Aakhri Ishq - MaHer FF (Chapter 8 - Last Chapter Updated - Pg 2)

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Posted: 29 days ago
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Part 1

Just a disclaimer this story is mainly for OG MaHer(PaRish) not new MaHer. If you are just a fan of New Seher/Bhavika then I will say just read the first 2 parts.


Hi everyone. This will be my last story on MaHer, and

then I will wrap up this book. I have planned of 5 chapters of this for now, if this gets good response or I feel like writing more will extend. But this will be my last MaHer work.

And yes before you start reading this, let me warn some may not like the Seher at first but there is a twist planned so do not stop reading 😉

Part 1

Niyazi Manzil,

It was dawn. Mahid looked at the balcony.

"Ya Allah, I am thankful for the life you have given me. You have made a capable Mufti, and I can bring change in society like I want to. Some time back, life seemed really empty to me. I felt lost. Misguided. But then..."

Just then, a mature voice disrupts his thoughts.

"Mahid..."

Mahid looked behind, and it was her...Seher.

(Assume Bhavika Sharma as Seher here. Note: Guys, just trust the process, twist abhi baaki hai 😉)

Seher: It's fajr time. Let's pray. After that, we have to go to the airport and catch the flight to Rajasthan. Insha is getting Kaiz ready, meanwhile!

Mahid and Seher start praying Fajr together. As they finish the Namaz, he looks at Seher, who is praying and making Dua.

Mahid: (in his mind) You brought Seher back to my life. I am thankful for that...but...but...I don't know why...it doesn't feel the same...I used to be moved by her eyes...I used to mellow down by her voice...I used to be entertained by her Kurafati! But now...it doesn't feel the same anymore...I get that Seher has matured a lot over the years, but still...I don't know what you are trying to show me...Almighty...I just hope I am not doing wrong...

Seher finished her Dua, and then she looked at Mahid.

Seher: What are you thinking, Mahid?! You finished your prayers and dua, let's go quickly! If not, we will miss the flight!

Mahid nods, and he takes both his and Seher's luggage.

Rajasthan,

Mahid, Seher, Insha and Kaiz landed in the beautiful town of Rajasthan. They stepped out of the airport and took the car.

They were amazed by the colourfulness of the town. The driver was also quite friendly.

Driver: Where are you from?

Seher: Lucknow.

Driver: Is it your first time here?!

Seher: Yes.

Driver: I suggest that all of you visit our mega fair that's taking place. That's one of the most happening events in Rajasthan. You came at the right time!

Insha: The thing is...

Kaiz: Ammi, before my surgery begins, I want to visit the fair?! Please Ammi!

Insha: But Kaiz, your surgery is tomorrow, how can we...

Kaiz: Please, Ammi, please!! I want to go on the rides!

Seher: Don't worry, Insha, the surgery is tomorrow. After we get refreshed from the hotel and take some rest, let's go to the fair now and then from there we will go to the hospital in the evening. I can manage the hospital.

Kaiz: Please, Ammi! Don't refuse.

Insha: Let's see what your Dimah says!

Kaiz: Dimah?

Mahid: Okay, fine, let's go. But don't get over-excited and tire yourself too much there, Kaiz, make sure of that!!

Kaiz: (happy) Okay, Dimah!

In the afternoon,

The four of them got ready and went to the fair. It was very busy and crowded there.

Kaiz was the happiest exploring the fair while Seher joined him too and took pictures. Insha and Mahid talked to each other.

Insha: Look at them, they are so happy!

Mahid: Yes. Looks like Seher herself wanted to go, so she managed it.

Insha: She is so nice and caring towards Kaiz. May Allah bless her. Can I say something as your sister since you made me one?

Mahid: Go on.

Insha: I think you should give her a chance, Mahid.

Mahid doesn't say anything.

Kaiz: Ammi, I am hungry. Let's eat something.

Mahid nods. They find an eatery, and Mahid tells them to sit.

Mahid orders two plates of pizza for Kaiz and Seher and two plates of Dal Churma for him and Insha.

The waiter places the Dal Churma and Pizza on their tables.

Seher takes the dal churma while Mahid looks at her. She quickly takes the pizza.

Seher: Silly me, I didn't even see the pizza. My favourite!

Kaiz and Seher are eating the pizza, while Mahid and Insha eat the Dal churma. Seher, while eating, kept eyeing the Dal churma. Mahid saw this.

Mahid: You can have it, Seher. I don't feel like eating anymore. I had a heavy breakfast.

Seher: Sure?

Mahid nods, and Seher eats the Dal Churma.

After lunch,

Kaiz and Seher enjoy some of the rides, and they also do some shopping.

Seher looks at some jewellery, and just then she sees Mahid from behind.

Seher: I am looking for the colourful ones, Bhaia. Like Kashmiri churri!

Shopkeeper: Madam, you came from Rajasthan, how will you get Kashmiri Churri here!

The shopkeeper shows some colourful bangles to Seher. Mahid buys it for her, and Seher smiles, looking at him.

Kaiz: Dimah, I want to get some cotton candy!

Mahid won't refuse Kaiz as always, and he got him some cotton candy.

Mahid: Let's go and find your Ammi now!

Mahid walks with Seher and Kaiz in between to find Insha.

Just then, he collides with a lady in a Rajasthani lehenga who is also eating cotton candy and with another guy. Her shopping bag falls from her hand to protect her cotton candy, so Mahid gets down to pick it up for her. She covers her face partially with her dupatta.

Mahid: I am sorry I didn't see...

Lady: It's okay...

It sounded familiar. Mahid was shocked as he looked at her.

It was those same pair of green eyes that moved him. Her voice had the same melody. And her antics felt the same.

(Assume Rishita Kothari as the Rajasthani lady , here is the twist 😉)

Lady: Thanks, sir!

Mahid: Seher...

The girl quickly got up.

Lady: Yug, let's go, Maaji must be waiting for us!

She left. Mahid freezed.

Seher: Is everything okay, Mahid?

Mahid left Seher's hand, and he started to run. To look for that same face. He shouted at the top of his voice.

Mahid: Seher!!!

Mahid tried to run among the barriers of the huge crowd of people at the fair. He ensured not to collide with them, but was looking for her! He looked around. She wasn't there anymore.

Mahid: (teary-eyed) Seher...

Just then, Seher came,

Seher: Mahid, what just happened?! Why did you just leave like that?!

Mahid was breathing heavily.

Seher: Relax, Mahid...

Insha: I think we should go now, Seher! Mahid doesn't seem well.

Seher nods as she calms Mahid down, and they leave the fair.

Later,

Mahid was resting in his room. He recalled how he collided with that Rajasthani lady. Her eyes...

Mahid recalls how he collided with Seher when they first met in the busy street of Lucknow. It was those same pair of green eyes. It was the same. But Seher...

Mahid tries to reflect on his moments with Seher years back and now. It wasn't the same anymore. Whenever he came close to her, his heart would beat strongly for her back then. He would get more excited. And now whenever he came close to her, he felt uncomfortable. As if he were doing something wrong.

Soon,

Seher opens the door.

Seher: Mahid, I have sent Kaiz and Insha to the hospital now. If you are feeling better, let's go!

Just then, Seher is shocked by what she sees

She finds Mahid pointing a gun at her.

Seher: Ma...Ma...Mahid....

Mahid's hand was shaking, and he was teary-eyed.

Seher: Mahid, what are you doing?! Leave it!

Mahid: Seher, remember this gun?! 7 years back, when you and I were investigating my Ammi's death?! Then what did you tell me?!

Seher was silent and blank.

Mahid: You told me playfully, Mahid, I married you for revenge. You pointed this gun the same way.

Seher eye widens, and she is confused.

