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muskaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Muskaan.....read your post part 121..................really good as always......but please dont make the twist sad.......as already very sad after watching todays episode..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part.
Plzz don't separate maneet.
Can't wait to read major twist.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
DIDI,

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITEEE THE NEXT ONE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN I CAN'T WAIT, I WILL GET HEART ATTACK!!!! PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE THE NEXT ONE SOON. I AM SO WORRIED WHAT'S THE MAJOR TWIST. I JUST WANT THIS FIGHT TO END UP NICELY NO BREAK UP! PLEASE.........

LOVED LOVED LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD THE UPDATE. U R GENIUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS HOW CAN U THINK SO DIFFRENTLY, YAAR!!!!!!


NO WASTING TIME, I AM WAITING ANXIOUSLY PLEASEEEEEEEEEE WRITE THE NEXT ONE SOON, OTHERWISE I BET I'LL GET THE HEART ATTACK!



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Posted: 14 years ago
dat was awesum update!!
loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome updata fast waiting for twist
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Posted: 14 years ago
MAJOR TWIST...😲 SOUNDS INTERESTING..😃. Thanks Musks!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

she tried calling maan...he did't answere the call..
it just made her more curious & anxious...he is never there when I want him..
she cried & she told the driver take her to his office...

part 122

geet barged into the conference hall..aap phone kyun nahi utta rahe
adi laughed in his style & pari was little suprised..wondered wat was geet doing here..


maan - ek min geet
thats it for now..we shall discuss the rest tomorrow..
after every one leaves..
maan - kyan huwa geet
geet - aap mera phone kyun nahi utta rahe hoon
maan - u barged into the conference room to ask this..
well I thought u did'nt want to talk to me..
geet - u r never there for me ..when I need u the most
maan - thats why u could just walk in here ..when u r so angry with me..
geet - thats because I wanted to tell u...(she pauses clutching her duppatta)
maan - kya huwa geet..
geet - ji..woo
maan - boolo geet
geet - I think ...
maan - I don't have the whole day for ur thoughts..
geet starts crying...u never have time for us..maan was probably
knowing wat geet was hinting..he rushed to her ..cuped her face..
geet - i think I am pregnant..(she blushed..shied..)
maan - how can that be...?
maans reaction was scaring geet..he looked disturbed..not welcoming
geet - kya matlab
maan - we have never been togather since..
geet could'nt believe wat he just said
geet - wat do u mean(she spoke in fury)
maan - I was careful because doctor asked me to be..so I was
geet - jo bhi karthe hoo aap hi karthe hoo..

maan - lekin..
geet - shimla main birthday ke din(maan rubbed his forehad in stress & pain
like he regreted...) maan moved forward & hugged her
geet - its been 42days now
maan - nahi geet it is only 40 days
geet - how would u know..(she closed her mouth)
maan - who else would know...
geet lekin...
maan - it could be because ur are annemic..
geet - yeh dekho na...she pointed at her curved portions being more promnent...
maan - mujhe tum deekhna kanha dethi ho...itne din se to tum mujhse gussa main ho
maan moved closed & said dekhava na...she covered herself with the duppata..
turned & closed her face...

maan - aach challo we will meet the doctor..
geet - umm!! (she shied & blushed)
maan was very scared at geets happiness...maan started the car..
maan - geet u understand ..u cannot be pregnant right
geet - kyun..
maan - we will have to wait atleast for 3months before u compltely recover
and u have not been really taking care of urself..
geet - mujhe nahi pata...(she was not taking him seriously)
maan - yaar tumhare saath bhaut mushkil hain
geet - main ne kya kiya..
maan - tumhare pass aane se phele tum pregnant hojathi hoo!!!
she closed her face ..aab yeh bhi meri galthi hain
maan - nahi meri galthi hain...

they meet up with Dr.kiran..
she welcomes them with a warm smile..so wat brings the romantic couple here...
geet shies...
they both speak up togather
geet - I think I am pregnant maan - her periods is delayed
dr.kiran looked at both of them...she smiles..how many days ..
again they spoke togather
geet - 42days maan - 40days
dr.kiran smiled & lookedaway
maan looked at geet..main baath karloon..
maan - its been 40days now...she went through organ donation & abortion
she had major blood loss during all that..so we are just worried
dr. kiran - I could just give her a medicine..which could take care of the delay in periods
maan - umm
geet - lekin...(maan stares at her)
geet goes out..
dr.kiran - u realize this could lead to abortion if she is pregnant
maan - the surgeon who operated on her said that..she is too weak to concieve now
dr.kiran - u should have been careful..then
maan kept quite
dr.kiran - u realize this may lead to emotional stress in her
do u want to check if she is pregnant
maan - I will do anything to keep the baby..as far as it is safe for her
dr.kiran - I shall do the basic tests..& see if she is fine..to concieve
maan - please don't tell her any thing..please
dr.kiran - ok...
maan goes out to see geet..she was sitting there in the bench...
maan - kuch test karne hain..chaloo
geet - mujhe kuch nahi karna
maan - geet sweetheart please..
geet - nahi nahi nahi
maan lifts her & takes her to the lab...makes her sit on the bed..
when the nurse gets the needle..she makes a baby face & looks at maan...
he tries to distract her..but she still breaks down..as if she is been operated on..
the nurse really gets scrared looking at geet crying so much ..
maan hugs her ...& says..ok I will get u an ice cream...& then massage ur head...
they smile ..thinking about the last time she had her injection..here..

he maid geet wait in the car..& came out to speak to the dr
dr.kran - pregnancy is confirmed (maan was delighted)
but she is extremely anemic...her hemoglobin count is way too low
maan - is it safe for her to continue(he sounded hopeful)
dr.kiran - sorry not at all safe for her..(his hopes were shattered.)infact I wonder why u
have been neglecting her health u could continue with the medicine..
she may get her periods but
maan - but wat doc?
dr.kiran - that will still lower her hemoglobin level..please be extremely careful
any emergency just admit her immediately..
maan thanxed the doc & walked to the car..
he was very worried & scared to tell anything to geet...
his hands shivred to buy that medicine...he knew geet will hate him for doing this
he putup a fake smile when he saw geet...
geet smiled back..she looked excited about the ice-cream..

precap
muskan confused?????

thanxs guys....thanxs for all ur comments...I was lost in maaneet land...
here is the twist....next few updates are drastic twists...please do comment love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiiiii...

i will comment about the update l8r.. first lemme comment about the precap !!!1

"Muskaan confused"... loved it ............😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes i read b4 getting pm. hayye twists ki queen yeh kaisa nayi twist hain?? ab maan kya karega? i'm also confused like maan. poor maaneet
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls dont make suffer more than before she realy need to be happy i wish she can keep the baby pls let me know i cant for next update spill the beans soonnnnnnnnn

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