Summer romance: Iqbal Neha FF Part 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear awsome part
i hope veer and mahi gets to confess to each other
pleaseeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Gr8888888 part.
Loveeee it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
thanks for pm
great parts dear
luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Sara Khan plays Aaliyah

Summer romance Part 5




Veer:Aaliyah,you are back?
Mahi who is about to enter the house sees it.
She gets upset and runs away.She goes to a lonely place in the farmhouse and weeps.
M:Aaliyah is back and Veer is excited to be with her.She is his first love.True love also.

Aaliyah enters inside.
Veer:Where is your husband?
Aaliyah's tears roll down her cheeks
A:God punished me for ditching you.
Veer can't understand anything.
A:He left me for someone else Veer.
He feels sympathy towards her.
V:Why did you leave me Aaliyah?Do you know how much pain i underwent?My mental trauma can't be described.I had become a drunkard.
Aaliyah can't believe that he had been a drunkard.
A:I did'nt do it purposefully Veer.My dad begged me to marry Sushant.I had no other option than to marry him for my dad.He would have cursed me if i had not obeyed him.
V:You thought about your dad.But what about me?You did'nt think about my feelings that moment?
A:I thought about you also Veer.You don't know how much pain i had when i left you.I had to swallow pain silently without shedding tears.I was forced to produce a smile on my face when the pain of losing you was killing me slowly.
V:I understand you.
A:I came here to apologize.Otherwise i won't get peace of mind.Please forgive me Veer.
V:I have never cursed you Aaliyah.Don't worry.Your husband will come back to you.He will realize his mistake.
Aaliyah tries to smile.
A:I heard that you are seeing someone.Some people have seen you with a pretty girl.
V:Yes,i love a girl.But i have not confessed my love till now.
A:Don't delay to confess your love Veer.You should not lose her.She will accept your love for sure.Because you are that nice.
V:She is too good for me i feel.But i want her.She is the one who consoled me when i went through a lot of personal issues in my life.She guided me and showed me the right path when i was completely wrong.
Aaaliyah smiles slightly:All the best.
V:Thank you Aaliyah.

Josh sees Mahi crying.
J:Mahi..my little sister?Who made you cry?
M:I lost my love bro.
J:Love?You love anyone?
M:Yes.I love Veer.But Aaliyah is back in his life.
Josh is shocked:What?Aaliyah is back?
M:Yes bro.
J:Do you know Mahi..?I always wanted Veer to be my brother in law.That's why i blabbered to you always about Veer.But because of Aaliyah..everything became just a dream.
Mahi can't control her tears.
M:I can't stay here anymore bro.I'm going now itself.
J:You are going before this summer ends?
M:Yes,now itself i'm going.Seeing Veer will give me a lot of pain.

Josh goes back home.
Veer:Where is Mahi?
J:She left this place.
Veer is shocked:what?
V:But her luggages are here.
J:She does'nt bother about that as she has all these stuffs at home also.
V:Why did she leave so early?
J:She is missing her hometown.That's all.
Veer thinks:Mahi left so soon.But i will meet her and confess my love.

After two weeks..
Veer goes to Josh.
V:Josh,i want to meet Mahi.
Josh raises his eyebrows and ask him:Why?
V:Josh...i hid a secret from you.I love Mahi.
He is shocked:What?
V:Mahi had a very good influence on me.I want her.I want to confess my love to her.I don't know whether she loves me or not.
J:What about Aaliyah?
V:I forgot her and moved on in my life.But i feel sad for her.She had come to see me.Her husband left her.She is waiting for his come back.
Josh is upset.He thinks:What blunder did Mahi do?
V:Josh!Why do you seem to be upset?
J:Today morning,dad had called me.Tomorrow Mahi is getting engaged to her colleague Prithvi.
V:What?
Veer is shocked.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hey dear thanks for the pm
the part was really good
i hope veer gets to confess before mahi get engaged
pleaseeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
ooye iss prithvi ki hata dooooooooooooo i want to se veer and mahi please ................aww great part i want to beat aaliya now
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
that is so awesome...so loved it
keep writing...waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
nice update.. hope veer confesses bfore she gets engaged.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Beautiful update
loved it
Hope veer confesses soon
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8888 update.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.



Fatima

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