Mahid: You wanted to take your revenge on your elder brother. What's his name again?!

Seher: (whispering) Ya Allah, please help...

Mahid: Tell me, Seher. What was his name?

Seher: Ahmed....

Mahid laughs as he remembers the name Seher used was Selim, not Ahmed, during her play.

Mahid: I knew it! My mind didn't accept, but my heart did! My heart knew it wasn't you. You aren't my Seher. So tell me who you are, if not, I will fire this gun!

Seher: Mahid, calm down. I will tell you everything. Just keep the gun down!

Mahid: Tell me, WHO ARE YOU?!

Seher: Yes, you are right, Mahid. (teary-eyed) I am not your Seher...

The gun drops from Mahid's hand.

Mahid and Fake Seher sit down on the bed.

Fake Seher: I am Dr. Sana. I am a doctor based in London and a part-time actress who has worked in theatres...

Dr Sana starts telling more about her real identity.

Dr Sana: I came to India, Kashmir, for a year to help the people here with my skills. I was supposed to go back to London after I was done.

But the day before I was supposed to leave, I met Dr Fareed.

Flashback

Dr Sana and Dr Fareed are talking with each other.

Dr Sana: Dr Fareed, it's nice to meet you.

Dr Fareed: Actually, Dr Sana, I need your help regarding a patient. Only you can help me in this. Moreover, you have studied neurology.

Dr Sana: Tell me more about the patient.

Dr Fareed: His name is Mahid. Mahid Niyazi. He is a Mufti in Lucknow. But then an incident happened. His wife... Seher Niyazi.... passed away in an accident.

Dr Sana feels bad for Mahid even though she doesn't know him.

Dr Fareed: That incident has deeply traumatised Mahid. His mental stability is not good. Like, sometimes he is normal, but sometimes he gets seizures and attacks. He keeps uttering her name. It's getting worse.

He needs to move on from Seher. The chapter named Seher needs to be removed from his life, or he needs to accept that Seher is no longer in this world! I need your help for that!

Dr Sana: I am really sorry for him. There are many therapists or neurologist that can help him with this! Why me?! I am leaving for London soon anyway.

Dr Fareed: Dr Sana, as I mentioned, he needs to move on from Seher. If we keep telling him or convincing him that Seher is dead, he won't accept. We have tried this method, but it has only worsened his situation. And I approached you because I know you are a part-time actress too. You need to act as Seher. To make him move on! I know it's a crazy tactic, but this is the only option that won't require him to be tortured. This is the last option.

Dr Sana: Yes, it is crazy! Me...how will I act as Seher?! It's not those TV dramas where I am her doppelganger or anything! This is unrealistic!

Dr Fareed: Dr Sana, I have heard a lot about you. That you like to experiment with methods for the well-being of your patients. Consider this as one too. Please, you can change someone's life.

Dr Sana gets thinking.

Dr Fareed: This is just for a few months. Once Mahid is okay and cured, you can move on and go back to London.

Dr Sana: But what if he doesn't recover?

Dr Fareed: Then we have the worst option, which is to go with an extreme option like shocks. I am not in favour of that. Someone like Mahid doesn't deserve to be tortured like that. But he needs to get Seher out of his mind and life.

Dr Sana: What is it I need to do?

Dr Fareed: My daughter Amaal...She is Seher's younger sister...She knows Seher well, so she will guide you on how to dress and act exactly like Seher. I have talked to Mahid's family we will create a vision for him that you are Seher based on how we all interact. We will force his mind to believe you are Seher.

Dr Sana: It seems to be betraying him...

Dr Fareed: I know, but that's for his well-being. Seher was bright and would have been a great doctor, but alas, life had other plans. Poor girl couldn't fulfil her dreams, she faced so many challenges! If Seher were alive and in your place, she would have done it.

Dr Sana gets thinking

Dr Fareed: You still have a whole day. Please don't say no. Think about it. You can change someone's life!

Dr Fareed leaves. Dr Sana decides to help Mahid. So for 15 days, Amaal stayed with Dr Sana to train her to become Seher. She helped with makeup and taught her how to dress like Seher. How to have the same hairstyle as Seher.

She taught her all the favourite things of Seher and how Seher would interact with Mahid, like calling him Jinn Ke Bhatije and having nok jhoks with him.

That way, after 15 days, Dr Sana changed her modern look to a traditional Dr Seher.

Amaal: Now you are good to go, Sana, I mean Seher...

As Dr Sana was about to go,

Amaal hugged her emotionally and cried.

Amaal: You really remind me of Seher.

Dr Sana consoles her.

Dr Sana: Amaal, consider me as your sister! I am just like your Seher Appi.

Amaal smiles.

Dr Fareed: Let's go now. Mahid's sister, Insha, has come with Mahid and her son. I have told her what we need to do. She is ready to help us. You need to somehow collide with Mahid. And he will get convinced you are his Seher cause of our help, and you do look like her somewhat.

Dr Sana nods. She looks at Mahid from a distance, who looks helplessly. She goes there to start the drama to convince him she's his Seher.

End of flashback.

Mahid couldn't believe what he heard with his own ears.

Mahid: So all these was a drama? You all were involved?

Dr Sana: Mahid, we did it for your well-being! We wanted you to cure!

Mahid: That was a cheap way to do it! Very cheap!

Dr Sana: I am sorry, but that was the last option. So you can move on from Seher. The plan was to make you hate Seher so you would move on from her forever. But the way you poured your emotions in front of "Seher", I didn't have the heart to continue this drama, so I changed the script to ensure I could comfort you the way Seher did. You know, Mahid, Seher is very lucky she had someone like you who loves her so much! She must be happy for you from the heavens.

Mahid: My Seher is alive!!! I know! I saw her with my own eyes!

Dr Sana: Mahid, I know the truth is very bitter to accept! But you need to accept it!

Mahid: Dr Sana...I have seen her with my own eyes today! In that fair...That Rajasthani lady...She had green eyes...just like Seher's. Her voice...just like Seher's. And her antics were also just like Seher's...my heart always knew you were not my Seher, that's why I wasn't fully comfortable with you...That lady, I am sure she is my Seher!

Dr Sana: That could be someone else, Mahid!! How will Seher be in Rajasthan?! And she is dead!!!

Mahid: (cuts off) It's all lies! We never found her body!! Ask Dr Fareed if you don't believe me. They declared my Seher dead because they found a dupatta of hers...But they never found her body!

Dr Sana: Okay, Mahid, relax...You need to rest now! Let's talk about it tomorrow. I assure you, I promise you that after Kaiz's surgery, I will talk to Dr Fareed. We will find Seher together, okay!

Mahid listens to her and goes to sleep as she gives him comfort.

Dr Sana: (in her mind) How do I tell you, Mahid, while acting as Seher and giving you comfort...I really fell in love with you...

In a small house in Rajasthan,

The same Rajasthani lady whom Mahid collided with looks exactly like Seher...OG Seher.

She was making roti, and then she recalled the guy who looked at her, surprised when they collided.

Just then, Yug comes to her.

(Assume Aman Gandhi who plays Ritik in Kyunki 2 as Yug)

Yug: Munni...what was the need to make rotis?! You were out the whole day, you should rest instead?!

Munni: I need to prepare dinner. We can't sleep hungry.

Yug: You could have told Maa Sa?!

Munni: Let it be, Maa Sa isn't feeling well. I will handle it.

Yug: Munni, you are always too nice! Think about yourself and your health, too! Come, let me help you.

Yug makes roti with Munni, and Munni looks. Just then, she gets a flashback of Mahid and Seher similarly making rotis.

Munni holds her head.

Munni: (in her mind) What's happening with me?!

Yug holds Munni as she was about to faint.

Yug: I told you, Munni, your health isn't good. Come, let me take you to your room and get some rest.

