Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#991

Vrush .....do u seriously think i can sleep after reading this ...i was just going to sign off and off to bed when ur pm popped up and i had to read it ....kaise kaise dhamakedar parts likhti ho tum ...each one is better that the other ....itna naughty Maan, 😳 me going bonkers ......

"Par mujhe jo chahiye sirf tum de sakti ho na," 😳 😳
* me a gone case *

Its almost 2:00 am here ....time to get naughty thought 🤣 all becoz of you 😛 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#992

Oh my...

i have to reply from page 125...i have so much to do...

finally i came back to earth..after..finishing the series for now...till new inspiration strikes me..

though nags's ideas are there to explore but me not going to think about them now..else..i shall..again..go back to wonderland..and i do have lot of people to thank...

let me do that...after some fuel in me... COFFEE....

thanks guys..love you all for reading and commenting on my work...it makes me..all mushy inside...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#993

Maan is sooo dayum naughty.......

me likey a lot.... lol...

another wonderfully written and very passionate update....

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lody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#994

Very lovely part omg the baby woow realy every thing sooo lovely and hotttttttttttt and thanks for pm

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Neha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#995

Vru it was awesome and thank you for continuing .... I wanted it .... I am hyperventilating it was so hooooooot ..... the baby is also naughty ..... Maan now wants a daughty .... that is really cute .... the flash back scenes of an year back were also awesome .... do continue if u can .... and keep writing love u 🤗

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--Nargis--

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Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#996

I don't know what else to say so I will say one word...............perfect!!!

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Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#997

OMG simply awesome, loving each and everything u write!!! keep writing and do PM!!

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mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 15 years ago

#998

di!!! I am so sorry that i could not come and reply or read today!!!! I was at a family barbecue.....didn't want to be there!!!!!! lolz....sadly but true wanted to spend my time with u all!!!

Was planning to get home early too....but my cousins were not letting me goo....but as promised i came to grace ur post today!! Will definitely read and reply tomorrow!

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--Revv--

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#999

Hi Vroom,

As usual late in my replies... But I think I told u what i felt- The 1st one was steamy and the the 2nd part was foamy --- literally frothing imaging the intense Maan with baby and his usual tug the wife pull 😆😆😆.......

My mind has become a horse which keeps galloping around cos of ur stories... U are not atall gentle..U just shove me into the dream land.. Weekends bhi nahi chorthi 😳😳...

But I love it cos u keep my weekend blues awat 😆😆..

BTW, I think the CVs should recruit u.. I know they cant show intimate scenes on the TV.. but everytime they show the 2 roses - I ll think of what u actually wrote here and women all around would need some ice cold water - not just to gulp.. But like Maan did in one of the HP epis, to cool our senses down by pouring it over us...

Simple words.. inferences and symbolisms... Beautiful -

Like Nags said - Just one word Perfect.. And I have told u before - U perfect perfection to the T...

U have raised the bar for the CVs too baby.. they need to give us a meatier story line and not fall into the trap of the usual....I wish they are taking a note of ur wonderful ideas and incorporate them.. I have seen many instances where they have used ur ideas or diags... So I wish they use the baby track too 👏👏👏...

One complaint though.. I ddnt WANT it to END 😭😭... I was like itni jaldi katam ???

Edited by MaaneetDD - 15 years ago