Summer romance: Iqbal Neha FF Part 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey great start.. continue soon..

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyy awesme
very nyc & interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey jasmine..nice concept..

so mahi's come there to spend summer with her brother..nice..n she sees that veer, who her brother talks about is a drunkard..wow..

veer is in depression since aaliyah left him..n they need to help him now..mahi throws away the alchohol n veer doesn't even realize..lol nice..

thnx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Summer romance Part 2





Mahi:Can i get in Mr.Veer Khanna?
Veer looks at her.He smiles:Yes..sure..
She enters his room.
M:Yesterday you did'nt even mind me.Now you smiled at me.How sweet!Thanks a lot.
He is embarassed.
V:I'm sorry..i don't know why...
M:I will tell you why.You were not conscious.Because you drank too much.Today you did'nt drink alcohol.That's why you are smiling.
Veer is not able to admit that he drank today also.
M:You know what?I filled your bottles with cola.So you drank cola thinking that it's liqour.
Veer is shocked:What?
She giggles.
M:Now please don't kill me.Afterall i'm your friend Josh's little sister.
He is shy.
V:You are smart.
M:Yes,i am.So i won't allow you to drink.
V:It's impossible.
M:It's possible.That's why you drank cola as if you are not bothered about what you drink.
Veer has no answer.
M:Why do you drink?To forget your pain?You are a fool.If Aaliyah has moved on in her life,why can't you also..?
V:No..i can't forget her.
M:I know that it's not easy to forget the person whom you love.But what's the use of drinking?Your girlfriend deserted you and is leading a happy life.But you are suffering here.How stupid!
V:Yes,i'm stupid.You are right.
Tear drops fall from his eyes.
Mahi feels sad.
M:I heard that you paint well.Can i see your paintings?
Suddenly some paintings on the wall strike her eyes.Veer has made beautiful paintings of Aaliyah.
M:Still you keep the paintings of someone who betrayed you?You are fooling yourself.This can't happen.
She tries removing the paintings from the wall.
V:What are you doing?You can't.
M:No,i will.
Veer slaps her.Mahi is shocked.She runs out with tears.Veer becomes guilty.
V:What did i do?

Mahi is standing in the garden and crying.
Veer goes there.
V:I'm sorry Mahi.
Mahi looks at him with tears.
V:I don't know how i behaved like that to you.What you said is true.Why should i keep the paintings of the girl who does'nt want me?So i dumped those paintings.
She is surprised:Really?
V:Yes.But i don't know whether i will be able to forget Aaliyah.
M:I understand.But you stop drinking.Aaliyah will fly away.
Veer smiles slightly.
M:Promise me that you won't drink.
She extends her arm.He holds her arm slowly.
M:Will you take me to the farm house.Brother is very busy.
V:Ok,i will.

Veer and Mahi go to the farm house.She sees goats,horses and cows there.
M:So cute.Bro's farm house is interesting.Too beautiful.
M:Veer!This is Summer.Why don't we have something cool?
V:Sure.

Veer and Mahi have icecream together.
Veer's cheeks are full of icecream.Mahi laughs.
V:What's so funny?
She smiles and wipes his cheek with her finger.
Mahi is eating icecream happily.Veer laughs.
V:You nose is covered with icecream.
She grins:Really?Then wipe it.
V:Me?
M:Why not?I wiped your cheek no?
Veer wipes her nose.
They finish having icecream.
M:Shall we go for a drive?
V:Drive?
M:Come on Veer.Please..
V:OK..
Veer drives the two wheeler in a high speed.Mahi is waving her hand with joy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so sweet awesome . I love it thank you for this part dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww.......it was such a cute chp.I felt bad for her when he slapped her but it all turned out well in the end.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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lovely update... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part
Mahi ne acche se Veer ko buddhu banaya. She made sure that he would not drin any alcohol and so filled his bottles and cans with cola.
Veer should not have slapped Mahi, she was only tring to help him. He realises his mistake and it all turned out to be good.
Both of them are having a good time at the farm house
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really sweet..lovely chap jasmine...........👏 veer n mahi r really cute............😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I thank all my friends for reading this ff.I never thought that i will get readers for this ff as KYPH got over long ago

Summer romance Part 3


Mahi arranges dinner.
Mahi goes to Veer's room.
M:Hey Veer..come for dinner.I cooked it.
V:You cooked it?
He laughs.
M:Why are you laughing?
V:I can't believe that you cooked.
Josh comes.
J:Veer..you should taste today's dinner.Mahi is a great cook.
V:Really?Then i have to eat it.
Veer and Josh sit to have dinner.Mahi is tensed about Veer's response.
Veer tastes the dishes.
V:Wow!To be frank you made delicious dishes for us Mahi.Your husband will be lucky to have you as his wife.The way to a man's heart is through his stomach no.
Mahi becomes serious.

That night she thinks about Veer's words.
"Your husband will be lucky to have you as his wife.The way to a man's heart is through his stomach no".

Veer thinks about his nice moments with Mahi with a smile.

Mahi wakes up from the bed.
She sees Josh with a cup.
J:Happy birthday to you Mahi.
She smiles.
M:Thank you bro.
J:Here is the cold chocolate milk for you.During Summer you prefer cold chocolate no?
She smiles.She sips the cold chocolate drink.
M:Where is Veer?
J:He is busy with the birthday party preparations.
M:What?Party?
J:Yes.
M:No need.
J:Tell Veer.I don't think he will agree.
"I won't cancel the party".
Veer comes inside saying this.
M:But Veer..
V:This maybe your first and last birthday with me.So i want to celebrate it.
It touches mahi's heart.
She thinks:Last birthday with Veer?
She feels sad.She does'nt know why.

Mahi wears a beautiful white salwar kameez for the party and enters the party hall.The hall is dim.Only candle light.
Veer and Josh to her.
They wish together:Happy birthday to you Mahi.
M:Thank you so much.Beautiful decoration!
J:The full credit goes to Veer.He only did the full decoration.He made this evening special for you.
Veer smiles.Mahi looks into his eyes.
Josh goes to receive the guests.
M:Why are you doing this much for me?
V:Because you did so much for me.You changed me a lot.You saved me from a down fall.Shall i tell you one more thing?
M:Yes.
V:Now i don't think about my past.Only your friendship is there in my mind.
Mahi becomes serious.
Veer notices it.
V:What happened Mahi?You look so serious and dull.
She smiles:Nothing like that.

Mahi blows the candle while Josh and Veer sing the birthday song.She cuts the cake and gives the first piece to Josh.The second piece is for Veer.
All the couples are dancing.
Josh goes to Mahi and Veer:You both dance.
V:I can't dance.
J:Don't worry.Mahi is a good dancer.She loves to dance at parties.She will guide you.Right Mahi?
She smiles simply.
The song 'Jaagi jaagi soyi na main saari raat, tere liye
Bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas, tere liye
Haan jaagi jaagi soyi na main saari raat, tere liye
Bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas, tere liye
Akhiyan bichayi main, tere liye
Duniya bhulayi maine, tere liye{Prince} is heard in the background.
Veer and Mahi dance.Veer's touch is magical for Mahi.
She thinks:Why do i feel different when i become intimate with Veer while dancing?

At night she thinks about their dance.Then she smiles slowly.
M:Yes..i love Veer...
She is shy.

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