Yug holds Munni and walks her to the room.

Munni again recalls how Mahid used to put his hands on Seher's shoulder and insisted that she rest after they were out the whole day and night in Adamganj, and he didn't want her to work.

Munni shrugs off, and Yug also moves away. And she holds her head again.

An older lady comes out and sees this.

(Assume Bhabo from Diya Aur Baati Hum as Maa Sa)

Lady: Munni!

Yug: Maa Sa, Munni isn't feeling well.

Maa Sa helps Munni and takes her to the room. Munni is asleep. Maa Sa and Yug are there.

Yug: The doctor is coming soon.

Maa Sa: Poor girl!

Yug: (worried) I didn't know her health was deteriorating. But she really wanted to go to the fair!

Maa Sa: Even though she is not our Munni...She is just like her! Different face but same innocence and kindness. God took away our Munni and gave this girl instead.

Yug nods.

Maa Sa: Always keep her happy, Yug. She should not find out.

Yug looks at her.

End of Episode.

I will post the parts of this story on alternate days. I posted Part 1 on Monday , meaning will post next part on Wednesday. Might also be Thursday if there are delays.

Do let me know if there is any particular scene you wanted for OG MaHer will try to bring it in this SS.

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Posted: 29 days ago
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Loved it loved it loved it ❤❤❤❤❤😍😍oh my god what a twist girl

Love the way you shown their soulmate connection 🥰🥰🥰enjoyed each and every bit of it

Eagerly waiting for Wednesday

Lots of love for giving us og maher 🤗🤗👌

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Posted: 29 days ago
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This is a new world of MaHer. I am happy you continued writing.. although it is the last.

I hope twist will bring our PaRish together 😉

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Posted: 28 days ago
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Bookmarking this one!

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Posted: 27 days ago
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Part 2


Hi everyone, I will extend this story to 7-8 parts. It may seem slow for this part but don't worry Maher will meet soon.


As Mahid was asleep, Dr Sana called Dr Fareed.

Dr Fareed: Is everything okay, Dr Sana?

Dr Sana: Dr Fareed, Mahid has found out everything. He knows I am not Seher!

Dr Fareed is shocked.

Dr Fareed: Wait, what...how come? I thought he really brought it! He was getting comfortable; everything was going fine!

Dr Sana: It was...until he claimed he collided with the real Seher at a fair in Rajasthan! I tried to convince him it's not her, as Seher is dead! But he didn't accept it! I told him I would talk to you and manage, and got him to sleep...

Dr Fareed: Oh dear, he shouldn't have found out! It's going to be harder now.

Dr Sana: Actually, he claimed that Seher's body was never found. Is it true?

Dr Fareed: Yes, it is true. Her body was not found.

Dr Sana: Dr Fareed, now that I think about it...Maybe Mahid might be right. That girl he collided with, I could only see her eyes. She did have green eyes as Seher did!

Dr Fareed: So you are saying there is a chance Seher is alive?! But the police found her dupatta, stained with blood!

Dr Sana: Maybe she did survive.

Dr Fareed: But how did she end up in Rajasthan?!

Dr Sana: I don't know, Dr Fareed. But now I think Mahid is right this time. So that's why I have decided I will help him find Seher.

Dr Fareed: Please do give me further updates on this.

Dr Sana agrees, and they cut the call.

Amaal: Why don't you tell Sana that you were behind Seher's death?!

Dr Fareed: Amaal..my kid..that's not true!

Amaal: Stay away from me! First, you couldn't protect my biological mom. If you had not let her leave the house, she would still be alive?! And then you couldn't protect my biological sister?! She last met you the day before she died! You couldn't find her either! After all, you wanted to keep me, so if I lose my biological family, it will be easy for you!

Dr Fareed gets teary-eyed.

Dr Fareed: Stop it, Amaal! It's getting too much now. I am sorry I couldn't save Seher.

Dr Fareed: (in his mind) I wish I could have saved Seher that day! It's still a mystery to me what actually happened that day?!

Scene Shift,

Yug: Doctor, how about Munni's frequent headaches? How long will this go on?

Doctor: I understand your concern. But you need to understand she recovered from a major accident. It will take time.

Yug: For how long, doctor?! It's been a while! I still remember the day I found her injured. She didn't remember things. I took her with me to Rajasthan. Maa Sa has already accepted her as Munni.

Doctor: I am sorry for your loss, Yug. It was unfortunate that your wife Munni passed away due to childbirth. But have you thought what will happen if this girl's family finds her?! What will you do then?!

Yug starts thinking.

The next day,

Mahid is waiting in the hospital with Insha being worried and praying. Dr Sana comes.

Dr Sana: I have gotten news from the surgeon. Kaiz's surgery was a success.

Mahid and Insha take a sigh of relief.

Dr Sana: He will come to consciousness in a few hours. Only one of you can stay beside Kaiz for now.

Insha goes in immediately.

Mahid: Thanks to Allah, Kaiz's surgery is a success. I hope he recovers soon. Tahir has entrusted him to me.

Dr Sana: Don't worry, Mahid, Kaiz will be okay.

Dr Sana tries to put her hand on Mahid's shoulder; Mahid moves away, and she moves her hand away.

Dr Sana: Mahid, I have talked to Dr Fareed, and I have decided I will help you in finding Seher.

Mahid: I don't need your help.

Dr Sana: You can't do this alone, Mahid. Please try to understand. I just want to help.

Mahid: The way you fooled me, I don't know if I can trust you anymore, Dr Sana. But I am thankful that you helped Kaiz with his treatment.

Dr Sana: I know, Mahid, our tactics weren't ethical. But it was so that you could be cured. So that you can find your Seher. I promise you the moment I help you find Seher, I will leave for London.

Mahid gets thinking.

Dr Sana: Kaiz will not be awake for some time. Let's go to the police station and file a missing report for Seher.

Mahid listens to Dr Sana. Dr Sana and Mahid go to the police station together. Mahid passes a photo of him and Seher during their Walima to the police and files a missing report.

It was quite some time in the police station, so they went to get dinner.

Dr Sana: Finally I can eat what I want. My traditional Gujrati dishes, as I am from a Gujrati Muslim family!

Dr Sana is eating, and Mahid eats too.

Dr Sana: Mahid, don't mind I ask you...I want to know more about yours and Seher's story. Amaal has only told me till the part you both parted ways due to Kausar Aunty's death. After that, we just didn't get the time!

Mahid gets into a flashback,

It was a day after Mahid and Seher walked in separate ways in the heavy rain after finding Kausar's corpse.

Mahid gets a phone call.

Young Amaal: Mahid, please come here...Seher...Seher's condition is not good!

Mahid quickly rushed immediately after hearing the news.

He went to the small house Seher and Amaal were living in!

Amaal is sad and teary-eyed.

Amaal: Seher has a very high fever! I tried to call Dad, but he isn't picking up!

Mahid touches Seher's forehead.

Mahid: Ya Allah, she is indeed burning up!

Mahid tells Amaal to bring hot water and a towel. Amaal does so, and then Mahid dips the towel in hot water and places it on Seher's forehead.

Seher: Ammi...Ammi...why did you leave me...

Mahid gets teary-eyed. He completely understood what Seher was going through!

He takes care of her. Dr Fareed comes later as it is evening.

Dr Fareed: Sorry, Amaal, I was busy with a surgery. I came as soon as I saw your message!

Amaal: Leave it! I never expected much from you anyway!

Dr Fareed checks Seher and then monitors her health, like checking her BP and heartbeat.

Dr Fareed: Her BP is low! And her fever is high! You did right by trying to bring it down.

Mahid: Seher will be okay, right, Dr Fareed?

