#Devil's Den:Jab HUG gaya TEL lene !

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cv's you did such a great job with the epi today that I couldn't even remember the first 20 minutes after watching it. Doing an analysis is so much easier when you have nothing to analyze. (You'll notice that don't give titles to my analysis when I'm not really "feeling" the episode. I don't even know what to call it.)

A. Proposal scene was great!

B. Where was the serious convo between Maan and Geet after the proposal? I hope there is one coming up soon. They are both adults, is it too hard for them to talk seriously for two minutes without it turning into some comedy show? I like the comedy, but not at places where it is not necessary or seems out of place.

C. Who is disappointed that there was no hug? I wanted a passionate hug today but I get why there wasn't one. It has to do with Geet's state of mind. Which I will explain in point D.

D. Many are probably thinking, where was Geet's reaction after the proposal? There was only a halfhearted teary smile from her. I mean she said she wanted to live her life fully and now that she finally has a chance why did she not contemplate on it? I remember when Maan gave her the green dress and she proclaimed she would be "happy" and "will live her life". That's when she decided to be with Maan. But now that he finally accepted her and proposed, why she wasn't happy or at least thinking about all that happened.

Here is the answer…she needs time. Think of all the things that happened to her in that one day. She told Maan her biggest secret. He told her "mujhe laga tum sirf meri ho". She misunderstood and was leaving him forever. He realizes his mistake and goes after her. He proposes and in short, tells her that she is his whole world. That is a lot to digest for a person who has been through so much. We all saw that she is having some difficulty believing if Maan really doesn't care about her past. I know you are thinking, how she can doubt him after all the things he just said to her? You can't blame her, the "tum mere ho" line is still haunting her mind. It was not an easy day for her. She thought she had lost the only chance of happiness she had and was broken. It will take her time to revive and really feel everything that has happened. Also some of her insecurities do lie in the fact that she was once betrayed by a Dev. She will need something more too convince her that Maan is really here to stay. Maan has to prove to her with action that he will be there for her and the baby. There is hesitation form Geet's end, hence no hug.

E. Back to Nhok Jhok – I know many are annoyed with this. The Cv's tried to justify this with Maan saying "At least she won't think of leaving now." I won't complain about the nhok jhok, all the doors and windows will be closed soon!!!! 😉 🤣 This will give Maan a chance to make up to Geet in his style. Now seriously, I know the CV's wanted and way for Maan and Geet to go out of town, but could you have not presented this in a better way? Very poor execution.

F. Dev-Meera scene – WOW! This guys a real charmer! (Not!) Now Meera is getting sucked into his pathetic vacuum of lies. Is it me, or did he forget he was married? Well, it wouldn't be the first time. Who believed him when he said he willing to go to jail? That was the biggest joke ever! Abhinav doesn't have any expressions when he talks. His face is so blank all the time. 🤢

G. "Aagar tum khud apne khayal nahin rak sakte ho, to mujhe rakne do" – That was just a classic! Made me fall in love with Maan all the more. 😍

H. Precap – I'm sure many are still unconscious after that precap. I'll talk about it when I see it. Now Cv's before anything happens, Geet needs to also tell Maan how she feels like Maan did yesterday. Yes it's a given that she loves him, but Maan (if you think character consistency) would be hesitant on taking any step before he gets an "all clear" from her. There is no need for "ILU", but good dialogues (like yesterday) will do.

Where was the regularity in today's episode? After such a dramatic point and I shall say, one of the biggest moments on the in the show, we get this?! It was a complete turn from yesterday's episode in terms of the mood and character consistency. I expected something much more serious. Yes I know people want something lighter, but this wasn't the moment for it. The story needs to stay on track. Nissar, the execution was not good at all. Or maybe it was the material you were given that was lacking? The flow from yesterday's epi to today was very inconsistent.

I neither liked nor hated the episode. It gave me a laugh after I got back from class, but it was far below expectations. The episode would have been much better if there was some sort of continuance from the proposal with Maan and Geet talking about their relationship. There needs to be a mature discussion between the two on their relationship. I can tell they are building up to the moment in the precap with this epi. It was a very average episode which could have been much better.
Edited by ann65 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Not Even a proper take bcoz I haven't focused on anything much except the thing I hated bcoz tht is the only bit I remembaa..

