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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di,
superb party...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey di

Awesome update...................just loved it
lovely pic
Pooja ko hi Arohi bana diya...................g8 idae
missed Maaneet moments
plsssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

geet - shhh...sleep now..
he cuddled up next to her & slept...

part 120

next day morning...maan got up with a heavy head,..
geet kept a lemon juice..with a bang & walked away...she was fuming
maan ran behind her..
geet - juice piya...
he went back had the juice & came back..pee liya
maan - geet meri baat suno..maine sarab nahi pee thi..
woh pari ne kuch drinks mix kardiya tha shayad!!
geet - ur a small kid...she fed u drink & u did'nt know
maan - nahi geet please really I did'nt know
geet reads the headlines - Maan Singh Khurana..most eligible bachelor with pari now
she throws a paper on his face (maan snaps back & stares at geet)


geet takes another paper - Maan Singh Khurana ...already taken???(sasha or pari!!)
she throws the paper on him (geet stop it..)

takes another paper - Maan Singh Khurana ...smooth steps!!!
she throws that..picks few more & throws on his face...

wat is all this??
since when are u bachelor...wat is all this??
as far as I know...aap ne mera saath 7 nahin 14 phere liyen!!

maan - agar tum party main aathi to yah sab nahi hota...(he made a baby face)

geet - how can I come to the party...

Arjun knows I don't attend parties..if I attend one clients party then he would
expect me to attend other clints parties as well...I don't want to set any
false expectations...

maan - tum mera saath to aa sakth thi na...
geet - kis ehsiyat se???
maan - you are my wife damit!!!
geet - oh really...how many of them out there know that I am ur wife..
forget that how many of them know u r married at the first place..
I don't want to walk into a bunch of fools & be a laughing stock...
I know how embarrising it would be for u ..
maan - why do u think it will be embarrising for me..
geet - because thats the way u made me feel all this years...
maan - geet ..sweet heart aise kuch nahi hain
i am not embarrised about us
geet - man leejiya..aap ne humre rishthe ko kabhi woh naam diya hi nahi
maan - GEEEET (really annoyed)
geet - don't shout at me!!
I have told u earlier..& I am telling u again..please
just let it be the way it is..don't complicate things..
I have never expected anything from u...so don't push me into situations
maans phone rings ...& he sees the number & closes his eyes in anger
geet snatches the phone & smashes it on to the floor
(maan looks at the phone & rubs his forehead)
geet - why don't u ask that ultha patti Sasha to stop calling..
maan was shocked that geet knew about sasha is caling him...
maan - geet ..geet meri baath sono tho..mera aur sasha ke beech aisa
geet - thats between u & sasha..I have never bothered..just keep me
out of all this..
maan - tum mujhe itna hi samjh payee ho geet
geet - thang aagayee hoon aap ko samjh samjh kar
geet walks away..without leting him say a word..
maan looks at the papers..& sees the pics...the pics were really odd..close pics of him & pari
& some pics with other girls..any wife would get affended..maan crushes the paper
he was shocked with the insecurties that has been building in her...she was right he never made an attempt to tell any one that they were married...not even pari...

geet goes to pooja's place ...
pooja - thanxs thanxs a lot....party was wonderful & hugs geet
geet gives a weak smile..
pooja - arjun utna bhi sadoo nahi hain...
geet still does'nt say anything...
pooja notices geet was disturbed...geet kya baath hain...
geet - kuch nahi..
pooja - tu kal party main kyun nahi aayee?
geet - paper main jo deehka kafi nahi hain
pooja - nahi yaar..u know the media people...I was there..pari hi maan se chipak
rahi thi...he was all the while looking for u..& kept waiting for u
geet - u don't have anything better to talk about...
pooja - aacha chall main tere liya breakfast banathi hoon..
geet - mujhe nahi khana..
maan walks in..
maan - pooja please mera liya kuch bana do...mujhe bhaut bhook lagh rahi hain
subha se biwi ka gussa kha raha hoon
(maan puts his hand around geet..she pushes her shoulder at once)
pooja smiles..- ji jiju..
geet walks away to another room..
pooja - jiju bhaut gussa main hain...
maan - mera phone bhi todh diya..
maan follolws her to the room..she stood facing the balcony
he slipped his hand around her waist...sorry sweetheart....
geet - don't sorry me...just leave me alone..(she pulls out of his grip)
maan again pulls her closer..chodo mujhe maan...
maan starts kissing her on her neck..maaan...she maons..
he trails a kisses to her ears..moving over to her jaw line...slowly taking in her lower lip
geet pulls back..chodo mujhe...u cannot always get ur way out like this..
maan - tumhe dehk kar mujhe aur kuch soojtha bhi nahi hain
he plunged his hands into her hair, holding her immobile... he kissed her, he was violent
searching her mouth, biting her lips...he watched her gasps of pleasure and surprise and waited
for her to push him away in anger...she did'nt..she was turning on instead..maan smiled at her
& kissed her again passionately... pooja knocks the door...they break apart..geet straightens herself..& moves away from maan..realzing she was angry with him...

pooja - geet really yaar..it was not his mistake..
maan makes a baby face nodding his head..
pooja - yaar woh pari aur doosri ladkiyan jiju ke peechai padhi thi
geet - just leave me alone ...please..

precap
geet still angry

thanxs guys..thanxs so much for ur love & suppot..please do comment
love muskan my new ff ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

1st one to comment😆😆😆😆
awesome update.....................loved it👏👏👏👏
Geet Maan se gussa hai .................Maan toh gaya😆😆😆😆
why don't they reveal that they were married??????????😕😕😕😕
loved Maan n Pooja jija-saali relationship😃😃😃
plssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first one!!! 😊

Oops, not first, but second 😊 😉

Amazing update!
Geet ko Maan ke oopar ina zyaada gussa dikhate hue pehli baar dekha hai!! Good hai, Maan wil make attempts to let her fears, insecurities go away 😊

Loved the way Pooja was supporting Maan 😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉hey muskaan ,

awesome dear i like the way geet is gussa on maan she is behaving like a typical wifey now and now maan has to introduce geet to everybody as his wife sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 i m loving it .u r too good muski.wow geet ka gussa maan ka maannaana phone todh diya😭😭😭😭😭 pooja becoming a cupid maan knows ki geet gussa hai toh seedha pooja ke ghar jayegi and he followed and he is at right place at right time .coooooooooooooooooooooool👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

luv
simran
Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yar y dont Maan tell tht he is frickin married..im maha pissed at Maan atm!

nice part tho for once geet is angry.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahahah maan deserves that lol
geet should slap him tight
how could he forgets to announce his marriage
hehe geet should be extremely angry and slap slap and slap.... so it knocks some sense in his mind...

omg i just remembered.... u changed priya and poped pari in that place grrr
lol
well hated pria.... but starting to hate pari now..... u should kick all the P female out lol

gr8 update
xxx

maan deserves a slap....
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this side of geet.. as expected ... yaar.. why they don't reveal about their marriage.. Hoe after next episode maan will call in a party or press meet and will announce his marriage....hope soo...


PS:- your update as usual was awesome sweet heart.. don't wanna say that in the beginning.. you might have started getting bored reading same sentences again and again..😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely muski;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;😊😊😊 really a nice update,,and pleaseeeeeeeeeeee keep on updating next part daily,,,we cant afford to miss even a day.....
thankssssss alot 4 the PM.😃😃😃😃😃

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