Dr Fareed: She will be alright. But looks like she is still under severe trauma. Her condition wasn't good yesterday when I dropped her and Amaal home. She really needs more support. Mahid, I think you need to be there for her!

Mahid: But how, Dr Fareed?! She hates me! She still blames me for not saving her Ammi!

Dr Fareed: Seher is not in a state of mind where she can think sensibly. Plus, she is too young. Give her some time; she will understand.

Mahid: She isn't wrong, though. I promised her I would save Khala, but I couldn't....

Dr Fareed: Don't be harsh on yourself, Mahid Miah! Sometimes, some stuff is not in our hands. I wish I could have stopped Kausar from leaving my house; maybe she would have still been alive...

Mahid: You are right, Dr Fareed...it's all written. It's destined to happen. I just hope Allah makes it easier for Seher.

Dr Fareed nods.

Next day,

Seher wakes up, and she sees a tall figure standing and talking to some guys. She recalls how some people tried to chase her and her Ammi. Her Ammi told her to climb the tree due to her injury, as she couldn't run. And she did. And then her Ammi waved her bye. If only she knew this was the last time she would see the shiny face of her dear Ammi...And then she remembered how she found her Ammi's dead body. Her face fully smeared in blood...as if almost unrecognisable. Her dear Ammi...what have they done to her dear Ammi?

Seher got furious. She found a thick stick nearby. She took it. She got up and went to hit the tall figure and the other guys. He looked behind, and it was Mahid looking at her, shocked.

Mahid: Seher...

Seher: You killed my Ammi!! You hooligans!!!

Mahid: Seher, I am Mahid...

Seher: Mahid, let me go! I won't spare them! They harmed my Ammi!!! (shouting) They killed my Ammi!!!!

Seher goes to hit those guys, but Mahid manages to stop her. Those are some other guys. They get scared and run.

Mahid: Seher, it's not them!

Seher: Leave me, Mahid, I won't spare them!

Mahid: Seher, by doing this, your Ammi won't come back!

Seher starts hitting Mahid on his chest with her hand continuously.

Seher: It's all your fault, Mahid!! You couldn't protect Ammi, and now you let them go! Those hooligans!

Mahid: Seher...Seher..SEHER!!! (shaking her)

Seher stops hitting Mahid and freezes.

Mahid: Seher...I am sorry for your loss...but they are someone else...I understand your pain...I understand...I lost my Ammi too...Khala... initially we didn't get along...but gradually she treated me like her son... as if she tried to give me some love my Ammi would have...May Allah grant Khala Jannah. She deserves it. Her kind soul deserves it!

Seher cries, hugging Mahid. Mahid knew at that moment it wasn't about his principles but more about comforting Seher... she needed it badly...

He caressed her head.

Mahid: Cry your heart out today, Seher...It will make things easier for you!!

Seher cries while Mahid lets her do so. Even he gets teary-eyed with her.

Mahid: Let's go, Seher...

Seher is confused about where Mahid is taking her.

He brings her to the graveyard. The tombstone mentioned Kausar Baig.

Seher slowly walked towards it. She recalled her moments with her Ammi. How they danced with each other. How her Ammi supported her education. How she was always there for her. How she would cry when she would get hurt. How she would always keep her close. How she was her best friend. But now she was all alone.

Seher: Ammi...My dear Ammi...You were supposed to see your Seher grow...as a doctor...

Before that, you left me. Why, Ammi?! Why did you leave me alone in this harsh world?!

Mahid wanted to tell her he would be there for her. He tried to touch her shoulder to reassure her but stopped.

Seher: Ammi...

Seher hugs the grave of her Ammi. Tears escape from her eyes and drop on the soil.

Seher: I hope you will have a great rest. You never had one in this harsh world. Allah, please forgive all my Ammi's sins. You know her well. You know how pure my Ammi was.

Seher was silent as if she was having some moment with her Ammi. Mahid let her be and went out and waited for her.

Soon,

Seher came back. She was sad, but she was slowly starting to accept that her Ammi was not in this world.

Mahid: Let's go, Seher. I will drop you home.

As Mahid was about to go in his car,

Seher: Forgive me, Mahid.

Mahid stopped.

Seher: I was really harsh on you these few days! I kept finding and looking for my Ammi! I kept blaming you. But I forgot that you faced one of your biggest pains. Losing Dada Huzur. That one person who really loved you, Mahid...

Mahid is silent. He recalls his Dada Huzur. He remembers how he would always take his blessings. He knew he would be a great Mufti and always told him why he chose him. When no one had faith in him, his Dada Huzur did. He didn't want to fail him.

Tears start to drop from Mahid's eyes. Seher wipes them.

Seher: Dada Huzur was really proud of you, Mahid. Amaal told me. You became Mufti. You will be a great Mufti and bring change to society. You will not disappoint Dada Huzur.

Mahid: While praying for your Ammi, please keep Dada Huzur in your prayers too. Forgive him if he did anything to hurt you. His intention was never bad; it's just that his thoughts and principles were different.

Seher: I know, Mahid.He was the first person who accepted me in that house. Even before you did. He always had hopes in me, not sure why.

Mahid: He wasn't wrong. You are indeed very bright.

Seher: Mahid, always make him proud. Don't do anything that will disappoint him.

Mahid nods.

Seher: Please forgive me again for my behaviour. I was so selfish in my own troubles that I forgot yours. Maybe that's why Allah gave me such a big punishment.

Mahid: Don't say it like this, Seher. It was destined. There is nothing anyone could have done. But still, forgive me, I couldn't fulfil my promise to protect Khala.

Seher: But I know you tried your best. I just never appreciated it. Pardon me, actually Ammi was the only one I had.

Seher cried, and Mahid consoled her and wiped her tears.

Mahid: Nothing like that, Seher. You still have your sister, Amaal. She needs you...Your Ammi always wanted you both to stay together.

Seher nods.

Mahid: Let's go now. Amaal must be waiting for you.

Seher and Mahid go.

3 years later,

Seher is wearing her medical coat, and she is talking on the phone.

Seher: Yes, Amaal, don't worry, I will buy your books!

As Seher is talking, she collides with someone. It was Mahid. Mahid was wearing a cap like those Mufti does.

They stared at each other for some time. They recalled their first meeting and their Nikkah and more of their moments. Seher decided to break the ice. Mahid was lowering his gaze.

Seher: So you have finally started as a Mufti, Mahid...

Mahid: Yes...I am trying my best to be a capable one.

Seher: I have heard from others. You are doing great. You are bringing changes. People are liking you. Dada Huzur would have been proud of you.

Mahid: I can see you are now pursuing your MBBS. This coat...suits you. InshaAllah you will be a successful doctor. You are closer to yours and Khala's dreams.

Seher: There are still 4 more years for it...

Mahid: Don't worry, Seher, these 4 years will pass by in a flash.

Seher: By the way, how are you, Mahid?!

Mahid: Alhamdulillah, I am good. How about you?

Seher: I am good too.

Mahid: I should go now...

As Mahid was about to go,

Seher: It's so strange, Mahid. It's been 3 years since we got officially divorced. Though we did not say our 3rd talaaq, we are not a couple anymore. We barely met after that.

Mahid: Yes, Seher, this is normal.

Seher: Normal?! But why?! Why can't we be friends? Why can't we be cordial?! Why Mahid?!

You have done so much for me, whereas my own father completely abandoned me. If it wasn't for you, I don't know what I would have done?! How would I have fulfilled Ammi's dreams?!

Mahid: It's all Allah's will. I am just a step to the stairs of your dreams. That's it!

Mahid was about to go,

Seher: Mahid...did you ever have feelings for me?! Not as a friend but as...

Mahid: Don't even think about it, Seher. You and I know our Nikkah should have never happened.

Seher: But now that I am not underage...why can't we...

