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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. i hope she doesnt lose the baby again. Losing it once was bad enough but losing it again twice. I really hope geet doesnt forgive maan for not telling her about the pill. Maan always hurts geet and she always forgives him. I hope Geet starts to fight back and not always do what Maan wishes for. She should think about herself sometime. How can Maan break her trust.
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Posted: 14 years ago

muskan i jus luv ur write up..i can't stay without reading ur geet sory..jus luv it..thnks for it..and plz...do write us often..we miss it really!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg
finally the family dinner
yay
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭it was MAAN'S BABYso i'm sad😭but on other hand i think GEET is still having that BABY😳afterall woh GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA😉hai,this is wat i'm thinking no idea wat MUSKAN🤔is thinking😆soooooooooo dear muskan send next part soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE UPDATE DI , BUT PLZ DONT SACRIFICE THE CHILD THIS TIME PLZ LET GEET CARRY THE BABY , AND DON'T MAKE HER SAD ANY MORE PLZ DI ..... AND PLZ BRING HER TRUST BACK TOWARDS MAAN,,
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE..
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am worried after reading your update 😭
Don't know wat Geet would be thinking about all this. I hope this doesn't strain the relationship b/w Maan and geet....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank God sumthg idiotic didnt happen
Geet is angry agn n her trust is broken agn
Hop she gets well soon n we get Happy Maaneet back soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
umm sad part..
bt i think u'll make geet fine soon......
awesome part as usual..
loved it..
looking 4ward 4 the family dinner..
update soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan looks at geet..sab keh rahen hain to challoo na
geet - lekin
maan looks at others & then looks at geet..she bents her head for a yes

part 124

maan got ready & tried talking to her but she was not responding at all


at the dinner..pooja, kavya & smriti were talking
pooja was wonderig why geet did'nt meet up with them yesterday as planned??
ranbhir said hai to pooja & kavya and thanxed them for coming
ranbhir introduced smriti to every one in the family
smriti - ranbhir ..woo bhabhi nahi aayee?
ranbhir - woh!! Maan bhaiya..aathe hi hoongee
smriti wondered maan was divorced..when did he get married again??
ranbhir - its been 4yrs now...
smriti (mumered how come geet did'nt know that)
ranbhir - u know bhabhi.. bhi shayad tumhare college ki hain..
I am sure u would know her
smriti - may be..I may recognize her if I meet her..
smriti went & told kavya & pooja..that maan is married & his wife is from our college
can u believe that...how come we don't know..
pooja finished her drink & pretended not to react..

at the outhouse..
geet came out wearing a red saree..maan stood mesmerized looking at her..
saree always made her look gorgeous..her beauty always had a spell on him
but the red colour of the saree which complemented her angery cheeks..
still making her look modest & bashful..it was the most common style of wearing
a saree..but she looked so beautifull...his eyes just traced her saree warapping
about the waist..cover the midriff and run over to the shoulder..her beauty
truly became unparallel in that sari..maan could'nt take his gaze off her..
as she checked her pallo & looked at him..maan was still looking at her
she ignored him..he moved closer..she looked down...his hand traced ..her bare waist
& embraced her & pulled her closer..he kissed her passionately..on her neck line
he took in the seducing fragrent..of hers..which always had that magical effect on him..
his lips..traced upwards..moving to her lips..his one hand cradled her head, making it
quite impossible to twist away.. and the other hand snaked the bare back
and his lips..soft and warm.. only pressed enough to stifle protest... geet was totally
helpless..then his tongue slipped through to touch against her lips. geet tried to protest
and found it against her teeth.. tickling against the inside of her upper lip..
a quiver of something passed through her...shaking her ..
she moved back by a sensation of dizziness...she held her head & did'nt say anything..she pulled her palloo around..but anger was evident..he held her from her waist not letting her move away...

maan - did u get ur periods..doc said..u will feel weak
do u want to go the hospital..
geet - no I am fine..just feeling little tired
maan tried explaining to geet..she walked away..

maan was still inclined to stare and with something of a disapproving frown in it...
geet preferred ignoring..
maan - geet tumne mangalsuthra nahi pehna..
geet - mujhe nahi phena
maan took the sindoor & put it on..please geet mujh se rootho mat na..
she has'nt spoken to him a word about the baby since yesterday..her silence was scaring him

they drove down to the dinner venue..geet was really scared & clutching her saree ..

when they entred the hall..geet tried moving away from maan
she was concious..this was the first time in a family gathering they have walked in togather
with maan embracing her..his right hand around her back resting on her right shoulder softly
the last time he walked in front & she just followed him..
but today it was different..it seemed he was so incharge of her...like he owned her..like
he was proud of her..like she meant the world to him..like he never bothered others
looking at them..she was so lost in his arms..she actually forgot where they were heading to
maan could feel that she was comfartable..

as they moved forward ..ranbhir's parents welcomed them..
they shared a warm hug..& took them to ranbhir
maan again moved his hand on to her shoulder..like he never wanted her away from him
his hand coming back again to her shoulder was so heart warming to her..she really
liked how maan was not parting from her..daadi maa, NT & dev joined them
daadi - ur looking very prity geet..
she smiled & looked down..daadi moved her hair back..and said..are beta..gale main
kuch nahi paina..geet - ji woo..
maan - maina mana kar diya tha..I love her naive look..
daadi maa smiled..geet blushed..
maan - waise bhi is ke gale ke liya meri bhahen hain na..
daadi patted their cheeks & said bless u both..
kisi ke nazar na laaghe tumhe..
dev - finally bro u have come out with bhabhi..warna tho..she used to always
feel concious answering every ones questions about where u were..
maan looked at geet..aab ise kanhi akela chodhna ka irrada nahi hain mera..
& his hands where firmer on her shoulder..
they all moved on to meet the would be bride & the bride groom..
ranbhir turned to see maan & geet..he hugged them...geet was scared
& wanted to run away..maan realized geet getting restless..he looked at her
smriti kavya & pooja where standing next to ranbhir looking taking to ranbhir's mom
ranbhir called smriti..she turned & smiled

precap
YET ANOTHER TWIST

thanxs a lot for all th ressponses....hope u all like this part too
please do comment...just love reading it...another update tonight..promise..😳 love muskan my new FF ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG another update? 😲
Wasn't expecting you to update so soon. See how lucky, we all are 😊 😉



Hmmm, so finally the Family dinner arrives 😊
But yeh kya, you finished this update at the most crucial point 😡

Waiting to see her friend's reaction😊

Maan aur geet ke beech mein sab theek kar do na 😛
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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