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Before I start off....I wanna confess something...
1.I am not too good in hindi..so any grammar mistakes...please forgive me.
2.This is my first ever narration in my life.., so if i had done any mistake or if it was not upto ur satisfaction, please tel me guys...after al u r my frnds...
3.this is the most awaiting scene by all maaneetians...n i hav taken so much risk of taking it to be my first narration...so again if it is not satisfactory sorry guys...
Here goes...
Geet and Maan wre as usual working on a proj late nyt....in btwn those eye locks...., touching-touching...everything was "happening"...but ya maan was too concerned for the proj.....
and suddenly dre was a huge cracking sound.....it was a big thunder...a lightening flash.....geet jus got hold of maan's hand....n was looking around....n finally stopped at lookin maan....maan was admiring the way she got frightened.....n dre was a eyelock again.....maaahhhiiiii....... ohh but maan stoped it saying: "lekin abhi bhi power hein... tum mere haath kyun pakad kiya.." smiling to himself.... geet left his hand...giving him her as usual "eeeee" smile n said to herself...."itni rookh...chiii"
Maan: "tumne kuch kaha"
Geet: "nahi....sir...woh......"
and there again a huge crack....she again gor afraid...n lead her hands to hold maan....but stopped.....looking down.....maan was stil smiling.....he tuk his hands...n held hers......saying "tum yahi raho...main khidiki ko bandh kar ke aathi hoon..." ....stood up n walked towards d window..... Geet was watching maan walking towards the window..... she was jus admiring him....it flashed her old bumps she did with maan n how he catch holds her....she was smiling to herself........
maan gets to d window.....it has started raining...... he just looked out at d window,,,,,, flashes of those dhaba-wale scene came to his mind.......he closed his eyes n felt them frm heart....he felt lik he was holgin geet in his arms now.....he slowly opened his eyes...n turned towards geet....(mmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii started....) geet was staring at him.....blinkin her eyes slowly....admiring him..... it was lik as though he called her thru his eyes....she stood up n came to d window....slowly...hesitantly.....wit her duppatta in one hand......but neva takin eyes outta maan... she stood beside maan........
she was watchin rain outside d window....n maan was watchin her.....both knew wat dey were doin......secret secret watching......slowly both of them lead their hands outside d window....to feel d rain drops in their hand........seeing maan's hand....geet looked at maan....now he was watching d rain....or may be her hand.........with those beautifully spread rain drops.......he suddenly turned her side....n geet returnd frm her la la land..........
to do sumthng or say sumthng....she asked " sir, kya hum bahar barish mein chalein??" wit her always cutish smiling... maan was still lookin at her eyes...he jus said..."hmmm...."... n geet was like.....trying to jump out of d window....and maan got suddenly disturbed.....saying "geet tum kya kar rahi ho...??" Geet: " sir....is tarah se aayiye na.....khidiki se utar ne koi maza aayega..." at tat moment maan myt hav followed wateva geet said...... Geet jumped out of d window...maan follwed....
geet as usual started dancing...singing n al tat....in rain....maan was stil thinking abt d dhabe-wala.....n was also lost on geet's dancing in rain here...he was watching geet dancing...arms fold..... geet pulled his arms....n made him stand next to her....n went dancing around him....she was playing....her duppatta fel on maan's head....n she dint notice...she left it n was dancing still.... maan tuk it...slowly...feelin her duppatta on his face......
suddenly he pulled geet towards him...she was first lik wat sir.....n seeing her duppatta she felt wat she has done...n was lookin at him...lik demanding for her duppatta.....he was still looking at her........she tried to escape from his hold...he again pulled her even close....dey both jus too close....n a big eye lockk....mmmaaahhhhi again started.............
wen it was lik geet wudnt move....maan tuk her duppata....jus rolled it over her head.....lik doin it for a bride.......n held her 2 hands....got two step back....d rain has stopped...he got to his kneels..............looked at her.....geet still numb...she cudnt feel lik wat was happening...she was still feelin maan's breathe....
maan slowly smiling at geet......turned his face...smiled again to himself.......n looked back at geet....
maan started like "geet....." she was lookin at him......
