I'll be there for you | MJHT | Chapter 12 Page 47 - Page 33

^^OMG yaa i really love zaids character too...maybe because its been potrayed by RK but also because he's just soo sweet and all those scenes are really lovely!!!!

rabia!!! updated my comments on pg 43!! really sorry for the late one!!:(

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First of all congrats on you relationship, wish you both all the luck and happiness. 😃

hiii rabia welcome back!!

Hello ji. Name is Rinki and i ish your new reader. Blame Meera, she sent me here to bak bak and annoy you. 😳 She said you would endure with it. 😉
Firstly, Introductions, yum yum. All these hotties and their lady loves. Im loving it. You chose a cute cast. And i like all the names, so interesting and cuuute! Eeek. Oh and warning before i even start commenting on your chapters, i blab a lot, and it can be about things that are not even related to the story but come in my head. So sorry in advance for that torture. Erm, a question, are there going to be like hugely chaotic love triangles? Cause that would be interesting, painful for me cuz im emotional, and amusing cuz im a sadist. 😃
Now i shall move on to commenting the parts. 😆

Chapter 1
Im commenting as i read so lots of exclamations that will prolly be questions that get answered in the chapter itself. So ignore me.
Call me an idiot but when i read Zeenat, i went back and checked the intros to see if she was in the main cast. She wasnt! Hah. Ahem, i mean, who is she? *blinks innocently* Rehaan, *siigh* sounds so smexy, and and SHAHIID! Cuute, i can totally picture him. <3 And his convos with Vincent, haha, so cute. The big vocab was all "proper and sophisticated" made me feel stupid. 😆 But its helping me, especially cuz my AP English exam will be soon. 😆 Aww, they're such cute friends, all giving advices and everything. *nazar utharing*
Ooh-lala, Chicago, Penn, Miami. 😳 Kya baat hai? All smexy places. Miami reminds me of a convo i had. Ahem. *whistles innocently*
OMYGOSH! The Great Gatsby! Thats what the kids in my this now old but then new school had to read! I had to still do it and it was so annoying. I used Sparknotes for my essay 🥱
Awwwww Amirta is tooo cute. Pehlwaan. 🤣 🤣 Ahhh, that made me crack up. So cute. And eeek...."Akhtar" 😍 Ooh, she's rich. 😆 And im loving that they're already connecting. <3 So cute, *nazar utharing*
Aww Sammyyy! In the houuuse! *cheers* And aww, bechara, jealous over Zaid's bond with his sisters. *siigh* mayb she'll be like his sister too 😳 Munchkin! *squeals* thats so cute. 😆 And ooh lala, Zaid is awake. *wiggles brows* yum yum. And aye haye, woh kinke sapne dekhne lage the? 😲 And their bond is sooo cute. *siiigh* I love this.
Aye haye, Sammy goes shopping. And....his past...*frowns* poor baby. I hope his friends keep with him like a family. 😳 And pshh, that idiot Todd is a jerk, he better not mess with them. *narrows eyes* And eek, they're meeting. Neelam-Aditiya: what a cute jodi. :p
Aww, bechari. What a life? 😆 She's so shy. Eeek. Feelings. Awesome. =] i likes.
Neelam's bond with her parents is really cute. I think they will accept Adi in their life easily, no? 😉 Aye haye, Deepali. She's so vibrant and loud. I love it! 😆
Awww, they're sooo cute. Gosh, i love these two. && the painting sounds absolutely amazing. 😳
Oooh Hina is the teacher's pet. 😲 Interesting :p
I like Hina. She seems cool and i hope she becomes their friend as well. *whistles*
Ooh, brother. *wiggles brows* Aww, i wonder if her ambitious behavior will be a problem later on. Uhm. Anyway, that was a cute convo. Omg. 😆 Her and Zaid are too cute, ahhha, he's like a lovesick puppy and she's lil miss cool. I likes it. *grins*
I hope Adi is okay. Ahem.
And awww, S-R are too cute. I hope they meet. Muahaha.
Uhm....questions. 😆 Okay, for the first one. I think Samira. Im short 😆 And Deepali for her artsy stuff, im into painting as well so that works. =]
Second, heck yes, keep them long. 😳 I like reading long stuff. <3

