Maaneet- A new dimension to the love (Ch 30 Pg.74) - Page 46

Originally posted by: pooh_raj

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Originally posted by: JhankaaR000

I am so sorry that I couldn't give you any update yesterday....

I would make it up today....

Hey ,

its ok
actually i liked this fiction soooooooooo much
thats why not able to wait
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for such a wonderful story
hope it really happens in show 😍

nice update

Hi !!!!

I'm really sorry for the delay. I had prepared the first two parts very much earlier, but the other part just took every bit of my mind, and heart.

I've been thinking about it from last two days and have many a times erased what I wrote, till I agrred to this one. This was the longest part. And many times harder, than before. I'm not good at romantic writing but I hope you like this one.

I'm dead tired thinking and writing about it. So, please all your comments and criticisms are appreciated. Do, comment to make me alive... and hit the LIKE Button...or else "Ye MaanEet, muje pagal kar denge"....😆

Chapter 28❤️

Do Dill Mill Rahe Hai

Maan and Geet slowly realize the awkward situation in which they are. Maan just pushes the Teddy towards Geet gently and jerked away his one hand from the teddy, the other still intact with Geet's hand.

While releasing it free they again get into an intense eye lock.

Abruptly breaking through the eyelock, Geet ran in opposite direction, her face red with blushing. She was smiling for an unknown reason. She gripped the teddy in her arms tightly and said, "I'm going".

Maan had again sat on the huge Teddy smiling contently. It was after so many years that he smiled so blissfully. But before he could share his happiness with Geet, she was gone.

He wanted to chase her and go behind her. After this week's unexpected twists and turns, he wanted to stay always beside her whether sleeping or awake.

After weeks, he got so happy. Geet's mere presence was a blessing for him. And the whole day that he spent with her made him wanting for her even more.

But he controlled his desire even if it meant taking control of nerves voluntarily, stopping the blood flow and holding his breath to travel a tight rope.

He had seen the love in her eyes and he wanted her to come back to him with her own free will.

Geet was still very nervous and blushing. She was holding on the Teddy Bear very tightly. After what she had experienced in the past she didn't want to give in so easily. Even when her heart flutters to leave her soul the moment she touches Maan and her mind threatens to explode by the outpour of so much thoughts and emotions at his once glimpse.

But, today she had decided to reach to Muskaan first coz she was the only person that could disengage her from Maan's thoughts.

She took hold of Teddy and pushed it some distance away so that her eyes could see it clearly and said, "So, Brownie… Ready to meet the sweetest and the cutest girl. I'm sure Muskaan would love you…. And yes, yes, you will also like her", she winked at the teddy as she thought this.

Maan and Geet left the Mall and reach their own destinations in about 15 minutes.

Do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Maan and Geet have reached home but the thoughts of each other are still haunting them.

Saanson mein badi beqaraari

Aankhon mein kayi rat jage

Kabhi kahin lag jaaye dil to

Kahin phir dil naa lage

Both are restless. They were tossing from one side to the other on the bed, but sleep was not in good terms with them ever since their first encounter. Nostalgia takes over both of them; the memories of Maan putting the earring in Geet's ear hole, their fights for simple things at night at the outhouse, the Dargah scenes, all come alive before them.

Apna dil main zara thaam loon

Jadoo ka main isse naam doon

Jadoo kar raha hai, jadoo kar raha hai

Asar chupke chupke

Do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Both are reminded of the court proceedings, the hug outside court, the hospital visit, and everything that conspired today.

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Aise bhole bankar hai baithe

Jaise koi baat nahin

Sab kuch nazar aa raha hai

Din hai yeh raat nahin

As the new day sets in, Geet hands the Teddy that she had bought (picked actually) to Muskaan

and apologized for being rude as Muskaan was really upset.

Muskaan loved the teddy bear, and started playing with it.

Maan got up from his bed with the first rays of sun. He had nothing much to do today. But, he prepared himself to go to office as it was the best way to keep him busy.

Kya hai kuch bhi nahin hai agar

Honton pe hai khamoshi magar

Baatein kar rahi hai, baatein kar rahi hai

Nazar chupke chupke

Do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Geet was very delighted that she liked the gift chosen by her. Muskaan's appreciation was worth it, after what she had gone through to get it, she smiled as the thought about previous day floated in her mind. Unknowingly, she again started strolling the path of Love, on the vehicle of her Heart to the destination Maan. All the moments that she had spent in Khurana Constructions, her meetings with him at the Hoshiyarpur, when he emerged as the savior of Geet in the adverse situations and the day spent with him yesterday, all flashed back to her.