MORAL Of 21/09 Geet episode..
-Go dO A Fake Shaadi Promise the girl everything she wants in the world jus tht she makes you Her God..
-After your so called Shaadi go Sleep with her and Slap ur Real wife for interrupting otherwise Just be a bheegi Billi in front of her..
-Then Ditch her on the airport and run back to ur Ashiyana with all the MOney..⭐️👏
-After sum days go back to ur original residence where u have been kicked out of but jsu go there coz of da emosanal bonding but ish actually Jus for sum more money and fame..😳
-Start feeling Guilty but ish actually jus the selfish bit where you are scared sumone myt find out and be worse Punishment..
-Then Confess it to ur best friend coz u dun hav da courage to confess it to anyone..U knw they will kill you if you confess infront of them but go to sumoen who loves u a lot and will not leave you at all..
Yesh Go RAPE A girl but dun wury u will hav only a small punishment!😃 WTH not even Punishment u hav to jus do sum emosanal atyachar on tht Person lyk I knw u luv me u will neva leave me sumfin lyk tht..😛
Then Dun wury ur Best Friend will cum to u coz ur Emosanal atyachaar has worked and tht BF of urs will help u in repenting ur SHARARAT..😕
SHARARAT Or a SIN.. Ridiculous jus made a joke out of da whole thing..
Yeah so U are suggetsing any Funguy can go and have any FUN with any girl,, ditch her after sleeping with her, jacking all her money and land..
But Dun Wury Baby nufin will happen to you😳 You will be safe with money and everything you need
And Ms. sunday will be there with you FUNGUY bcoz WHYYY?😕 It was nufin but a SHARARAT.😡
Yesh Ms.sunday but did ur so called Funguy's Shararat do to tht GAL.. Wat happened to her?😕
NOTHING She is enjoying with her being pregnant and the Real father is with Ms.Sunday..WOW😳
Didn't u think tht ur Funguy's Shararat ruined her LIFE past present future...Anything moreee..😕
Encourage him to repeat tht SHARARAT again and Ms.Sunday will be with you do don't you worry OK..😃
Seriously I am soo PISSED with the Episode culdn't even Focus on how Maan was trying to protect Geet from every thing carrying heavy bags, falling from the stool😳. Trying to remove her PAIN by asking her sum funny stuff😳😕😆...And Maaneet's Tune given to them was even more Pisstaking ARghhhh.. Spoilt my Mood BADLY..😡 And they were still acting fake fiance to each other😕
WTF? The Hug I was epxecting one on Monday gave it in Ok tuseday ayega he will still feel sorry for what he did he will console her but no Opposite Reaction so I give UP.. So Dun even bother expecting anything 2morrow I am cuming late so I am gonna miss the episode..
Don't expect anything more I was so looking forward to it Today is a BAD BAD day and everything jus proved it for me MEN ARE DAWGSS..I HATE men..whether its REAL or REEL life..
Rating: Cannot Think Can't Rate it coz If I do u myt even better go and hide in NT's PALLU Yesh as I hav always said it and I am effin rpeeating it again the 218293891389712893789273892738278937289 time tht EXECUTION is very IMP It RUINS the day the epi the night for me..Tht's it I cannot TYPE anymore have tons and tons to say just won't be enuf.. I need to get out of here now..
And YeSH hOW Can I forget the PRECAP: Roop Tera Mastana Serious Are you now? Yesh I knw Old is Gold but not apt for the situation WTH is wrong with ur Brains? One day u wanna make me love you and the other day u jus wanna make HATE you well then be it
You betta change it tomorrow I am really putting my fingers crossed to tht this is jus to brng the viewers bak to watch the next Epi..But still I saw it on Maaneet sumhow will give it a chance bcoz u guys hav dun wid hum tum ek kamre which were neva ma favs but did suit it too so u have a chance for the precap there
And dun knw why I see this bcuming da same situation as MJht where I see DeRa bcumin lyk da secodn couple and da problem wid Footage stuff I am LOSING It now so Jus gonna go away
I Think I wuld rather watch this even tho Ma edIting was bad too but the Execution didn't SUCK like Urs did Yesh I am self-praising🥱
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFyOoMsZKg4[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by Cute_Ash - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all...my thoughts on today's episode:

From a story-telling perspective, a high point/peak in a good story is followed by a relaxation of the tension to enable the reader/viewer to release some energy before going up the slope again to the next story peak…make sense? From that viewpoint, I expected today to be a bit of a filler episode. But even filler episodes can be brilliant ones…this one was not…for me! Let me break it down:

Third time lucky:

The whole proposal sequence was exactly as was shown in the precap. After Maan's awesome lines from yesterday, I expected some continuation of that in to the formal proposal today... but the whole sequence was over before you knew it! On the positive side, I liked that Maan was shown remembering times when he was attracted to Geet before putting the ring back on her finger. It felt like he was getting engaged to her again just for himself…because he loved her! I liked the subtlety with which Geet's thumb was shown moving from a passive position on Maan's hand to an active one…nice touch! Thankfully, the whole onlooker clapping etc. was muted and in the background. Similarly, Geet changing her expressions and showing some happiness as Maan puts the ring on her finger was good. But…yes there is a but…why was this key scene closed so quickly? All the emotions were mainly on Drashti's face. GC's expressions were great before he got down on his knees but after that…nothing. I could not connect with this at all today!

Dadi…meri Dadi…tu kab chup rahogi:


So…the whole transition from the last scene to this was abrupt. One second Geet & Maan are in the station while in the next, they are at home. Did Geet help Maan up? I guess we will never know! I really missed the whole "morning after" type interaction. In normal relationships, there is a warm afterglow from a romantic interlude. All the previous times (party, night in the conf. room, dhaba, disco, proposals etc.), Geet either ran away or it was at night in the mansion so they parted immediately. This was the first time that they would have had some time together, alone, before reaching their destination. I wish the writers had thought of that. Would have been very nice to show Geet & Maan adjusting slowly & awkwardly to their new status as a "couple" before reaching home and getting back to their normal back-forth conversation.