Chapter 2
Ooh college life is hard man. Now im scared to go to it. 😆 Aww Carissa and Gavin are cute, all romantic. <3 And pshh, i bet Karan is an awesome dude, they just dont know him. *nose in air*
And haha, okay, this tall dude is scared of a shortie, i like this. Thats my friends right there. 🤣 And tsk tsk, he didnt check his phone at all? Boys i tell you. I cant live without my cell. 😆 Aha, Adi the flirt. <3 And YAY! Neelam is here and they're talking. Cooleo. He's so nice. :p
Aww, S-R are talking, pshh. His old girl needs to get away before i make her. *mumbles* and DEEPALIII! I love this chick man. 😆 And the whole FOBs && ABCDs part...ahh. 😳 I dont have an accent, i look like im mexican, and i can cuss a mile long when in need. Which group do i fit? 😆 But Anyhoo, Hiiina. Missie, draws attention so easily. :p She's like one of those perfect people. Im jealous. 😆
AHA! Zaid is caught by Adi and Samira. *dances*
Ooh, the teach seems cool. And ahem, are we allowed to tell you about some mistake we might have caught? Since i started reading this late, I'm sure someone has prolly alrdy told u. but the part where it goes, You will be required to meet once every two week at a location of your choice the week should be weeks no? 😳 Sorry, dont wanna seem like an idiot or something. Ahem. And man, that sounds like so much funn! I wanna take this class! *jumps around* I wud suck at the essays but pshh, i can talk. 😉
Ahhh....whoops. Dee has probs with Rehu *pouts* thats not cool. She needs to chill, pshh. I wuda smacked her head. =] And great, psh. Ppl have too many problems. *yawns* Why did Hina join the class if she has better things to do? Idiot. *mutters*
Sami has OCD. I knew it. Its cute. 😛
Question- uhm, does my comment count as my impression? 😆 But srsly, i loved it. Its interesting, i like having background info to see how the stories were created. ☺️

Chapter 3
Ahh, what a nice start to the chap. My english teacher showed us the speech and i swear, that part sent goosebumps down my spine. *shivers* And eeek, Zee. Im using that now. 😆 Aww poor boy, tsk tsk. That sucks. Yuck, science. 😆 Wah wah, Mr. Adi has started his Chashmish comments. *siigh* Whatever...you know. I wonder if it is a Californian thing, dude, i say it all the time. In my fights, when im talking, whoa. 😲 Awkwarddd. 😆
Rehu and Sami are too cute, heh. And oooh, they had lunch. *nudges*
Ahaha....Dee and Karan. 😆 I love this. I hope he isnt really a khadoos. *ahem*
Aha, what an interesting convo. *sits up to listen curiously*
Uhm, probs with Zee and Sami's family? 🤔
Im liking the convos and all. And then Rehu stands up and yells. Damnnn,, boy got some guts. *wiggles brows* i likes. 😆
And...........oh crap. Thats what i thought, and yes! Its shocking, so early in the story and Carissa is like hurt, and she's someone i actually relate to. 😆 As far as her being a tomboy and a romantic on the inside, and ooh, will Gavin be coming up soon? 😛

Chapter 4
.............Uhm. I hate blood. And it sucks, im going in the Nursing Field. 😳
Oh god, oh god, oh god. Dont die. *bites fingers*
I loved that the group worked together, good baches. And yes! The enemies are becoming friends, well at least something good happened in this tragic accident.
And psh, that Todd, *mutters and cusses* i shall not type them, because ill be hurt. But mutter them instead. Im so nice. 😆 I hope he gets caught soon and doesnt cause more trouble for the group. *frowns*
Though i have a bad feeling.

Chapter 5
I hate how my comments get smaller and smaller as i type. Sorry about that, im sick right now and its getting late over here. Gah, hate coughing. Anyway, onto commenting. =]
Aww....YAY! Nee told Dee, woot. Thats good. I hope Dee keeps her mouth shut. Ahem.
And gosh, what a girl Dee is. Eye-candy. 😆 Cute.
Haha, Adi has been pakad by the gals and the whole scene btwn them is really cute. *sigh* shows their friendship getting better and deeper. =]
Lmao, Dee and Adi would be the types to go and like something dangerous. 😆
Aww...Adi. *hugs* poor baby. And im so glad, that they talked it, cuz now Dee wont go and mention his parents again. 🤔 ahem. loved the lil scene btwn Adi and Nee. <3
Aw, Zee is so nice. Brother like. Cuuuute.
Whoooa! Rehu gets out of his shell. I loved that part.
Gavin being there with Carissa is so cute. Hehe, and all the friends talk was fun.
Oooh. Karan ji aaye hain. 😆 I hope this makes him slightly closer to the group. 😳
The girls talking about the gift and all was fun, so friend-like behavior. *siigh*
And ew....way to ruin the fun. 😆 The creeper is there.

