FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan should clear the misunderstanding before its too late.... because the misunderstanding will only bring separation between them not closeness.

I love the family moment... hope to see more.

Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey realy nice update !!!!!!!!!!! please do next updat today only pleaseeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
seems like you are resorting to one update a day now 😭 Please we all are badly addicted to pyar ka ehsas, ek dose se kaam nahi chalta 😉
please update karo 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
I LOVED IT!!!
hey for some reason i am not getting the pms....could you plz pm me when you update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks so much hun!!! Loved it!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update! very emotional towards the end! but welldone
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
great part, lool frog ka ghar 😆 that is jkz
well, so krish is gone, i wonder why maan will drink...hmm?
cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskaan why only one update a day are u busy😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

he sat there untill the rain stopped....
he went in saw geet sleeping with tears trails on her face..
that added to his anger...

part 83

why do I always land up doing things that hurt her...
why can't I control myself my feelings when she is around....
(he walks across the room in rage..)

I just explode..with my emotions..
he clutches his fist..was about to punch on the glass..then looked at her.. poor soul..
I should take it slowly with her not running her into pool of confused emotions..
I want her to be sure this time..trust me more..more than ever..
he looks her tears again..all this makes him stressed and wild at himself..
he makes a drink for himself..he gulps a glass & makes one more..he finish's that &

get one more & bangs the glass on the table..geet gets up with the noice..
maan keeps his finger in his lips ...shhhh...shh..princess is sleeping..quite
geet walks to maan ..maan hides the glass behind..
geet - aap ne gile kapde kyu pane hain..?
maan - wow main..
geet - challo change kar loo..
maan - tum so javoo..I will change...
geet gets the towel..& tells him to wipe..his head..
maan - umm!! main baad main kar loonga..(he looks away)
geet - abhi..& stood there
maan sat on the couch...geet wipes his hair...her touch runs current through him..making
it impossible to hold back..maan pulls the towel
maan - geet tum javoo main karloonga(geet notices maan fumbling)
geet turns to leave & notices the glass...
she sits on the opposite couch & holds her head in disgust...
geet - aap ne sharab piye hain?
maan - nahi..(and his head noded yes)
maan comes sits down on the floor next to her...holds his ears
maan - sorry...
geet - abhi to aap se baat karna bhi bekar hain..
she takes the towel & wipes his head...
maan - wow bahar main ..beh..(geet keeps her fingers on his lips..)
geet - iske bare main kal baat karenghe..(maan starts kissing her fingers that was on his lips)
geet pulls back..maan !!!...he makes a baby like face..
she wipes him & unbuttons his shirt reluctantly..maan looks at her...
she slides the shirt off his shoulder & he falls on her lap..
she wipes his back & and his neck...she looks away..while wiping his bare chest
geet gets up & walks away...maan slips his hand in her waist...from behind
& hugs her..rests his chin on her shoulder...
geet - kya chahia..aap ko
maan hugs her..& his tears starts wetting her shoulder..
she turns back into his arms...(worried )
geet - kya hua maan ..
maan - tum mujhe pyar nahi karthi ...kabhi bhi nahi karthi..(makes a baby face)
humesha mujhe se door door jaathi hoo..mujhe kabhi aapne paas nahi aane dethi
geet cups his face & kisses his eyes..& his tears..his hold tightens in her waist..
& his hand wander in her back...& clucthed her hair very softly...pulled it back
in a jerk..with out hurting her...he looked at her..she looked down...(yet again)
maan came close to her lips..looked at her & felt her breath on his lips
geet closed her eyes ...maan softly kissed her & turned away and left her..geet could feel the his
restlessness & stress his eyes had so much love & passion..& how much he
wanted her desperately..geet held him back..maan looked in suprise..she slowly
embraced him in her arms..and rested her head in his chest...
(he knew ..she was giving in for him)
maan lifted her and laid on the bed & slowly traced his hands around her...he bend forward &

closed the distance between their lips...tears rolled down..both their eyes...as they kissed..
theit unsaid pain..unspoken pain..their khushi...was all they could think of..
maan very gradually undressed her & slowly laid on her..there was nothing between them..

geet held on to the pillow with her hands..maan held her hand ..her bangles broke..he moved
very softly..his every touch was so tender..so delicate..as if she was a soft feather..
like a rose bud..like a dewdrop...she gave in every thing he wanted...
Slowing down between the sheets was deepening the emotional & psychological bond ..
it meant living that every moment..instead of rushing through it..they had their longest
ever lasting moment togather...geet closed her eyes as they reached their climax fianally
togather...maan released her hand & did'nt let go..he slidded next to her exhausted..laid
looking into her eyes..which only spoke of him...he traced his hand around her waist
trailing down her slender ******..she cuddled into his arms..
his fingers slowly stroked her spine from nape of her neck untill the tail tip..
she moaned in his embrace...he pulled her curls behind her ears..
maan - geet mai tumhare bina nahi jee saktha..
geet - shh!!! aab so jaavoo..& kisses his chest..


precap
geet angry and maan pleeding guilty
hope u like it ..please do reply...thanxs all u lovely people for ur replies

love muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayyyyyyyy.....m da 1st one to comment!!!!😃

loved it!!!!

loved da pix....dey depicts da scene so good!!!!👏👏
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update sooNN!!!
Edited by anufa - 14 years ago

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