Summer romance: Iqbal Neha FF Part 6 - Page 4

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brainychild92 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
mahi gets serious all of the sudden. si ti cuz she's confused about her feelings or does she also have a past? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Hi!
Nice ff!
Lol! Mahi is o smart.
Aww, I hope Mahi does not go through a heart break. Please continue soon, and PM me.
Great updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Summer romance Part 4


Mahi goes to Veer.
M:Veer...i want to tell you something.
V:Tell..
M:That is...
She is so nervous that she sweats.
V:Why are you sweating Mahi?
M:No..no..nothing like that.You feel so?
V:Ya..
M:No never.
V:Tell..what's the matter?
M:I want to tell you that...
V:Tell..
M:You won't get angry if you don't like what i say?
V:How can i assure that now?You tell first.
M:That is...that is...
V:You have nothing to say.I'm going.
Veer walks forward.Mahi holds his hand.He looks at her.
M:Will teach me horse riding?
Veer laughs.
V:For such a small thing you took so much of time to ask me.
M:Bro does'nt allow me to ride a horse.He is scared.Because once i tried horse riding and fell down.My hand and leg got fractured and i got admitted to the hospital.
V:THings were that serious?Then no need of horse riding.
M:Please Veer..
V:Ok..we will do onething.You also sit with me on the horse.I will ride the horse.
M:Good idea.

Veer sits on the horse.Mahi sits infront of him.Mahi feels secure sitting close to Veer.
He rides the horse.Mahi gets scared.
M:Stop it Veer.I will fall down.
V:No need to be scared Mahi.I'm with you.Right?
M:But i'm scared.Please...
V:Mahi..don't be scared.
He holds her waist tightly.She feels something different.She is shy.
Veer also feels some difference in him when he holds her tightly.He stops riding the horse.Mahi looks at him.He also looks at her.
He thinks:Why do i have a strange feeling now?
He loosens his grip on her.
V:Let us go down.He goes down.He helps Mahi to get down.
M:Thanks a lot Veer.
V:What's the need of thanks?We are friends.Right?
M:I will tell you something?When you held me tightly to prevent me from falling down i felt so secure.I can't explain the feeling i had that moment.
He says in his mind:I too had a strange feeling that time.I don't know what it hints.



Veer paints a lady.He realizes that he is painting Mahi.He can't believe it.
V:How did i paint Mahi unknowingly?
His mind tells:You made Aaliyah's paintings when you were in love with her.Now you are making Mahi's painting.That means you love Mahi.
Veer can't believe his own mind.
V:What i love Mahi?
He thinks about his moments with Mahi from the beginning.He smiles.
V:Yes,i love Mahi.I will confess my love to her now.

Mahi is standing under the tree in the farmhouse.
M:I will tell Veer how much i love him.

Veer opens the door when the door bell rings.He is shocked to see AAliyah there.
V:Aaliyah?
She smiles with tears in her eyes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

really awesome that was gurl...

really loved it...do keep writing

waiting for next one

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
both realize their feelings but why you bring aaliya nooooo she will break them apart noooo i am sad .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
ohho................veer and mahi have realised their feelings aur ye aaliyah ko bhi abhi aana tha.....cont soon.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
It was a very nice chp.Yay! Both of them love each other but oh no!Aaliyah is back!Looking forward to the next chp.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
aaliyah... nice twist.. lets see how it goes!

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Hey dude!!!
An awesomtastic part!!
Uuughhhhh Aaliyaa came at the WRONG time!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
nice part
Both Mahi and Veer have realised that they love each other ans want to confess their feelings. But why has Aaliyah come back
please continue soon

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