet still looks confused..(maan explains moving his hand where the pressuse will be)
maan - the pressure is only on ur shoulder & stomach(keeps his hand on her tummy)..
nothing on ur neck..samjhi
now geet looks worried....maan lifts her chin kya huwa..main tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga
geet - woo..agar koi pregnant ho to stomach ..I mean baby ka kay hoga
baby~curious...running away from the belt
maan wonders why was she asking that...maan looks back into her eyes
mano kuch baat thi un unkahee baato mein...maan ki ankhee woo baat jaan nahi paayee..geet changes the topic...& opens the seat belt when maan looked away
geet - aap office main kyun kah rahethe ki mujh se baat bina kiya aap ka kaam nahi hota
maan - maine kaha na..tum meri secetary ho isliya
geet - lekin main to kuch kaam nahi karthi
baby~sirf mujhe danthi rahthi hain.😡.geet~chup kar varna I will wear the seat belt ..
maan smiled..aacha kal se rah loongha tumse bina baath kiya
geet - maine aise to nahi kha
maan - tumhari baathe tumhe janoo...

maan starts the car & looks at geet
maan - aaj kanha kanha jaana hain
geet pulls out the note pad.. tailor, pandit, phir gift shop
maan - aacha we will go the tailor first then pandit
geet - nahi nahi mandir we cannot go latter ..
maan - kyun
geet - it will be closed in the afternoon
maan - ok lets go the temple first
baby~mama papa ke saath mandir.👏.yeppy!!! geet~smiled

as they climb up the steps..geet goes to pick up pooja thal
maan was busy texting on his phone..
geet removes the slipper & starts jumping..
geet - garam hain garam hain...& starts climbing faster...
& sits in the shade for a while..her toes were all red & already got blisters
she looked at feet & tears formed in her eyes...
maan looked at feet & caressed feet...uski yeh halat dehk woo tadap utta
tum kya zararoot thi chalne ki...
geet - phir main kya karthi
maan lifted her & took her up the steps..she looked at him in shock
maan - aise kya dehk rahi ho?
geet - aap ki nafrat ko!!! maan shakes his head & looks away..

inke to nafrat me bhi madhoshi ki sama tha..is khadar khoya rathe dono
bhulla kar har rasmo riwaz..na din ka khayal rahtha na raat ka ghuman...
precap
gift shopping!!!
thanxs for all ur love & support..please please do comment....
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awww, they love each other alot- and their nafarat is sooo adorable 😳

Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this part ya...
awesome.........
the last dailogue..:

maan - aise kya dehk rahi ho?geet - aap ki nafrat ko!!! maan shakes his head & looks away..

loved this dialogue...
cont. soon...
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats Lovely👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it soooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved the way Brijj asked Maan to take care of Geet..😆😆😆....
Loved these Lines soooooooooooo much
geet mumers..yel loo babaji!!..sabse bada kathra to woo kudh hain...
aab mujhe unse kun bachayega 😆😆😆😆baby~giggles..
😆😆😆
baby~papa mano yah na mano boss to mama hi rahenghi😆😆😆
baby~sirf mujhe danthi rahthi hain.😡.geet~chup kar varna I will wear the seat belt ..😆😆
baby~mama papa ke saath mandir.👏
maan - aise kya dehk rahi ho?
geet - aap ki nafrat ko!!! 😳😳😳
Thats Simply Superb Dear
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow, amazing part. loved it.
ha ha brij told to maan that to take care of geet.
loved maaneet scene.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ur updates always brings smile to my face lolz..its so cute...love da dialougs!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
aiyee aiyee i loved ur update very much
woo..agar koi pregnant ho to stomach ..I mean baby ka kay hoga
i loved this dialouge. ok wat really haapens if a lady is preggy
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really nice..i loved it..
and maaneet are so in love..
they are just so adorable..
keep writing...👏👏👏

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