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Posted: 14 years ago
Gosh I hope all izz well

cheers
Lekha
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Posted: 14 years ago
please dont do this............ as it is she is stressed this will make her hate him
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update muskaan, sorry for the late reply. I have read all 3 parts now, and finally gave you feedback...

Seriously going great, looking forward to read next twist parts....


Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
😳muski i just loved it as this situation is very close to my heart😉😉😉😉😉

maan - yaar tumhare saath bhaut mushkil hain
geet - main ne kya kiya..
maan - tumhare pass aane se phele tum pregnant hojathi hoo!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
owo gr8 but i hate ur maaan... lol... i just fell like he doesn't love geet at all..... idk.... he is weird... he is taking geet for granted... geet should slap him... he is so selfish.... pls dont kill this baby 2.... i will be so upset.... and i started to hate maan... i am getting a felling.... well from geets prospective... he only ever loved pria not geet....

sorry lol... i loved ur FF tho... but i personally i would have hate to have a husband like this FF maan....

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ty for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan I'm sorry i didn't get to comment all these days. I'm very behind with all the updates. As soon as i catch up I'll comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
geets pregnant but another twist hope this does not distance maan and geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggg dat was amazin!!!
cnt wait for more continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

his hands shivred to buy that medicine...he knew geet will hate him for doing this
he putup a fake smile when he saw geet...
geet smiled back..she looked excited about the ice-cream..

part 123

they went to the ice-cream palour..
geet ordered his choclate sundae & said..I feel like having the same today..
geet looked extremly happy they were togather after so many days..
maan was very tensed & nervous..his heart acked the thought of making her eat
that medicine...he feared every moment ..he knew how much she wanted that baby...
geet - maan aap kha kyun nahi rahe?
maan - umm!!(he just took a spoon)
geet was eating too fast..maan stopped her hand..tumhara sur dard hoga
geet - aap ho na...dabane ke liya..
geet started sneezing..geet bus karoo..aur mat khavoo..look at u..ur nose is
all red already...just one last bite...she made the baby face
they went to the car..geet started complaining of her head ache..
he massaged her head & kissed her ...he could'nt control his tears...
geet - dard mujhe ho raha hain aur aansoo aapke nikal rahehain??
maan - geet u trust me na...
geet - bilkul nahi (her words were indifferent)
maan - please geet for once say that u trust me...
geet - aaj ke baad kabhi nahi...& starts laughing
mazak kar rahi hoon...off course I trust u...

maan started the car...geet tried to cuddle up..but her head seem to hurt..

after dinner maan gave the medicine to geet...
geet looked at the medicine & then looked at him...that look killed him hundred times
she ate the medicines...as she swalloed the medicine...his eyes closed in pain..
he turned away...u r turning away as if u have commited a crime..she said..
he continued to walk away...
geet - suniya..
maan - umm..(facing his back)
geet - agar main pregnant hoon..to..yeh medicine khane se kya hoga?(her question was
innocent like her) he turns towards her & holds he arms firmly..
maan - tum pregnant nahi hoo..samjhi tum...we were togather just once...
every thing is fine..I spoke to the doc..she said u are way too anemic
geet - nahi I am just asking ?? why are u getting so angry
maan calms himself..nahi main gussa nahi hoon...I am just worried about
ur health...u have to stop stressing ur self..
geet - mujhe sona hain...(she looked withdrawn..)
maan was tensed fearing about losing her trust again...he prefered not telling her
about the whole thing...he definitly could'nt have explained a word to her...
she would'nt have wanted to understand either...
next day maan did'nt let her work out..adviced her to rest & eat well
he tucked her with the spread & said don't stress ur self

maan met up with daadi & told her about their visit to the doc
daadi was heart broken & she got worried...
daadi - usko kuch mat khena..woo toot jayaghi
khushi ke baad abhi maine uske ankhoo main umeed dehki hain
maan - daadi I am really very scared
daadi - why
maan - if she comes to know..then she will hate me
I don't want to lose her..main uske bina nahi jee saktha
daadi - don't worry..sab teehk hojayagha
maan hugged daadi & stood rooted to see geet at the door step...
she stared at him in disbelieve...her eyes were blank..no emotion..she held her stomach &
walked away maan ran behind her...geet geet meri baat suno..
she did'nt say a word..she kept quite..maan kept his hand infront of her & stopped her
she stood..num..shocked...
maan - doc..said it is not safe for u..I can't see anything happening to u
I love u ..I really love u plaese geet ..kuch to bolo
geet looked into his eyes...she gave a weak smile & walked away...
maan did'nt know wat that smile meant..daadi came to explain to her
daadi - beta abhi tum bhaut weak ho isliya maan ne..
she kept quite...after daadi completed ...she just left..
maan broke down in daadi's arms..
maan - daadi she is never going to trust me again...
daadi - nahi beta..woh samjhdar hain..just give her some time she will be fine..

maan got wild at himself & rushed to the gym...
sab meri galthi hain..mujhe use din sharab pina hi nahi chahiya tha
he goes to punch on the glass dare u hurt urself..she shouts....maan runs into her arms
yeh aacha hain...kuch bhi hota hain aapna aap ko choot lagathe rahethe ho..
so that I have to come & take care of u...
he hugs her & says geet I am sorry ..
she does'nt hug back ...she just turns & goes to the bedroom..
maan follows her into the room..
she cuddles up & lies down..maan lies down next to her..
she could feel her back getting wet with his tears..
strangely she did'nt cry but she was definitly angry with maan


next day daadi comes to meet geet
daadi - beta how are u feeling now
geet - I am fine..
daadi - today is the family dinner at uncle's place..be ready by 8
geet - nahi daadi I don't want to go there...
Nt & dev also come to meet geet..NT hugs her & enquires about her health
she gives a weak smile..they request her join but she refuses again..
maan walks in..
daadi - maan ..geet is not willing to join us for the dinner
NT - vedi veerji...aap geet ko khiya na
dev - bro I guess she will only listen to u..& smiles
daadi - maan I think it will be good change for her
maan looks at geet..sab keh rahen hain to challoo na
geet - lekin
maan looks at others & then looks at geet..she bents her head for a yes

precap
family dinner!!!!

ok finally the family dinner...it was delayed because of the baby part..I wanted it to come after the baby part...ok now all ur chapals are welcomed .....
muskan not confused any more....😈 sorry for delays in posting...promise more TWISTS this weekend!!! thanxs for the replies...please do comment..so that I know..how much u hate me for this love muskan my new FF ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan i hope Geet doesn't loose baby again..waiting for family dinner..anyway she has to face smriti & Kavya..
when are U planning to update next part..

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