Coming from the washroom, Maan was willing to get ready soon, but as he stepped out of it, he reminisced the time when Geet was living in his outhouse, the wet curly locks that he placed behind her ear, the curtain that had entangled both of them, and all the moments when she was with him.

He recalled the past day's events and a sweet smile escaped his face. But, suddenly he was alarmed, he remembered something else.

He fished around his things to find his mobile and called the Manager of Archies' Gallery, whose number he had taken from the visiting card placed at its billing counter. He assured him the payment of the teddy that he had brought (Geet had taken with her), and talked him not to make a fuss over it. The Manager dutifully obliged him, while Maan asked him to send his home one more Teddy like the one he had taken from the shop.

"I don't know if I would meet you ever or not. But I'm sure I can never forget you. And I know, you would come back to me, you can't stay away from me. I don't know, if I did right by not stopping you yesterday, but I didn't want to force you either. Trust me Geet, if we are destined to be together, than I'm ready to accept all your sanity and insanity throughout my life. But, otherwise also, I will not leave you alone. I know you are the strongest and the most humble human being that I've come across, and I know, you won't like my interference in your life if don't want to be with me, and that's why I would follow you like a shadow, without letting you know about it.

And if what I saw in your eyes was indeed the love for me, then I'll never let you go!!!!", said Maan to himself. It was only last night that he had made peace with his feelings.

He knew that he loved her, and living away from her was not better than a slow, silent death. But, he was ready to go through that, coz he didn't want to force his love on her. And being, honest to himself, he had no idea of Geet's whereabouts. Not that it was a problem for him to figure out where she was, but he didn't want to hurt her in any way now.

Kahin aag lagne se pehle

Uthtaa hai aisa dhuaan

Jaisa hai idhar ka nazaara, oh

Vaisa hi udhar ka samaa

Geet was still distracted and her mind kept wandering around her most cherished moments. She didn't know she could meet him again or not. She knew that Maan loved her but she was afraid she wouldn't be able to reciprocate that love. She thought Maan deserved someone better than her, someone that's a true fairy, Parineeta. Her heart and mind had although agreed to bid adieu to Maan quite amicably but the truth be told, her every breath was cursing her for that. She ran away from there when she never wanted to go, when she wished to be held into his strong arms. She herself didn't know what she wanted for her life. It was as if staying away from him made her forget all emotions and feelings. Her each heart beat reminded her of Maan. Her body was playing with Muskaan but her mind was somewhere else and her soul had escaped her body to be with Maan much earlier.

Muskaan got ready to go to her friend's place and then remembered that she had phoned her Superman too yesterday. She picked up the phone to call her Superman. He had promised him for a day out today, but she was going for the birthday. Just when she was about to call Geet entered and told her to drink her milk. Muskaan said, "Di no milk…", and realized the mistake. Muskaan laughed out loud and decided to change her plan.

Geet asked the reason for her laughter, and she just pointed to the glass.

Today, Muskaan was so happy to see that teddy that she had drank her milk without throwing any tantrums and handed the glass to her before running to her bedroom. Geet was so lost that she held the empty glass for half an hour, thinking that she hadn't had her milk.

Muskaan decided that she was taking Geet with her and then an idea struck her.

Muskaan: I've had my milk, half-an-hour ago.

Geet: Oh… What???

Muskaan: Yes Di…. And why are you holding the empty glass like this??

Geet: Oh… Yes… You had your milk. I was just…

Geet didn't know how to react. She was caught being unaware of. She stumbled to find words and then said, "Mein… Woh… Let me take this glass back to kitchen", she ran away feeling embarrassed.

Muskaan immediately dialed Maan to tell him to come. Maan wondered that Muskaan could call him, whenever he was at the end of his own wits. He agreed to her as he didn't feel like going to Office, especially when Geet was not around.

Muskaan called Geet and told her to get ready soon.

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Muskaan and Geet had reached the venue. Geet smiled as she saw the picturesque scene of the lake. The atmosphere was very calm there, people had come for picnic, some were boating in the lake. Then there was para sailing through water. The picnic spot provided great serenity from the hustle bustle of the town. Geet stood there still for some time, trying to capture the beautiful scene in her eyes.

Muskaan ran her eyes all through the place to look for Maan. She had just come to the place a few days before with her parents and she knew about it. She looked in the right and saw Maan. Geet had already moved towards the canopy to have a better look of the place.