Back to the conversation at the mansion, Maan's suddenly asking Geet why she did not leave - in that semi-funny tone of voice - was unexpected. At first I thought that maybe he was trying to get Geet to confess how she feels about him…she has still not done that! Instead, it was shown like Maan was trying to get Geet to forget about leaving…huh??? Where did that come from? I almost felt like the online videos missed a scene or something that had Geet regretting not leaving like she had planned. Wish the dialogues had better continuity between the scenes as that came out of the blue. However, it was nice to see Maan trying to distract Geet from thinking about the days events. Dadi entering the conversation was a nice move. But…why oh why did they have her asking Geet about having all her stuff packed….huh? Geet took what was clearly a very lightly packed bag…even the kids had no problem holding it! Yet…Maan called the bag "bhari" too…blooper/oversight anybody? That aside, I did like the whole conversation. Both DD & GC excel at these. They have perfected their mutual comedic timing so its a pleasure to watch them argue & disagree. Well done! Finally, Dadi suddenly caring about where they had been or were going was odd. If you recall, Dadi had previously wanted Maan to introduce Geet to their social circle at some party which never happened!

Back to work honey:

This was an ok sequence for me. Considering that Maan wanted Geet to ride to work with him just recently…why did the story have him at work already while Geet came by herself with the suitcases? If it was to show Maan thinking about Geet's past, Maan could have been shown wondering how to ask Geet who had hurt her so badly during the car ride or before it! I liked the plot showing Maan thinking about how to ask Geet more questions about her past and holding her waist when she was about to fall.

In the "what-the-heck was that" category, did anybody else notice Tasha's reaction/expression when Maan asked her where Sasha was? It seemed to me like she was hiding something…wonder if Sasha is off digging in to Geet's past! Oh well…it might just be me!

I can only share my sins with you:

I have mixed feelings about the Dev-Meera conversation. Like I said yesterday, from a story standpoint, Dev's character needs to grow...but...I am still holding out some hope that he will not turn in to a positive character. I do like Perneet's acting chops. It will nice to see some Geet-Meera and/or Geet-Meera-Maan scenes.

Precap: I guess they go out of town to keep up the story they told Dadi…will wait to see it before jumping to any conclusions. The song choice seems out of place…but…I will talk about that after tomorrow's episode.

Closing thoughts:

I do not have any problem with this being a filler episode. The light-hearted moments were a wonderful respite from the heavy duty stuff of the last 6 episodes. I just wish there had been a better continuity between scenes and a more fleshed plot for the episode.
Edited by darlunia - 14 years ago
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Okay...so B Button has made her first reservation and a veryyyy late analysis...but hey, I was sleepy. 🥱 😆

Shiny Things from Mars

So Maan finally kneels down. But where's the ILU? The Will You Marry Me? According to MSK, actions speak louder than words it seems. So he promptly...or rather in slow motion... 😆 puts the ring on da finger, and everyone claps. Finally, Geet smiles. 👍🏼 The reason for this entire thing is because the mighty dupatta(better than taveez and ring combined together) gets stuck to the shiny things from Mars still hanging on Maan's wrist. Celestial sanket?

Action Fast Forward

The scene instantly cuts to the outhouse, aka Maaneet ka Adda. 😆 Nothing about what they must have said on the journey. CV's are getting a bit kanjoos on Maaneet scenes now. As usual Maaneet banter-maybe CV's took our criticism of the romantic scenes a bit too seriously. Hey, the serial gets its drive from it...so don't be drunk. DOTW for Maneet: Kisne kiski madad ki? MSK is back to his usual angry self. When Geet disappears he muses on how to ask her about her past. (Yeh banda thoda Rewind mein phas gaya hai.... 😆 )

Deveera

Unfortunately our DevTara thread was a bit too late...because it's Deveera now. Dev is as usual going on and on about how he wants forgiveness from Meera. (Geet gayi tel lene) He's even willing to go to jail for what he did to Geet. (Okay..now he remembered.) Meera is impressed..and...well, 🥱

Luggage Express

Daadi is now also joining the game of Sach ka Saamna. So again another jhoot-that they are going to meet some client. Tasha and Adi get to witness Maaneet banter. Hey, it was cuter when it was private! Shooooo!!! 😆

Precap: No comments, the goop was getting too much for me. 😆
Edited by IndigoBlues - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i DO NOT HAVE THE STRENGTH TO ANALYZE TODAY'S EPISODE.BUT I WILL GIVE IT A TRY🤣

Dear CVs,
Why are you hell bent to ruin my Maan's character?

Ring scene -Ok you decide to show Maan "bending on knees". 😆 TOLERATED. then you show the crowd clapping? why? utter rubbish.😡

Nok jhok scene - I expected a Maneet hug, in private. And what do they do? Go back to bickering like small kids?😡 They need to grow up.I expected mature conversation rather than this.

Dadi scene - GC's acting was way OTT here. He was completely out of Maan's character. A big let down.👎🏼

DevMyra scene - Can I request you something? Can you please run some kind of hints on the TV screen when they come? Because we as viewers fail to understand why is Dev talking like this and whats the need for to show all this? And please, I beg you not to use Maneet music on Deveera. Get awesome new music for Deveera. good luck with that.