"geet.....mujhe....mujhe bilkul nahi pata.....ki.... kaise propose karna padega ek ladki ko.......lekin..........mujhe sirf ye hi pata ki..., main kuch bhi boloon.., tum usko samj kar sakthi....."
geet couldnt guess wat he was tryin to say...she was thinking..."ye kya bolne ke liye.., ye sab keha rahi hein??"
maan:" geet...mein...mein ye kehana chahtha hoon ki..... ki.... kuch samaj nahi kar sakthe ho kya....(sumwat reallly in tesnsed voice....but closes his eyes....again a smal smile....then opns his eyes...) geet: "Sir??"
maan: "geet....main tumse pyaar kartha hoon..aur kar bhi rahoonga....kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi???"
geet waas totally astonished...she felt lik she has gone numb...she has gone deaf....it was lik her eyes gettin too bright....but suddenly too dark....she felt dizzy...she felt lik she gonna faint...she cudnt even give ny perfect reaction or expression in her face..........
maan still... "geet...??" expecting a reaction.....but no ....
again maan: "geet ab jaldi haan kaho...mere pair par dard ho raha hein....."
and just geet got disturbed from her la la land....she lifted him.....slowly...still lookin at his eyes.....but face giving no reaction.....maan slowly touched her shoulder......a beautiful li'l cute tear rolled down her cheek frm her right eye..n a small spot of smile in her lips.....
maan lookin at her tear.." ab...mujhse shaadi kar ne itni badi buri baath ye kya, tumare liye??? ohh...mein to dusht danav hein na...teek mein jaa rahi hoon....."
n when geet heard it...she was lik......she did action as though she gonna kill him breakin his neck.....yelling..."maaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn"......n finally both hugged each other....so so so so so passionately....both closed their eyes......n maan lifted geet......lik just thru d sky to d heaven......n it was jus lik tat for geet..........................
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I'm expecting more replies....pls guys...do reply...😊
1.I am not too good in hindi..so any grammar mistakes...please forgive me.
2.This is my first ever narration in my life.., so if i had done any mistake or if it was not upto ur satisfaction, please tel me guys...after al u r my frnds...
3.this is the most awaiting scene by all maaneetians...n i hav taken so much risk of taking it to be my first narration...so again if it is not satisfactory sorry guys...
Here goes...
Geet and Maan wre as usual working on a proj late nyt....in btwn those eye locks...., touching-touching...everything was "happening"...but ya maan was too concerned for the proj.....
and suddenly dre was a huge cracking sound.....it was a big thunder...a lightening flash.....geet jus got hold of maan's hand....n was looking around....n finally stopped at lookin maan....maan was admiring the way she got frightened.....n dre was a eyelock again.....maaahhhiiiii....... ohh but maan stoped it saying: "lekin abhi bhi power hein... tum mere haath kyun pakad kiya.." smiling to himself.... geet left his hand...giving him her as usual "eeeee" smile n said to herself...."itni rookh...chiii"
Maan: "tumne kuch kaha"
Geet: "nahi....sir...woh......"
and there again a huge crack....she again gor afraid...n lead her hands to hold maan....but stopped.....looking down.....maan was stil smiling.....he tuk his hands...n held hers......saying "tum yahi raho...main khidiki ko bandh kar ke aathi hoon..." ....stood up n walked towards d window..... Geet was watching maan walking towards the window..... she was jus admiring him....it flashed her old bumps she did with maan n how he catch holds her....she was smiling to herself........
maan gets to d window.....it has started raining...... he just looked out at d window,,,,,, flashes of those dhaba-wale scene came to his mind.......he closed his eyes n felt them frm heart....he felt lik he was holgin geet in his arms now.....he slowly opened his eyes...n turned towards geet....(mmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii started....) geet was staring at him.....blinkin her eyes slowly....admiring him..... it was lik as though he called her thru his eyes....she stood up n came to d window....slowly...hesitantly.....wit her duppatta in one hand......but neva takin eyes outta maan... she stood beside maan........