Muskaan let her go and she went towards Maan saying that her friends are there. Geet loved nature and its beauty. It gave her peace and relieved her of the pains that life had given her.

She was enjoying the scene to her fullest.

Muskaan reached to him, "Hey Princess, why did you call me here?"

"Hey, Superman. Today's my friend's birthday. As my parents won't be able to make it with me today, I called you".

"And where's your friend?"

"Well.. She must be there", she said pointing her finger at an elsewhere direction.

And saying that she ran in the direction, leaving Maan amused. Maan had come with the teddy that he had demanded from the Manager, and was holding it, but before he could give it to her, she had dashed out of the place.

Maan ran his eyes everywhere to find where Muskaan was and then had a look at the whole surroundings. Seeing the place he was reminded of Geet in the garden. Although he had made his mind not to think about Geet his eyes and his heart was still searching for her.

Geet also looked over the land to find Muskaan and shaking her head from one direction to another, suddenly she felt frozen as beautiful hazel her eyes met with his sharp ones.

Maan and Geet stood rooted to their spots. A whole bunch of feelings was springing from their heart, and the Love was sparkling in their eyes.

Dil mein kaisi kasak si jagi

Dono jaanib barabar lagi

Dekho to idhar se, dekho to idhar se

Udhar chupke chupke

Maan and Geet moved towards each other, as if magnetically attracted. They were lost in the eyes that spoke volumes about love.

Geet reached towards Maan, and extended her hand to touch but held it back.

"Geet, tu bhi na… kyat um hamesha Maan ke baare mein sochti ho. Why would he be here? After all, he's too good to be true!", Geet murmered to herself and started crushing her dupatta with one hand.

"But, I should check it!!!", she said to herself.

With this thought, she again stretched out her hand, but Maan had stopped back a little, so that now her hand couldn't reach to her.

Geet dropped her hand, hung up her head downwards and despair covered her mind and senses.

"It's better to forget him", she murmered.

"B..But I can't forget him", she said to herself giving a counter view to her conscience, her heart spoke louder.

Geet was about to turn away when someone twitched her nose. She looked up and saw him again.

This time, Maan was smiling, and Geet drowned herself into those sharp lovely eyes, before she could manage to speak.

Geet: Maan. You are really here?

( Geet spoke in disbelief, her eyes wide in amazement)

Maan was simply drinking in to her beauty, and didn't bother to speak for some time. But then, he felt a soft hand on her hand. Unwillingly, Maan broke his gaze, and looked towards his hand.

Geet was simply in shock, first to see Maan there, and then to see a new Maan there. She was still uncertain, whether her eyes were dreaming or not, Maan was smiling and he twitched her nose, and he had a teddy bear in his hand.

She take a look at the teddy bear and tried to get the teddy bear for him, realizing that it was the same as the one for which she had fought with Maan yesterday. To become sure if she was dreaming or not, she reached out to teddy bu touched Maan's hands instead.

The touch sent an electric current inside them, and Geet jerked back to reality.

"Uhh…who…it's not right", and she started stepping backwards.

"Geet… Geeet", he tried to call out.

Geet had turned and walking slowly, when Maan reached to her from behind and grabbed her arms.

Geet at once felt his hands on her arms. She turned back to tell him to leave, but she couldn't.

Geet could clearly see the pain in his eyes, "Geet… I'm really sorry".

"for, whatever happened to you, for the sufferings that you had to go through, for the problems that you had to face", Maan said this, without looking into her eyes as he was afraid he would break up if he said that looking into her eyes.

"Oh really", Geet was not going to succumb so easily.

"Geet, I mean it", he said looking downwards.

"But I don't get it. Just leave me", she said with a stern voice.

Her eyes were towards Maan but her sight was blurred.

Maan loosened his grip over her arm and let his hand fall on her soft skin. He looked upwards to meet Geet's eyes and held her hand between both his hands, careful not o hold tightly but instead making a cage for her hand.

He then bent on his one knee and said as softly as he could, "I'm sorry. I was a total jerk when I didn't believe you. Please forgive me. I won't give you a chance for this ever again in 'our' whole life".

Geet could see the conviction in his eyes, feel the truth and softness in his words, and warmth and care in his hold.

At first, she stood transfixed. Her senses left her, she couldn't see, hear or feel anything. The only sight was Maan kneeling before her, all that she could hear was her own heart beat and the blood flowing vigorously through her veins, giving her warmth was the only feeling.