Office scene -Err, why does Dadi wants them to go out of station? I agree that Maan gave that as a reson why they went to station but then why does she want them to go now? Cant she leave that to Maan and Geet?😆 GC was ok here.


Falling scene - When Geet knows that she will fall off the chair, which looked so obvious because the moment she stood on the chair, she stumbled. Then why to stand up on that? Or did she already see MSK anywhere near?😆😆😆 Maan held her😳 I liked his dialogue about taking care of her.😳

PRecap- I know you must be having reasons to show this song. Can you explain then? Well, I am not paying attention to the song just because Maan and Geet are making my screen sizzle by their expressions. 😳



Edited by palluluvsarmaan - 14 years ago
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General Comments-
DD was adorable today..GC- Great to see them both smiling
I personally liked the nok-jhok. I accept it was for base of tomorrow


Bas general itne hi-hehe..READ ON!

1st scene of Ring-a-ding-ding

Very good.
I liked the selective flash-backs we had of Passionate moments

YES- we WANT those BACK... 😳
I don't know if the Fb's were used as a random selection or purposely..
If random- Okay..

Of purposely-
Read on-
MAan's First time saving Geet- I will save you
Maan first time hugging Geet- i will protect you
Maan first time lifting her- i will lift u up from your troubles
JA scene - I will not let anyone insult you
Geet- shower scene - I will love you
HUG - come into my arms..

Dargah - In the name of God, I will not let you go away from me ever

And he kneels..perhaps in obeisance to his personal vow

I am confused here.
I thought that Maan kneels because he has realized he NEEDS Geet.
But here he is making a vow to protect her always..to love her and always be with her

😕

PErhaps looked at in this way, the next scenes make sense

Then he kneels and makes her wear his ring again.
Ring symbolism counts- he definitely means to saumpofy his life to her and take her hand for her protection.

Geet ka smile- aww..she's happy with the way he pressed and held her hand
Of course kudi..who wouldn't be.
MAan- I promise you..ab nahi jaane doonga


Banter at the Outhouse

😲 complete turn of events..but it's okay..I like seeing their nok-jhoks..

HOWEVEr- a holding of hands could be shown...some sort of contact to confirm their restored closeness..but I guess we got it in the last scene..where he holds her by the waist..

Whatever is said- he does acknowledge still that he was "pareshaan" by her decision of leaving/not-leaving

Maan's confi is completely restored..he's also trying to get Geet's mind off stuff..
Perhaps he has read her mind..or knows her well enough to know she is thinking of his acceptance of her past and that is why to keep her mind off that question...

BEcause, notice his tone- he seems in a teasing mood..
He knows Geet will react and that's how bounce back to being herself

LOok at that cheeky grin of his- he has successfully distracted her

Isn't this MSK's character with Geet-always to spare her from pain...isn't this that only?

Anyway, moving on- we see little little ways he is conscious of her condition and acts accordingly..
being a gentleman too now..taking her bag upstairs for her.

Remember- that scene when Geet is taking her suitcase and going downstairs while Maan is looking..the yummy white shirt scene after Dargah sequence? 😳

contrast...

I don't know what he was trying to say but as they entered the room it seemed Maan was manaofying Geet... 😳

I liked this random scene between Dadi-Maan-Geet
At least Geet knows Maan cannot lie to save his life..so she knows that he won't..can't lie to her.. 😳

I loved DD's voice modulation here..
Cute..thik hai..she is bhaaw khaaying in a different way.. 😆

OH my GOD- Goodnight...BAS...ULLU..After such romantic dialogues..GOOD NIGHT... 😡


Maan's objective in life 😆

"main uske saare dark ko door karna chahta hoon"

"kya Geet ne use sazaa di"
HE doesn't say "sazaa dilwaayi".
He at least thank GOd understands that only Geet can actually punish the Man who committed this CRIME against her

Office mein

Maan looked Great in Black- I like the blue tie..matching with Geet's blue suit
Man- I love the color

And they are in the CONference hall 😆 😆

a small instance of his care again- taking bags from Geet..he's more aware..pehle he wouldn't have done it,would he?

Anyway...DD looked really cute today somehow...her expressions were adorable.
She was completely distracted wasn't she? Geet, I mean.

NOW- THIS scene of Geet roothoing and Maan turning back to his analysis could be done so much better..but at least it wasn't OTT emotional..

Maan's dialogue about Geet making him do things he never thought of are true

she brings out a different side of him na..
😃
Sawaal pe sawaal Maan...tread softly love! 😆

Will talk about LAst scene first!



Dev-Meera

NEVER NEVER use MANEET tunes for them...EVER
This isn't a parallel LOVE story..CAN't happen..and I really don't like it

Dev needs to be punished
WHAT is wrong with him.
HE NEEDs Meera now..that is why...He cheated Geet, he doesn't CARe NT left, And now he NEEDS Meera toh suddenly dosti yaad aa gayi

In his chameleon nature lies his EVILNESS- can't be changed

MEera- I like this girl. She's positive till now and acts well too

BUT PLEASe- We NEED Dev to be punished otherwise a very wrong message is being sent out here.

he needs to redeem himself in GEET's eyes and MAan's too.
He has hurt 3 people here hasn't he- Geet, Maan as well as NT
And now MEera
She is with him

HUG-
Not talking about it

Good acting by the actress! 😳
But really- we have no expression on Dev's face...


