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Posted: 14 years ago
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All of us are wondering about the endless night.....Here goes my take on how I want it to go....till the end....

Endless night by Marcos Hernandez

I don't want to see the light of day
I wont do nothin take my endless night away
I don't want to see the light of day
I wont nothin take my endless night away

Its just one of those nights
When You dont wanna be no where else in the world just you and your girl
Its just one of those nights
When all your problems just fly away it seems everythings gonna be okay
Its just one of those nights
Lets just ride away we got so much time to play
Its just one of those nights
Endless night

Shaan remembered the way he freed his hands from her wrist. He hated him self. How could he do it to her? Why couldn't he accept the changes he saw in her. Today he saw something in her eyes that told him she too wanted him. Why did he walk away, then? Was it because she ignored his feelings all the time? What made him helpless all the times? He escaped him self the easier way, as he knew she was his slow death. She made him breathless with a look, woke up his emotions with a smile. He wanted to run away with her, where not even a single soul was there. Only him and her. He thought about impossible dreams.He should have stayed any way, but she was torturing him with her looks. She had been attached to him so much, without his knowledge. She had become everything to him, like the scent on flowers. Why should she expect him to be friends with her? Didn't she know that he considered her as more than just a friend to her? Was it his fault to let his feelings out to her? No matter what, he couldn't play the game of friendship with her again.

With his strong determination, and attitude he walked into the hotel and forwarded towards their room. 'Excuse me, can I have a glass of water?' he asked from the attendent near his room. He heard a knock at his door, soon after he closed the door behind him. Ahh! With a little disturbed look, he opened the door and saw the attendant offering him the glass of water. 'Excuse me, could I get a menu?' he didn't bother to look at the attendant's face. 'Anything for you' a familiar voice caught his ears. Khanak? How could she be an attendant? May be he was thinking about her too much, he was seeing her hallucinations everywhere. But how could he be wrong? He wipped off his eyes, to clear his vision. To his surprise it was Khanak infront of him, dressed in attendant's costume with a moustache and beard. He bursted in to a loud laughter. The scene was really very funny, he forgot everything and kept on laughing. On the other hand Khanak, sighed as her steps came closer to the goal.

She changed her clothes and approached into the room. She was taken back, when she saw him sleeping restlessly on the edge of the bed. His head and right arm hanged out from the bed. If he takes a single move he would probably fall from the bed. She hestitated for a while, but moved towards the bed. She knelt on the bed and tried to help him with a pillow. She failed on her mission, as he rolled over and she was trapped on him. She tried to escape, but couldn't lift his weight on her. She wanted to call him, but if he wakes up she won't be able to share this beautiful moment with him.With great effort she managed to lift one of his arms and caressed his face and pushed his hair touching on his forehead. He looked so innocent, yet little irresponsible, even in his sleep. Lost in the sweet moments they shared together, she didn't know when she fell asleep.

It was midnight, Shaan woke up feeling something cold against his arms. He opened his eyes and saw Khanak sleeping next to him. He touched her with the back of his hand and felt she was cold. Too cold that she was shivering, he tried to wake her up. She didn't respond to his touch and he knew the only way to help her was to warm her. So, he jumped out off the bed and turned off the air conditioner. He then covered her with the thin sheet they had on the bed and started to rub her feet and hands and tried to warm her. But her condition didn't get any better. He then removed the fabric sheet on her and wrapped it around both of them. Slowly he started to rub her shoulders and arms over the sheet trying to be as close as possible to give her the warmth she needed. After a while, she too in her semi-concious state, turned towards him and hugged him tightly.

He was stunned, and after a while he got his hands out and pushed the strands of her hair away from her face. He was carried away along with her beauty. Her face, eyes, luscious lips and the soft skin alerted his body without him sensing what would happen if she wakes up and finds him like this. Khanak, in her semi-concious state started to explore his body with her hands. She has to be stopped from letting it too far. He held her hands just on time and slowly placed a kiss on her forehead. As she approved it, he slowly started kissing on her. Her forehead, eyebrows and on her eyes. He was on his way down to kiss her lips, she opened her eyes. She didn't want him to stop. She wanted him to show her the heaven awaiting for them. She has lost her patience. She wanted him to have her, right at the moment. He looked at her deep eyes. The eyes that always control his emotions. He melted totally to her and slowly covered her mouth by his. He has forgotton everything as they rode together to heaven and turned her over on him and held her close as they came back to the earth. He felt her tears on his chest as her head came on him. 'Did I hurt you, Khanak?' He didn't know anything else to ask. She shook her head and said 'I didn't know it could be this beautiful'I love you Shantanu'. She has admitted it to him. He felt his happiness all over his body as they murmured about how much they love each other.

----------------There is another day to face.
Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😍😍😍 amrita how beautifully u wrote the closeness of shanak omg i was just dead reading it sooooooooo pure n deep was the love of shanak here.i want this 2 happen in tonites episode its just perfect....dear how the hell do u manage such awesome scenes... extremely beautiful n serene..........loved it amrita🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakforever

👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😍😍😍 amrita how beautifully u wrote the closeness of shanak omg i was just dead reading it sooooooooo pure n deep was the love of shanak here.i want this 2 happen in tonites episode its just perfect....dear how the hell do u manage such awesome scenes... extremely beautiful n serene..........loved it amrita🤗

Ahhhh so sweet of you darling🤗
Thank you so much
Really this draaaaaaged one night is bothering all of us, but I guess it should end up with their cosumation.....How I wish.....Well, this is just a wish....this need not to be true😆😆😆 and I don't want everything to happen in one epi....but want this to happen in the current track....Coulddn't even sleep last night thinking about how this night could be ended, and today also till now didn't get any time......Finally this is done.....😊
Sweetie, come back to your senses sooooooooooooooooon😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the reason this night is so long cause v may have them being 2 gether b4 they leave 2 go back....khanak being the sardar n the song sequence n everything shall lead 2 them being one or atleast they wil confess their love...i so want ur scene 2 happen im reading it like the 10th time but still a new feeling arises each time.its toooooooo good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakforever

the reason this night is so long cause v may have them being 2 gether b4 they leave 2 go back....khanak being the sardar n the song sequence n everything shall lead 2 them being one or atleast they wil confess their love...i so want ur scene 2 happen im reading it like the 10th time but still a new feeling arises each time.its toooooooo good

Is today a rainy day there? Are you in India, sweetie?
If so, this will happen😆😆😆😆😆😆
I'm sure Shanak drove you crazy, sweetie😆😆😆
You know I was thinking about an endless night and found the lyrics, there, it affected me so bad that I wanted SR for Shanak, after all it's been so long since their marriage...omg, I couldn't have waited this longer🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes sweety im in india but its not raining much 2 day.....v got such a fire brand scene yesterday n now v shall get more soon im just waiting fr the day they say i love u that day my tv screen shall give up🤣....yesterday was just random romance fr them but after they let their feelings out it wil b super super hot.......this would b like a baby scene in front of that one n i bet that day khanak wil not move away😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifullllllll.
I'm blushingggg!!!
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Beautifullllllll.
I'm blushingggg!!!
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima

Aww, Poor girl
Did I make it too much, but I hope I didn't give so many details, but just stated what it was😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww ...just awesoomee <3<3 luved reading itt =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wowieee Amrita.It is mindblowing.Plz take over the creative team of RBO.The confession should so be like this.Atleast similar.Take a bow girl.That was fantastically written.⭐️

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