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nimrah

@nimrah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar
Questions:
[FONT=Verdana]1. I just introduced several new characters. Are you able to keep track of everyone or am I going overboard?

Absolutely not! You've introduced all characters in the best way possible and I for one can keep track of everyone! I just love Vishal, Junaid, Aisa, Yousuf, Isra.. everyone![COLOR]

2. What do you think of the new characters?

[COLOR=blue]Like I said I already love them.. specially Yousuf is just so caring and totally makes me think of Rajeev Khandelwal! 😆 Ayesha is also this jovial, sweet girl and you just can't help but like her.. 😆 Vishal on other hand is another version of Adi.. and I love him.. Is there a new entry for him as well?? 😉

3. I'm sure Yusuf and Aisha's part must have seem rushed, but were his feelings convincing? I thought it might be interesting to have one "love at first sight" tale...but I hope it handled it well. 😕

I think you explained Yusuf's feelings well.. and yes, its nice to have someone falling in love at first sight.. makes everybody have a different story na.. It was sweet.. and the line he used that I would have remembered her face was sooo sweet.. and I love how he kept staring at her mesmerized! It was very vrey sweet.. To answer you question, it was VERY well handled! 😃

4. Overall opinions on the chapter?

Overall opinion is gonna be short coz I have to rush back to my books.. Came to read the chapter.. 😆 Anyway, it was a very sweet part.. nice to see Hina-Samira bonding and Samira seeing Rehaan shirtless was cute and her embarrassment was even more adorable! 😆 I liked Adi and Vishal's bonding as well.. Overall, another nice chapter by you Rabia Di! A job well done! Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃

Edited by nimrah - 15 years ago

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sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#342

it was a wonderful part .

reserved ..wil be back with a detailed comment 😳

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Maryam

@-Precious

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#343

yayyy what perfect timing!!! i'm hoping there will be some cute zaid scenes

will read and comment as soon as i get some time

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#344

omg updated after a long tym

but awesum part

loved it

cont sooooooooooooooon

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ardhana

@ardhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#345

1. I just introduced several new characters. Are you able to keep track of everyone or am I going overboard?

nope the characters are fine if any problem wat is the index tere for😊

2. What do you think of the new characters?

aisha is cute and interesting i am sure aisha yosuf would make a great pair well hmmm vishal he luks interesting lets see how his character gets proceeds

3. I'm sure Yusuf and Aisha's part must have seem rushed, but were his feelings convincing? I thought it might be interesting to have one "love at first sight" tale...but I hope it handled it well. 😕

yusuf and aisha were mindboggling no worries😳😳

4. Overall opinions on the chapter?

on the whole awesome chapter😊😃😆😃😊

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Maryam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#346

Questions:

1. I just introduced several new characters. Are you able to keep track of everyone or am I going overboard?

umm okay speaking very honestly here i got a bit confused with characters over here...pretty used to the original ones but it is a bit difficult to keep track of who is related to whom

2. What do you think of the new characters?

even though its a bit confusing the new ones are really interesting!!!

actually it did not seem rushed!! it was really great how it just clicked in an instant :D

4. Overall opinions on the chapter?

the chapter was really great i really liked it though i did miss zaid

😳 but the chapter was really great and specially the very beginning that was soo cute...i can imagine how samira must have felt :P :P

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#347

Lovely part dear !!

Hmm......... Yusuf is already in luv...??

Loved the Adi-Vishal convo....But I hope Vishal doesnt set his eyes on Neelam...! Hehehe !!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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princess14

@princess14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#348

great part!!!! thanks for the pm...yusuf and aisha's story was perfect...def convincing...hope to see more love blossoming!!!

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#349

NOTE: I don't know why my replies are being posted so strangely. I reported this to Vijay a while back but nothing was done about it.

Originally posted by: sharma.nat
Loved it very much loved the new characters cont. soon

Thank you so much! Will do.

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was niceeeeeeeee

Thanks Shafoo!

Originally posted by: Monika__29

1. I just introduced a several new characters. Are you able to keep track of everyone or am I going overboard?
Ii was able to keep track; you introduced them as such that I felt I had already met them:) They were introduces very subtly that it as easy to know who was who and not get confused.

2. What do you think of the new characters?
I like Vishal's character! The adventurous type are always interesting.

3. I'm sure Yusuf and Aisha's part must have seem rushed, but were his feelings convincing? I thought it might be interesting to have one "love at first sight" tale...but I hope it handled it well. 😕

4. Overall opinions on the chapter?

Will edit my comment later as I don't have much time now to elaborate. Sorry:(

Thanks for reading, Mallika! Glad you liked Vishal. 😊

Originally posted by: hazel94
hey awesome part
i love the samaira and rehaan but ryt at the beginnning too cute

nd the yusuf nd aisha parts r reallly good

interesting character vishal cant w8 to read wat happens next

Hi Hazel! Thanks so much for the appreciation. I loved writing the Samira-Rehaan part too.

Originally posted by: nitu07

OMGsh..

replying to u after SUCH A LONG TIME!!

godd.. can't believe I missed soo much

this story is just too good!!

and yusuf Ayesha part = just mindblowing..

Love their story... hehe srry being a lil biased here😳

Looks like Samaira ko kuch kuch hone laga hai.. hehe.. 😉

But idk abt Vishal... I mean I don't dislike him or annything.. its gonna be interesting to know how his story unfolds...

and yesss.. I am able to keep track of all the characters.. it just doesn't feel as if they've been introduced just now..

Yay! Nitu is back. 😃 Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I'm so glad you liked the Yusuf-Aisha part. About Vishal...well, I think most people will dislike him for a while, and then like him again. You'll see what I mean. Thanks so much!

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 15 years ago