LAst scene- nice scene
DD- choo cute

Geet- the way she closed her eyes...aww..

MSK is back with that passion

It's running high now- they are acutely aware of each others' touch..hmm..definite give-away 😉

When Maan gave held her hand and she stepped down..it was literally like this-

Come my love, down from the pedestal of all constructs,
let me love you,let me see you naked of all of society's products,
let me love you- now, let me see you,
like the woman you are..like my very own elemental Truth

Oaky- did that even make sense? 😆

Spiritual contact(dargah)- check, Emotional( Confession of Geet, RStation)-Check, Physical(pee loon, bhool)- Soon to be...

FINALLY- I wish we FINALLY see a nice cute MAan manaaoing Geet scene..
I liked the way she got angry and walked away

PRECAP- I just have to talk about it.
Kya hua...this song?
I have always blushed when I heard this song..
If we get it mixed with Maahi good..
Waise, I agree with Gou di and Doods that this is apt for them

But really, this would show that they are being overtaken by passion..
Rather than being the union of two souls..

Or perhaps souls have been united now..or will be before bodies are united so we have both?

Hope it's filled with TENDER PASSION- a mix of both...
😳 😳


It was okay...as a build up for upcoming epis.
Dev- slimy chameleon... hmph...
He better be punished

Adi- nice nice...
I loved Maan's tie matching with Geet's suit..cute

me will shut up now!

over to you all!

love!


Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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I hv decided one thing that if I m not satisfied with any episode..I m not doing a detailed analysis because personally I m very passionate about my writing and if I cannot feel for any episode,I will not waste my time and energy to do a detailed analysis for it..So heres a short critical analysis from me today😊

Frankly speaking I feel blank about today's episode because neither there is any story consistency nor any character consistency👎🏼...how Geet becomes so bubbly all of a sudden after narrating her big traumatic past ??😕...and why MSK is fumbling like an idiot in front of his Dadi and his employees😕...I feel sorry for the actors..how can they do justice to their role if their characters take 360degree turn in every episode😡...Nissar and Co were sleeping kya and did this character assassination in their sleep I guess 😡...I m sure this episode was not directed by Nissar..it cannot b his direction..it was plain blaahhh🤢..About Dev..well right now he is on his way of redemption which is fine..but plss CVs get this in your mind..no viewer wants to see a saint Dev in the future😡...also Meera's character is butchered today..being a woman,how easily she can give support to that jerk in her arms ??😕...If Maneet too does the same by forigiving Dev easily,then I m sorry..I will hv no option but to finally say good bye to this show😊
There is one point where I would like to defend Maan's character today..After the railway station confession,many had raised issues like why Maan-Geet hug is not shown..or why Maan asks this weird question to Geet that "u cannot do anything without me"..So then what is the purpose of the railway confession here ??..So My reply will b ..Practically if we think then its not a regular love story between a angry young man and a damsel in distress...So even after the confession from a guy's side,there will b a certain awkwardness between the two sinse the girl is pregnent here..before Maan din't knew that she was pregnent,and so he made all sort of passionate and seductive moves towards her without any hesitation but now the situation is different;He needs to get a confirmation back from Geet in the form of a confession that she too wants to b with him forever and only then he can make his next move and hug her or b more passionate with her😳..so yes it was a confession from Maan in the railway station but now he wants same confession from Geet before he can be more romantic with her😳... but instead Maan once again gets to hear "Sir" from Geet's mouth..so its obvious that he starts questioning her regarding his importance in her life or why she went to the station ,just because he wanted her to confess this time but instead Geet starts giving him attitude and tries to show him that she can take care of herself and doesn't need anyone;In this case we get a confused Maan because now he doesn't know whether to shower love on her..or to show concern for her or to ask her the name of the culprit😆..He is confused how to show his love for her because Geet has made him confused by telling him that she can look after herself and she doesn't need anyone else for any help
Here the problem is lack of communication between the two😡;Maan has confessed but will not make his next move physically unless Geet too verbally confesses her feelings and Geet wants Maan to confess that its not always she needs his support but even he needs her support;So in short both need to talk and CVs r just not showing their heart-to-heart talk here..reason why consistency is lacking in the storyline after every episode😡;CVs plss get this fact that more than intimate moments,we want a proper heart-to-heart interaction between Maneet now where both can sit and talk and try to understand each other's POVs regarding love and commitment😳...if CVs can show Dev-Meera interaction here even though Abhinav needs acting lessons😆 then why can't Maneet interaction b shown here ??😡
Only good scene from this episode was Maan giving support to Geet by holding her tummy while she was standing on the tool 😳 and then the next dialgoue where he tells her that "If she is not bothered about herself..then let him at least allow to take care of her"😳👏...So again here we see Maan is waiting for her confession where she can give him the permission to enter into her life😳..unless Geet is vocal about her confession here..Maan will not take the next step and will wait for Geet's words because thats the way he wants to give her respect in this relationship by letting her take every decision between them😳...so last part was good ...but rest of the episode was OTT
Precap looks hot😳..I hope we get nice intimate moments between Maneet but I want this to happen after their proper confession and it should not look like any weak moment for which next morning both repents😡...I m not too happy with the song choice but will give my verdict once I see the episode😊
My Episode rating:Sorry I don't want to rate today's episode simply because I din't feel anything for the episode...There was major problem with the flow of the episode..story and character inconsistency was clearly visible👎🏼..reasons r already mentioned in the analysis😊
Thats it from me😔
Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago
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Poem 1