Im sorry, ill finish commenting on the other parts tomorrow. I need to go write for a bit, take meds, eat, and sleep. 😃 Not too much. =] Im loving the story, and im so happy Meera suggested it to me when i was being prissy about some bad stories i've read. 😵
Im loving this and ill be back soon to give you more bak bak. =]
Cya. Oh and can you add me to your PM list as well? Im going to try to come on here more frequently. 😆 Hopefully.
- Rinki

Yello. Im back to finish commenting. Now onto reading and commenting. =]

Chapter 6
Gosh, Nee is such a worrywart. Suits her. Hina is in glaring mode, for some reason i could totally see that happen. Maybe Deepika glared at someone in a movie and i saw it. 😲 So frightening. Anyhoo, the other two chicks have no idea what's happening. How nice. 😆 And the Todd dude, freaking toad, creepish much? All smirking, for some reason, smirks make me think of smexy guys like Iqbal Khan, so....this dude smirking is ruining that. So im just going to imagine he's not doing it. Perfect. =] Now sneer suits his face. Well character. Cuz its creepy just like him. And im babbling again. Sorry. 🥱
Ahem, moving on, and yes. He moves away like he didnt see em. Gee, thanks a lot for scaring poor Nee then you loser. 😵 Bechari ladki ko toh heart attack hi aa gaya tha. So saddening. Hmm....he wont be behind bars. I just know it. 😆 Maybe im looking for him to create problems in the future. 🤔 I shouldnt do that but its my sadistic side coming out. *grins evilly*
Karan and Dee scene. 🤣 🤣 Ahh, thats all i got for you about them. He's so conceited. Ahh, i love it. 😆
Aww Carissa is leaving. That makes me sad yet not. 🥱
Hope she comes back later and like....i dunno. Joins the desi people and do something angrazi and make the convos entertaining. They should totally make her dress up in saris and all. 🤣 That would be entertaining.
Psh, the case is so weird. I hate troublesome things. Okay, wait...i dont really. Never mind, i just hate it when the bad guy walks away. 😆 I feel like Gavin is going to propose or something to Carissa. 🥱
Zee-Hina. Ooh-lalaa. Something's cooking up, they are totally going to hook up! She sooo knows about his crush, with those smiles she gives him. 😆 Aww, its a partyyy!
I love parties. <3 And ooooh, she's singing! And a nose pierce would totally suit her.
I approve. *nods wisely* Heh. And hindi speaking time. Awesome, i can read out loud and giggle as my mother stares me as if im crazy. More than normal.

Chapter 7
And the case is more complicated, i hope Nee doesnt freak out and like does something crazy. 😆 Im sure Hina will figure something out. And she should soo talk to Zaid, *nudge nudge*
Dee is too cute, so hyped. I love mysteries. 😍 Oohh she's going to be in Rehu's dance! Awesome, i see some fun coming up, her nautanki will be entertaining. =P
Hehe, she caught Zee about his crush. Too cute. And here comes Mr. Cool, Adi himself. 😎 Smexy.
Awww Rehuu! So cute, his lil brother sounds adorable! 🤣 And hehe, they had a moment. And pshh, Zeenat was probably an evil idiotic woman who doubted Rehu's purity. *sniffs sadly* and i cant believe i just used purity for a guy. 🤣
KARAN! *squee* Yay. He's going to steam up the dance floor with Dee. This will be amusing. Loved her reaction to him and his to her. 😆 Rehu kitna blackmail karta hai inku. 😆
Erm....dog? 😲 I hope he doesnt bite Nee in the bootie. 😆 Im expecting Mr. Adi to save her. Like a romantic romeo. 🤣