she was watchin rain outside d window....n maan was watchin her.....both knew wat dey were doin......secret secret watching......slowly both of them lead their hands outside d window....to feel d rain drops in their hand........seeing maan's hand....geet looked at maan....now he was watching d rain....or may be her hand.........with those beautifully spread rain drops.......he suddenly turned her side....n geet returnd frm her la la land..........
to do sumthng or say sumthng....she asked " sir, kya hum bahar barish mein chalein??" wit her always cutish smiling... maan was still lookin at her eyes...he jus said..."hmmm...."... n geet was like.....trying to jump out of d window....and maan got suddenly disturbed.....saying "geet tum kya kar rahi ho...??" Geet: " sir....is tarah se aayiye na.....khidiki se utar ne koi maza aayega..." at tat moment maan myt hav followed wateva geet said...... Geet jumped out of d window...maan follwed....
geet as usual started dancing...singing n al tat....in rain....maan was stil thinking abt d dhabe-wala.....n was also lost on geet's dancing in rain here...he was watching geet dancing...arms fold..... geet pulled his arms....n made him stand next to her....n went dancing around him....she was playing....her duppatta fel on maan's head....n she dint notice...she left it n was dancing still.... maan tuk it...slowly...feelin her duppatta on his face......
suddenly he pulled geet towards him...she was first lik wat sir.....n seeing her duppatta she felt wat she has done...n was lookin at him...lik demanding for her duppatta.....he was still looking at her........she tried to escape from his hold...he again pulled her even close....dey both jus too close....n a big eye lockk....mmmaaahhhhi again started.............
wen it was lik geet wudnt move....maan tuk her duppata....jus rolled it over her head.....lik doin it for a bride.......n held her 2 hands....got two step back....d rain has stopped...he got to his kneels..............looked at her.....geet still numb...she cudnt feel lik wat was happening...she was still feelin maan's breathe....
maan slowly smiling at geet......turned his face...smiled again to himself.......n looked back at geet....
maan started like "geet....." she was lookin at him......
"geet.....mujhe....mujhe bilkul nahi pata.....ki.... kaise propose karna padega ek ladki ko.......lekin..........mujhe sirf ye hi pata ki..., main kuch bhi boloon.., tum usko samj kar sakthi....."
geet couldnt guess wat he was tryin to say...she was thinking..."ye kya bolne ke liye.., ye sab keha rahi hein??"
maan:" geet...mein...mein ye kehana chahtha hoon ki..... ki.... kuch samaj nahi kar sakthe ho kya....(sumwat reallly in tesnsed voice....but closes his eyes....again a smal smile....then opns his eyes...) geet: "Sir??"
maan: "geet....main tumse pyaar kartha hoon..aur kar bhi rahoonga....kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi???"
geet waas totally astonished...she felt lik she has gone numb...she has gone deaf....it was lik her eyes gettin too bright....but suddenly too dark....she felt dizzy...she felt lik she gonna faint...she cudnt even give ny perfect reaction or expression in her face..........
maan still... "geet...??" expecting a reaction.....but no ....
again maan: "geet ab jaldi haan kaho...mere pair par dard ho raha hein....."
and just geet got disturbed from her la la land....she lifted him.....slowly...still lookin at his eyes.....but face giving no reaction.....maan slowly touched her shoulder......a beautiful li'l cute tear rolled down her cheek frm her right eye..n a small spot of smile in her lips.....
maan lookin at her tear.." ab...mujhse shaadi kar ne itni badi buri baath ye kya, tumare liye??? ohh...mein to dusht danav hein na...teek mein jaa rahi hoon....."
n when geet heard it...she was lik......she did action as though she gonna kill him breakin his neck.....yelling..."maaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn"......n finally both hugged each other....so so so so so passionately....both closed their eyes......n maan lifted geet......lik just thru d sky to d heaven......n it was jus lik tat for geet..........................
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I'm expecting more replies....pls guys...do reply...😊
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