There was a maan who was very desperate
He wanted to find his girl who ran away
From this girl he did not want to separate
So he ran to the station screaming "GEET" all the way 🤣


He found the girl after a search that was really frantic
The whole sequence was really dramatic 😲
He went down on his knee is a proposal romantic 😍
He said some things to her that were really fantastic 😳
Then they went home and had a fight in true Maaneet style 😎
Their cute little fights never fail to bring a smile 😆 😆 😆


Most importantly Maan and Geet are together again
But the braying donkey is forever being a pain 🤢
What he donkey did was unforgivable 😡
To even think of forgiving him is unbelievable 😡

How many lives will the donkey spoil?
How many women's reputations will he soil?
Thinking about him makes my emotions roil
it makes me angry and makes my blood boil.

Do not forget a poor girl the donkey did dupe and betray
He took her innocence, her money and threw her away
If his intent was to leave her all along to touch her he had no right
The donkey is a criminal and does not deserve any respite

What kind of social message are you sending
Are you serious? What exactly are you intending?
How can a woman be friends with a man who destroyed a girl's life
I would not care even if he said he did it for his wife

How can she think he will not do the same with someone else
Does she not care or is her shock on hearing it just pretense
Tell me on reading this whether the Dev-Meera scene today made any sense?
Trying to paint the donkey as a saint - we need to stop this nonsense

I do not like that the donkey is developing a conscience 🤢
I can see in the future he is going to be a nuisance
Blaming NT for all of it is just plain balderdash
With any of us this is just not going to wash
NT did not ask him to sleep with Geet - News Flash
Leave it be O donkey just go eat some grass. 🤢 🤢 🤢


It is disastrous attempting to change his character midway 🤢
This display of guilt and repenting will not our opinions sway
No matter how long or how frequently the donkey does bray
Donkey is the villain of the show that let him stay that way
We will all enjoy the show as is, please do not destroy it, is I have to say.

Thanks
Jhan


Poem 2


All of us thought we were going to get a CONfession😳
Looks like instead we are going to get CONsumation 😲
I have a very very important question 😃
Is this scene going to be bold in its execution 😉 🤣

Now what prevails in the ranks is total CONfusion 😕
If I may be so forward as to make a suggestion
Our poor brains are suffering from Maaneet ideas congestion 😭
Put aside all the theory and supposition 😃

For a change let us see the show sans any expectation
To see how CVs and Nissar handle this situation 😉
After all they are responsible for its creation 😆 😆 😆
Let us take a break and not make a prediction 😉
Let us indulge in some rest and relaxation 😎
Disclaimer: This was written purely for recreation 😉

Edited by liv2laugh - 14 years ago
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"The Moment – Maan's Parineeta Geet" – Part XXII – The Moment of Acceptance

Yelloooo all my Friends, Devils, CVs, Star, Mr. Mirchandani and Nissar. I hope all is well today. I am running pretty late today. So, I will go straight to the episode. But Nissar just read today's analysis carefully as I have some hidden gifts for you. I will be short today but there will be some thoughts only for you and I hope that doesn't go in the trash.

Before I start of with the epi would like to mention that don't think I have not noticed the application of BG scores that you are using oflate. I liked how the BG Scores are appropriately used. Last couple of episodes I where the BG Scores been used for Maan and Geet were really apt. the saxophone, piano, violin and "oooo" tune were really amazing and they suit with Maan and Geet's screen presence. But one thing though I figured that your music department actually did the mistake of putting the "Mahiii BG Score" for Dev-Myra (Meera) scenes. I don't think think that was deliberate so I will give the BOD to you all here.

Let's start with the episode. I will explain very briefly today. Sorry don't have much time as am in a hurry.


"The Moment – Maan's Parineeta Geet" – The Moment of Acceptance


I loved the start of the episode. Actually the way Maan was on his knees and proposed his lady love was out of this world. Yes this is Maan Singh Khurana and who better knows him than the maker himself. WOW. Nissar I am floored by the execution of this scene today. This is what a personality like MSK will do when he will propose his lady love. He did it infront of the world without any hasitation. I devoured it. I loved the fact that he commanded his order on her. He didn't ask for the permission to put on the ring but yet he did put the ring on her finger with full authority. This scene was apt. to the "T". This was indeed the moment of acceptance. This is the moment which I always love to talk about. The Moment they will never forget. The best thing I liked that Maan didn't even speak a single word and that shows his confidence level and command and authority. What ever you wanna name it. I loved Geet's teary smiled face on the otherhand. WOW. She was feeling on top of the world. I know with Dev it was a private affair which ruined her life and so this acknowledgement was indeed needed her infront of the world.

