Summer romance: Iqbal Neha FF Part 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Summer romance Part 1






Josh is waiting at the railway station.The train lands.A cute pretty girl jumps out of the train.She is innocent and cute like Red riding hood in her red frock.
She runs to Josh:Bro...
She hugs him.Josh is very happy.
J:Why did you run out of the train Mahi?It's so dangerous.You are still a kid.
M:How can i be not a kid?You treat me like a kid.
He smiles.
J:How did you do the exams?
M:Cool.I have come here to enjoy my summer with my brother.
J:We will have a lot of fun here.
Josh takes her to his house.

Mahi is Josh's only sister.She stays with her parents.Josh works in another place where he has a beautiful farm house.

Mahi looks around the house.
M:Nice house bro.Where is your friend Veer?
Mahi's eyes look for Veer.

Veer drinks liquor.Then he screams:Aaliyahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Josh and Mahi hear it.
M:What is it Bro?Is that Veer?Is everything alright?
Josh is quiet.
J:Veer...come out.
Veer comes out slowly.Mahi is shocked to see Veer who is drunk.
J:This is my sister Mahi.
V:Hi..
M:Hi..
She extends her arm to shake hand.But he goes inside.
M:What is this bro?Is this your friend whom you praise a lot?He is a drunkard.He can't even walk properly.
J:Veer is a nice guy Mahi.Now also i stick to my old opinion.But Veer is gettting destroyed.
M:Why?
J:His beloved Aaliyah deserted him.He is depressed.
M:How can you see him getting destroyed infront of your eyes Bro?Veer should not destroy himself.We should not allow it.
J:But for that another girl should take over Aaliyah's place in his heart.It's very difficult.
M:Let us see.

Mahi peeps into Veer's room when he is not there.She takes his liqour bottles and throws the liqour out.She fills the bottles with coco cola.Then she smiles.She goes out.
Veer takes the bottle and drinks.Mahi watches it with a smile.
She thinks:Foolish guy.He does'nt even know that it is not liquor.Because he is not in his senses now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting part. wanna know wat aliyah has done 2 veer. continue soon.
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wowowow great prat thanks i love it mahi you are so sweet 👏
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Thank You for lonks i love to read from neha iqbal
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wow jasmine........i like angad kripa jodi alot............lovely chap.........thank u so much............😃
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hey nice one..thanx a lot for the pm.. do continue soon
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hey dear very nice start..................mahi is so sweet..................thanks for the pm and cont soon............................
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hey dear awesome story
can't wait to read further
i am excited to read about iqbalneha story
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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Nice start
thanks for the PM
continue soon
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Hey Jasmine
glad to knw tht u still rememmber me n PM me
huhhhh....a nice start....cont soon
thnx 4 d PM

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