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Posted: 14 years ago
nicely done.. angry geet .. which would mean maan has to work extra hard in placating his wife hmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
as usual beautiful. 👏 maan should call a press conference and inform media about their marriage. 👏 love u dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updated. but i think that they hve to reveal their relationship infront of everyone and i don't wnt any kind of misunderstanding btwn thm. and hope that u will also mke the things proper in it and update the nxt soonn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the remaining parts!...
amazing parts!....
i hate sasha and pari....because of them geet is angry on maan!...
glad that atleast pooja knows that geet is married to maan!...
like pooja and arjun scenes!....
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

pooja - yaar woh pari aur doosri ladkiyan jiju ke peechai padhi thi
geet - just leave me alone ...please..

part 121

they spend the rest of the day at poojas place...
maan cooked lunch for them


pooja - yaar tu bhaut lucky hain...maan is really sweet
geet - tu meri friend hain yah maan ki
pooja - teri friend hoon..lekin
geet - lekin kya
pooja - maan ki saali hoon na..
geet smiles
maan - finally..(hasi to phasi)..kisses her cheeks
geet wispers yeh kya kar rahein aap
pooja pretends to eat the pasta..
pooja - jiju..pasta has come out really well..
geet does'nt say much...

maan & geet reach home little latter in the evening...
geet goes to the room & changes...
maan was in the hall..watching TV
geet sits in the sofa on the right side ..she clutches her duppatta & sits there
maan still looking at the TV..says..I know u are still angry with me..
tum pooja ka samne kuch nahi kahna chahathi thi..I understand...
maan notices her still restless...
maan - aur kuch bhi khena hain...(he switches of the tv)
geet - woo...I know it is nun of my business..but
maan - geet...wat are u saying...
geet - I think u should bar sasha's calls..
maan starts laughing
geet passes him a glance..
maan - do u know who she is?
geet - I know...she is ur
maan - GEEEET
geet - ur munshiji's daughter...
maan - so u know..then wats the problem (he lifts his leg & rests on the table in front
& streches his hand behind)
geet - I am not very happy about the whole thing..
maan - just relax I know wat I am doing...
geet - I don't think!!!
geet leaves ..disturbed

geet goes to the room...yeh loo...I am not happy about the whole thing..
where did that come from geet...& why should it matter to him..if I am happy or not
as if he will listen to me...why did u even think that he will understand ur point of view..
bus unki suno..unki karo...jaise mera to koi vajoot hi nahi hain..
bus unka saya ban kar rah gayee hoon...na kuch soch ne ki izadat hain na kuch
mehsoos karne ki...geet just relax..why are u spoiling ur relationship thinking
all this...just let it be...babaji sab teehk karna..please...

geet did'nt talk to maan for few days..totally unlike her..
maan tried to make it up to her..in his own ways..but she really did'nt seem to buge
this time..maan wondered why is she being so indifferent when she actualy knew...
the whole truth..maan was still being patient ...

wednesday night...its been like 4 whole days now...since they actually were terms..
maan was getting impatient now..
maan - geet ...tum aise kyun kar rahe ho..
geet(cold shoulder) - kaise?
maan - tum itna gussa kyun ho rahe hoon...I said sorry na...
geet - ais kuch nahi hain..
maan hugged her..please itna gussa mat karo..he nibbled her ears..& kissed under them..his hands moved snaking her hair & he passionately moved his lips tracing kisses along side her jaw line to her meet hers.. geet pushed him back..that actually hurt him...
geet - gussa to sirf aap ho sakthe hoo ..mujhe iske izadat todhi hain
maan - GEEET
geet - yeh loo...hogayee gussa...aab kaun gussa kar raha hain..
maan tried to calm himself...geet suno too I am trying to work things between us
geet - why are u trying...when u don't care about it..
u don't have to pretend infront of me..
his phone rings....
geet - see...u hav'nt still bared her calls..
continue...she walks out leaving him to answere the call...
maan leaves the phone & comes behind her...
geet - why ..why are u not answereing her call today???
maan - plaese tum jaanthi hoo..I am doing every thing for munshiji...
geet - yah right talking to his daughter at midnight...I am sure she still does'nt
know we are married...
maan - humari shaadhi aur use baath karne ka kya connection hain...
geet - ur not that innocent maan...(she walks away)
maan - wat ???(maan gets angry & pulls her back turning her hand )
I am just helping her get a new job...after leaving khurana's like that
she is finding it difficult to get a new job...wat ever it be she has got talent


geet - i have seen her talent
maan - tum khena kya chathi hoo (still holding on to her wrist)
her hand was hurting & her eyes filled up...maan releases her hand
geet(snaps back) - can't u see she likes u..
maan - no there is nothing like that...she is just needing my help with her job
geet - or u just don't want to see...
maan - GEEEET
geet - or u r just enjoying all this...
maan - chup ek dam chup..ek sabd aur nahi...
the more I am trying to explain..the more u are accusing me...
stop behaving like a typical insecured wife...
geet - right..I almost forget that I am talking to a person who forgot our wedding itself
maan - GEET just stop it right there...u r crossing ur limits...(he takes a long breath)
tum mujhe gussa kyun dila rahi hoo...
geet - I don't want to talk to u..any more...
maan - fine....main bhi tang aagaya hoon tumhe samjha samjha ke...
they turn their back & leave...this was the first time..geet ever fought over anything..
nohk-jhok was fine..but never something so serious...
geet goes inside the bath room & cries..babaji .why can't he just listen to me for once..
I know there is nothing between them..even then ..why can't he see that..it is effecting our relation
why can't he avoid her for me once...itna bhi nahi kar sakthe woh mera liya

next day geet got up late..she was looking for maan..he was not around..
she just checked her calender & her appointments...
all of a sudden she realized...
she tried calling maan...he did't answere the call..
it just made her more curious & anxious...he is never there when I want him..
she cried & she told the driver take her to his office...

precap
MAJOR TWIST....

thanxs for all ur support & resposes..hope u like this part...
please do comment.. love muskan my new FF ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it Muskan. Come out very well. But what was the point in getting so insecure when she has him for herself and she is aware of his unaltered, undiminished love for her. Was it that, the play day @ Krish shcool and she is still in Delhi instead of Shimla?

Hello Queen of twists, please spill the bean soon, I can't keep waiting as I am already impatient in waiting for todays episode.

Jokes apart, please update fast, I am dying to know the twist.

Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 angry geet 😡😡😡😡😡😡🤢Pics are Fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏love the update❤️
Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderfull update. both part 120 and 121. madam ur twists and my test r born to be together😆 😆😆😆i think plz give the update today afernoon INDIAN time so that i'll be able to make up with ma test and prepare for ma project .
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updated and waitig for new twist. update the nxt soooooooooonnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Muskan very nice!!!
plzzzz dont make the twist something that'll separate maan and geet

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