Mahid: Seher, I am a non-Mahram for you. Enough of the discussion. It's better if you and I move on from this. I focus on being a successful Mufti, and you focus on being a doctor. And Allah will set us with our partners soon.

Mahid immediately walked away, not wanting to listen to Seher. Mahid got teary-eyed as he knew whatever he said wasn't fully from the heart. But he knew they couldn't be together. It wasn't right. Maybe the situation is different now compared to then. But he can't!

He doesn't want to be a burden to her. He wants her to focus on her dreams. And he can never think of someone else besides Seher as his life partner. He has already decided he will be single

all his life.

Seher also had tears in her eyes. She had to accept with a painful heart that her first love wouldn't be her last, and she walked away.

At night,

Mahid was sitting on his rocking chair, and he got a phone call.

Mahid: Hello...

Voice: Seher has met with an accident!

The phone drops from Mahid's hand.

Mahid gets out of the flashback.

Mahid: I wish I had told her earlier...how much I loved her...But my principles...

Dr Sana: You are a really good person, Mahid. This is why you really cared for Seher and her dreams. You tried to be logical, but I understand sometimes your emotions and heart are too strong to handle. But sometimes you should listen to your heart too...

Just then, Mahid's phone rings.

Mahid smiled as he heard.

Mahid: Kaiz has regained consciousness. It was Insha's call.

Dr Sana: Great! Let's go then!

Mahid and Dr Sana went to the hospital. They went to visit Kaiz. He is a strong boy and was smiling despite the pain. Mahid appreciated his strength.

Mahid: Now it's late, Kaiz. You should go to sleep. You need more rest.

Kaiz: Okay, Dimah!

Mahid went out of Kaiz's room. He was walking, and in the opposite direction, Munni was walking slowly. She didn't notice the splash of water on the floor.

As she walked, she didn't notice and slipped. As she was about to fall, Mahid quickly went to hold her. They looked at each other emotionally. As if they knew each other. For years.

Just then, flashbacks of their Walima, when Seher was about to slip due to the exposed wire, and Mahid held her. It was as if, almost a recreation of it. Munni holds her head again.

Mahid: (worried)Seher...

Just then, Yug comes to her. Mahid is confused.

Yug: Munni, are you okay?!

Munni nods.

Munni: I am still having these headaches.

Yug: Don't worry, Munni, you will be okay.

Yug thanks Mahid for saving Munni.

Mahid was about to say something.

Nurse: Munni Jii, the doctor is calling you in.

Munni and Yug were about to go,

Nurse: Your husband cannot go in, Madam. It's just you!

Mahid gets shocked hearing this.

Munni: Yug Jii, you wait here; I will go in.

Yug nods.

Munni looked at the guy, confused and lost. As if she knew him but also didn't know him....She goes inside the doctor's room.

As Yug is waiting,

Mahid: Is she okay?

Yug: Yes, my wife is getting frequent headaches. So I brought her to the doctor.

Mahid angrily goes and holds Yug's collar, confusing him.

Mahid: Tell me the truth.

Yug: Bhaisaab, what are you doing?!

Mahid: She is not your wife! She is my wife!

Yug: Are you drunk?!

Mahid: What have you done to my Seher?! She is my Seher, not your Munni!

Yug is confused and widens his eyes, shocked.

Just then, Munni comes back, and she separates them.

Munni: What are you doing to my husband?! Leave him!

Mahid is shocked.

Mahid: Seher...

Munni: Who is Seher?! I am Munni! And Yug Jii is my husband!

Mahid is shocked!

End of the episode.


Sorry if this part was boring. I wanted to show Seher understanding Mahid situation like he also lost his Dada Huzur instead of kept blaming him for not protecting her Ammi.

Next part there will be more Maher scenes I can assure you that. And there are more twists awaiting 😉

Edited by JustRandomGirl - 27 days ago
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Posted: 27 days ago
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Beautifully written I wanted that heartfelt conversation regarding kausr's death between mahid and seher you fulfilled it ❤😍❤😍🥰

Mahid 's love for seher is soulful

Overall very beautifully written ❤❤❤❤so good to read 😍🥰❤🥰😍

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Posted: 26 days ago
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No . It wasn't boring. I felt happy reading Maher's scene where Seher was sweet with Mahid.

Moving from future to past to future again made it a bit confusing for me first. But now I understand the story better.

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Posted: 24 days ago
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Originally posted by: rachufan

Beautifully written I wanted that heartfelt conversation regarding kausr's death between mahid and seher you fulfilled it ❤😍❤😍🥰

Mahid 's love for seher is soulful

Overall very beautifully written ❤❤❤❤so good to read 😍🥰❤🥰😍

Thanks for the compliment. There are more beautiful scenes of our OG Maher upcoming here smiley27
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Posted: 24 days ago
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Originally posted by: awida

No . It wasn't boring. I felt happy reading Maher's scene where Seher was sweet with Mahid.

Moving from future to past to future again made it a bit confusing for me first. But now I understand the story better.

Glad to see your comment here. And thanks for the feedback. I will specifically highlight whenever I put a flashback scene and change back to present. Some of the chapters will be like that due to the story 😅 But I will mention whenever I start or flashback or switch back to present 😹
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Posted: 24 days ago
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Hi all. I have some exciting news! I have decided to turn this SS into a FF of 10 chapters!!!

Due to some script changes to extend the story, I had to delay posting the episodes by a day so I apologize for that.

So some things I have decided:

1. There were some post leap scenes I kinda likes from whatever reels I saw, so I will add that with our OG Maher in this FF cause I know it was meant for them.

2. Fake Seher/Dr Sana's character will be here for a bit more chapters, but she will be a catalyst in bringing our OG Maher together

3. Since 10 chapters so I have divided it to 2 phases of this story.

Phase 1 (first 5 parts) will be about Maher's past and Mahid trying to make Seher remember stuff.

Phase 2 (last 5 parts) well you will understand as you continue this story.

4. For few scenes I have added both English and Hindi/Urdu dialogues as I feel it will be more hearttouching with the Hindi/Urdu.


For this chapter of the story,

I strongly suggest you NOT TO SKIP! Because it is a very pivotal part in the story.

First half is actually about a message that I feel MaHer's character would surely encourage.

Second half will be about a very crucial point in our MaHer's journey. I tried to make it as heart touching as I could.

And yes this chapter will be mostly about Maher's past and flashback.


Part 3 of the story begins.

Just then, Dr Sana sees the trio and goes over.

Dr Sana: Mahid, what is happening?!

Dr Sana is shocked to see Munni, as she looks exactly like Seher. That means Mahid was right!

Dr Sana: She is...

Mahid: Seher...

Munni: See, I am not Seher! I am Munni. Munni Rathi. You misunderstood. Let's go, Yug Jii.

Munni takes Yug away.

Mahid tries to follow them, but Dr Sana stops him.

Dr Sana: Mahid, I know it's a lot to process. But you need to control your emotions.

Mahid: She is my Seher...not Munni...

Mahid cries while Dr Sana consoles him. Munni sees this, and she feels really bad for Mahid. But then she didn't like how he pulled her husband's collar.

Munni: (in her mind) My heart is aching so much seeing him cry?! Don't know why...why he...

Yug: Munni? All ok?

Munni nods and goes with Yug.

Dr Sana is calming Mahid down. Mahid tells her about Yug and Munni's conversation.

Dr Sana: Mahid...looks like Seher had a memory loss from the accident. That guy made her believe he is her wife.

Mahid: But why?! Why my Seher?!

Dr Sana: Mahid, tomorrow we will go to the police station and update this to the police. Then no one can stop you from getting your Seher back.

Mahid nods.

Next day,

Mahid and Dr Sana are on the way to the police station, but they are stuck due to a traffic jam.

