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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sharmida

Wowieee Amrita.It is mindblowing.Plz take over the creative team of RBO.The confession should so be like this.Atleast similar.Take a bow girl.That was fantastically written.⭐️

Ahhh...Thanx darling 🤗
If I take over the CV's of RBO I'm sure most of the scenes will need to be censored and the viewers will be so frustrated because of censoring too much😆😆😆
Any ways, I'm taking your words as a compliment, thank you again
@Candy, thank you so much dear....
Glad you loved it 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
That was truly beautiful Amrita.
So romantic and meaningful......Simply brilliant!!
❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

How did I not come across this thread before...!

I have to be blind not to have seen it !!

This was just WOWWWWWWWW !!

Amazingggggg !! Rocking !!! Stunningg !! Perfect !!

Loved all the writeups....Just read them all right now !!

Do PM me as and when you write the next one !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Hey Amrita Marvellous, Sensous and Smart write up dear. Loved the way you explained the whole sequence that led to their unison of heart and soul. Particularly the way you symbolically told abt Heaven and Earth.
Ofcourse being a dumbo my tube light lit up only after reading the OS the second time and the comments from gals. And am pleasantly surprised at how beautifully u expressed it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
"Rode together to heaven" - wow!
That's got to be one of the sweetest ways to describe what happened between them.
I am so chorifying that line for my writing (if I ever decide to write scenes like that. Hehe)!

Crazy amazing writing.
It's everyone's interpretation of ShaNak that has me coming back for more.

<3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: togepe30

How did I not come across this thread before...!

I have to be blind not to have seen it !!

This was just WOWWWWWWWW !!

Amazingggggg !! Rocking !!! Stunningg !! Perfect !!

Loved all the writeups....Just read them all right now !!

Do PM me as and when you write the next one !!

Luv,

Vandu

Awwww, So sweet of you for the compliment,🤗
I'm accepting it sweetie and Thanx alot
Of course, Sweetie, your wish is my command 😆😆will definetly let you know😊

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

That was truly beautiful Amrita.

So romantic and meaningful......Simply brilliant!!
❤️

Thank you darling🤗
I guess, I have done part, right?😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: pree.mahi

Hey Amrita Marvellous, Sensous and Smart write up dear. Loved the way you explained the whole sequence that led to their unison of heart and soul. Particularly the way you symbolically told abt Heaven and Earth.

Ofcourse being a dumbo my tube light lit up only after reading the OS the second time and the comments from gals. And am pleasantly surprised at how beautifully u expressed it.

Awwww 🤗
Thank you sweetie😊
Really glad you loved it
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Glad your tube light finally lit with the comments, guess, I teased you😆😆😆
I wanted to express that moment, but in a different way other than exploring the whole scene and I guess I have done it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: -saBii-

"Rode together to heaven" - wow!
That's got to be one of the sweetest ways to describe what happened between them.
I am so chorifying that line for my writing (if I ever decide to write scenes like that. Hehe)!

Crazy amazing writing.
It's everyone's interpretation of ShaNak that has me coming back for more.

<3

Thank you sweetie🤗
Of course you can have it, I am giving you permission😊
I wanted to end this particular night that way and was thinking about the way to write up, I came accross the lyrics I quoted above and hence my brain worked😆😆😆
Thank you once again
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Great..............🤣



Originally posted by: amrita2010

Is today a rainy day there? Are you in India, sweetie?

If so, this will happen😆
I'm sure Shanak drove you crazy, sweetie😆😆😆
You know I was thinking about an endless night and found the lyrics, there, it affected me so bad that I wanted SR for Shanak, after all it's been so long since their marriage...omg, I couldn't have waited this longer🤣🤣🤣




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Undress Me
She appeared beautiful even in his shirt. He didn't want his shirt to hang on caressing her silky skin. Instead of the shirt he should get the chance, he believed. He took a deep breath before approaching towards her, demanding to get his shirt back. As his heartbeat increased, he halted. He needed to gather some confidence in him. As he moved closer he had felt his vision narrowed. He was only seeing her as the rest was dark. He knew what was going on within his mind, the moment he saw her wearing his shirt. He was mesmerized by her beauty and was captivated by her look.
He wanted to touch her as he removed the tie, to make sure she was not a mirage. He had visualised him undressing her before as well, with hands that were unsteady but sure. He saw the sudden rise and fall of her breasts as her breathening quickened. He turned her towards the mirror and asked to look at their reflection. She obeyed him by looking at their reflection and lowered her gaze. He understood the meaning of her quick movement. He traced a finger behind her ears first one then the other. He saw her squirming, as an invitation. To touch her body and soul by tilting her head. She parted her lips as she closed her eyes and took a deep breath.
He whispered into her ears 'Khanak, open your eyes. I want to see you see me' She opened her eyes and murmured 'no Shantanu, I can't bear to keep it open any more.' He moved her towards the bed and made her sit on the edge. Slowly he raised her chin with his trembling fingers, kneeling before her and spoke 'no Khanak, if you think I am doing is wrong, then you can stop me. But I need my shirt back right at the moment.' She put a finger on his lips without the knowledge of her actions.
He started on his mission again, taking all the time they needed. He unbuttoned the first button and then the second one. As he approached for the third one, she flustered to gets up to run away. He was way too clever for her and pulled her to him holding her wrist. She glanced at him over her left shoulder and pleaded him to let her go. He gathered himself to a standing position and held on her waist to stop her from writhing. He bent with his mouth near her left shoulder and let out a deep breath as he pressed his lips against her bare skin 'don't try to run away from me Khanak'. She leaned her shoulders against him as he held her waist with both of his hands. She felt herself gone tender inside, unable to stop the shiver and wriggle in need.
He traced her fingers along with her jaw line and continued it to the line of her throat to the base of her neck. She let out a moan unable to bear the torture. She whispered his name she breathed as she lost the control of her very own mind. He continued the movements of his fingers slowly but gently as they reached below her neck. He followed the same rythm and kept the same pace in his movements. Without knowing she touched his hand in excitement. He let go of her waist and slowly took a step backward feeling rejected and guilty. Khanak stood stunned, not understanding what has happened to him. She approached to him slowly, without bothering how she looked in a half buttoned shirt. She placed a hand on his back and waited for him to turn around. He was frozen on his step without knowing what to do. She hugged him from behind and told 'come and get your shirt back if you have any courage'. He closed his eyes and sighed with relief as she didn't misunderstand him.

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