Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 102

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and Uzma..thanks for these words..i am elated...

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When you say nothing at all

Maan had his shirt open; she saw that, had registered that but had not wanted to delve into it. She had wanted to put her hand on his chest, next to his heart but had felt a strange kind of shyness despite being in his arms. She had felt a tingling deep inside her as he had taken her to the window holding both her hands. He had said some profound words, words that had shaken her.

Did he mean he was the light which had to live with her darkness? Did it mean he was willing to share her with her past? Was he saying that he would accept her with her past? Dare she tell him what her past was fearlessly? Would he be able to bear her truth?

Just as she was mulling over this, he had put a ring on her finger and she was left with questions, questions that plagued her. Was is part of the charade or was it real? Was it because he felt their destinies were entwined or because he was keeping face with Daadi?

She knew her answers but as the say once bitten twice shy, she was never going to take anything at face value. But how does one not see what his eyes told her? How does one ignore his touch, his look which seared right through to her soul? And then he had gone and done it. He had put the ring, as if it belonged with her. That he wanted this engagement for real.

Could it be? Dare she dream? Did she have the right to dream? If she told him the truth, would he then still want her to be his partner for life? Would she complete his life?

Maan had seen her tears as he had heard Daadi had asked if he was lying about his engagement for her health. He had seen the hurt and he knew what he wanted to do. He wanted this engagement for real. He had wanted to build a life with Geet. He was going to accept her with her past whatever it was. They were meant for each other. He had seen that, the taveez, their meeting all pointed to their joined fates. He was sure of it and he told as much to her. He told her not to run anymore for he would be right behind her and how far does one run from oneself?

He had seen her hesitation as his image had appeared in the shattered pieces of glass to step on them, step away from him and he had told her without words by lifting her that he would always be there to pick her up, away from trouble, away from insecurities. He was there for always and then he had taken her to the window holding her hands to show her how they gelled, how they were light and dark, one incomplete without the other. It was their fate and he was binding them together with this ring. He needed no words, he needed no pledges he just wanted her.

He had held her hand, the one he had just put ring in and drawn it near his mouth to kiss her fingers with passion to let her know that he craved her with all his heart. He would devour her with his body and soul. She was the water to his parched soul. His heart was beating hard and he took her hand and placed it against his heart, to make her hear the beats. To tell her that every beat only spoke her name, it was litany that consumed him.

He felt her fingers tremble as they touched his skin, he saw her eyes turn molten with desire and he knew that she was with him leaving all her doubts behind, leaving everything except for this moment, this moment that was magical.

She had felt herself melt as her fingers touched his skin. She had felt a flame of desire light inside her and she felt her fingers trace his chiseled torso, felt the ridges of his muscle, firm yet responsive to her furtive touch. She trembled as she felt his muscle twitch; she looked into his eyes reveling in this magical moment that his blazing eyes created. She put her other hand involuntarily closing the gap as moved forward, their bodies almost touching. She closed her eyes as she felt his head move towards her, anticipating his kiss, silently asking him to take her in his arms.

Her head tilted, her eyes closed, Maan could see she wanted to be kissed and he knew he did not have the strength to resist the temptation she wielded. He wanted her and he gave in to his passion, knowing that it was an answer to hers.

He gathered her in his arms as if in slow motion, savoring each movement to the fullest, feeling inch by slow inch the graze of her skin against his, the brush of her breast against his chest as she inhaled deeply, he cherished the sweet agony that only heightened the anticipation. He then slowly lowered his lips to hers, taking them in a kiss that sealed their fates, made them one. He heard her sigh his name in surrender and Maan knew he will never let her go.

He slowly broke apart from her, moving back as he said, "that was for asking me to not kiss you in public and also for calling me cutie, Now tell me was that cute?" he asked as she blushed and tried to run away but Maan held her wrist, brought her back to him and whispered in her ear as he leaned over her shoulder and running a finger against her jawline, "I think you are hot, sweetheart!"

"When You Say Nothing At All" – Ronan Keating – OST Notting Hill

It's amazing
How you can speak
Right to my heart
Without saying a word,
You can light up the dark
Try as I may
I could never explain
What I hear when
You don't say a thing


The smile on your face
Lets me know
That you need me
There's a truth
In your eyes
Saying you'll never leave me
The touch of your hand says
You'll catch me
Whenever I fall
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all

All day long
I can hear people
Talking out loud
But when you hold me near
You drown out the crowd
(The crowd)
Try as they may
They could never define
What's been said
Between your
Heart and mine


(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

The smile on your face
The truth in your eyes
The touch of your hand
Let's me know
That you need me


(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

The smile on your face
The truth in your eyes
The touch of your hand
Let's me know
That you need me

(You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all
You say it best
When you say
Nothing at all)

That was so profound 👏 👏 👏 but at the same time very very realistic and touching. I love how you linked it to the events earlier in the day. Awesome. Such a pleasure reading one of your scenes.

Jhan

Wow Vrusahli...now i so want this scene picturized in the Serial.....Maan and Geet would set the screen ablaze with their chemistry!! Thank you for granting me a my CHEST scene wish...now only if CVs will oblige.....I will be in heaven!!! As always.....you create magic with words....I am in awe....of your skill....tremendous!!!👏👏👏

Cutie and hottie...nice combination. But when brought together, can explode! His passion is more than enough for both of them. Thank God she is not THAT passionate - warna pata nahi kya hota.

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

That was so profound 👏 👏 👏 but at the same time very very realistic and touching. I love how you linked it to the events earlier in the day. Awesome. Such a pleasure reading one of your scenes.

Jhan

ah jhan..thank you.. so much...

the shirt...made me go crazy...not to mention his hot body..

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Cutie and hottie...nice combination. But when brought together, can explode! His passion is more than enough for both of them. Thank God she is not THAT passionate - warna pata nahi kya hota.

hey dol...yeah..they are like inferno that light ups when they touch he is flint and she the matchstick...lethal when combined..

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Cutie and hottie...nice combination. But when brought together, can explode! His passion is more than enough for both of them. Thank God she is not THAT passionate - warna pata nahi kya hota.

Dol...she is not so passionate yet...but that soon will change...for having a Man like MAAN...I cannot imagine she will be able to hold back for too long. I can imagine the minblowing scenes Vrush will write once they are married!!! Looking forward to it!!