Dr Sana: The traffic seems really bad today.

Dr Sana notices Mahid getting anxious as his hand is shaking and he is tapping his feet. To divert his attention, she talks to him.

Dr Sana: Mahid, you were telling me about your and Seher's story. Then you stopped halfway. What happened after you got the call that she met with an accident? But Seher's accident happened recently...But yesterday you were saying it happened 4 years ago?!


Flashback,

4 years ago from the present


Mahid recalls how he immediately rushed after getting the call about Seher's accident. His heart was beating fast, and he felt he was losing his mind over that news.

He quickly drove to the address he got. There were a lot of people. A huge crowd. As if some protests were going on.

Mahid looked at his phone and got out of the car based on the shared location.

Amidst the crowd of people, he found Haider.

Mahid: Haider Bhaijaan...you were saying Seher met with an accident?! Where is she?! I don't see her, and what's this?! Why is there a huge crowd here?! Apne Kahan Seher Ke Saath Hadsa...

Haider: Mahid, you cut the call midway. Hum Kehne Wale The Seher Ke Saath Haadsa Hone Se Rokiye...She will meet with an accident if you don't stop her?!

Mahid: What do you mean?!

Haider: You are Mufti-e-Shehar, right?! And you have no idea what's happening in the country? Mahid, take some time and check this!

Haider shows his phone, and Mahid reads it. He was surprised to read it. It was about student protests due to the papers of NEET being leaked, and them needing to retake the paper because of that. Due to this, the youth of the country are protesting against corruption and fighting for their rights and change in the system.

Mahid: Ya Allah, I was so busy due to the upcoming talks that I had no idea all these were happening in the country!

Instantly, it clicked in Mahid's mind! It definitely makes sense for Seher to be here. She will definitely be part of this protest!

Haider: Seher is one of the active protestors here. I really appreciate her courage, but she needs to be careful. The police are not showing mercy on anyone!

Mahid: Haider, take me to Seher!

Haider takes Mahid to where Seher was. He found Seher standing and speaking like a leader, with many people listening to her and supporting her.

Seher: So many students like us, we study hard day and night, compromising so many things! All for a future, a great future. So that we can get a proper educational qualification that will get us great jobs, to fulfil our dreams for a better future. Some of us here dream to be a doctor, some an engineer, some an officer and whatnot! But then an unfair system, so fragile that incidents like exam leaks compromise so many promising futures! All of us, we need to fight for our rights! Education is not a privilege, but a necessity!!!

The protestors agree with her and continue. Just then, a male police officer comes to Seher.

Police: Hey girl, I have warned you so many times not to cause problems here!

Seher: Problem? We are not here to cause problems but rather to solve the ongoing problems. Remove us if you can! I will see how you can get me out of here!

The police hold Seher's hand tightly and throw her banner away.

Police: We have tried to warn you multiple times, but now enough is enough. You won't listen.

The police officer raises his baton to hit Seher on the head as Seher closes her eyes. Just then, the police officer's hand freezes. He looks up and finds a tall figure looking at him furiously. Both his eyes are red. The police start shivering at this.

Mahid: HOW DARE YOU TRY TO RAISE YOUR HAND ON HER?!

Mahid lost control in that moment. No one could stop him. He held the police's collar and started hitting him.

Mahid: What they are saying is absolutely right?! They should absolutely continue! But no one gives you the right to force violence?! You compelled me to do so! How could

Seher: Mahid, stop hitting him! If not, it will complicate the situation! They will try to use it against you!!

The other policemen come to attack Mahid, but he manages to outbeat some. The other students also join, and it becomes more serious. Soon the senior officers come and interfere. It's the same senior officer who helped Mahid with his Ammi's death investigation.

Senior officer: Mahid Saab, you have to come with us to the police station!!!

Seher: Listen, it's not his fault! He was just trying to protect me! Your colleague tried to raise his hand on me, and he isn't even a lady police officer! You guys are breaking your own policies!

Mahid is quietly taken by the police while Seher follows them as she hands over her banner to one of the fellow protestors.

In the police station,

Mahid is sitting in the police station, and Seher is there beside him.

Senior officer: Look, Mahid Saab, because I know you very well and from what I listened to from both my juniors and other protestors, you interfered because they tried to raise their hands on your wife, not cause of the ongoing matter. Hence, I am letting you go. But you need to be careful, especially when you are a Mufti. You know some people can use it against you and your religion.

Mahid: Just because I am a Mufti, that doesn't mean I will stay silent! Our religion, not just our religion, but more or less every religion teaches us to be fair and has condemned injustice. Whatever these students are speaking for is absolutely for the right reasons, and I can proudly say I am with the students in this matter. Whoever is behind this mess needs to be sacked, and there needs to be a change in the system. I am with the students here.

Seher looks at Mahid proudly.

Senior officer: Look, Mahid Saab, that is your matter. But some things, our hands are tied.

Mahid: I know deep down you know whatever is happening is not right! But sometimes you need to listen to your conscience rather than your commitments. I also understand your situation. There are still good polices out there like you. Do remember you can make a difference.

Mahid leaves from the police station, and Seher follows him.

Seher: Thank you, Mahid. For speaking up...you really said it nicely. And also for standing up...

Mahid: Seher, it is my responsibility not just as a Mufti, but also as a citizen to speak up about these matters. I was busy due to my talks and wasn't aware of these matters until Haider told me about it! I was really worried about you initially when I found out you were here, but when I saw how bravely you raised concerns, I was proud of you.

Seher: You know, Mahid, luckily for me, I took my NEET last year; if I took it this year, I can't imagine.

So many students had to retake it and go through that stress and tension all over again. It's not easy. This is why I decided to speak up.

Mahid: You did the right thing! Seher, I need a favour from you. I need to know more about these protests so I can talk about them during my sermon(Khutbah) tomorrow and encourage more people to join!

Seher nods.

As they went back home, Seher explained to Mahid everything that happened, all from the start. Mahid listened to them diligently. And then, the next day, Mahid delivered his sermon, and he encouraged people to join them, and most of them were in favour. Seher looked at Mahid proudly.

And then Seher, with the students and Mahid, with the people in the Madrasa community, joined hands, and they continued to be active in the protests.

During the protests, the group sat on the floor to take a break and have lunch. Mahid was writing things on the banner and was busy. Seher noticed and came to him.

He looked at Seher, opened her lunch box, tore a piece from the roti, dipped the dal, and tried to bring it near to his mouth. She gestured to him to eat something. Mahid ate from Seher's hands while he continued working. Seher smiled.

They continued with the protests and the group got bigger. Even Haider, Tahir, Insha and Amaal joined.

Then the day finally came when it was all worth it! Everyone joined hands and appreciated each other. It was finally over! And finally there was hope!

At night,

Mahid and Seher are walking back home.

Seher: Finally our efforts paid off, Mahid!

Mahid: Yes. InshaAllah, the system will be fairer now, like we all anticipated!

Seher: InshaAllah.

Mahid: You know, Seher, if Khala was here today she would have been very proud of you!

Seher: If Ammi was here, I know her well she would have joined these protests too. She is always in favour of a great education. It's

unfortunate she herself didn't get one.

Seher looks down, and Mahid feels bad for her.

Seher: And look at Amaal. She understands the value of education but isn't serious about her studies at all. She joined the protests actively, except today she had some work with Dr Fareed regarding her admission. But she needs to understand she needs to give effort for her own education too.

Mahid: Don't worry, she will understand soon.

While they were chatting, they finally reached Seher's house. The small house Seher and Amaal were still living in.

Seher: Looks like we have reached my home. Maybe it's time to say bye.

Seher wished the time could freeze and they could continue to chat forever. But perhaps it wasn't possible given their situation. Seher was about to go into her house.