The problem that I felt with the episode was the discontinuity of the scenes. I don't blame the uneasiness between the characters but there was a major problem with the scene sketches that happened in today's episode. Why do I have this feeling that when Noel directs the episode then there was always some discontinuation in between the scenes??? Though, this much I know that Nissar approves all the episodes. As per the hierarchy goes he has to approve the scene sketch of all the episodes. Then how come there is a problem in the continuation??? You should have known Nissar. Now don't tell me that at the last moment the channel deleted some scenes and that is the reason you had to abide by them. I don't believe this. You should have stood by your judgement and act accordingly. Just don't do that in future and try to be reasonable with them. I know it is tough but you should know that when the episode won't give good TRPs then they will blame you for bad direction and decision and I seriously do not want that. Do you know what, everybody started predicting you will deliver a filler episode the next day you air a good episode. I know every episode can't be good but at least it should be in continuation. Isn't it??? Just remember this in future. I am being very moderate here with you and many will think it's because they have been attacking my critiquing style but it's not because of that. It is just that I understand how the Channel pressurize the CVs and Nissar and PH at the end of the day and how tough it is to get the approval for the same. After all the Channel will always have an upper hand just because it is the client of PH. Period.

You know there is this saying by Mason Cooley which talks about the difference between romance and love.


"Romance is tempestuous. Love is calm" by Mason Cooley


Yeah, the difference between love and romance is that we make ourselves attractive for romance, but for love, attractiveness doesn't matter. It's that willingness to show up and support your loved one when they need you the most. That endurance makes a giant difference.

Do you know why I am saying this??? This is because after watching today's episode I have been receiving mixed reactions. Me and Gouri had a tough time to convince Jyo on the same. Because we knew once Jyo gets convinced then majority will get convinced because of her positivity. Right Jyo???

Well as I stated earlier that Love is calm. It is pleasant. It needs patience. It makes you apprehensive. See one thing I know you really feel awkward when you declare your love and believe me that is natural. That is what I have observed in all the love birds around. I have seen them being pretty apprehensive and I must applaud Nissar for being so practical. That is what I really liked today. They didn't go all the way romantic with each other. Matured love cannot be like that. It has to be very patient. But having said I feel something was missing in continuation. They should have shown Maan and Geet coming out of the station may be holding hands. I thought Maan would carry Geet for the 5th Phera to be completed but that anyway Nissar completed which I will describe later. Nissar must say very sensible decision of Maan not carrying Geet because now that he knows that she is pregnant he will be behaving differently with her now. Even in intense moments. This is not a love story of two people in normal situation. Remember Geet is pregnant and why are we forgetting this Big Thing???

How can Maan behave the way he used to handle Geet??? Now he cannot just pull her with force or dance like he used to do. He has to be very gentle and that is why I loved the office scene where Maan came and scolded her when she was on the small stool to get the file. Didn't you notice how Geet touched her Tummy while climbing the Stool???I loved the caring side of Maan here but I must applaud Nissar for taking this post proposal phase of Love so slow. Yeah the momentum should be built very nicely before the Parineeta Metaphor Completion.

I liked the corridor talk. First of all I thought it was to ease Geet from the sudden emotional outburst of Maan that she experienced. Just go back and check the video again from a Logical POV. It can also be that Maan wanted to know why Geet didn't board the train. He was expecting the "Taveez" answer I guess but at the same time Geet didn't answer his questions and that is why Maan started playing Geet's game just to make her come out of that uneasiness. Also there might be some reasons why this scene was drafted. Though the execution was not perfect but the reason behind this scene can be justifiable. I will just point out the reasons which I think CVs might have thought while sketching this scene:-


1. Maan wanted to know Geet's declaration that she stopped leaving because of the Taveez.

2. Geet's confusion of whether Maan doesn't bother about her past was cleared when she realized that Maan is a pathetic liar. That means Maan was true to his heart when he confessed that he doesn't care of her past while proposing.

3. May be CVs wanted us to show that Maan needs Geet's help and she can't do without him too.

4. Maan and Geet need to talk out the future and also about the Culprit. So, for that they need to go for an outdoor trip.

5. Geet's declaration of love yet to happen and she will tie the Taveez on Maan.

6. The "Ruthna- Manana" seq needs to be completed here. Btw, I am lovin' it. This is going to build up the Parineeta Metaphor completion.

7. Dadima along with the world to witness that Maan and Geet went for an outdoor trip. Now this paves the way for the future when Maan could claim to the world that the baby is his.


So, all the above points actually stretching towards the future track which we will be seeing.

Let's come to Dev Myra scene. Hmmm. This is important. What is happening here can I see??? Well Dev is feeling guilty??? So soon??? One question Nissar if he is feeling guilty then why he couldn't say anything or confess his guilt to Maan??? I think my explanation in yesterday's analysis was correct that we all need a confidante to confess our guilt or something important. Here Myra acted as the one. Nissar, if you want to go the "Redemption" way then I donno about others but I will support you all throughout. I will be supporting you just because the fact that it is a big social issue and it needs to be addressed but in a proper way.