She felt world stopped at that one moment. She didn't have heart to step back nor did she have the guts to go forward. She stood motionless for as long as her legs could bear her.

She then abruptly said, "It's ok… You are forgiven".

Maan was so happy that his eyes were closed hearing that, and a small tear drop came rolling down the cheek.

Geet could feel his joy, as his hands radiated energy to her hand held. She knew that she could go weak any moment. She gently whispered to him, "Maan. You may get up".

And with that she slipped her hand out of her reach and before he could stand upright, she went away.

She went to the farther most corner. She had no idea how to control her emotions that were brewing up inside her, the heart beat that was thumping hard against her body and the breathing that was so heavy as if she came from a marathon. Geet was on the verge of loosing herself. Only thid time, there was a great tug-of-war, between her heart and the mind.

Maan stood there, watching Geet go, he knew he had not the strength left to see her walk out of his life again, but he was also afraid of hurting her, of not coming upto her expectations, of not being able to take her care. He wanted to lay bare his heart in front of her, but he was scared that Geet would leave. There was a constant clash of feelings inside him. He didn't know anything now. For the first time, Maan was clueless about his own future.

To put some rest to the tempest rising inside him, he started roaming around.

Geet was too disturbed to even move from that space.

Like a statue, she kept standing, when a little tickling on her cheeks brought her to land. Unaware she shook her head to notice a rainbow coloured butterfly, playing with her.

The butterfly then sat on her other cheek, and she gave a slight smile. The butterfly, kept flying in circles ahead of her, to allure her with its colours.

It was like a God sent message to her, as Geet understood the naughtiness of the butterfly and tried following her. The butterfly also, knowing her intention, flew away from her but remained in her sight. The chase continued as Geet laughingly followed it through small bushes and terrains.

While wandering around Maan came across a rose tree. One of the fully bloomed rose on it enchanted him with its beauty. Although, he never plucked flowers, but this time, he held it. And as soon as he bent to pluck the rose, someone came from behind him.

He felt a hand on his back as she said, "Oh… To yaha ho tum. Bahut pareshan kiya mujhe", she said laughingly, controlling her panting as she saw the butterfly sat on the rose.

For a moment Maan went into a stupor feeling Geet so close to him, he gently plucked the flower, not wanting to disturb the butterfly. Geet looked at it curiously. But the butterfly was butter-fly and it flew again, leaving Geet behind laughing out loud amongst the green serene landscape. Geet was amused at the butterfly's behavior and till then didn't realize she was holding onto Maan.

As her laughter died out, she saw the butterfly come again to that rose and she was about to shriek in excitement when Maan interrupted, "Sh..Sh..Sh…. Don't scream".

She then jerked back , left his hand and stood straight. One of her hand was now on her mouth.

Maan had got that butterfly placed on the rose, who was now sucking the pollens, and turned towards Geet with that red rose in one hand and the teddy on the other. Seeing directly into her eyes he said, "I LOVE YOU, GEET"

Geet closed her eyes to feel those three magical words, from the person that meant life to her, only she didn't want to agree.

She then opened her eyes, and stared at him unblinkingly.

She didn't know how to respond, but almost involuntarily, her lips moved to say, "I LOVE YOU TOO!!!".

The butterfly was gone yet her magic remained.

"I will be a fool if not say this and take this", she said regaining her consciousness and snatching the rose and teddy from him.

She smelled the rose, to inhale its sweet fragrance, and cuddled the Teddy, in her arms, while Maan, took her into an embrace, and kissing her forehead with tenderness whispered, "Never ever leave me, Geet".

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Simplicity was her charm, the sweetness of voice- her beauty, the innocence- a virtue and her childish activities was the breathing life in her.

The regal air around him, his attitude and arrogance, a hard shell that incorporated a soft heart- this was Maan Singh Khurana.

These truly contrasting images of world were now to be seen always together.

Do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai, haan sab ko ho rahi hai

Khabar chupke chupke, ho

Do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

Magar chupke chupke, magar chupke chupke

Mm hm, chupke chupke, ah ha, chupke chupke

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I am glad you took your time to post this update, it was totally worth the wait. Totally beautiful. Thank you for making them say what was in their hearts

Waiting for your next update.

Polki

Beautiful update! They confessed........superb! Do continue soon.

very beautiful update.. luved the confession....do continue soon

WOW!!!
Just loved reading the update 😊
Finally they confessed 😊

omg that was awesome

luved the confession....do continue soon

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