Mahid: Seher...

Seher looks behind.


There are both English and Hindi/Urdu dialogues here. Read the one you prefer. Hindi/Urdu dialogues in purple.


Mahid: I tried my best. I tried my best to stay away from you! I thought it would be easy after we got separated, but it got more difficult. I couldn't...forget you..

(Humne Koshish Kiya. Bohot Koshish Kiya. Aapse Dur Rehne Ka. Socha Aap Se Alag Hone Ke Baad Aur Asaan Hojayega Lekin Ulta Aur Mushkil Hogaya. Hum Aapko Bhula Hi Nahi Paaye)


Seher asks him innocently.

Seher: Why not, Mahid?!

(Kyun Nahin,Mahid?!)

Mahid: I thought I would never meet you. But when Haider Bhaijaan told me you were in danger, I couldn't control myself. The fear of losing you was eating me from inside. Spending my life without you, I could not imagine it. Do you know why, Seher?!

(Socha Tha Aap Se Kabhi Na Miloon. Lekin Haider Bhaijaan Ne Jab Kahan Tha Ke Aap Khatre Mai Ho...Hum Khud Ko Kaboo Nahi Kar Paye. Aap Ko Kho Dena Ka Gham Hum Ko Andar Andar Hi Kha Jaa Raha Tha. Aap Ke Bina Zindati Guzarna..Hum Nahi Soch Sakte. Pata Hain Kyun Seher?!)

Ya Allah, was he going to...before thinking further and starting to think of big dreams, Seher asked.

Seher: Why?!

(Kyun?!)

Mahid walks to Seher.

Mahid: Because I am in love with you, Seher. You are my first love and my last love.

(Kyunki Hum Apse Mohabbat Karte Hai Seher. Aap Humare Pehle Ishq Ho Aur Aakhri Ishq Bhi.)

Seher got surprised. Did she already start dreaming big?! Or was it really?!

Seher: (tearing up)What...do you really...

(Kya...Kya Sach Mein Aap Humse...)

Mahid nods.

Mahid: It's true, Seher...I love you. I was attracted to you the moment we first collided at the busy streets of Lucknow amidst the birds flying, but I ignored it. I started accepting it when I saw not just your eyes, but your innocence and kindness, which got me more attracted. Whatever happened after our Nikkah, Seher, I tried to hate you.

(Yeh Sach Hai Seher. Hum Apse Mohabbat Karte Hai. Jab Hum Takraye The Pehli Baar..Udte Kabutar Ke Beech...Tab Se Aap Se Lagav Hua...Par Humne Bhav Nahi Diya. Phir Humne Maan Liya Ke Humhe Apse Lagav Hai Sirf Aap Ke Aankhon Ke Wajah Se Nahi, Aap Ke Maasoomiyat, Aap Ke Meherbani Ke Wajah Se Aur Lagav Hua. Humare Nikaah Ke Baath Jo Kuch Bhi Hua Seher...Humne Koshish Kiya Apse Naafrat Karne Ka.)

Seher gets more emotional and looks at Mahid, listening to his heartfelt confession touching her heart.

Mahid: I went to make a relation based on hate, which ended up becoming a relation based on love.

You saw my past. Instead of making my bruises worse, you healed me. You supported me. You showed me the mirror. Trust me, Seher, if you weren't too young back then, I would have never let you go! Never!

(Nafrat ka Rishta banana chala tha, Pyaar Ka Rishta ban Gaya. Apne Humara Aateet Dekha. Humare Zakhmo Ko Badhane Ke Badle Zakhmo Ka Ilaaj Kiya. Humara Saath Diya. Humhe Ayna Dikhaya. Humara Yakeen Kijiye Seher, Agar Aap Ka Umaar Zyaada Kam Nahi Hota, Hum Apko Kabhi Jaane Hi Nahi Dete. Kabhi Nahi!)

Seher starts crying more, hearing his heartfelt words.

Mahid: Your words on the terrace during Eid. I still remember them. But you were too young back then. I tried to distance myself from you. But due to the situation, we found each other. To help each other. We lost our most loved ones. And then we lost each other's support. Since then, I felt really empty. I still don't know if I am violating my principles, but all I know is there is only one person in my heart, and that's you, Seher...

(Eid Ke Din Dargah Ke Chad Pe Aap Ke Lafzon Vo Humein Aaj Bhi Yaad Hain. Par Tab Aap Naujawan The. Bohot Koshish Kiya Apse Dur Rehne Ka. Par Halaath Aise The Ke Hume Ek Dusre Ka Sahara Mila. Hum Dono Ne Apne Sabse Kareebi Insan Ko Khoya Aur Ek Dusre Ke Hamayat(support) Bhi Khod Diya. Tab Se Khaali Mehsoos Kiya Khud Ko. Pata Nahi Hum Apne Hi Wasoolo Ka Ullanghan Kar Rahe Hai Par Itna Humhe Zaroor Pata Hai Ke Humare Dil Mai Sirf Ek Hi Insaan Ho Sakta Hai Aur Voh Aap Hai Seher...)

Mahid wants to hug her, but remembering he is a Mufti, he stops himself. Seher understands his hesitation.

Seher: Mahid...even though my mind accepted, my heart never accepted that your heart had no space for me. You did so much for me, Mahid. So much. The list never ends. Your heart is gold, Mahid. You are right; I was too young. But after we got divorced, I kept thinking of you. When I knew you were doing well, it comforted my heart. I always wanted to know what you actually felt for me. This is why I have decided something, Mahid.

(Mahid Pata Hai Humare Dimaag Ne Maan Liya Tha Ke Aap Ke Dil Main Mere Liye Jagah Nahi Tha, Par Humare Dil Ne Kabhi Maana Hi Nahi. Apne Bohot Kuch Kiya Humare Liye, Mahid. Bohot Kuch! List Khatam Hi Nahi Hoga. Aap Ka Dil Sone Ka Hai Mahid. Apne Sahin Kahan Humare Umaar Kam Thi. Par Hum Dono Alag Hone Ke Baad Bhi, Hum Aapke Baare Mai Sochte Rahe. Jab Pata Chala Aap Sahi Jaa Rahe Ho, Dil Ko Sukoon Mila. Humhe Jaana Tha Aap Ke Dil Mai Humare Liya Kya Tha Aur Uske Jawab Bhi Mil Hi Gaya...Isliye Humne Kuch Socha Mahid...)

Mahid was nervous.

Seher goes on her knees.

Mahid: What...what are you doing, Seher?!

(Yeh...Yeh Aap Kya Kar Rahe Hai, Seher?!)

Seher: Mahid Niyazi...will you marry this Kurafti Seher again?!

(Mahid Niyazi Kya Aap Iss Kurafati Seher Ke Saath Phir Se Nikaah Karenge?!)

Mahid emotionally look at her. She too loves him the way he does.

Seher: Answer quickly. I can't stay down on my tired knees for too long! Do you accept it?!

(Jaldi Jawab Di Jiye Na. Vaise Bhi Humare Pair Nazook Horaha Hai. Kya Aapko Qubool Hai?!)

Mahid: Qubool Hai.

(I accept.)

Seher took out a ring from her purse, and Mahid realised this was one of his rings.

Mahid: This is my ring. I thought I lost it.

(Yeh Humara Anghuti...Mujhe Laga Humne Kho Diya)

Seher: I stole it as I wanted a small symbol that would always remind me of you, Mahid! I only stole one!

(Humne Churaya Kyunki Ek Choti Si Alamat Chaye Jo Aap Ka Yaad Dilaye Mujhe Mahid. Sirf Ek Hi Chuara Hai Humne)

Mahid chuckles at her usual Kurafatiness as she slides the ring through his finger.