That doesn't mean what I had said earlier about Dev I am changing my perception towards him. No. What he did is a "Cold Blooded Rape". I cannot call it a mistake it is a proper crime what he did. All I can say his he has to own his crime and I loved the fact that you are thinking of sending him to prison. Yes. He belongs there as I have always said that the cell is booked for him and NT and even Pammi and Dev's Sister. I want Maan to erupt like a volcano when he comes to know what crime Dev had done and will be all set to punish him. The court case has to happen and Dev needs to serve the sentence and then we can head to the redemption way. If Geet and Maan forgive them after all the fights then the social message on redemption that you will portray cannot be justified. The general people will understand that they can get the redemption even after they commit big crimes. No. this cannot happen.


1. Dev has to own his crime.
2. He needs to be convicted.
3. He has to serve his sentence.
4. He has to be the penitent to atonement and penance and then only he can achieve redemption.

Otherwise I will never ever support you Nissar. This is a very bold step that you and CVs might be taking; so be very careful in sketching this if at all you are following this route.


Remember what Swami Vivekananda said: - "No one can get anything unless he earns it. This is an eternal law".


So, if Dev wants redemption then he has to earn it. But before that he has to pay the price for what he had done. I think may of you know about the real life story of Australian Christian Missionary Graham Stuart Staines who along with his two sons was burnt to death with Dara Singh back in 1999 in Orissa.


I salute Ms. Gladys Staines when she said "It is far from my mind to punish the persons who were responsible for the death of my husband Graham and my two children. But it is my desire and hope that they would repent and would be reformed."


I want Geet to be like her and Geet HSP to teach people about redemption. So, Nissar this is a very big responsibility and if you are taking this route (which I don't know) then
I will be with you but if you need to promise that you won't Goof Up.


Step ahead in Parineeta Metaphor:-


Well we have completed the 5th Phera today. I am little confused today as Gouri said we did the 5th Phera (I thought 6th Phera) because in north India from 4th phera onwards brides walk ahead of the groom. In that case this is 5th phera. I hope I get the confirmation from Nissar on this.

So, when both Geet and Maan came to the outhouse then we witnessed the 5th phera. I am going with north Indian ritual here. I have already mentoned the other four pheras
right??? Ok. Here goes again: -

Now. Let us see all the 5 pheras that's been completed.


1. The first phera happened on the fake engagement day when Geet got hurt and the blood came out and Maan took her in his arms and did the grihapravesh. Yes a phera can only happen when the bride will wear the "Alta". Here the blood was the alta. So, this is the first phera.

2. The second phera was when in HP Maan said Geet "Ghar Laute". Yes, he took hold of Geet's hand and they both walked to the car and then Maan lifted her up and took her to the outhouse. This was the second phera.

3. The third phera was on the real engagement night; the "Ring Ceremony". There Geet was in a problem in the middle of the broken mirrors. There again Maan lifted her up took her to the Swing. They both walked together the swing. That's how the third phera happened.

4. The fourth phera happened at the office. When they were leaving office together today Geet was walking ahead of Maan and that's how the bride does in the fourth phera I guess. So, the fourth phera is completed.

5. The fifth phera was completed today when Geet and Maan came home and Geet walked ahead of Maan.


So, we are about to witness the completion remaining 3 Vachans in action. The promise for the baby, Geet's declaration of love and the C- night will be in completion. So, Nissar as I said DO NOT GOOF UP. I don't want any kind of major mishap in the completion of "Parineeta Metaphor".

Maan and Geet will make a promise for the baby is a part of 5th Vachan. Now, after this declaration of Love by Maan and the Geet which is a part of 7th Vachan they will submit themselves into each other is a part of 6th Vachan. These 3 are yet to complete. I donno how Nissar will carry it forward as they are heading out of station.

I hope all goes well here and Nissar and Co, do a fantastic job. Another Milestone to cross. We have come pretty close to the completion and I just don't want any Goof Ups here. The 5th Vachan, 6th Vachan and 7th Vachan are running in parallel and I don't want any kind of tracks in between. Maan and Geet has to accept each other without knowing the Dev's name here and then only we can prove that this Love is unconditional. So, the completion of Parineeta Metaphor has to happen first and the only the Confrontation makes sense. Otherwise the main purpose of the Metaphor does not hold good at all. And if you Goof Up here then you will be virtually dead. Mind it.


It was indeed an auspicious moment for the two love birds. They participated their Pheras and Vows in the Holy Matrimony of Souls.


Precap:- Komal will be happy with "Roop tera" song. Well I think the song is apt. as it completely is required to set the mood. I think the song goes with the situation but when the actual moment will start then it will not be the "Roop tera" song but believe me at the heat of the moment it will be fusion of Mahii mix as that is their signature tune; the saxophone, piano, violin and ooo tune and all and you will get to hear ILU too. This is my inference and I may be wrong big time. Just chill and believe in Nissar he won't Goof Up.

Overall an average episode but yet logical.

Over to you all to join the discussion. Feel free to shoot me:-


P.S. Here is the link for "Eagle Eye - Constructive Criticism" for 21st Sep. Pl join in the discussion and post your views on today's epi:-

http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?uid=109723285713002&topic=919&post=17429&ref=notif¬if_t=board_post_reply#post17429

Edited by doodleberry - 14 years ago

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