Chapter 8
Hehe, Adi is saving her. How cute, and great, the dog just has to go crazy when Nee is passing. She really has a bad luck. And now they're going home. Isn't Hina going to be there? 😆 And she is. Aha, drama. I expected Adi to totally listen in. 😆 And ugh, Carissa's parents. Psh, idiots. And the dude is soooo annoying. "Better luck next time" ill show him next time *mutters*
Its a problem filled chapter, Rehu's text. Sami's convo with Zee. Geez, drama time.
And Dee 🤣🤣 God, this chick is too cute. I love her behavior with Rehu now, so cutesy. 😆
Oooh, another interesting topic, i like how you always have so many different views and an actual banter between them in the form of a discussion, it makes me think. 😃
Wow. 😆 So now its matchmaking time, i cant wait for that. It will be interesting and maybe the couples will have their own scenes. Hayyeeee. *grins*
Zee-Hina are too cute. Adi teases Zee too much, i cant wait till its his turn to get teased. 😈

Chapter 9
Dee-Karan. Dance. Hawt. ☺️
They were actually agreeing! Im so proud. And then, so much for that. Haha, Rehu is such a cutie. Blackmailing them again. =] I likes.
Adi teasing poor Zee again. Tsk tsk. Such a great friend.
And eeeek! PICS! Thats always fun. <3
Aww Sami was too cute, her OCD is soooo cute. Hehe.
Whoa. Sami...*raises brow* And Zee's behavior. Paka, daal mein kuch kala hai. Maybe puri daal hi kaali hai. Haila. 😲
Finally, Rehu's story is out. And i knew it. That Zeenat is a no-good-witch. *mutters* She better go away before i smack her. HMPH. Thats just so sad, he was the perfect bf and she doubted him every time. </3 Heart break.
Sami....uh, she has probs. *nods* Def. I hope whatever her medical condition is, she works it out. *frowns*
Dude, what did Mitchell give the other dude? 😲 Suspense! And Hina's so lucky that room was open. 😆
Nee in salwar kameez, and Adi flirting. Aye haye, So cute. And i liked his interaction with her parents. 😆 And his words to Nee will def help her. They're just soo cute. I loved this.

Chapter 10
Sami's prob is making me curious.
Its gonna be a group picnic! Awesome. :p
Adi's such a good actor. 🤣
And finally, its out. An eating disorder. 😒 I hope she gets on the right track and starts eating right, i get the feeling Rehu would help her if needed 😳
Awww, Dee is so cute, loved that song. :p
Oooh, the matchmaking plans sound fun. Rehaaaaaaan! joins the trip. I can see scenes coming up in my mind already for the two couples. 😆 And he hurted it how? 😲
Haha, Adi and Dee, so cute.
OMYGOSH! I loved that whole part, haha. Nee got vengeance! 🤣🤣 And Adi so met his match. 😆 And Yes Adi's advice has made Nee more cooler. *nods* and i know what Zee is thinkiiiing! *smirks* haha.
He confessed! AWWW! *cuddles* They're toooo cute!
What a great way to take her pain away. 😉 😆
Haha, Adi singing. So nice. And hah, they showed the grouppp. Sooooo cuuuute! Gosh. *nazar utharing*

Chapter 11
Aww Dee and Rehu been working so hard. And Karan's such a sweetie. 😳
Adi and Sami's convo was funny. 😆 Uhm, Zee is thinking negative, for a second. Hmm, Hina works so hard. Bechari.
Haha, Adi is floored by Nee's outfit. How cute. 😳
The whole dance sequence was like amazing. And the songs were so cute, fitting the story and all. Ending scene with Karan and Dee was adorable. Kuch kuch hogaya. *wiggles brows*
Rehu's talk with Hina was good, i think it kinda made a point about the friendships they all have going and Hina's cute, she likes Zee and i hope they stay together. Ooh, niiice car. 😳 I like Beemer's but i like Hondas. Well at least my family's one, its hotter than the Beemer cuz it has this muffler thing attached to it, so it sounds freaking hawt when u drive, the Beemer sounds weak compared to it. *SIGH* 😆
The song soooo suited the situation. Zee and Hina are so cute. Loved them.
And its Yusuf bhai's entryyy! Awesome, now gotta wait for his love partner. <3

I loved the fic so far, i cant wait for the next update. Its going to be great. =]
-Rinki

Hello Rabia di
I am lekha here A silent reader Of ur FF. Could never muster up the courage to comment *honestly*

I am just hooked wid this do PM me next time u updt

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