Mahid and Seher smiled and looked at each other emotionally as Mahid helped her to get up. They stared at each other happily and smiled.

Meanwhile, in Seher's house, Amaal and Dr Fareed smiled as they saw this and somewhat lent an ear to their heartfelt conversations too.

A few days later,

Mahid and Seher were in the registry office. Dr Fareed, Amaal, Tahir, and Insha with baby Kaiz came down.

Dr Fareed and Tahir were the witnesses.

Kazi: Seher Kausar Baig, do you accept this marriage?!)

(Seher Kausar Baig, Kya Aap Ko Yeh Nikaah Qubool Hai?)

Seher: I do. I do. I do.

(Qubool Hai. Qubool Hai. Qubool Hai.)

She smiled as she looked at Mahid.

Kazi: Mahid Adnan Niyazi, do you accept this marriage?!

(Mahid Adnan Niyazi, Kya Aap Ko Yeh Nikaah Qubool Hai?)

Mahid: I do. I do. I do.

(Qubool Hai. Qubool Hai. Qubool Hai.)

He looks at Seher, smiling.

Kazi: The Nikkah of Mahid Adnan Niyazi and Seher Kausar Baig is completed under the witnesses of Dr Fareed Kadri and Tahir.

Mahid and Seher happily sign their Nikkah documents as they smile, looking at each other.

Everyone claps for them.

As the Nikkah is completed, Mahid immediately hugs Seher. They were in comfort as if they had been yearning for it for years.

Tahir: Mahid Miyaan, control yourself, you both just got married?! So much impatience!

Everyone laughs.

Mahid and Seher went to Niyazi Manzil. Fupijaan was not around as she went to her in-laws with Haider (also because she didn't like Seher )

Tahir and Insha welcomed Mahid and Seher inside.

Insha fed the sweet to Seher, and she ate it happily and entered.

Mahid and Seher went to their room and found the bed decorated, and this time a new king-size bed was there.

Seher: I hope you won't separate the bed again with the chainsaw again!

Mahid laughs.

Seher: I hope I can make you laugh more often like that. How charming your laugh is, Mahid...

Mahid holds Seher from behind. He caresses her hair and kisses her neck. Seher closes her eyes as she is shy.

He tries to come closer while Seher's heart beats faster. He lifts her chin and goes to kiss her. And as they were about to come close, he stepped back.

Seher: What happened, Mahid?!

Mahid: Don't worry, Seher...I won't do it! Until you are ready.

Seher smiled. The concept of being intimate was new to her, though she knew how it works; she wasn't prepared for it yet.

Mahid kisses her forehead. Seher smiles.

Mahid: Now let's get some sleep. I know you are very tired.

They both lie down on the king-size bed. They smile, looking at each other. Holding each other's hands.

Mahid gets out of the flashback as he gets emotional, and the car stops too.


Present,

Driver: We have reached the police station.

Dr Sana: I was really loving the story of yours and Seher. So heartwarming! I know you have more to share, but we need to go now, Mahid! Let's go!

Mahid and Dr Sana alight from the car.

Dr Sana does realise how Dr Fareed told her about how Seher proposed to Mahid, so she tried to recreate the same scene when Mahid was in trauma and was tricked into thinking she was Seher.

Dr Sana: (in her mind) If I knew how much Seher and her memories meant to Mahid, I would have thought twice before doing these things with Mahid. There were certainly other ways for his treatment.

Mahid: Let's go in, Dr Sana.

Dr Sana nods.

Police Station,

Yug: Inspector, why am I here?

Just then, Mahid and Dr Sana come there.

Inspector: This Miyaan has filed a case against you. He claims that you have kidnapped his wife, Seher Niyazi!

Yug: It's a lie.

Yug: (looks at Mahid) You are the same guy in the hospital yesterday? That was bothering my Munni! What's your problem, Miyan! Even my Munni told you she is not who you think?!

Mahid: Everything will be proven now.

Mahid takes out his phone and shows pictures of his and Seher's Nikkah. He also shows a picture of their Nikkah papers being signed, as Mahid tended to take pictures of important documents. He also showed pictures of Seher's ID card and her admission card from college. He even showed a picture of her topping in her MBBS college.

Inspector: All these are authentic. Looks like you might be in trouble, Mr Yug.

Yug starts to sweat.

Yug: No, no. My Munni looks like this girl, but it doesn't prove that she is here. They just look similar; you do know there are 7 doppelgangers in the world!

Dr Sana: Oh wow, what a coincidence that two of them are in the same country?! Absolutely nonsense!

Yug: I don't care, but my wife is my Munni, not that Seher; they are two different girls!

Inspector: Okay, fine, we accept your claims. Then do one thing: show us proof that the girl is your wife, Munni Rathi. Show us her Aadhaar card. Show us anything that will prove this.

Yug starts to sweat, not knowing what to say and starts to panic. He goes mum.

Inspector: So it's clear that Mahid Miyan is telling the truth.

Mahid: Inspector, I want to talk to him first! Speak up!

Yug: I found her injured in Lucknow. She was unconscious for a few days. She didn't remember stuff, so I took her to Rajasthan with me. I was depressed as my wife passed away. My Maa Sa accepted her. Your wife...Seher... is my wife Munni now!

Mahid holds his collar in anger.

Dr Sana: Mahid, leave it!

Mahid: Seher is mine, just mine!!! Seher isn't aware of who she is! You both can't be together! Not just because it is against religion, but it is also about her not being aware of her identity. Why are you tricking her?!

Yug: Mahid, please move on. I love Munni...I mean Seher...Let her live as Munni.

Mahid was about to punch Yug...

Dr Sana: Mahid...don't make things worse! Think about Seher!

Mahid: Whether Seher wants to stay with you or me, that is her decision.

Yug: But she doesn't even remember you?!

Mahid: She will. I will remind her. She will remember I am her Mahid.

Yug: How?! Tell me how you will do it?!

Mahid: Give me a few days. Please, Yug, if you ever cared for Seher or your Munni...please... don't you think she deserves to know about her past?! Don't you think Seher should know her past fully and then accept you?!

Yug is silent.

Dr Sana: You need to do as we say; if not, we will get you arrested in a kidnapping and manipulation case.

Yug gets thinking.

Next day,

In Munni's house,

Maa Sa: Yug said the guests are coming soon. We need to prepare the table.

Munni nods, and they are done with it.

Just then, she hears a door knock.

Munni: Looks like they are here.

Munni goes to open the door.

She gets surprised seeing Mahid.

Mahid: (in his mind) I will make you feel our memories and moments again, Seher. So that we can get our beautiful life back again. You were the one who always cured me, now it's my turn!

I promise you, Seher..with my love and efforts, I will make you remember who I am to you?!

(Hum Aap Ko Humare Yaadein Aur Palko Ko Phir Se Ehsaas Karayenge. Taake Humhe Humare Khoobsurat Zindagi Phir Se Mil Jaye. Apne Humesha Humara Ilaaj Karwaya, Ab Humari Baari. Vaada Karte Hai Aapse Seher...Humare Pyaar Aur Prayas Ke Saath Hum Aap Ko Yaad Dilayenge Ke Hum Aapke Kya Lagte Hain?!)

Be laafz hai...Hum bezubaan...

Be...fizul..hai..yeh...raabta

End of Episode.

I tried to watch some scenes post leap on IG, and honestly I am not liking much how Mahid Miyah is being so touchy despite being non-Mahram for Seher. The innocence and charm of Maher is lost post leap. I kind of wanted to maintain that and also find a way to bring our Seher back and justify Mahid post leap hence this FF.

Please do let me know, what do you think will happen next?! Will Seher regain her memory?! Will Mahid be successful?! Or is there some other twist in store?!

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